SS: Ragya : truth with 2 sides - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Deeps! This is so so good!!! You know I'm not a Ragya fan but this is too good! You have wonderfully explained Rags' negativity and I'm loving this so much! Hope it really happens!! Well done!!! I will post this too on the Tejaswi FC on Twitter!! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Although I am not a RagYa fan, but the SS is very nice 😊
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4-

BADI SCENE

In bose house door bell ring, shomi opens d door , a courier man hand over a official document 2 her

Dida - kaun hai shomi

Shomi - courier wala hai, kuch documents laya hai

Saying this she open d documents & reads them after which she breaks down

D - kya hai, ro kyu rhi hai, takes the document & read herself , got shocked DIVORCE shekhar tumse divorce chahta hai

Shomi was continuously crying , remembering her moments with shekhar( suna mann ka angan playing in background.)

Maheshwari Mansion

Ragini was adjusting her room as laksh left d room all messy, suddenly her phone rang, she takes d call

R - pranam dadima

Dadi - kaisi hai meri lado

R - hum thek hai ap bataiye

Dadi - yaha pe sab thek kaha , par ab sab thek ho jaye ga

R - matlab???

Dadi - aisa sabak seekhya us bangalan ko ki vo marte dum tak bhul nhi payegi

Flashback :- actually d divorce papers were send 2 shomi by dadi in name of shekhar & same she did with shekhar she send divorce papers 2 shekhar in shame of shomi.

R - apne aisa kyu kiya? Vo humari ma hai

Dadi - sauteli ma , vo tumhari ma na hai aur lado tujhe use ma kehne ki zarurat na hai,maine job hi kiya thari khushi ke liye kiya lado , acha aaj ghar aana thare se kuch baat karni hai

R - ji dadi ma & disconnect the phone. Remembers her moments with shomi, tears came out from her eyes, while wiping them she said, hum zarur aayege dadi ma with a determine look.

SWASAN ROOM

Swara was reading a novel when her when her phone rang

Swara - hi dida kaise hai aap aur ma kaise hai????

Dida - shone tu badi aaja

S - kyu ???? kya hua sab thek to hai

Dida tell everything 2 her

S - "NAHI" yeh nhi ho sakta ( starts crying ) , baba yeh nhi kar sakte, dida mai abhi badi aa rhi hu & disconnects d phone.

BADI SCENE

( GARODIA NIVAS )

Shekhar was looking the divorce paper & remembering his moments with shomi ( suna mann ka angan playing in background.) swara comes in

S - baba plz aisa mat kariye , ma ko meri vajah se saza mat dijiye

Dadi - aye chori , tu ithe kya kar rahi hai , mare bte ko behka mat nical mare ghar se

S - vo apke bte hone ke sath mere baba bhi hai

Dadi - mare se juban larati hai nical mare ghar se& pushes swara out of d house , swara was about 2 fall but dida catches her & as usual dadi & dida started fighting where all badi members came out 2 see the tamasha.

S - ma , baba aap dono aisa mat kijiye ,mai aisa nhi hone dungi (swara was begging & shekhar - shomi both were looking at each other )

Dadi - acha tu rukegi , ye to zarur hoga mai bhi dekhti hu kaun ruke ga

" hona bhi chaiye" . everyone looked 2wards d entrance it was ragini standing there, seeing her dadi smiles.

R - in dona ko to alag hona hi chaiye haina dadi ma

Dadi - mari lado

Swara , shomi were both crying , dida was angry

R -( looking shekhar & shomi ) us rishte ko to tut jana chaiye jo ki kisi aur pe depend kare

Everyone shocked

Shekhar - kehna kya chati hai ????

R - ma , papa ap dono ka rishta aap dono pen hi , balki dusro par depend karta hai. Aap dono ka rishta to itna weak hai ki ek hawa ka jhoka aaya aur taash ke pate ki tarah apka rishta bikhar gaya. Ap to dusro pe depend karte hai ki vo apko ek kare, kyunki ap dono ka pata ki ap dono dida , swara ya hum ek kar hi dege. Us rishte kya vajood jisme do log ek dusre pe depend n karke dusro ko jyada importance dete hai

Goes 2 swara

R- kyu ek karna chahti ho tum inhe , kyunki shayad aaj tum inhe ek kardo par phir ye dono alag ho jaye, kyunki ye dono apne rishte ke liye khud kuch nhi karna chahte

Dadi shocked , shekhar - shomi embarrsed, even swara & dida were also shocked. Meanwhile laksh & sanskaar both arrived in badi , were silently seeing the happenings

R - ek rishta tab successful hota hai jab do log apne rishte ke liye khud kuch karte hai,ek dusre ke sivaah kisi aur ko ya kisi cheez ko importance nhi dete , ek dusre pe depend karte hai na ki dusro pe depend hote hai. Humare ma papa ke liye to unke rishte se bara unka ego hai. Bhale hi rishta kattam ho jaye par ego khattam nhi honi chaiye.

Laksh was admiring ragini & swasan were silently watching her.

Shekhar - shomi both realized their fault & teared d divorce papers.

Shekhar - mishit kya hum is rishte ko ek aur mauka nhi de sakte

Shomi - hum apni betiyo ke liye is rishte ko ek mauka zarur de ge

Shekhar shomi reunites , every one was happy excluding dadima

Dadi - ye tumne kya kiya lado

R - vahi jo ki sahi tha.

Swara looks towards ragini.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Awesome update dear superb
Really loving ur ss
Plzz update soon i cant wait now

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
really nice update
can't wait for next prt
update soon waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Really loved the update...though its a Ragya ff I am looking forward for SanGini friendship...
Plzz include some sangini friendly scenes..
I want sanskar to find out abt Raginis truth(that she is not badi..she is forced to act bad) n help her come out of this mess...
Expecting more ragya scenes also in the coming updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Part - 5

SWASAN ROOM

Swara - finally ma baba ek ho gaye

Sanskaar- hmmm

Swara - kaha khoye ho ????

Sanskaar - kahin nhi bas soch rha hu

Swara - kya ????

Sanskaar - yahi ki ragini ne kitni asani se ma baba ko ek kar diya

Swara - ha jo me nhi kar payi vo usne kar diya. Par jo mai chahti thi akhir vo ho gaya. Pata hai sanskaar aaj mujhe ragini mai apni purani ragini deekhi , shayad vo mujhe vapas mil jaye.

Sanskaar - mai ragini ko samajh nhi pa raha

Swara - ab mera mission pura ho gaya hai , ab mujhe yaha se jana ho ga

Sanskaar - kya ???

Swara - ab yaha ruk kar kya karungi , kiske liye ruku

Sanskaar - mere liye

Swara - kya ???

Sanskaar - kuch nhi

Sanskaar lost in thoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Superb Deeps! Truly enjoying this SS!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Superb update deeps
But its too short
Next time plzz give long update
Waiting for next update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
luvly update , somwhere u r justifying ragini's negativity, hope this happens

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