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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Jamina96

Wow super plz update next part


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6th chapter 😊 Do share your reviews and like if it is good 😳 😆
"Chalein andaar Swara?" asks Sanskar with an evil smile.
She nods and enters. It's dark under, it seems the factory was closed for many years. Sanskar takes out a torch and gives it to her.
"Yeh rakho apne saath, darr nahi lagega" and winks at her.
She takes it from him and thanks him.
While they are heading ahead Swara starts hearing some strange noises.
"No no, i'm just imagining it, kuch nahi hai" she says to herself to reassure herself.
They proceed forward for a while, when they see two doors. They are confused between which door they should go through.
Jointly Swara says left, and Sanskar right. "Are you sure ki tum akeli jaana chahti ho? I mean kahi darr lag geya to..? Agar mein saath hua and darr laga to tum mujhe pakad sakti ho, i have no problem" he says with a wink. Swara seems annoyed with his behaviour "no thanks haan, tumhe pakad ne se accha hai ki bhoot mujhe pakad le" she replies in a sarcastic way. They separate there and choose two different doors. Swara has the torch with herself while Sanskar not.
Sanskar is walking when suddenly someone comes in front of him and he get scared. WTH?! he shouts. "Karan tum? Yahan kyun? Maine tumhe Swara ko darane ke liye kaha tha, not me"
Karan, one of his friend takes off his mask and laughs. "Sorry yaar, raha nahi geya mujhse".
Sanskar asks him if everything is going according to their plan. Karan nods. A flashback is shown.
Sanskar after he met Swara in the morning called out his friends and planned a big prank for Swara. He wants Swara to believe that in this factory there are ghosts, and he will record everything.
Everyone is ready for the plan.
In the meantime Swara is walking alone in a dark corridor. A door in front of her opens automatically. She gets afraid, but doesn't want to show it. She sees a shadow on the wall, she turns and see someone behind her. She turns again and no one is there.
"Kya ho raha hai yahan" she asks panicking. She starts running and notice some blood drops on the floor that lead her near a box,a big box. She opens it and finds some human bones inside it.
"AHHH" she screams terrified. More blood on the floor and she sees a body lying near there; that body points a finger at Swara, and pleads for help.
Swara is frightened, she doesn't understand what to do. She could't find a way to get out of this mess. She hears some steps at the beginning not so near, but now she can hear them clearly.
"Wo yahan aa raha hai"
"SANSKARRR!" she shouts out loud, but he is not there.
She starts running randomly, she pleads God to help her. For the first time she is seen so afraid. She is crying out loudly, but no one is there to help her. While running he accidentally drops her torch; she can't see anything, everywhere is dark. The steps are heading towards her. She hears a voice: "Ab tumhari baari hai" and an evil laugh.
She doesn't see that the floor is wet, slips and hit her head on the near table hardly and fall unconsciously.
Lights are turned on. Sanskar's friend sees Swara lying there.
"Sanskar? Sanskar? Jaldi aayo. Kya hoge aa iss ladki ko?"
Sanskar comes out and sees Swara there. He rushes towards her and check her. "Swara? Swara?" he sees her head which is bleeding.
"Yeh kya hoge aa mujhse?" he says and continues "isse hospital le kar jana hoga abhi issi waqt". He takes her in his arms and takes her out of there.
Scenes change:
Sanskar reaches the hospital and rushes inside taking Swara.
"Doctor? Doctor?" he shouts.
Doctor comes out and asks what happened. Sanskar tells him that she fell down and her head hit the table.
The doctor asks the nurse to take her inside as soon as possible.
He goes inside as well and asks Sanskar to fill a form and sit outside.
Sanskar waits outside impatiently.
The doctor comes out "nurse jaldi se blood le kar aayo iss group ka, c'mon quick".
Sanskar comes near the doctor to know about Swara. "Kya hua doctor, any problem? Swara theek to hai?"
"Dekhiye iss waqt uski halaat bohut nazuk hai, bohut blood beh chuka hai usska, we urgently need blood for her"
Nurse comes running "doctor iss group ka humare hospital mein blood nahi hai"
"Oh no, yeh to bohut badi problem hai, call Doctor Singhania and tells him to send this group blood urgently, it's an emergency"
Sanskar is left shattered. "Mere ek prank ki wajah se Swara zindagi aur maut ke beech mein ladh rahi hai"
"Doctor, aap mere blood le li jiye, jitna chayiye le li jiye but Swara ko bacha li jiye please" he pleads to doctor.
"Dekhiye pehle apka blood group dekh nah hoga, agar match karega to hi hum use kar sakte hai"
"To kijiye doctor, jaldi" he says.
Nurse takes him with him, takes his blood sample. The blood group matches.
They take him inside where Swara is lying. They make him lie on the bed and takes his blood and transfer it to Swara. After the procedure they ask him to sit outside and wait and pray to God.
Sanskar sits there and asks God to punish him for his mistake and not Swara, she didn't do anything wrong.
After a 2 hours of wait Doctor comes out happily. "She is out of danger now, you can meet her"
Sanskar feels relieved and immediately goes to meet Swara.
"Swara, ab kesi ho?"
Swara is still terrified, she is still thinking about what happened in the factory."S..Sanskar wo wo factory mein sach sach mein bh.. Bhoot hai" and holds his hand.
Sanskar repents for what he did and tries to make Swara understand.
"Swara dekhi, bhoot nahi hote, aur mene jhoot bola tha, waha factory koi bhi bhoot nahi hai" and tries to reassure her.
"Nahi sach mein hai waha, mene khud dekha Sanskar"
"Nahi Swara meine kaha nah eesa kuch nahi hai"
"Tum intne sure ho kar kese keh sakte ho Sanskar.. Mein keh rahi hoon waha hai.."
"Kyun ki wo ek prank tha.. and stops realising what he said.
"Prank?" says Swara looking at him.
Sanskar has no choice and tells her everything, about his planning, the prank and all. It was all done by him and his friends. "Swara i'm really sorry, mujhe pta nahi tha ki tumhare saat yeh.."
Swara leaves his hand. "Tum tum eesa kaise kar sakte ho Sanskar? Kya galti thi meri jo tumne..?" says crying.
"Swara" and tries to calm her down.
"Don't touch me, Mr Sanskar Maheshwari, don't touch me!" she shouts at him. "Tum aamir ladke eese hi ho, galti kar ke bas sorry bol dete ho, jese ki sorry se sab kuch theek hojayega" and further adds "first impression is always the last, and you know what? Tumhara impression ek bohut hi bure ladke ka hai; oh wait wait, ab samajh mein aaye aa, wo pehle din mein tumhari car ke neeche aane wali thi but bach gayi thi, so yeh sab plan kiya. Bohut dhuk ho raha hoga na ki mein phir se bach gayi"
Sanskar is shocked "how can you say so Swara? Mein janta hoon mujhse galti hui lekin, mene yeh sab kuch purposely nahi kiya believe me"
"I don't want to listen any justification and get out from here. Just go! Go away!" she shouts.
She feels a pain in her head and faints.
Sanskar goes to find the doctor; doctor reassures him that everything is under control, it is just the medecine effect which is quite strong. After a few hours she will feel better.
Sanskar realize that is already morning and Swara's parents must be worried about her so he decided to call them.
"Hello aunty, mein Sanskar. Nahi aunty Swara mere saath hai, hum.. Hum yahan hospital mein hai, aap jaldi aaye mein sab bta ta hoon aapko" and disconnected the call.
Everyone rushes at the hospital worried for Swara. Shekhar tried his best to assure Shomi that everything is fine but she didn't listen. Afterall she is a mother.
They reached the hospital, and saw Sanskar sitting. "Beta, Swara kaha hai?" Shekhar asked worried.
"Haan beta bolo" added Shomi.
In the meantime doctor comes out and informs that Swara gained consciousness and they can meet her, he also asks Sanskar to go to buy some medecines for Swara.
They see Swara. Shomi goes to her and hugs her. "Shona yeh sab kuch" says crying.
Dida says to Shomi to stay strong as Swara is perfectly fine now.
"Shona tu to party mein gayi thi na, to phir..?
Swara makes up a fake story and tells them that Sanskar was in the same party. She was coming back home when a car hit her on the road and Sanskar saved her and took her to the hospital.
Sanskar gives the medecine to the doctor and listen to Swara's fake story "ussne jhoot kyun bola" he asks to himself.
Swara sees him behind the door. She knows that he wouldn't come inside.
They asks the doctor when they can take her home. Doctor says that he has given her discharge and they can take her home whenever they want, just they have make sure that Swara doesn't get stressed.
She changes her clothes and goes with her family without looking at Sanskar, while he keeps looking at her until he doesn't see her. Then he also leave the hospital and goes home. He check his phone: 15 missed calls from his mom. "She must be worried" and leaves from there.


