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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all for your support😃

Chapter 3


Both search for candle, Swara finds it and lights it.


"Ragini? Tum? Tum roh kyun rahi ho?" Swara asked worried.


(...)


"Ragini why aren't you replying me? Kya hua batao mujhe" She asked again.


"Laksh dekho na Ragini roh rahi hai jab maine puccha toh jawab hi nahi de rahi hai" She said concerned for her sister.


"Ragini? Tum roh kyun rahi ho?" He asked but still no reply.


*Door opens*


"Ragini tum phirse roh rahi ho? rohnese kuch nahi hota tum ulta bimar padjaogi chalo jaldi sohjao kal subha jaldi uthna haina" Dida puts her to sleep wiping her tears off.


"Dida Ragini roh kyun rahi hai?" Swara asked Dida.


(...) *Dida without replying leaves from there*


"Dida!... Swara yeh kya ho raha hai?" Laksh said rubbing his forehead in confusion.


"Pata nahi Laksh" She replied confused too.


"Ma, Baba, Dadaji, Dadima?"


But nobody replied or even bothered to look at Swara.


*She cries*


"Shona don't cry I'm sure there is a reason behind it" He hugs her.


"Par sab log mujhse baat kyun na kar rahe? Did I do something wrong?" She wailed.


"Shh! Shona chup ho jao koi tumse naraaz nahi hai" He reassured her.


They both fell asleep in the beranda whilst hugging.


(A/N - No Gutterness intended *wink*)


To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it ! Upload fast !
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Chapter 4


*Birds chirping* It's morning


"Arre woh saman udhar rakho"


"Yeh Panditji kaha hai? Panditji?"


"Main yahan hoon Parvatiji"


"Aap jaldi puja ki tayari kijiye"


"Haan ji abhi suru karta hoon"


"Parvati woh phool kaha rakha hai?"


"Shobha woh Mishti ko pata hoga"


"Shomi"


"Haan ma"


"Woh phool kidhar hai?" Shobha asked.


"Main la rahi hoon ma" Sharmishta said.


"Accha thik hai" Shobha replied.


Just Then


Durga Prasad & The Whole Maheswari Family Entered Badi.


"Namaste Parvatiji" Said DP.


"Namaste Durga Prasadji aayiye" Parvati said welcoming them.


"Dhanyabad Annapurna aao" DP gestured holding his wife's hand.


"Ji" Annapurna replied.


"Ma Papa aap sab yahan?" Laksh asked going to greet his family.


(...) They all ignored him.


"Puja ka samay hogaya hai" Pandit said.


"Haan Panditji"


Everybody except SwarYa gathered and sat down.


"Ragini jaldi aao beta" Shekhar said calling ragini.


"Haan baba aayi" She hurries out still wiping her tears *eyes swollen red from all the crying*


Swara gets sad seeing her sister like that Laksh consoles her.


"Don't worry Swara sab thik hojayega" He said holding her to his chest.


They are both very sad because of everybody ignoring them but Laksh tries to stay strong for his Shona.


"Laksh Why is Ragini wearing white clothes? In fact why is everyone wearing white?" She asked noticing everyone's attire.



To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What happened ? Pls upload fast . I'm so curious to know whathappened !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NabilaIslam

What happened ? Pls upload fast . I'm so curious to know whathappened !


I'm trying to dear but my tablet is acting crazy😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshi_lovergal


I'm trying to dear but my tablet is acting crazy😭

oh but upload when your tablet doesn't act crazy !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry my browser kept on reloading😭

Chapter 5


"Laksh why is Ragini wearing white clothes? In fact why is everyone wearing white?" She asked noticing everyone's attire.


In Front Of Everybody Is A Big Photo Of...


"HEY! That's..." Both exclaimed (A/N - Swara and Lucky)


*Flashback*


2 Years Ago


"Ragini main tumse kitni bar kahoon taki tumhe yeh baat samajh mein aaye I DO NOT LOVE YOU & I NEVER WILL!" Said a very angry and frustrated Lakshya.


"Kyun aap hamse pyaar kyun nahi karte hai?" Ragini asked.


"Kyun ki main tumse nahi Swara se pyaar karte hoon-" Slipped out of his mouth.


"Kya?! Aap Swara se pyaar karte hai?" Ragini asked unsure if she heard it right or not.


(...) Laksh kept his mouth shut.


"KYA AAP SWARA SE PYAAR KARTE HAI?" Ragini Screamed.


"HAAN KARTA HOON MAIN SWARA SE PYAAR KARTA HOON I LOVE HER SUNA TUMNE I LOVE SWARA!" Laksh Screamed equally.


"Kya? Laksh tum toh Ragini se pyaar karte the na?" Swara said shocked at the revelation.


"Tumse yeh kisne kahan ki main Ragini se pyaar karta hoon? Agar main Ragini se pyaar karta toh isse itni bar reject kyun karta?" Laksh fumed.


Swara runs from there


Laksh runs after her


"Swara meri baat toh suno, kidhar ja rahi ho? Laksh called after her but Swara kept on running.


"Swara Lakshji" Ragini followed after them.


"Ragini! Ladoh tu kaha ja rahi hai?" Dadi & Dadaji ran after Ragini.


"Shona beta rukh jao" Sharmishta cried.


"Shomi kya hua Shona kidhar hai?" Dida asked seeing Shomi crying.


"Woh ma Swara" Pointing towards Swara who is running with others following behind her.


"Chalo Shomi jaldi Shona ka picha karte hai" Shobha said.


"Swara? Laksh? Ragini? Tum sab kidhar ja rahe ho?" Shekhar inquired.


Shekhar was returning from work when he saw them all running


"Papa woh Swara" Ragini said crying frantically while trying to catch up to Swara.


Shekhar joined Ragini too


Swara ran toward a big cliff edge


"Yeh kya kar rahi ho Swara? Tum kya marna chahati ho? Asked a panicked Laksh.


"Haan! Main marna chahati hoon" Swara shouted back.


"NO! Swara!" Laksh Screamed.



To be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res..wl read aftr my exm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just read everything !
Its wonderful 😊

I am loving it.. Your narration is great...

Its so interesting too 😉
So excited for next part !!
Who died ? 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you sud and swathy😃
Here is the next chapter

Chapter 6


"Swara! Stop!" Laksh was really scared now.


"Please Swara listen to me" Laksh pleaded his eyes blurred with tears.


"No! Stay back don't come near or I'll jump!" she threatened him.


"Okay okay main pas nahi aaunga but please don't jump" He said trying to stop her from jumping.


"Tum Ragini ko meri wajhe se reject kar rahe ho na? Main aagayi hoona tum dono ke bich mein if I get out of your way then you and Ragini will be together right? I'm the cause of all the pain my sister is going through" Swara said sadly.


"No Swara I don't like Ragini because hum dono bahut alag-alag log hain. Main usske saath comfortable feel nahi karta hoon. Mujhe tumse pyaar toh bad main hua tha Shona. Agar main tumse pyaar nahi bhi karta na tab bhi I would still reject her." Laksh said.


"Kyun?!" Swara argued.



To be continued...

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