One Step Closer {SS} Ch 5 on Pg 8 updated!

SUVREEN
GUGGAL

#Happy-go
lucky girl who has high expectations from city life

#22yrs
old

#Presently
living in Mumbai

#Doing
internship in a fashion house iris

#Her
internship is soon going to finish so she is planning to start her own boutique
in Mumbai

#Yuvraj
Singh's gf

YUVRAJ
SINGH

#He is
struggling in his modelling career

#Owner
of Vspot chains in Mumbai n delhi

#Respects
women and is soft-hearted as shown in the show

#Suvreen's
bf

#He can
do anything for his friends n believes firmly in friendship

BALDEV
GUGGAL N LOVELY GUGGAL

#They
are the same as shown in the show

ALISHA
DIWAN

#Yuvraj's
best friend

#She has
a crush on yuvraj actually she is the same as shown in the show

(I noe v
ol hate her but my intention of bringing Alisha in this ss is to reveal her
true identity coz cv's to humari sun hi ni rhe h'n I will reveal her true
identity in 1^st chapter only in front of yuvi n then she will go
away from this ss)

Other
characters will b introduced later.

CHAPTER
1: BITTER FRIENDSHIP!!! </3

It was
evening and suvreen has come home 4rm office.Suvi was cleaning her
room.*suvreen's mindthought*

Aaj to
yuvraj ko bahut bada modeling assignment milne wala than na'mila hoga ya ni???
Ye kya soch rhi h suvi tu bhi ofcourse mila hoga akhir tera bf cheetah hai
cheetah'pr aj kl yuvraj k paas itna kaam kaha hai'isliya vo thoda tensed bhi
rehta hai'call krti hu

She
called yuvi but his ph. Was switched off..suvi got tensed.she said to herself
yuvi ka ph.bhi switch off h pata ni kaha hoga..pata ni aj kya hua hogavaise bhi
uska struggling time chal raha h bhut pareshaan rehta hai aajkl..haan apne ghr
pr hoga wahi jaati hu.

Some
day's ago Alisha had promised yuvi ki vo us ko bhut bada modeling assignment
dilwayegi aur aaj yuvi ko vo contract mil gaya tha so he thought of thanking
Alisha.

Yuvi-Alisha
ghar pr hi hogi'vahi jakr use thnx bold eta hu.

He also
took a bouquet 4 her as a token of thnx.afterall yuvi use apna bht accha friend
aur wellwisher manta tha.He reached alisha's house.Her room door was slightly
opened and 1 could see through it.As soon as he fold his hands for knocking he
heard a voice.It was Alisha talking to herself. She was having 2 photos in her
hand one was of suvi and one was of yuvi. Yuvi could see through the door what
was she doing.

Alisha- Suvreen
guggal u small town girl sab kuch mujh se cheen liya. Sab ko apni ungli pr
nachana aata hai tujhe' pehle college mai mujh se sab cheez me aage hoti thi.
But mene sb tolerate kiya..phir tum ne kya kiya mujh se yuvi ko bhi cheen
liya..mera pyaar mujh se cheen liya..mene iss ladki ke saath kitna bura kiya
wardrobe malfunction krvaya yuvi aur tumhaare beech misunderstandings create ki
phir bhi tum meri life se door ni gayi. I hate u guggal.i hate u! she was
saying ol dis by luking at suvi's
picture. And then she teared her picture. Then she took yuvi's picture n kissed
it. I love u yuvi pata ni yeh guggal humara peecha kb chodegi. Pr main haar ni
manungi or suvreen ko barbad kr dungi. Aur kuch aisa kr dungi ki suvreen ko
Mumbai chod k jana padhe. Phir hum dono aaram se rahenge yuvi. Yuvi was
listening to all her talks n he was full with anger. He opened the door
forcefully. Alisha was scared. Alisha stood up in attention n said yu..yuvi
tu tum?? He came closer to Alisha n hold
her hand forcefully said kyu expect ni kiya tha? Jaise tune mujhe expect ni
kiya tha waise mene bhi ye expect ni kiya tha kit u itna gir sakti hai..topper
mujhe hamesha ye kehti rhi Alisha acchi ladki ni hai..vo humari wellwisher ni h
pr mene us ki ek ni suni..tujh pr trust kiya isliye kit u mera trust todhe'

Alisha-
yuvi mene tumhare liye kya kuch ni kiya or tum abhi b us guggal ka side le rhe
ho..yuvraj use chod do she said holding his hand. But yuvi jerked his hand
forcefully.

