SwaSan OS: 'Saath Saath' - Page 5

Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice os preet. I like the chocolate chasing scene. Loved this part

<font color="#000099" size="2">Swara is about to question him
but he anticipates her 'yahi soch rahi ho ki meine eesa kyun kiya right?
Wo actually mujhe Ragini par bilkul bhi bharosa nahi hai, ussne pehle
bhi tumhari jaan lene ki koshish ki, kya pta aj bhi eesa kuch karti? So i
just checked ki food mein poison to nahi hai; but everything seems
okay, so ab kha sakti ho tum'</font>

<font color="#000099" size="2">She puts aside the tiffin and walks near him 'pagal ho gaye ho? agar sach mein poison hota issme to?'</font>

<font color="#000099" size="2">'To kya? Mujhe kuch ho jata, but tum to bach jati na?' replies in a very composed way.</font>

<font color="#000099" size="2">She puts her hand on his lips 'sanskar!' and starts beating him on his chest.</font>

<font color="#000099" size="2">He
is caught off guard by her reaction 'are you mad? maar kyun rahi ho? ek
to tumhari jaan bachai aur upar se tum yeh thank you de rahi ho'</font>

<font color="#000099" size="2">'haan aur mein zyada marungi tumhe agar phir se eesa tumne kaha'
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<font color="#000099" size="2">'Sorry sorry, galti ho gayi, ab marna band karogi please? Dard ho raha hai' holding his ears.

</font><font color="#000099" size="2"><font color="#000000">very much preet.</font></font><font color="#000099" size="2"><font color="#000000"> Also tat final rain scene</font></font><font color="#000099" size="2">. </font><font size="2">Whatever he is saying she too is saying tat so cute and childish and finally both went inside the tent</font><font color="#000099" size="2">😃 Please write more preet
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Thank you so much 😳

This is so adorable! Loved it, I wish to see more tent moments like these on the show...Keep up the good work! 👏

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

This is so adorable! Loved it, I wish to see more tent moments like these on the show...Keep up the good work!👏

Thank you so much Sana for appreciating 😳

hehe totally loved these two

aww chivalry.

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hehe totally loved these two

please do continue

bye sumi

Thank you Sumi 😳

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

aww chivalry.

prett why did you not pm me this one?

I only came across it today.

moi angry;

but screw angry...moi also impressed all over again by your writing.

Ops sorry Medha *makes a puppy face*
Thanks a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

so cute

Thank you 😳

Hi dear.
I am new as a member on this forum.
I have read this a while ago but couldnt comment as I wasnt a member.
So doing it now when I opened the account ,
It was lovely reading it.
Such a cute and lighthearted os.
I loved it .
Tent track was my favourite , In the serial also and in your os also .
You wrote it so beautifully.
Loved the way Swara shared her chocolate with sanskar realising he must be hungry too .
My all time favourite thing is when he reminds her always that she isnt alone , he is always there for her ," Mai hu na "
He is ready to sleep outside , just to make her comfortable ,such a gentleman he is .
On realising that its raining , first thought comes in swara's mind is Sanskar .
Loved their conversation when she conviences him to sleep inside.
It was amazing.
Keep writing .

So sweet OS Preet.😊 Loved it.😳