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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejaswiniwenham

woah! namish is only 19 kya? lol i had my first baby when he first became a teenager! ewww! but i thought he was 25 playing a 21 year old no? lol upto 5 years younger is kosher! my aai is 2 years older than my dad so i was like chalta hain boss! 😉


Mujhe bhi kuch samay pehle hi pata chala I was like chalo 1 year chota hai no big deal as it turns out it was 1+6 years LOL😆

My papa is like 8 years senior to my mom hehe she was 18 (almost 19) when my did was born😆

okay I'm uploading chapter 12 now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 12



"Swara uttho we have arrived" Laksh said gently shaking her.


"Hey if you don't wake up in the count of 3 I'm going to kiss you" Laksh said grinning mischievously.


"1...2...3-" Laksh leaned in for a kiss.


*Swara's eyes popped open* "I'm awake" Swara said quickly.


"Kya yaar Shona meri kiss itna daravna hai kya" Laksh frowned at having missed a golden chance to kiss her.


"Chup! Laksh ke bacche you are always targeting my lips. Hey stop it~ you are still staring at my lips pervert kahi ke" Swara said pushing his head lightly.


"Ab agar tumhara lips mujhe invite kar rahi hai toh iss mein meri kya galti hai" Laksh said.


His gaze still fixed on her lips "Damn! She looks so hot her strawberry lips looks so bitable. Control yourself Lucky! Oh God I'm going to have to take a really cold shower when I go home" (A/N - *Wink-wink* Turn on you Guttermindwa LOL)


Lucky was trying very hard to fight off his urges.


"Chhi! Laksh kitne besharam ho tum" Swara lectured him but he was lost in her thought.


"Laksh I'm going!" Swara said slamming the car door which finally brought Laksh back from his thought bubble.


"Wait Swara main tumhe darbaje tak chod deta hoon" Laksh said catching up to her.


They walked slowly while chatting quietly.


"Main kal se Papa aur Bhaiya ko join kar raha hoon office mein" Laksh said while holding Swara's hand still walking.


"Really? Congrats Laksh" Swara said happily.


They reach badi in no time.


"Okay I'm going in bye Laksh" Swara said ready to leave.


"Mat jaona~" Laksh said pulling her for a tight hug he really didn't want to let her go.


She returned the hug both held each other not wanting to let go.


"If people saw us now they would think that we are meeting after 5 years or something" Swara said smiling.


"It's almost 4am Shona who in their right mind is going to be awake at this hour" Laksh said.


"What does that make us then?" Swara said laughing.


"Way to kill the mood Shona~" Laksh joked reluctantly breaking away from her


"Good night Shona sweet dreams" Laksh said sadly.


"Good-night Laksh *Smooch* *Slam*" Swara lightly pecked his lips and ran inside slamming the door close.


Laksh stood there grinning like a fool. His Shona never failed to surprise him.


He drove home with a huge smile plastered on his face.


*Ring Ring* He just came out of the shower.


-Hello

-Hello Laksh main hoon

-Pata hain Shona caller id pe tumhara naam dikhta hai

-Haha accha tum thik se ghar se pauch toh gaye na?

-Haan baba I have reached home safely fikar mat karo aur sojao

-Okay bye

-Bye bye


Day zoomed by and it was dinner time in the Maheswari Mansion.


"Accha Laksh kal tum office nahi jaoge humein badi jana hai I have already spoken to Shobha ji thik hai" DP said.


"Okay Papa" Laksh did a victory dance inside.


-Hello Laksh batao phone kyun kiya?

-Kya hai yaar Shona tumhe aise hi call nahi kar sakta kya?

-Nahi you can call but I'm busy na

-Tum ready ho rahi?

-Haan

-Are you wearing any dress now?

-Dumbo~Loser! Maroongi

-Phone pe kaise marongi meri Shona~~ hahahahaha

*Toot toot toot*

*Ring ring ring*

-Kya hai!

-Arre ghussa mat ho yaar I was just kidding

-Pagal~

-Mujhe ek bahut jaroori baat puchni hai

-Batao na

-Are you wearing sexy lingerie?

-Laksh!!!

-Wait wait don't hang up I'm sorry


"Laksh!"


-Shona mujhe jana hoga Maa bula rahi hai by the way 2 minutes main postman tumhare liya parcel leke aane wala hai okay bye

-Bye


*Ting Tong* Her doorbell rang, Dida opened the door.


"Haan boliye kya hai" Dida asked.


"Hello Ma'am Miss Swara Bose ke liye parcel hai" Postman said handing her a neatly wrapped parcel.