Edited by Preet_12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Preet wow this is one of the best FF yaar ❤️
Sanskaar is idiot why that prank?
Oh Shona got hurt..
But thankgod Sanskaar ka blood match hogya Swara se and she is safe now..
Glad Sanskaar realized his mistake ❤️

Continue Soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Thank you so much Meera 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Vishi-

Preet wow this is one of the best FF yaar ❤️
Sanskaar is idiot why that prank?
Oh Shona got hurt..
But thankgod Sanskaar ka blood match hogya Swara se and she is safe now..
Glad Sanskaar realized his mistake ❤️

Continue Soon 😳


That's such a sweet compliment Vishi ❤️ 😳 You are making me blush now 😳 Thank you so much 😆 😳
Edited by Preet_12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
awww...
a prank turned to a horrible incident...
What next now???
Sanskar going after swara for gaining her forgiveness???
or anything else??
Plz update soon!!!😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Awesome update preet👏
Sanskaar is so stupid😡
A harmless prank turned out to be a disastrous one
Loved swara's dialog...sanskaar deserved that...bewkoof sa😡
But feeling bad fir shekhar shomi...nobody had even told them about their daughter
Update sooonnn plzzz😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: JIDHNYASA

awww...

a prank turned to a horrible incident...
What next now???
Sanskar going after swara for gaining her forgiveness???
or anything else??
Plz update soon!!!😛


It could be 😛 Keep guessing 😆 I will try to update soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Awesome update preet👏

Sanskaar is so stupid😡
A harmless prank turned out to be a disastrous one
Loved swara's dialog...sanskaar deserved that...bewkoof sa😡
But feeling bad fir shekhar shomi...nobody had even told them about their daughter
Update sooonnn plzzz😃


Thank you so much Sona 🤗 😳 I will update soon 😆

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