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Posted: 10 years ago
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You are a very good writer!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh
Waiting madly
Just a suggestion, try to write more 😉 so that I can enjoy reading longer 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dida ... Are Swara and Laksh ghosts ?!? 😲😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sud-

Ohh
Waiting madly
Just a suggestion, try to write more 😉 so that I can enjoy reading longer 😆

yeah try to write more .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NabilaIslam

Dida ... Are Swara and Laksh ghosts ?!?😲😕


Oh I never thought this 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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He he just building up the suspense😆 only one chapter and epilogue to go😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pls upload the next part !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sud-


Oh I never thought this 😲

I think they are ghosts 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 7


*Flashback still continues*


"Kyun?! What is wrong with her?" Swara argued.


"There is nothing wrong her ( "Well nothing wrong except that she tends to live in a bubble and her head is always in the Lala-Land" - Said Lucky's Inner Thought.) we are just too opposite. I want a live partner who shares similar interest as me, a girl who can join in all the masti with me and my friends. One who understands me, with whom I can share all my happiness and sorrows and expect the same from her, a girl who compliments me when I do something good and scolds me when I'm wrong. Jo mera dost bhi ho aur lover bhi someone like you" He finished explaining.


"Par-" Swara gets cut off


"Bas! Ab hum aur nahi soon sakte" Ragini shouted tears filling her eyes.


She tried to jump instead


"Ragini No! Ah!" Swara pushed Ragini out of the way but slipped in the process and fell.


"SWARA!" Laksh jumped after her.


Both fell holding each other


"SWARA! LAKSH!" Everybody screamed by this time The Whole Maheswari family had arrived too.


"Swara!" Shomi faints seeing her daughter fall


"Laksh!" Annapurna also faints


*END OF FLASHBACK*


"HEY! That's Us" SwarYa said unison.


In front of them was a big photo of them smiling with garlands hung on it( U know after one dies woh mala chadhate hai)


"I'm sorry Swara - Lakshji humari wajhe se you both lost your lives" Ragini starts crying unable to hold her tears.


Everybody starts crying too


SwarYa crys along while hugging each other.


"We Forgive You All" SwarYa said


"Swara? Lakshya?" Everybody saw SwarYa's spirit


"We were never angry to begin with so please don't blame yourselves. WE LOVE YOU ALL .Hum Wapas Jaroor Aayenge" SwarYa smiled while disappearing.




To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I knew it ... I knew it that they were ghosts ! I was right !
Beautiful ff yaar are you going to continue this ? Pls continue ! 😊
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