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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4


"I have an important announcement to make" DP said clearing his throat.


"Laksh kya tum Swara se pyaar karte ho?" DP asked Laksh.


"Haan papa I love her" Laksh replied almost automatically.


"Aur Swara kya tum bhi Laksh se pyaar karti ho?" DP asked Swara.


She looked at Dadi scared.


"Tumhein dar ne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai yeh log ab tumhara kuch nahi kar sakte" DP said whilst glaring at Gadodias.


"Haan Uncle ji I love Laksh too" Swara said blushing.


"Kya! Sothi(really) Swara?" Laksh asked excited.


"Laksh! hum baat kar rahe hai na" DP said staring at his son.


"Oh! Sorry Papa" Laksh flushed red with embarrassment.


Swara sticks her tongue at him when nobody's looking, showing her childish smile.


"Hayye isske yeh smile ke liye toh main soh kya hajar bar marne ke liye tayar hoon" Lucky thought staring at Swara lovingly.


HD was fuming with anger seeing SwarYa's lovey-dovey act.


"Haan toh main yeh kehera tha ki jab Laksh puri tarah se thik hojayega usske bad kyun na yeh dono ki shadi karde pehle sagai aur shadi aap ka kya khayal hai Shobha ji?" DP asked Shobha.


"Ab main kya kahoon agar meri Shona aur Shomi khush hai toh mujhe bhi koi dikad nahin hai" Shobha said looking at Shomi and Swara.


"Maa mujhe kya problem ho sakti hai Shona tum khush ho na?" Shomi asked.


Laksh held his breath and waited for Swara's answer his heart thudded so loudly that everyone could hear it.


"Arre beta jara aaram se saans toh loh" AP said stifling laughter.


"Haan Laksh varna phirse tumhein OT le jana padega" Shobha teased him.


Everybody started laughing with the exception of the Gadodias (ie - Dadiji,Dadaji & Shekhar).


"Jaisi aapki marzi" Swara said slowly looking down feeling shy.


"YES!" Lucky got up from the bed dancing and hugged Swara.


"Kitna utabla hai yeh toh" Shomi smiled.


"Lekin meri ek shart hai" DP said.



To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Daida update 😆
Part-5 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Chapter 5


"Lekin meri ek shart hai" DP said.


"Kaisa sart DP ji?" Shobha asked worried.


"Arre ghabrayi yeh mat meri shart yeh hai ki, ab agle doh hafte tak Laksh ko pakka bed rest karna hoga" DP said smiling.


"Of course Papa" Laksh said


He felt like the happiest man on the Earth and forgot all about this morning's sadness and finally out of his "Devdas" mode and back to his happy-go-lucky self grinning like a fool.


"Kya! Aap yeh kya kehe rahe hai DP ji" HD asked puzzled.


"Apne suna nahi? Maine kaha ki Lakshya aur Swara ki shadi karde te hai" DP said.


"Aisa kaise hosakta hai? Meri ladoh ka kya? Aap iss Bangalan ki natin ko apna bahu banana chahte hai meri ladoh main kya kami hai? Aur je samajh ka kya karenge? HD questioned DP.


"Kyun nahi hosakta Laksh Ragini se pyaar nahi karta ussne do-do bar toh khud apki natin se kahan hai. Swara is more fitting than Ragini for my son Swara is the ideal life partner my son wants. Humse accha toh yeh log hai jo kaam se kaam sanskari honeka dong nahi rachate aur yeh kaisa oosool hai jo apne loved ones ko hamesha dukhi aur suffocate karta hai" DP said.


"Aur kis samajh ki baat kar rahi hai aap woh samajh jiske wajhse I almost lost my son forever. Aisi dhongi samajh aap ko mubarkho mujhe iss samajh se jyada mere bete ki jaan ki parwa hai, you take the samajh back I will take my family and my bahu" He concluded.


Shomi and Shobha supported DP.


"Yeh Bengalan tujhe aaj main nahin chodungi tu aur yeh teri beti mare saath ghar chal tujhe dikhati hoon" Dadi said angrily grabbing Swara by her hair.


"Kamini teri itni himmat mere samne meri beti ke baal khich ti hai" Shomi held HD's hand and twisted it.


"Ah! bachao mara haath chod Bengalan!" HD writhed in pain.


Shomi twisted her hand with more force.


"Mishti tum yeh Maa ke saath kya kar rahi ho" Shekhar freed HD.


"Tum toh mujhse baat hi mat karna" Shomi warned.


"Maa!" Ragini gained conscious.


"Sharmishta ji Ragini aapko puch rahi hai" Nurse called.


"Main abhi aayi" Shomi told Shobha and left.


"Ragu kaisi ho tum?" Shomi said holding Ragini's hand.


"Main thik hoon Maa" Ragini said smiling.


"Mujhe maaf kardo Ragini tumhe pehle hi sach nahi batane ke liye" Shomi said.


"Mujhe Ragini se maafi maang na hai" Laksh said getting up.


Swara held him and took him to Ragini's room.


