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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tejunami

you r awesome dear...talented one...

Aaw, thank you so much! That means a lot!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Anuvanathi

Read all the parts..wonderful story..keep it up👍🏼

Thank you so much! So happy that you're enjoying it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

The story is interesting!


Read the first part 😃
Will read the rest it tonight in bed 😉


Hope you enjoy the rest of the parts!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrividhya

I really really loved both the parts! 😳 you should write more often! 😃 eagerly waiting for the next part

Thank you for your kind words! Also another thanks for being the first to comment as well as giving me a storyline suggestion for Karan!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rozino

Amazing story.👏⭐️ Pls continue soon.

Thank you so so much! I really enjoy writing!
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Read the remaining parts too 😃

This is interesting! Seems like Karan is falling for Naina ...

Please update soon! ... pretty please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you all for your kind words! It means so much!!!! Thank you and enjoy this next part! Also please comment and like!!!!!
Part 5

Dadaji , Nirmala , Karan and Naina were still sitting in the living area.
Nirmala: Naina don't take Kunals dad's words seriously.
Naina: I understand Auntie , after the wedding nothing has changed.
Karan: He was always an ignorant and rude person.
Nirmala: Karan...
Karan: It's true.
Dadaji: Let's stop taking about NK now.
Kunal came into the living area with Meghna following in behind him.
Kunal: Naina , Meghna told me that you need some stuff form your dorm room?
Naina: Haan Jeeju, my work is there.
Kunal: Karan could you go with Naina and take a driver with you?
Karan: Sure.
Kunal smiled and looked at Meghna.
Karan: Do you wanna go now?
Naina: If you don't mind.
Karan: Let's go.
Naina and Karan left.

Meghna went upstairs to NK ad Nirmalas room with some fruits and knocked.
NK was sitting on his chair and saw Meghna at the door.
Meghna: Papa , can I come in?
NK: Come in.
Meghna put the tray down.
She stood there: Papa , I'm sorry for what happened downstairs.
NK: Why are you sorry?
Meghna: For what Kunal said
NK: Then he should apologise.
Meghna: He's my husband and I'm speaking on behalf of him. I know he didn't mean time be rude.
NK: I'm sure he didn't either but he was. We all know why.
Meghna: I spoke to him but he won't listen.
NK smiled: That's a first, we all know how much he loves you.
Meghna smiles and kneels down: Papa , I promise I'll make everything right again.
She got up and left.
NK to himself: I wish you could dear.

Karan and Naina were sitting at the back of the car in silence. As they got to the hostel Naina got out and grabbed her stuff from her room and came down with a big bag and some books on her hand. Karan saw her struggling and went to help her. He took the bag and put it in the boot and Naina sat in the car with the books. The drive home was also silent but Naina was looking outside and saw an ice cream stand and was reminded about her and Meghnas trips and how they'd always get ice cream from the road.
Naina excitedly: Di let's get...
She looked to her left and saw Karan.
Naina: Sorry.
Karan: What did you want?
Naina: Ice cream.
She posted out if the window.
Karan to the driver: Could you stop here for a few minutes.
Driver: Yes sir.
Naina smiled.
Karan: You can get your ice cream , just eat it outside and let me know ow when you're done.
Naina: You come as well.
Karan: Why?
Naina didn't say anything but Karan thought he knew why.
Karan: Are you still...
Naina: No! Not scared , you need to live a little.
Karan: Living a little is eating ice cream from the middle of the road?
Naina: Yes!
Karan: Come on then.
Naina: Wow , you're agreeing to come? Nice.
Karan: Unless you don't want me to.
Naina: No no no , just come.
They both get out and Naina runs to the stall.
Karan: Pagal.
He walks slowly and sees Naina has already chosen what she wants.
Naina: What will you get?
Karan: Same as you I guess.
Karan pays the man and then Naina sits on a rock while Karan stands.
Naina: Sit?
Karan: I'm already eating this.
Naina rolled her eyes.
The ate their ice cream and then headed to the car. Karan looked at Naina and saw some ice cream on her cheek.
Karan: You've got a bit of ice cream there.
He pointed at her cheek. Naina cleaned it off but no properly.
Karan: Still there, let me.
Karan got a tissue from his pocket and wiped it off.
Karan: Done.
Naina: Thanks , for the ice cream as well.
Karan nodded and then they left.

Once they got home they found Meghna and Nirmala along with Sandhya making flower garlands.
Naina walked in and asked what they were making it for.
Sandhya: On Monday we have people from New York and Sydney visiting the office so we're hand making the garlands to greet them with.
Naina: That's a really good idea.
Meghna smiled: It was Maa's idea
Naina: I'll go keep my things away and then come to help.
Naina ran with her things and organised them in guestroom then went downstairs and started making the garlands.
The ladies were chatting and making the garlands when Kunal walked in and sat in the floor beside Meghna.
Meghna: Do you need something?
Kunal: Nope , just wanted to sit with you.
Sandhya: Just with Meghna or us as well?
Kunal: Mmm just Meghna.
Meghna started blushing.
Naina: Oh Di is blushing!
Nirmala: Leave her alone Kunal.
Kunal: Why?
Meghna: Whilst you're here why don't you help?
Kunal: With what?
Meghna: Making the garlands.
Kunal: Okay , teach me.
Meghna showed him how to do it.
Kunal: Easy!
Kunal gave a shot and did well.
Nirmala: Wow , good job Kunal.
Kunal: Thanks you thank you.
Then he pricked his finger.
Kunal: Ouch!
Meghna grabbed his finger worryingly and then saw there was nothing there.
Kunal was laughing: Gotchaa!
Meghna got up and grabbed a cushion and hit him with it.
Sandhya: Kunal run!
Kunal got up and started running around with Meghna chasing behind him. The others were spectating and laughing. Kunal ran upstairs and hid in their room. Meghna looked around but couldn't see him. Suddenly Kunal grabbed her and she hit his chest and they were facing each other.
Kunal: You found me.
Meghna: No, you gave up.
Kunal: True.
Meghna: You lied.
Kunal: I didn't.
Meghna: I saw your finger.
Kunal: You can't see my heart though.
Kunals face saddened and Meghna cupped his face: What's wrong?
Kunal: Meghna , I don't know, I just feel like my heart is sinking.
Meghna: Kunal , you were okay a few minutes ago and now?
Kunal: Making the Garlands reminds me of Dadi.
Meghna: I'm so sorry Kunal, I never knew, I wouldn't have made you sit there and...
Kunal: No Meghna, it's not your fault. I just miss her a lot.
Meghna: You should to Papa about it.
Kunal moved Meghnas hands away from his cheeks and moved away from her turning his back towards her but Meghna grabbed his hand before he could get away.
Meghna: You can't hold a grudge like this forever.
Kunal turned to Meghna: Why not? He's no Dad , he's not even a decent person. Meghna after all he said and did to call off our wedding! I don't want a Father like him.
Meghna: At least you have a Father Kunal!
Meghna shouted.
Kunals eyes softened as he looked at Meghna: Meghna , I didn't...
Meghna: I know you didn't, but Kunal please talk to Papa once.
Meghna held his hand and then let go, leaving the room with tears streaming down.
Kunal broke down and was on the floor: Why?! I'm sorry Meghna! Im so sorry.

Thank you again!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This story is awsome! loving mehnal & nairan
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tamihna

Thank you for your kind words! Also another thanks for being the first to comment as well as giving me a storyline suggestion for Karan!

awww!!! So cute! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful! I can imagine each and every word you've written! I'm in love with Kunal even in this story 😳

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