SS: Ragya : truth with 2 sides

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Posted: 9 years ago
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as i m ragini fan , not this ragini but old one , as there r lot of swarya & swasan stories so i introduced a ragya ss , i know i will get a lot of bashing for it but still i wrote this SS. this is my first SS so if any mistake plz pardon me. this SS is my imagination.

After the muh dikhayi ceremony , of both d sisters everyone retired
to their rooms.


When laksh returned to his room till then ragini had changed
into a simple saari & was removing her jewellary , she did not noticed that
laksh was standing on door & was looking her . laksh without making any
noise laksh closes d door. While removing
her bangles , her kada was not coming out , suddenly one hand came for her
help, none other than laksh . laksh helped her to take out kada. They had a
small eyelock with got broked when laksh when to change.


After half an hour when laksh came out after taking shower
with water dripping from his hairs , he
was in vest & pajamas , ragini was preparing the bed suddenly ragini loses balance but laksh
catches her , ragini ankle got sprain that's why she could not move so laksh
carries her to the bed where ragini's hairs got stuck in laksh wrist watch , while
removing the hair stains they had eyelock while in background laksh SR
announcement wala dialogue can be heared. Water droplets were droping from
laksh's hair on ragini's face , laksh started to remove it from her face , he
was too close to ragini but suddenly ragini said NO. ragini moves away from
laksh ,


Laksh - kya hua ragini , kya maine kuch galat kiya


Ragini - nhi


L - to phir


R - apne kuch galat nhi kar rahe hai, apka mujh par pura haq
hai , agar aap chahe gay to mai aapko rokugi nhi par kya aap aapne saath sahi
kar rahe hai.


L - matlab ???


R - mai janti hu ki aap ye sab swara ko dikhane ke liye kar
rahe hai , aap abhi tayyar nhi hai, to iski koi jarurat nhi hai.tab tak jab tak aap khud is rishte ko
aage le jane ke liye tayyar na ho jaye . tab tak mai wait karungi.


L - ragini mai( he had tears in his eyes) before he could
complete his sentence ragini put her
hand on his lips .


R - baas aap kuch mat kahiye, she hold his hand , take him
to the bed , make him lay on the bed & closed his eyes.


After laksh
slept ragini was standing in balcony
seeing the stars with tears in her eyes suddenly her phone rang , she took the
phone & in the end of her conversation on the phone she only said theek hai
hum aa jaye gaye. She looked toward
laksh who was already slept & closed her eyes with tears flowing.


In morning , when sunlight fell on laksh face then he slowly he opened his
eyes , ragini had just came out after taking shower, her hairs were wet so she
was drying it , she didn't noticed that laksh was slowly seeing her , suddenly
ragini's eyes fell on laksh ,


R - uth gaye aap


L - he slowly said gud morning


R - hum aapke liye chai le ke aate hai


Till ragini returned with chai till then laksh got ready.


R - aapki chai


L - thanks , rakh do


R - hume aap se kuch puchna hai


L - kya


R - hume college jana hai , apne certificate collect karne
ke liye , to ky a hum ja sakte hai.


L - puch kyu rhi ho , chalo mai tumhe raste mai drop kar dunga.


R - nhi hum chale jayenge


L - koi problem nhi hai mera office usi raste mai parta hai
tumhe drop kardunga. Kya aapne husband ke saath
college jaane mai sharm aati hai ( said with a smirk).


R - first she hesitate but then said thik hai.


Laksh dropped ragini in front of college gate &then proceed
toward his office. After laksh left ragini took an auto & went somewhere
else.


Ragini entered in under construction type of building. There
was shadow of one person .


R - kyu bulaya hai tumne hume yaha .


She dint get any answer


R - (shouting) ab kya chahte ho humse , jo
chahte the wo humne kiya ab hume kyu bulaya hai.


Shadow which was seen , came in the light & his face was been
shown. The person was none other than swara's step father & shomi's ex
husband Mr. Kausik Ghoshal.


R- humne tumhare
kehne par sab kiya , jo hume nhi karna
jahiye tha. Aakhir chahte kya ho , ragini breaks down while saying this . kyu
kar rhe ho ye sab.