"Mujhe maaf kardo Ragini main janta hoon ki mujhe tumhare feelings ke saath khelna nahi chahiye tha mujhe uss samay jo sahi laga maine woh kiya. I'm really sorry aur ek baat main sirf Swara se pyaar karta hoon aur marte dam tak sirf ussi se pyaar karunga. Hamari jaldi hi shadi honewali hai so please forget me and move on with your life" Laksh told her truth.


"I'm not the person who you think I am, You only know the Lakshya Maheswari who doesn't even exist tum uss insan se pyaar karti ho jo exist hi nahi karta. I'm comfortable with Swara because with her I can be my real self, she understands me she knows my real self. Now that she has finally started reciprocating my feelings I don't want to lose her" Laksh explained.


"I Love Her I fell in love with her without knowing. Kab yeh dosti pyaar mein badal gaya pata hi nahi chala Swara ke bina jeene ka kya faida meri khushi sirf Swara se hai" Laksh finished.


"I'm sorry Ragini but I don't want to lose him too" Swara said crying.


"Chale Shona" Laksh said holding her waist.


"Haan chalo bye Ragini" Swara left with Laksh leaving behind a heart-broken Ragini.




To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Roshni dee, really well written awesome OS!

arko part ne dee?😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Chapter 6


Back in Laksh's hospital room.


Gadodia leaves his room and goes to Ragini's room.


"Okay Laksh tum ab aaram karo main kal aati hoon lunch ke saath" Swara said kissing his cheek and hugged him.


"Bye Shona~" Lucky said grinning goofily.


"Accha Uncle ji Auntie ji main chalti hoon" Swara said.


"Tum humein Maa Papa bula sakti ho" AP said hugging Swara.


"Thik hai Maa ji" Swara smiled.


"Accha Samdhan ji Samdhi ji chalti hoon" Shobha said leaving.


"Thik hai aayiye maine Aadarsh ko bol diya hai woh bahar gadi pe aap logon ka wait kar rahe hai" AP said.


Swara smiles at Laksh waving good bye.


An hour later...


Laksh calls Swara *Ring*


"Hello Laksh" - Swara


"Hello Shona tum ghar thik se pauch gayi?" - Laksh


"Haan Laksh accha tum abhi rest karo I'll see you tomorrow okay Good Night Sweet Dreams"- Swara


"Okay Shona Good Night and I will have a sweet dream with you in it Love you" - Laksh



Laksh smiled looking at his and Shona's picture from the Bengali New Year. (A/N - Laksh really does have a picture of Swara from the NEW YEAR hehe I swear I wrote it before I saw that episode).


"I'm so lucky to have you Shona Love you so much" Kissed her photo before closing his eyes and dreaming about their future.


"Yeh kya kar rahi ho Shona itni subha-subha" Shomi came to the kitchen.


Swara was busy cooking lunch for Laksh.


"Maa Laksh ke liye lunch bana rahi hoon abhi woh bimar hai toh usske liye Chicken soup bana rahi hoon" Swara said busily making soup.


Shomi and Swara packed their bags and left the Gadodia House yesterday Shekhar tried to stop them but they ignored him and moved back to Shobha's house.


"Good Morning Laksh! I'm here" Swara exclaimed entering L's room.


"Swara! I missed you" Laksh said spreading his arms for a hug.


"Arre Maaji aur Papaji kahan hain?" Swara asked hugging him and looking around for his parents.


"Woh abhi-abhi ghar gaye hai kal raat se idhar the na so I send them home issi bahane se thoda u & me time bhi milega" Laksh started flirting.


He puckered his mouth for a kiss.


"Stop! Abhi nahi I have brought you chicken soup eat first baki chize baad main" Swara said covering his mouth.


"Feed me~ Aah~" Laksh opened his mouth.


"Uffo! Big baby" She fed him.


They spend the entire day being lovey-dovey and having little nok-jhoks from time to time.


Laksh's friends visited him almost daily which pissed off Lucky because he wanted to spend alone time with Swara but his stupid friends never got the hints.


Omi started calling Swara bhabhi he told Swara about all of Lucky's secrets and laughed out loud which made Laksh extremely jealous.


"Tujhe daily aane ki jaroorat kya hai main bilkul thik hoon na kal se mat aana" Laksh told Omi.


Swara slapped his hands which made Lucky pout like a baby.


"Tum hamesha mujhe hi marti ho" Laksh said still pouting.


"Aww mera baccha *smooch* ab thik hai" Swara said giving a peck on his cheek.


"Do it again" Laksh said.


"Dumbo!" Swara pushed him.


Finally the day of Lakshya's discharge from the hospital.


"Sab kuch le liya? Chalo ghar chale" Aadarsh said holding Laksh's bags.


"Swara kaha hai?" Laksh asked searching Swara.


"Woh M.Mansion par hai tumhare aane ka wait kar rahi hai" His bhabhi replied.


Location : Maheswari Mansion.


"They have arrived Uttara turn off the lights" Swara whispered.


"Okay sab ready hai na?" Uttara whispered.


"Haan we are ready" The rest replied.