"Thank you, Shona tumhara parcel aaya hai" Dida called Shona giving her the parcel.


"Kis ne bheja hai Maa" Shomi asked coming out of the kitchen.


"Pata nahi ussme to sirf "To - Shona From - Your Dumbo~" likha tha" Dida said.


Swara ran inside her room curious at what was inside.


"I think I know who it is from Maa" Shomi said smiling.


There was a letter attached to the parcel Swara opened the letter and it read.


To my pyaari Swara~ I was passing by a certain shop yesterday during lunch break and I thought it would suit you perfectly it is lacey and see-through pata hai woh shop ka naam kya tha it's called Victoria Secrets~.


(A/N - Those of you who don't know what VS is it's a shop that sells sexy lingeries, bras and bikinis etc)



To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Chapter 13



"He wants to get bashed or what" Swara grumbled out loud while opening the package.


Inside it there wasn't a see-through lace lingerie as she had expected instead it was the most gorgeous clothes she had ever seen it was a knee-length red anarkali suit with golden embroidery and crystals arranged beautifully.


A little note fell down it read.


To - Shona fooled you right hehe wear this today okay Love You~


Swara smiled at the thoughtful Laksh "Dumbo~".


"Chalo Laksh aur kitna tayar hona hai" AP said her son was taking forever to get ready.


"Haan Maa bas do second" Laksh checked his hair for the 20th time now.


"My phone *kiss*" He kissed Swara's picture which was his phone's wallpaper.


Laksh was wearing Black Jeans, black leather belt, tight fitting white shirt with black blazer, his watch, a simple necklace and wristband.


He sprayed on his favourite perfume which was a gift from Swara.


"Okay I'm ready let's go" Laksh came down taking out his car keys.


"Laksh you go with Adarsh and Parineeta (A/N - I'm not sure if I got her name correct) hum tumhare Papa ke saath aathe hai aur Ram and Uttara has left they are buying few shagun's item on the way" AP said getting in the car with her husband and they drove off.


"Chaliye Bhai Bhabhi" Laksh said putting on his seatbelt.


On the way.


"Laksh tujhe itna pachina kyun aa raha hai? AC toh on hai" Aadarsh asked concerned.


"I'm fine bhai bas thoda nervous hoon" Laksh said.


"Don't worry Laksh sab thik hojayega jab main Parineeta ka haath mangne gaya tha toh I was nervous too" Aadarsh said patting his brother's shoulder.


"Pata hai yeh itna nervous the ki he almost touched my feet thinking it was my mother" His bhabhi said laughing at the memory.


"Jaise tum toh nervous hi nahi thi na chai mein namak kisne dala tha pata hai Laksh I had to drink the whole cup of salty tea" Aadarsh mocked.


Seeing his bhaiya and bhabhi's cute nok-jhok made him forget all about his anxiety.


In the Badi.


"Aayiye aayiye Namaste batiye" Dida and Shomi welcomed the Maheswaris.


"Shona jara chai aur nasta laana" Dida said.


"Main uski help karti hoon" Shomi said going into the kitchen.


Laksh was eagerly waiting for his Shona to show her face.


Swara came in the lounge whilst holding a tray of Tea and offered it to everyone.


Laksh looked at her dazed she looked so beautiful in that dress like an angel that has descended on earth, her loose curled hair made her look like a princess.


"Laksh chai toh loh" AP nudged him.


"Hahaha lagta hai hamari Shona ki khayalon main khogaya hai" Dida joked.


*Ahem* *cough* was all Laksh could manage to say.


"Hum soch raha the ki koi accha sa muhurat dekh ke baccho ki sagai kar dete aap ka keheti hai" DP asked Dida.


"Humein koi problem nahi haye. Woh dahej ke bare mein" Dida replied.


"Aap kaisi baat kar rahi hai Shobha ji hum dahej lene aur dene main biswas nahi rakhte" AP said.


"Toh yeh tai raha, Kya aap hume Swara ki kundali de sakte hai mujhe humare pandit ji ko dikhana hai" DP said.


"Haan kyun nahi Shomi Shona ki kundali dena" Shobha said to Shomi.


"Yeh lijiye" Shomi gave it to AP.


"Sukriya" AP kept it in her bag.


"Ab hum chalte hai, Hume pandit ji se bhi baat karni hai" AP said getting up.


"Itni jaldi" Laksh said disappointed.


He didn't even get a chance to speak with Swara even once.


"We have to go to see the pandit ji na" AP said.