Kausik Ghoshal - ha mene karaya ye sab. Us bose family ke
vajah se jo mujhe sehana para , ye sab
uska badla hai. Maine to us sharmistha se shaadi ki thi, lekin shaadi ke baad
mujhe pata chala ki vo to pehle se hi pregnant
hai vo bhi tumhare baap ke vajah se. us swara ke chehre ko dekhte hi
mujhe ghin aati thi, mai to us swara ko mar dalna chahta tha par us dida ne
mujhi par case kardiya ki mai apni ladki ko marna chahta hu or sharmistha ka
mujh se divorce kar diya . itne saal maine us bose family ki vajah se bahut
kuch saah , in sab ka badla lena chahta tha mai swara se use maar ke par ragini
tum beech mai aa gayi . jab mai kolkatta
aaya to mujhe pata chala ki shomi -shekhar ki shaadi ho gayi hai aur swara ka
laksh ke saath chakkar chal raha hai . to maine uski zindgi ko kharab kar ne ka
plan banaya that par jab tumhara accident hua tha to tumhe sab pata chal gaya .
is liye maine tumhe black mail kiya ki agar tum swara or shomi ki zindagi
barbad nhi karogi to mai us bose family ko khatam kar dunga. Meri zindagi
kharab kar ke vo ma beti ek achi zindagi nhi jee sakti. Tumne bahut acha kaam
kiya hai bas swara ko maheshwari sadan se bhar phik wado BAS


R - nhi ab aur nhi ,
ab hum apni nazaro mai aur nhi gir sakte , swara ko aur apni family ko aur hurt nhi kar sakti
. humne swara ki feelings ko kitna hurt kiya hai


K - soch lo ragini swara ki zindagi jyada pyari hai ki uski feelings . soch kar
bata dena


Kaushik ghosal left.


Ragini was moving back to maheshwari mansion but she was
moving as she don't have sense , it was raining also. A truck was about to hit
ragini but laksh saved her at time.


L - kaise chal rahi ho agar tumhe kuch ho jata to


R - she started crying & hugged laksh


Laksh to hugged her back, due to unknown reason laksh had
started to feel strange attraction towards ragini. Ragya had towards the mansion.


It was night ragya had already changed into their night
wears . ragini was drying her hairs & laksh was silently looking at her.


L - aaj college mai kaisa raha


R - thik tha


L - mujhe miss kiya


R - kya


L - ( with smirk ) kuch nhi ,


R - apka din kaisa rha office mai


L - not bad but thoda tiring tha , ek baat puchu aaj tum ro
kyu rhi thi


R - kuch nhi vo hume thoda headache ho rha tha ,


L - kya ab tum thik ho


R - ha


Ragya both laid on bed , laksh was looking on ragini but
ragini had her back towards laksh & had tears in her eyes.



To be continue...

Edited by deepikagupta9 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Another ragya story,,i am so happy..
i loved the concept..first chapter is too gud..beautifully written..
looking forward for this story,,
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonder how u writing ragya stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice start so far, Deepika. :))
Kudos on the writing. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh God kese himat prti hai Ragya story likhne ki yukhh i will become sikh🤢
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start yaar! It was really amazing šŸ‘ I hope the in the show too they had some deeper reason as to ragini's current behaviour
Edited by zainabawoon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...ragya story!! A good start 😊 looking forward for the next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You're a amazing writer šŸ‘
But I don't think that ragini can ever be positive she's a obsessive phyco lover 😔 even the old ragini was like this she just wanted lucky at any cost.she should've gotten the point that he didn't love her especially when he told her himself multiple times šŸ˜• she doesn't care about him all she cares about getting the guy she wanted.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Deepika you got a very different angle superb start best way for cvs to redeem ragini...don't worry about negative comments. ...if sandkar who is equally guilty of drugging swara and all his plans till ragini starts acting solo are condoned than why not ragini...but your rake is very interesting. ..i used to love ragini prior hope to see a positive ragini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks 2 all who like my story soon I will update d next part soon. I don't care about bashing. I m india forum member & I have full right 2 present my imaginations. well I will thank my bashers also they will help me to present gud story.
Edited by deepikagupta9 - 9 years ago

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