Mirage *Part 2* updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I know I said I am quitting the show and I have but I have decided to write an SS based on the ongoing track! Please do read and comment.
PART-1
She had cherished only one dream since her childhood-a happy family,she did have one but they were an all woman army there was no father or a sister. A father to guide her,pamper her,fight for her and for whom she would be the Apple of his eye and a sister or brother she could have silly fights with, confide her secrets and everything that siblings do together. One day this dream came true and this was made possible by the guy who later turned out to be the love of her life! What more could a girl ask for! a family that was finally complete and getting married to the guy you are in love with!

Mirage,that is exactly what it had been her happy family and her love both were built on her own happy illusions. Her own sister wanted her dead to achieve her own means and had defamed her in front everyone and played games with her body and mind. Her dad was ready to believe any accusation that came her way, he had always been spineless it had been her fault to trust that she could have a good father, her grandparents were more than happy to be proved right about the "Bengalans". Swara gave cold laugh at least they were always open about their intensions and feelings. But swara was happy that the mirage was broken now...she was back to her real family, her all woman family was the best family in the whole world. But this wasn't over she was not going to sit down and watch the people who played with her life get away with it. She was going to teach a lesson that they would never forget in not just this but any life time.

Swara felt a hand on her shoulder she turned to look up it was her mom and standing next to her was her dida looking worried unlike her mother who looked determined.
"Shona"
"Yes Ma"
"I am going to give you one advice and never ever forget that in ur life, forget Laksh, he might have loved you and it might have been true and from his heart but a love without trust is of no use to anyone, even after all these years your dad still doesn't trust me hell he is not even ready to give me a benefit of doubt! Shona trust is like a broken glass once broken it cannot be fixed! Promise on me that you will never accept Lakshya Maheshwari."
"Ma I wouldn't accept Laksh back even if he comes back grovelling at my feet!" Replied Swara.
Sharmishtha seemed satisfied with her daughter's reply.
Dida pulled her daughter and grand daughter into a warm hug and that's how they stayed that night finding warmth, love and support in each other after all the betrayal that life had thrown at them.
"Not life swara the betrayal that your sister,father and Laksh have thrown at you" swara thought in her mind.

Guys please do read and comment, since my net is not working I have typed it in my mobile so please ignore my typos.

Edited by FortunaMajor - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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well written yar am to thinking that y should swara accept laksh again and he is her sister husband now and if she accepts laksh again whatever may the reason it ruins her character as a swara fan i dnt want it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its amazing😛
Even though no swarya😭
But you gooo SHONA⭐️Yes be a brave Bose girl and show them all what you are made of.😈
Even though you can be sweet,caring,loving and trusting but you can be brave,determined and vengeful to prove that your Grandmother,your Mother and You are innocent and pure-hearted.😊
Do it for your family and do it for yourself.😳

You are an amazing writer.Loved it.Keep writing such brilliant OS.👏😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART-2

Swara was in deep thought, Did she want to re-unite her parents? no,her mom had made it clear that she didn't want to go back to her dad. Did she want to get laksh back? no, he had not only not trusted her but he had also married her sister without a second thought! Did she want to bring out Ragini's true colours in front of everyone? yes, not because she needs anybody's approval but because her mom's up bringing had been questioned. She couldn't forget what had happened in the baadi this morning, everybody had protested against her mom carrying out her daily morning tulasi pooja and when swara had tried to intervene she had breen called a drug addict and woman of loose character. Swara couldn't take it any longer Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari had to pay for all her sins Penny by penny. Swara would make sure of that. Swara immediately thought of a plan and called Sanskar. yes he had been 95% responsible for the mess but he had given his reasons and had genuinely apologised too and was ready to help her in every way.

"Hello" said Swara
"Hello, Swara are you ok?" asked Sanskar
"Marry me"
"W*F"
swara quickly explained her plan but sanskar was kind of apprehensive to go about with it but she finally managed to get him agree to it.
Swara quickly scripted her own Suicide letter and left the Baadi

Dear Ma & Dida

I can't bear the humiliations that you have to face because of my deeds and I have decided to end my life to save you from any further trouble. Don't search for me, I love you both and I am sorry for what you had to face because of me.

love
Shona

Swara immediately left for Sanskar's farm house where they could go about with their fake marriage. When she reached there sanskar was already ready with the mangalsutra, Sindhoor & garlands. Swara quickly put on her own Mangalsutra, Sindhoor & garland and left for the baadi with her fake husband to make her little sister's pagphera more interesting.
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I know this is a very short update and more or less same as the show but my Bose woman are much more stronger so please be patient with me for a couple of updates kind of caught up with college work.









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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing...👏
Continue soon...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow, very interesting. Waiting eagerly for the next update. I am glad Swara has enough sense not to try and unite her strong mother to her spineless father.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its getting interesting...but tell me you are not going to make Swara fall in love with the Maheshwari boys again😆😆 just bring another kukad kamal da for her😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting...plz update and continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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heye!! do conntinue soon... luvd the beginning!!

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