Yuvi- I
can't believe u..abhi bhi chup hone ka naam hi ni le rhi.. ab samajh me aya
tujh jaisi ameer ladkiyan aisi hi hoti hai jo apni selfishness k liye doosron
ka bura krne se pehle 1 baar ni sochti'or ab tune suvi k bare me ek b word or
bola to mujh se bura koi ni hoga.

Alisha-yuvi
plz..yuvi meri baat to suno suvreen tum se pyaar ni krti vo bas apne aap se
pyaar krti hai.she was trying to stop yuvi from going.

Yuvi-
SHUT UP ALISHA..JUST SHUT UP!!

Alisha-
yuvi plz'I luv u yuvi..plz

Yuvi
lifted his hand and was about to slap Alisha but he felt sum1 holding his
hand'It was her topper.

PRECAP-Yuvi
says sorry to suvi. Alisha goes Paris for for further studies of fashion
designing.She is very guilty of what she has done. Suvreen plans a
romantic surprise dinner for yuvi @yuvi's
house.

SORRY if
it is a crap. This the first time I hv written sumthng. Plz leave ur valuable
comments n tell me how it is. Be free to tell me if it is a crap. I noe 1^st
ch has Alisha more but I promise in nxt chapters there will b more of yuvreen.
I will only continue if u think it is worth reading. You can also give
suggestions what u want to read. Plz suggest boutique name which suvi is
planning 2 open. I hv thought for: YUVREEN STYLE , YUVREEN DESIGNS , YUVREEN
THE LOVLY DESIGN SHOP. PLZ Tell any name if u hv in mind.

~
sweetgirl29 <3

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Originally posted by: sujairohit

Very nice ,do continue.

Amazing Start Nayab

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Start Nayab

Yay the truth about Alisha came out hope CVs listen to us also reveal the truth to Yuvi...hate that evil witch

looking forward to next part... yh Yuvreen designs is perfect

Cont Soon

amazing one dear...thank u so much for writing an ss...there were very less stories here which r being continued...so thank u...

Wow..nyc one..👏gud tht yuvi cme 2 knw abt alisha...d cvs luv alisha alot thts y dey dnt wnt hr 2 go out of d shw..😡
n do continue soon...👍🏼

really gud one! please continue and yes.. thanks for the pm!btw whats's the ss name?

CHAPTER 2: ROMANCE IS IN THE AIR

Suvi- yuvraj ye tum kya krne jar he the..haan?suvi holded his hand n stopped yuvi 4rm slapping Alisha.

Suvi- yuvraj chalo yaha se plz chalo..yuvraj chalo na..

Alisha-yuvraj plz mujhe chor kr mat jao na plz yuvi..i promise main sirf tumhari dost banker rahungi aur main apne aap ko change kr lungi yuvi plzz..

Yuvi –shut up Alisha..ab main teri baton main ni aaunga..qa keh ri thi tu friendship..tujhe friendship wrd ka matlb bhi pata h tujhe..kaise pata hoga agar pata hota to ye sb kabhi ni krti…it's a vry big wrd 4 u Alisha…bhul ja iss wrd ko..or agar tune topper ke saath kch b galat krne ki sochi bhi to u will pay 4 it.

Suvi- stop it yuvraj chalo..plz mere liye.

Yuvraj went away.
Suvi-alisha u noe tum ne ek diamond jaisa frnd khoya h..jo bht valuable aur rare hota h..yuvi jaisa frnd tum apni life bhi dhundogi na to bhi ni milega. U will regret Alisha.

Alisha was left alone crying wid no1 by her side.

Now v see yuvi n suvi in auto. Yuvraj is lukng vry upset.

Suvi- yuvraj tum ne kbhi cheetah ko upset dekha h?

Yuvi- qa? Cheetah?upset?topper plz yr abi mazak ka bilkil mood ni h..

