Yuvreen SS- Ray of Hope (Last part and epilouge updated) - Page 7

Originally posted by: mizzle22

Well done..amazingly written..

Waiting for the next part..

I for one dont find any problems with your writing or the story..I think you're doing a very good job..😃

thnks missmizzie😃

will updt soon😊

thanks again😃🤗

Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian

thnks missmizzie😃

will updt soon😊

thanks again😃🤗

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

loved the song too its my favourite

u can give the precap now😃

given it didu😃

thnx for helping me out to post video🤗

Originally posted by: mizzle22

My reaction to the precap..😲😲😲

😆

keep waiting to know wat will happn😉

Awesome update dear! Hope Yuvi realizes his mistake and will prevent Suvi from aborting their baby... Continue soon!

Originally posted by: LASmirti

Awesome update dear! Hope Yuvi realizes his mistake and will prevent Suvi from aborting their baby... Continue soon!

Thnx Ashi dear🤗

Hope so😕

will do dear😃

very nice update sahas

I loved it ... Yuvi is mean but i think he has some reasons n insecurities u talked about but he sure love suvreen way too much...
aww poor suvi ... my heart goes to her...

do continue soon and u are writing fabulouslt nothing awkward and it does not look mature as u are handling it very well

Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas

very nice update sahas

I loved it ... Yuvi is mean but i think he has some reasons n insecurities u talked about but he sure love suvreen way too much...
aww poor suvi ... my heart goes to her...

do continue soon and u are writing fabulouslt nothing awkward and it does not look mature as u are handling it very well

Thanks you phenji 🤗

Yeah you are right...he's afraid and insecure because of the games his fate had played on him in the past.He cares for Suvreen.😊

She's broken😭

Will do Jassy di😃...thank you for the last line...it means so much for me...I was really worried about my way of writing.

P.S.-Jassy di iss baar no balle balles or punjabi words in comment??😲Iss baar pura serious hoke comment kiye kya?😛😆

Read all the reaming parts what a story bacha just amazingly written.

Originally posted by: Yuvreen14

are yaar awesome...read all the parts...dhasu h 😛😉 update soon 😃

Sachhi??😃thank you dearie...Ipu update toh ab karli..par tu kahan??Tu kahan update yaahnn...😆