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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
First of all Sorry late reply
Great Part
Really sad regarding Tanu u shouldn't of killed her... Yuvi dad is too much... hope he meets his family again... both Yuvreen together can talk to Yuvi family
Cont Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

First of all Sorry late reply
Great Part
Really sad regarding Tanu u shouldn't of killed her... Yuvi dad is too much... hope he meets his family again... both Yuvreen together can talk to Yuvi family
Cont Soon

Thanx anam n no need of sorry. I m busy dese days coz of ramadan n skul n my pc also isn't wrking bt stil i will try to cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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New entries!
Mahendra Singh
#strict, discplined
#a succesful businessman
#Rishabh n Yuvraj's father

Rishabh Singh[/B
#yuvis big bro n bst buddy
#succesful businessman like his fathe
#loves a girl (his college buddy)

[B]Rehan Charles

#owner of a fashion house iris
#a successful fashion desgner
#loves ira


Ira Sahwni
#a gud luking single woman
#rc's bussiness partner
#rc's best buddy
Savitri Singh

#a simple woman
#yuvi n rishabhs mother


Chapters full of romance, drama, masti, reunion of old gang, emotion coming up! So stay tuned!
Aha! A marriage sequence also coming up. Any guesses whose?

Edited by sweetgirl29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
I think it's ira and rc's wedding!!
Edited by McSteamy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: McSteamy

I think it's ira and rc's wedding!!


Ummm... any more guesses?? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetgirl29


Ummm... any more guesses?? 😉



yuvreen?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
read d story nw..very gud liked it 👏 ..new entries nice too savitri singh wd b mothr 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: JustMySelf

read d story nw..very gud liked it 👏 ..new entries nice too savitri singh wd b mothr😲



Thank u yr... i m glad u likd it...n its nt d princi savitri singh i cudnt thot of a name so named it savitri :D
I will update ch 4 today then u will get tp noe whuz wedding it is. But wat i cn tell u nw is its nt yuvreens wed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER-4 Tum Cheetah Ho…

Suvi- tum cheetah ho yuvraj!

Yuvraj looked at her innocently.

Suvi- hmm…tum sacchi wale cheetah ho. Itna kch ho gya tumhaari life me pr tumhe dekh kr koi ni keh skta dat u hv suffered a lot.

Yuvi gives a fake smile.

Suvi- achha ye sb chodo bht senti baatein ho gyi…maine kch plan kiya h or main chahti hu sb se pehle tum mera decision suno.

Yuvi- plan? Decision?

Suvi- yuvraj tumhe to pata hai na meri internship khatam hone wali h…to main soch rhi thi khud ka ek boutique start krne ki…ye mera spna hai ki 1 din mera khud ka 1 boutique or log mjhe meri designs se jaane.

Yuvi-topper ye to bht acchi baat hai…bta kaha kholne ka plan h??

Suvi- abhi to kch ni socha…bht planning krna baaki h.

Then she realized its raining n shouted.

Suvi- oh teri! Mje ghr jaana h or ye bearish…ye Mumbai ki bearish bi na! gannu ji ab me ghr kese jaungi…ye bearish ko bi abhi aana tha.

Yuvi- he laughs. Topper tu bi na ab bearish bi tjh se puch ke aayegi kya?? Suvreen ji ap ko ghr to ni jaana mai aa jaun :D

Suvi frowns at yuvi n yuvi after seeing that she is angry stops laughing.

Yuvi-topper bearish bht tez aa ri h…aisa k raj tu yahi ruk jaa..kl subah yahi se office chali jaiyo.

Suvi- yahan??

Yuvi- tu itna awkward kyu feel kr rhi h tu bed pr so jana mai couch pr so jaunga.

Suvi nods.

#nxt day morning

Yuvraj is sleepinp(ghode beech k) n suvi is making tea.

Suvi- yuvraj utho! Subah ho gyi.

Suvi came n shook yuvraj to wake him bt yuvraj smiled, holded her hand n slept again. Suvi hit him on his hand.

Yuvi- aah! Topper sone de na!

Suvi- yuvraj agle 1 min me tum ni uthe na toye garam garam chai iss mug me ni tumhare upar hogi..utho!

After hearing this yuvraj wakes up.

Yuvi- arrey waah tune chai bi bna li…

Suvi- sandwich bi he..

Yuvi- sacchi! Bed n breakfast ka maza hi kch aur hota h…

Suvi- for ur kind information tum abhi bed pr ni couch pr ho…

Yuvi- haan to theek hai na couch n breakfast…ya fir topper or breakfast ka maza hi kch aur hota h.

Suvi laughs a little.

Suvi- accha yuvraj ab main chalti hu…office k liye late ho rha h. she hugged him n was about to go then…

Suvi-yuvraj tumhe bi to jaana hoga na vo modeling contract jot um ne sign kiya tha.

Yuvi- ni topper vo mene contract sign ni kiya..kyunki vo Alisha ki wajah se mila tha…topper main successful banna chahta hu lekin apne dum pe na ki kisi ki sifarish se…topper tu ja late ho jayegi.

Suvreen after hearing that he refused to sign d contract becums sad but then goes to office.

#yuvi's home(delhi)

Mahendra singh- beta Rishabh shaadi ki saari tayyariyan ho chuki hain…invites bi sb ko bhej diye hain…ab mjhe bs uss din ka intezaar h jb tumhari shaadi h. saari dilli ko pata chalna chahiye ki mahendra singh ke bte ki shaadi h.

Rishabh-papa saari tayyariyan ni hui…jb tk yuvi ni hai humare saath tb tk sb adhoora h…ye shaadi ye ghr sb kch.

Mahendra- rishabh tum se kitni baar kaha h ki yuvi ke matter pr iss ghr me koi behes ni hogi…usey to apni family ki koi fikar hai ni to tumhe us ski itni chinta kyu ho ri h??? ye ghrchod kr jaana uss ka khud ka decision tha..kisi kaam ka ni h vo ldka…1 baat kaan khol kr sun lo ussey bhul jao tumhari shaadi h kch dino me. In sb faltu ki baton me apna tym waste mt kro.

Rishabh-to aap bhi meri ek baat sun lijiye…ab ye shaadi tb hi hogi jb yuvi yahan hoga. Main ye shaadi apne bhai ke bina ni karunga.

Mahendra singh is angry and goes from there.

Rishabh to himself- yuvi tu yahan zarur ayega…fir se hum saath honge or ab ye shaadi tb hi hogi jb tu yahan hoga…aur main khud Mumbai aa rha hu the apni shaadi ka invitation dene.

Precap- RC tells ira and all the interns that they hv to design a wedding attire for the owner of V spot caf Rishabh Singh son of famous businessman Mahendra Singh.

Suvreen is shocked hearing this.

Suvi to herself- Rishabh ki shaadi ho rhi h?? kya yuvraj ko pata h uss ke bhai ki shaadi ho rhi hai???

On the other hand Yuvi is shocked to see Rishabh in Mumbai. Yuvi denies to go home n attend the wedding.

I hope u all liked it. Plz leave ur valuable comments.

~sweetgirl29<3

Edited by sweetgirl29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice 👍🏼..ok so rishab gting maryd..

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