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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

thanks for the beautiful replies frds🤗

update next part sonu
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DAASTAAN

Part 6

Scene 1

Swara-woh jo mere saath theey wo kahaan hai

Conductor-3 stop pehley utar gye

Swara-nhi...nhi(n she starts crying)

(she came out from the bus n starts shouting his name)

Swara-sanskaar sanskaar u cant do this yaar arey main toh hoon hi pagal kuch bhi bolti hoon...sanskaar where are u yaar

(then she heard a voice)

Voice-hey cockroach...stop shouting...just because of ur harsh voice my ears r hurting

Swara-sanskaar...yeh toh sanskaar ki awaaj hai(she starts watching here n there)

Sanskaar-oye princess Victoria bus ke upar dekh

(she saw at the top...he was sitting there)

Swara-tum bus ki chhat par kya kar rahe ho

Sanskaar-chhat

Swara-i mean roof...yeah roof

Sanskaar-ohhh bus ki chat(n he starts laughing)

Swara-bohot hansi a rhi hai

Sanskaar-nhi yaar but seriously chhat(she glared at him)okk okk sorry...n u said na ki u hate me n don't want to see my face toh socha tumhe apna chehra na dikhaon

Swara-you hippo(she also goes there)bhaiya chaliye(driver started the bus)

Sanskaar-u know what u r so weird yaar pehley khud sunati ho phir dhundhti bhi khud hi ho

Swara-emmm woh actually...i m sorry

Sanskaar-kya kaha tumne sorry...right

Swara-did u said that right in a sarcastic way

Sanskaar-no...n yeah apology accepted

Swara-thank u sir

Sanskaar-okkk...waisey chilla kyun rahi thi

Swara-u idiot i thought u left me

Sanskaar-itni acchi kismet kahaan hai meri...tum toh mere gale hi pad gyi ho

Swara-kya kaha tumne

Sanskaar-u know what m feeling sleepy good ni8

Swara-11 bje hain woh bhi dopahar ke

Sanskaar-so what tum toh so chuki na now lemme sleep

Scene 2

(at hotel room...laksh heard a knock on door)

Laksh-come in

Ragini-hii

Laksh-hey

Ragini-aapki baat hui swara se

Laksh-nhi yaar aur tumhaari

Ragini-i have tried his number but he is not picking up

Laksh-i hope they both r fine

Ragini-humein bohot darr lag rha hai...sujata aunty se toh humne kuch kaha bhi nhi hai

Laksh-same here yaar Shekhar uncle called me but mainey unhe bola ki she is safe...i just hope shona thik ho

Ragini-shona

Laksh-yeah main usey shona bulata hoon

Ragini-awww thats so cute...u love her so much na

Laksh-love ummm i don't know yaaar...look we r childhood frds n our parents said ki shaadi kar lo n we said yes...thats it...hum dost hain

Ragini-tabhi tumne usey yahaan aney dia...matlab agar usey koi aur mil gya toh

Laksh-toh main sabsey jada khush honga

Ragini-wow i really like ur thoughts

Laksh-thanks waisey do u love sanskaar

Ragini-god not again yaar meri dadi ye ques pooch pooch kar mujhe roz tang karti hai...i don't love him he is my best frd thats it

Laksh-okk

Ragini-toh ab kya karna hai

Laksh-no idea

Ragini-get idea

(n they both starts laughing)

Ragini-chalo main tumhe delhi ghumati hoon

Laksh-gr8 idea...lets go

Scene 3

(sanskaar opened his eyes n felt a light weight on his shoulder n he saw swara's angelic face...she was looking so innocent n beautiful)

Sanskaar(monologue)-nhi jaanta kyun par main chahta hoon meri har subah aise hi ho jab mujhe tumhara chehra dikhey(n he starts smiling...swara shifted a bit n he realised that the sunrays r disturbing her sleep...he moved closer to her n tried to block the sunrays by using his hand...she felt better n again went to sleep)yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai kyun main itna possessive ho raha hoon kyun mujhe farak padta hai ki woh khush hai ya nhi