Suvi-yuvraj plz bhul jao vo sb…

Yuvi-itna aasan ni h topper ye sb bhulna..pr thodi dair akela rahunga to sb bhul jaunga.

Yuvi to autowala-bhaiyya malad west main shanty apartments le lo (suvi's home)

Suvi-akele?yuvraj tum ne soch bi kese liya

K main tumhe akele chod dungi.hawww..kahi tum mujh se peecha to ni chudana chahtie..kahi tum mujh se breakup to ni krna chahte (she is acting :D) n makles a puppy face.

Yuvi- topper tu pagal ho gyi h qa ..haan? tu aisa soch b kese skti h..

Yuvi to autowala-bhaiyya ap to malad west m evergreen apartments le lo (yuvi's home). Madam g bhtziddi h manne wali ni h inko to mere hi ghr jaana h.

Autowala-bhaiyya or madam g ap decide kr lo pehle ki ap ko kaha jaana h jb tk main chai peekr ata hu..

Yuvi-are pr bhaiya..hme jaldi..

Suvi laughs n says gya autowala to…yuvi frown but he also laugs when suvi tickles in his stomach.

Suvi n yuvi reach @ yuvi's place.

Suvi- yuvraj tum naha kr aa jao better feel karoge phir hum..

Yuvi-phir hum..phir hum qa topper n he comes closer to suvi…bol na topper phir hum qa???

Suvi had towel in his hand n she throwed d towel on his face n pushes him back n says ab jao bhi.

Meanwhile,yuvi was getting ready she placed his fav dishes on d dining table gajar ka hawa. Shahi paneer,butter chcken,salad. All Indian dishes.. she closed ol d lights n lighted d room wid beautiful candles n decorated d floor wid ballons. She designed a big poster n placed it on d wall.on it was written ''LIFE IS VRY SHORT, KEEP CALM N B HAPPY.IT'S UR GIRLFRND'S ORDER :D''

Then yuvi came.suvi went to him.

Suvi-yuvi mera haath pakdo or mere saath chalo.

She takes him 2 d room which she has decorated.

Yuvi-*surprised* topper ye sb is ski qa zarurat thi??

Suvi- yuvraj plz bht bhook lg rhi hai baitho..subha se kch ni khaya hai.

Yuvi-(sittin)accha ye bta ye sb tune banaya*shocked*

Suvi-ni vo to mene..vo yuvraj mene order kiya h..pr agar tum nahane me 5 ghante lagata to mai zarur bna leti..vo to time nit ha na..

Yuvi to himself-fir to accha hua mjhe nahane me zyada time ni lagta…

Suvi- qa.. qa kaha tum ne yuvraj kya main itna bura khana bnati hu n hits yuvraj gently..

Yuvi- ni topper mai to mazak kr rha tha..aur tu khana khana ab tujhe bhuk nil g ri..abi thodi dair pehle to bht bhuk lg ri thi.. yuvraj was about to eat but suvi stopped him n then they both made each other eat with each others hand.they finished d dinner.

Suvi- yuvi mai abhi aayi.

Yuvi-topper ab plz itne awsm romantic moment pr safai krne mt chali jaana. He laughs.

Suvi-yuvraj..chup rho tum bht bolne lg gye ho aaj kl n throws a ballon at him.

She plays d song SUBHANALLAH n gives her hand to suvi n asks yuvi for dance. Yuvi pulls suvi towards him through waist n tells aaj guggal itni ramantic kese?? Suvi gave yuvi a peck n says aise…n hugz yuvi. Yuvi kisses on her forehead n they both dance..

PRECAP-yuvi is vry upset n tells her about his past..suvi tells yuvi about the idea of opening her boutique.

That's all guyz end of ch2 hope u ol like it…plz leave ur valuable comments…n plz suggest a gud name 4 ss I am nt getting any name.

~sweetgirl29<3❤️

Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash

amazing one dear...thank u so much for writing an ss...there were very less stories here which r being continued...so thank u...

This one is really amazing...do continue soon n pm me :)

very gud 👏..alisha sd hv no frnds..she sd b left alone..mek her cry more..bloody witch