"On 1 2 3 Surprise! Welcome Home!" Everyone shouted as soon as Lucky entered the living room.


AP did aarti and welcomed him home.


Laksh looked around.


"Chachi aur Sanskaar bhai kaha hai?"



To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Shooo cute 😳
Gosh I can imagine them 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
I'm sorry I need a little break I didn't sleep much last night because I was writting the ending I'm like a Zombie🤢 right now (I want brains😆)

I need to do a little changes to the endings also.

I promise I will upload some more chapters Tonight(UK's time) or Tomorrow.

Thank you to all silent and non-silent readers for taking time and reading my ff🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
woww lovely story dear
all chapters were awesome nd wonderfully written
lakshya back in lucky avatar
1.2.4 & 6 chaps swarya cute antics were awesome lakshya feelng jealous of his frnd
3 chap with song was too gud the song perfectly suits them
5 cap shomi twisting hd hand was to gud
waitng for next updates
😊 😛 😊 😛

Edited by anju10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it Dida !!
It's wonderful !!

Waiting for the next part !! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 7



Flashback


DP and AP arrived home in the morning. Sujata and Sanskaar got shell-shocked seeing DP back in the M.Mansion.


"Bhai sa aap aathe ke kar rahe hai?" Sujata asked.


"Kyun? Main yahan nahi aa sakta? Mujhe mere ghar main aane ke liye tumhari permission ki jaroorat nahi hai" DP told Sujata.


"Aur ek baat Lakshya ki shadi Swara ke saath hogi" DP said then went upstairs to rest.


"Yeh nahi ho sakta!!! Maine itne barsh apne badle ke liye intezar kiya hai ab aa kar yeh budda mere plan fail nahi kar sakta" Sanskaar said furiously pacing back and forth in his room.


"Saanth bete sab thik hoga I will brainwash AP so that she starts hating Swara" Sujata said giving her evil smirk.


She opens the door and get the shock of her life.


"Kya hua Maa koi hai kya?" Sanskaar asked after seeing her shell-shocked expression.


He followed her gaze to see DP standing in front of them.


"Dekh liya Ram maine kya kaha tha Sanskaar sirf natak kar raha hai" DP said.


Ram, Uttara and rest of the family shows their faces.


"Sujata tumhe yeh sab pata tha?" Shocked Ram said to his wife.


"Nahi ji yeh sab jhoot hai hamara beta sach main pagal hai" Sujata said fooling no one.


"Jhoot Maa aap jhoot bol rahi hai apne hum sabse jhoot bola. Kyun Maa?" Uttara accused her.


"Aur Sanskaar bhai apne bhi hum sabke saath dhoka kiya" Uttara continued feeling betrayed tears flowing down from her eyes like water flowing from a broken Dam.


"Tum dono Maa Bete issi waqt mere ghar se nikal jao!" DP roared.


"Suna nahi Bhai sa ne kya kaha tum dono ke liye aatthe koi jaga nahi hai" RP said furious.


Sujata and Sanskaar had never seen Ram Prasad so angry in their entire life.


"Jiji hame maaf kardo main aap ki pair paru hamein iss ghar se mat nikalon hum kaha jayene" Sujata kneeled in front of AP and begged.


"Tum dono ko maafi? Woh bhi yeh sab hojane ke baad? Kabhi nahi tum aur tumhare bete ki wajhe se mera beta marte-marte bacha hai aur uss bichari bacchi Ragini usne tum logon ka kya bigara tha jo woh itna suffer kar rahi hai" AP said crying.


"Maa sambalon apne aapko" Aadarsh held his mother taking her inside her bedroom.


"TUM DONO NE SUNA NAHI MAINE KYA KAHA NIKAL JAO ABHI KE ABHI TUM DONO KE LIYE MAHESWARI MANSION MEIN KOI JAGA NAHI HAI. SECURITY KICK THIS TWO OUT" DP shouted.


End of Flashback


"Welcome home Laksh" Swara said giving him flower.


"Thank you Shona" Laksh hugged Swara kissing her forehead.


"Chalo cake katte hai" Swara said pulling him near a beautifully decorated table with a huge cake in the middle.


"Par cake toh Birthday main katte haina today is not my Birthday" Laksh said puzzled.


"Pata hai Dumbo~ Yeh cake tumhare ghar aane ki khushi mein hai dekho cake par ~WELCOME HOME LUCKY~ likha hai" Swara whispered to Laksh.


"Wait Laksh pehle wish maango" Swara said.


"Okay but you also make a wish" Laksh said holding Sawar's hand and closing his eyes.


"Please God meri Shona ko humesha aise hi khush rakhna" Laksh wished silently.


"Mujhe pata hai God yeh Dumbo meri khushi hi maang raha hoga aap isski hamesha khayal rakhna yeh aise hi happy-go-lucky rahe" Swara wished smiling.


"Laksh mujhe tumse kuch kehena hai" Swara said when everyone was heading to bed.


"Why not Swara chalo main tumhe ghar chod deta hoon hum raaste mein baat karlenge" Laksh said heading out to his white car.



To be continued...

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