(swara woke up n saw him...they both were so close n she was lost in his dark brown orbs)

(they both were staring each other suddenly the bus stopped n they came back to reality)

Conductor-toh bus is dhabe pey 2 ghantey rukegi jise jo khana hai kha le waisey bhi lunch ka time hai

(Swasan came down but they both were ignoring each other)

Sanskaar-tum kuch khaogi

Swara-nhi woh(suddenly she saw something)not again

Sanskaar-what

Swara(she pointed towards some goons)-gunday

Sanskaar-yeh toh wohi hain

(goons already saw them n they were coming towards them)

Sanskaar-inhey toh main chodunga nhi

Swara-pagal mat bano...public place hai humarey saath saath bakki logo ko bhi pareshaani hogi

Sanskaar-so

Swara-run

Sanskaar-what

Swara-yeah mr hippo bhaago

(they both starts running n those goons were chasing them Swasan ran towards a jungle)

Scene 4

(after some 15 mins)

(somewhere in the forest)

swara-hum hain kahaan

sanskaar-jungle mein

swara-waah i know that but jungle mein kahaan

sanskaar(with a r u serious look)-jungle mein bhi directions hoti hain

swara-whatever uss taraf chaltey hain

(they again starts running but they stopped at a place)

Sanskaar-ab yeh kya hai

Swara-waterfall aur aage raasta bhi nhi hai

Sanskaar-this is not waterfall this is our dead end

Swara-dekho sanskaar(suddenly someone pulled her)aah

Sanskaar(he turned n saw the goons)-chodo usey

Goon 1-bohot bhagaya tum dono ne ab bas

(Sanskaar was about to hit that goon but he put the gun on swara's forehead)

Goon 1-maarega maar na

Sanskaar-leave her right now...agar usey kuch bhi hua na toh

Goon-toh kya

(his chamchas came forward n starts beating sanskaar...they were beating him so ruthlessley n sanskaar was badly injured)

Swara-plzz leave him...chodo usey plzzz(she starts crying)

Goon 1-thik hai ji oye madam ji keh rhi hai chod do inhe

(his chamchas left sanskaar)

Sanskaar-(he stands up n pointed a finger towards their boss) usey chod ab

Goon 1-arey madam ji ne kaha tujhe chodney ke liye

(goon 1 pushed sanskaar lightly n because of his injured state sanskaar lost his balance n swara shouted but that goon held his hand)

Goon 1-madam ji ab bolo

Goon 2-sir iski wajah se hamara sara maal gya

Swara-plzz don't do this chod do usey

Goon 1 -accha ji toh lijiye madam ji chod diya (he left sankaar's hand n sanskaar fell in the waterfall)

Swara(she was shocked...she saw some flashbacks n shouted) RAGHUUU

(Precap - Swasan's Past)

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Sanky bus ki chatt pe 🤣
chatt seriously lol
love dis cute cute nok jhok sarcastic dialogues of SwaSan 👏
Sanky ko something something feel hone laga hai 😉😳
oh no goons caught them & Sanky ko waterfall se 😲
Swara shouts Raghu 😲
damn cliff hanger ending 😔
Sonal pls update next part soonish 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome udate Sonal... Bus ki chhat sorry I mean roof pe some moments sharing... and you know what I just love the way you write about their nok jhok
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...me 2nd...wow..
Bus ki chat was a gud one.
M more curious abt d past lyf of swasaan though I luv their current nok jhok ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...me 2nd...wow..
Bus ki chat was a gud one.
Last part was omg..so he died d same way in his past birth...
M more curious abt d past lyf of swasaan though I luv their current nok jhok ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
All good but am not liking this goons a bit
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...me 2nd...wow..
Bus ki chat was a gud one.
Last part was omg..so he died d same way in his past birth...
M more curious abt d past lyf of swasaan though I luv their current nok jhok ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Loved our cute swasan. So finally their past came . pls continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
rolling around laughing and
biting my nail in suspense.
continue soon sonal.

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