SwaSan FF 'Forever and Always' ( chapter 9 uploaded pag 22)

Hello to all. I'm Preet annd i wrote for the first time a FF. I know there will be a lot of mistakes (forgive me). I want to knowyour reviews thank you😆😃. Sorry if i won't be able to upload more then 1-2 chapter per day but being a groupbie i'm allowed to make just 20 posts per day.

Originally posted by: Preet_12

Hello to all. I'm Preet annd i wrote for the first time a FF. I know there will be a lot of mistakes (forgive me). I want to know your reviews thank you 😆😃. Sorry if i won't be able to upload more then 1-2 chapter per day but being a groupbie i'm allowed to make just 20 posts per day.

So here you go: first of all let me clear that in my story Swara is an only child (no Ragini); she lives with her Maa,Baba and Dida.

S= Swara- SK= Sanskar- SH= Sharmishta-D= Dida-SHK=Shekhar

FIRST MEETING (chapter 1)

At the bus station:

S: Aree yaar aaj bus itni late kyun hai. Pehle hi mein itni late hoon aur ab yeh bus.

*phone rings* Haan maa, aa rahi hoon. Busaaj late hai so thodi late ho joaungi. Acha mein rakhti hoon, bye.

Excuse me madam: bus aaj late kyun hai?

Madam: Aaj bus nahi aayegi. Pako pta nahi tha?

S:*thinks: pta hota to puchti kya?😛* Oh acha, thank you haan. Eesa karti hoon mein auto kar leti hoon.

[she starts to cross the road. There's a lot of traffic. She's almost hit by a car and she fells down]

S: Ouch..

SK: Hey! Dikhayi nahi deta kya? Marne ka itna hi shaunk hai to kisi aur ki car ke neeche aa kar maro.

S: Hey mister! Galti tumhari hai aur suna mujhe rahe ho. Wah kya baat hai. Ouch.. *she gets up*

SK: Kua hua? Chot lagi kya? Dikhao to..

S: Kuch nahi hua hai, theek hun mein, jhoota concern dikhane ke liye thanks bolun kya?

SK: mein keh raha hoon na, dikhao mujhe.. *he holds her hand* Aree chot to kaafi serious lag rahi hein. Ek kam karte hein mein tumhe doctor ke paas le jata hoon

S: No thanks, i'll manage. I'm ok.

SK: dekho zid mat karo. Chalo mere saath. *he takes her hand and make her sit in the car*

IN THE CAR

*alarmn noise*

S: yeh kesi aawaz hai?

SK: tumhair seat bekt, lagalo warna eese hi bajta rahega..

S: oh sorry bhul gayi thi mein

SK: *thinks: madam ko sorry bhi kehna aata hai* Chalo.

AT THE DOCTOR CLINIC

Doc: dekhiye ghabrane wali baat nahi hai. Chot jaldi theek hojaegi. Mene bendage kardi hai, bas yeh medecines yaad se khalena raat ko.

SK: thanks doctor, hum chalte hai.

[they walk towards the car*

SK: vese tumhara naam kya hai?

S: Swa.. Swara.

SK: oh miss Swara. Vese tumne pucha to nahi phir bhi mein apna bhi bta deta hoon. Mein Sanskar.

S:*swara apne aap se: sanskar naam ki koi cheez nahi hai issme, lekin naam rakha hai

sanskar*

SK: Hm? kuch kaha tumne?

S. nahi to..

SK: acha bohut raat hogayi, aaon mein tumhe ghar tak drop kar deta hoon. Kaha rehti ho tum?

S: nahi iski zaroorat nahi hai, mein chali jaungi

SK: abhi iss waqt tumhe nahi txi nahi bus milegi, aayo mein chod deta hoon

S: yeh kya zabardasti hai! Mene kaha na i'll manage. Tumhare jese ladko ko mein acchi tarah janti hoon

SK: Miss swara tum baat kaha se kaha leh ja rahi ho. Ajeeb baat hai, bhalai ka to koi zamaana hi nahi raha. Aur vese bhi accha hi hua ki tumne haan nahi kaha, warna kisko shaunk hai tumhare jesi musibaat ko saath mein rakhne ki.

S: Musibaat kaha tumne mujhe? Aakdu insaan.

[they both starts walking in opposite direction]

To be continued..

wow 😳👏 i just loved it

Omg preet

@swaragini_swara thank you so much 😳

Loved the nok-jhok b/w SwaSan...

@Sonal thank you so much Sona 😳 but your's is really superb, waiting for the next part 😳
@Asha thank you so much, means a lot 😳

preet great going dear keep it up and u said daily 2-3 chaps likega par u updated only one chap its OK update next part asap and cute nok- joks btw swasan u really I liked this ff dear

Originally posted by: asha07

preet great going dear keep it up and u said daily 2-3 chaps likega par u updated only one chap its OK update next part asap and cute nok- joks btw swasan u really I liked this ff dear

Thank you so much 😳 i'll surely update the next part tomorrow 😊

It was really cute.. 😳 I m SwaLak fan but I really liked it coz I just love reading nok jhok types wale FFs 😆
Continue soon ..

Originally posted by: Vishi-

It was really cute.. 😳 I m SwaLak fan but I really liked it coz I just love reading nok jhok types wale FFs 😆
Continue soon ..

Thank you so much Vishi 😳 I know you are a huge SwaLak fan so hearing this from you means a lot 😳 😊