"Maa aap Papa aur chacha-ji, Papa ki gadi main jayiye hamare waha kya kaam toh hum sab direct ghar jaa rahe hai" Aadarsh said helping his brother who looked like he was about to cry any moment now.


"Accha hum tumhe ghar main milte hai chalo Annapurna" DP said starting his car and driving off.


"Okay toh Laksh hum chalte hai jaldi aana nahi toh Papa ki dant padegi" Aadarsh said smiling.


"Thank you bhaiya you're the best" Laksh whispered hugging his brother.


"Main aap logo ko bahar tak chodti hoon Dida main abhi aayi" Swara said.


"Bye bhaiya" Laksh said bidding his brother farewell.


"Okay bye Laksh" Swara tried to leave.


Laksh took hold of her hand spun her and pinned her to a wall in the corner away from other people's view.


"Itni jaldi kaha chali my chamak chalo" Laksh whispered.


Leaning forward his lips brushed Swara's ear making her heart thud like a drum.


"You look so gorgeous in that suit" Laksh said seductively.


*Thud thud thud* Swara's heart felt like it was about to explode.


Laksh's heart was in no better condition than that of Swara's he felt like he was about to have a cardiac attack.


SwarYa was lost in each other's eyes when suddenly.


*BREAK* A loud sound of glass breaking startled them both.



To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
wow
i'm in swarya land now
dont disturb...😆
all the updates were awesome
beautifully written
loved this naughty laksh and the bickering swara
so sad of laksh bcoz some or the other way they keep disturbing him when he is romancing with swara
loved it
keep up
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow
i'm in swarya land now
dont disturb...😆
all the updates were awesome
beautifully written
loved this naughty laksh and the bickering swara
so sad of laksh bcoz some or the other way they keep disturbing him when he is romancing with swara
loved it
keep up
cont soon


Thank you srividhya😃.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 14



They froze in fear looking around for the source of the noise but they couldn't see anything.


"Main chalta hoon Shona bye *hugs her* go in safely" Laksh said before driving off.


"Bye-bye" Swara waved goodbye and went inside.


A person came out from behind a large tree holding a broken glass bottle.


"How dare they!" the person shouted while throwing the broken bottle towards the wall where just a while ago SwarYa were smashing the bottle into million pieces and stormed off.


The day of the engagement.


Swara was adorned in a Sapphire pink lengha which matched her ring.


Laksh was looking dashing in his blue sherwani.


They were enjoying the ceremony unknowingly that a dark shadow was lurking in the night waiting to strike any moment.


"Let's start the engagement ceremony" Pandit-ji


"Laksh kaha hai" AP asked.


"He will be here soon bas woh kamre mein kuch saman lene gaya hai" Adarsh replied.


"Maa woh Laksh ki ring kaha hai?" Swara asked seeing the ring box empty.


"Udhar hi toh rakha tha" Shomi said searching around.


"Lagta hai maine upar change karte waqt bed par hi chod diya hai I'll go and get it" Swara said going upstairs to find the ring.


"AH!" *Screams*


A hand cupped her mouth muffling her scream.


"Ah!! Bachao-" Swara struggled against the perpetrator.


"Ssh! Swara main hoon" Laksh whispered.


"Laksh tum?" Swara said relief washing over her face.


"You scared me Dumbo~*hitting him*" Swara said.


"What are you doing here Shona? Don't tell me you were trying to peep at my six-pack? You don't need to peep my dear one word and I'm all yours~" Laksh said releasing her.


"Oh please~ I came to search for your ring I think I left it in your room" Swara said.


"Okay I'll help you" Laksh offered.


"Nahi it's okay I'll find it myself varna Uttara is going to tease us again tum jao" Swara said going towards Laksh's room.


"As you wish Shona" Laksh said leaving from there.


"Kaha rakha maine" Swara mumbled as she searched for the ring.


A figure came inside the room shutting the door close.


"Laksh I know it's you stop sneaking up on me" Swara said without looking, she finally found the ring.


"I know it's you Lucky!~" Swara said turning around.


"TUM!" Swara exclaimed eyes round with fear.


The figure pulled out a sharp knife...


"Haan Main!"



To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 15



"Haan Main!" The figure neared Swara still holding the knife ready to attack.


*Stab* "Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum" Swara asked barely escaping from being stabbed.


"Hahaha tumhe dikhayi nahi deta I'm trying to kill you of course" The figure laughed menacingly.


"Mujhe maar ke tumhe kya milega" Swara said weeping.


