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Hello to all. I'm Preet annd i wrote for the first time a FF. I know there will be a lot of mistakes (forgive me). I want to knowyour reviews thank you😆😃. Sorry if i won't be able to upload more then 1-2 chapter per day but being a groupbie i'm allowed to make just 20 posts per day.
Chapter 1: below
Chapter 2: pag 4
Chapter 3: pag 5
Chapter 4: pag 8
Chapter 5: pag 10
Chapter 6: pag 13
Chapter 7: pag 16
So here you go: first of all let me clear that in my story Swara is an only child (no Ragini); she lives with her Maa,Baba and Dida.
S= Swara- SK= Sanskar- SH= Sharmishta-D= Dida-SHK=Shekhar
Chapter 1: below
Chapter 2: pag 4
Chapter 3: pag 5
Chapter 4: pag 8
Chapter 5: pag 10
Chapter 6: pag 13
Chapter 7: pag 16
Chapter 8: pag 19
Chapter 9:pag 22
FIRST MEETING (chapter 1)
FIRST MEETING (chapter 1)
At the bus station:
S: Aree yaar aaj bus itni late kyun hai. Pehle hi mein itni late hoon aur ab yeh bus.
*phone rings* Haan maa, aa rahi hoon. Busaaj late hai so thodi late ho joaungi. Acha mein rakhti hoon, bye.
Excuse me madam: bus aaj late kyun hai?
Madam: Aaj bus nahi aayegi. Pako pta nahi tha?
S:*thinks: pta hota to puchti kya?😛* Oh acha, thank you haan. Eesa karti hoon mein auto kar leti hoon.
[she starts to cross the road. There's a lot of traffic. She's almost hit by a car and she fells down]
S: Ouch..
SK: Hey! Dikhayi nahi deta kya? Marne ka itna hi shaunk hai to kisi aur ki car ke neeche aa kar maro.
S: Hey mister! Galti tumhari hai aur suna mujhe rahe ho. Wah kya baat hai. Ouch.. *she gets up*
SK: Kua hua? Chot lagi kya? Dikhao to..
S: Kuch nahi hua hai, theek hun mein, jhoota concern dikhane ke liye thanks bolun kya?
SK: mein keh raha hoon na, dikhao mujhe.. *he holds her hand* Aree chot to kaafi serious lag rahi hein. Ek kam karte hein mein tumhe doctor ke paas le jata hoon
S: No thanks, i'll manage. I'm ok.
SK: dekho zid mat karo. Chalo mere saath. *he takes her hand and make her sit in the car*
IN THE CAR
*alarmn noise*
S: yeh kesi aawaz hai?
SK: tumhair seat bekt, lagalo warna eese hi bajta rahega..
S: oh sorry bhul gayi thi mein
SK: *thinks: madam ko sorry bhi kehna aata hai* Chalo.
AT THE DOCTOR CLINIC
Doc: dekhiye ghabrane wali baat nahi hai. Chot jaldi theek hojaegi. Mene bendage kardi hai, bas yeh medecines yaad se khalena raat ko.
SK: thanks doctor, hum chalte hai.
[they walk towards the car*
SK: vese tumhara naam kya hai?
S: Swa.. Swara.
SK: oh miss Swara. Vese tumne pucha to nahi phir bhi mein apna bhi bta deta hoon. Mein Sanskar.
S:*swara apne aap se: sanskar naam ki koi cheez nahi hai issme, lekin naam rakha hai
sanskar*
SK: Hm? kuch kaha tumne?
S. nahi to..
SK: acha bohut raat hogayi, aaon mein tumhe ghar tak drop kar deta hoon. Kaha rehti ho tum?
S: nahi iski zaroorat nahi hai, mein chali jaungi
SK: abhi iss waqt tumhe nahi txi nahi bus milegi, aayo mein chod deta hoon
S: yeh kya zabardasti hai! Mene kaha na i'll manage. Tumhare jese ladko ko mein acchi tarah janti hoon
SK: Miss swara tum baat kaha se kaha leh ja rahi ho. Ajeeb baat hai, bhalai ka to koi zamaana hi nahi raha. Aur vese bhi accha hi hua ki tumne haan nahi kaha, warna kisko shaunk hai tumhare jesi musibaat ko saath mein rakhne ki.
S: Musibaat kaha tumne mujhe? Aakdu insaan.
[they both starts walking in opposite direction]
To be continued..
Bade Achche Lagte Hain Naya Season
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