"Sukun suna tune tujhe mar ke mujhe sukun milega!" *Launches another attack*


Laksh stopped the hand before it could harm Swara.


"Laksh!" Swara sobbed.


"Tum thik hona Shona" Laksh asked still holding the hand. Swara was too shocked to reply to him.


"Tum pagal hogayi ho Swara ko mar kar tumhe kya milega" Laksh glared at the figure.


"Kyun? Why do you only protect her? Why do you only love her?"The figure asked.


"Why? Kyun Laksh-ji? Mujh mein kya kami hai why can't you love me? Why do you only care about her?" Ragini said eyes filled with tears and hatred for Swara.


"Main aap se itna pyaar karti hoon aur aap hai ki sirf Swara ke piche bhagte hai. Agar Swara hamare bich main se hat jayegi tab toh aap humse pyaar karenge na" Ragini asked.


"Isse mar na hoga tab ja ke aap hamari taraf dekhenge isse toh marna hoga!" Ragini tried to attack Swara again.


"Stop! iss ke pehle main apna hadh par kardoon rukh jao!" Laksh warned eyes blazed with fury.


"I'll kill her! She has to die!" Ragini screamed trying to break free from Laksh's grip.


"Okay that's it I'm had enough of you bulls**t!" Laksh dragged Ragini from there, Swara followed.


"Aadarsh bhaiya police ko phone karo!" Laksh's cried dragging Ragini downstairs.


"Kya hua Laksh tum itne ghusse mein kyun ho" Aadarsh asked.


"Call the cops bhaiya this thing here tried to kill my Swara" Laksh fumed.


If Ragini wasn't a girl he would have beaten her to a pulp for even thinking of attacking his fiance let alone trying to kill her.


-Hello Inspector...


"Police is on the way" Aadarsh said.


"Shona tum thik toh hona" Shomi asked checking for any wounds.


"Main thik hoon Maa" Swara said shaken by what just happen.


Swara was in disbelieve that Ragini would do such a thing and stoop so low as to try to kill her own sister.


"You are under arrest! Tiwari hand-cuff her" The Inspector ordered.


"Ladoh!" Dadi came rushing along with Dadaji and Shekhar.


"Please mari poti ko chod do Inspector saab main aap se haath jodun aap ke pair padoon" Dadi begged.


"Mishti Please meri Ragini ko chod do" Shekhar pleaded Sharmistha


"Kyun chod doon taki woh phirse meri Shona par hamla kare" Shomi retaliated.


"Shobha main teri pair parti hoon meri poti ko maaf kardo" Dadi held Shobha's legs and pleaded.


"Kyun maaf karoon agar yeh sab tumhari poti ke saath hota toh kya tum maaf karti? Nahi na toh main kyun maafi doon waise tumhari poti ke saath tumhe bhi jana chahiye tumne bhi toh meri Shomi ko marne ki koshish ki thi na" Shobha replied.


"Toh mujhe jail bhejdo par meri ladoh ko chod do Laksh meri Ragini ko maaf kardo ba ne jo kuch bhi kiya tumhare pyaar mein kiya" Dadi turned her attention to Laksh.


"Issne meri Shona ko marne ki koshish ki hai agar yeh ladki nahi hoti na toh main khud isse mar deta sukar manao ki main ladki pe haath nahi uthata issi liye isse zinda chod diya" Laksh replied still shaking with anger.


"Par agli bar iss ne meri Shona ke taraf ankh uthakar bhi dekha na toh main bhul jaunga ki yeh ek ladki hai" Laksh warned.


"Inspector isse le jao aur iss ko kadi se kadi sajah dena iss ne humari hone wali bahu par hamla karne ki dushahash ki hai!' DP said glaring at Ragini.


"Guards! Throw them away too" DP said pointing at the Gadodias.


"Main tumhe zinda nahi chodungi Swara! Dadi, dadaji aur Papa yeh sab aap logo ki wajah se hua hai I hate you three!" Ragini screamed as she got pulled away.


"Aisa mat kahe ladoh" Dadi followed crying.


"Mat bulao mujhe ladoh! kamini aurat" Ragini said as she got dragged into the police van by a lady constable.



To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Lovely just finished reading ! But you are using " Shona " too much but it was awesome !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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From first chapter it was wonderfull it keep rocking 👏 😳
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Originally posted by: NabilaIslam

Lovely just finished reading ! But you are using " Shona " too much but it was awesome !


Thank you Nabi I know I have used Shona but her loved ones call her Shona or Shoru so I felt it was more endearing that way😃

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