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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone!
I am sahas(everyone knows it😉😆)
so mera exams khatam hue kal n oday I'm hazir wid a new OS...meri likhne ki habit nahi jayegi😉😆
so this is a new type OS.Hope u all like it...It may be little crappy😕...but plzz read it...I usually don't write this type writings...I always write romantic types...I wanted to write sumthing new as akshay says we shud try sumthing new everytym...n lucky my brain today I got a new idea so thought to share it wid u ppl...so here it is...if u feel sad then I'm sorryThis is just to show that no matter what yuvreen will always be together even if they will have to fight the death...

THE GRIEF OF LOSING

There was a noisy atmosphere of Delhi.It was evening n streets were gleaming with the
street lights.The weather was beautiful n there at the big mansion named Mr.Yuvraj suvreen singh.
Yes yuvraj n suvreen were married n yuvraj lyked his mansion to be named by them not him.
It was yuvraj's birthday n the couple with all their old friends-annie,naro,rathi,mannu all were
present to celebrate the auspicious ocassion.
Suvi-"challo everyone's there...ab yuvraj jaldi jaldi cake kaato nahin to...(annie dropped in)
annie-"nahin toh birthday expire ho jayega."
and thus all had a pretty laugh.
Yuvi-"arre expire kaise hone dun...aaj mere liye ek special day hai kyunki ye birthday mera topper ke sath
pehli birthday hai"
naro-'ohho...toh cum on jaldi se cake kaato"
den finally he cut the cake n loud cheers were heard
"happy birthday to u...happy birthday to u...happy birth..."(I guess u all know the b'day song)
yuvi-"achha ab ye toh ho gaya...ab topper my gift"
suvi-"zaroori hai?"
yuvi-"haann"
rathi-"lekin bhai suvreen toh aapke liye koi gift nahi layi"
suvi-"haan...sorry yuvraj main bhul gayi"
yuvi-"topper jhuth...phirse jhuth..."
suvi muttered to heself-"pata nahi main jab jhuth bolti hun how does know"
suvi-"toh phir gift ye hai"
yuvi saw a big box wrapped with gift wrapper.He unwrapped it quickly.There was a photo frame n
a collage of pictures of there beautiful moments dat dey spent.

yuvi-"thanks so much suv...nahi topper...isse achha gift kya ho sakta tha"
suvi-"kya yuvraj...tumne thaan liya hai kya tum mujhe topper ke alawa kuch nahi bulauge"
yuvi-"arre toh kya hua...kuch alag sa naam dena chahta tha...toh"
suvi-"oh teri...gift se yaad aaya maine apni purse wahin dukan pe chod aayi...annie tu mere sath chal...hum jaake
abhi le aayenge"
annie-"ok challo'
yuvi-"dekh ke jaana"
annie-"aapko darne ke koi jarurath nahi...hum bhabi ka khyal rakhenge"
everyone laughed n yuvreen felt embarassed.

suvreen took the car keys n drove.
It was getting dark.Suddenly a car came from the other side n crashed.The front glass broke n
entered suveen's head.Blood rushed out making her unconscious.Annie was little injured n screamed by seeing suvreen.
Some people came n helped suvreen to go in to the hospital.Annie had tears in her eyes.
annie-"main ye yuvi ko kaise inform karun...par karna to padega"
den she called yuvraj.
yuvraj-"hello annie...haan bol"
annie became triple afraid n said-"yu...yuvi..."
yuvi-"haan kya hua...bolo...tum theek to ho"
annie-"yuvi...woh suvreen ka acc...ident hogaya...plzz jaldi...jald...sunflower
hos...pital...a jao"
yuvi-"kyaa..."
n da phone dropped from his hands...
annie-"hello...yuvi kuch nahi hoga...suvreen ko kuch nahi hoga...tum bas hospital aa jao"
naro,mannu n rathi came running to yuvraj...
naro-'kya hua yuvraj...sab theek hai na?"
mannu-"kya hua...hame batayiye"
yuvraj-"topper ka accident ho gayi hai...woh woh hospital main admitted hain..."
all were shocked...
naro-"toh challo sab hospital"
n they rushed to the hospital.

in hospital

yuvraj rushes to annie-"annie kya hua...topper theek hai na"
annie-"woh theek ho jayegi...kuch nahi hoga usse...kuch nahi"she sid between her sobs
naro n others came to console them.
then a doctor comes n all rush towards him
yuvraj-"doctor topper...suvreen theek ho jayegi na..."
annie-"doctor meri dost is fine na...batayiye na"
doctor-"we r trying our best...bahot khoon beh chuki hai...deep wound has affected her brain...n
she is in the last stage"
yuvraj shouted at the hospital-"what the hell do u mean by trying the best...mujhe suvreen
sahi salamat chahiye...I need her"
rathi-"bhai...kuch nahi hoga...aap shant ho jayiye"
doctor-"dekhiye ab main sirf yahi keh sakta hoon dat we r trying our best"

den a nurse comes n says-"doctor...patient in room no.121...she is in critical condition"
doctor rushes off...yuvraj becums half-mad.Everyone else r crying.

den doctor comes out after 10 mins n says-"we r sorry...she cud not be saved"
yuvraj gets up n holds the doctor's collar"apko meri suvreen bachana hoga...or else u'll be responsible
for her death"
den yuvraj rushes to room no.121.He sits near the bed of suvreen n lets out painfull cries.
"tum mujhe aise chod kar kaise jaa sakte ho topper...we lived for each other...aur tum mere hath
bich raste pe chodd di...how can u be so selfish...tum aisa nahi ho sakti...kabhi nahi...tum waapas aaogi...
mere liye...agar nahi...toh there's no meaning for me to live...mere jeene ka koi matlab nahi...hum ek sath jiyenge
ek sath marenge... YUVRAJ aur SUVREEN hamesha ek sath rahenge chahe kuch bhi ho jaye"
Saying thus he kissed her forehead n went up the the room's glass window...he broke it n picked a peice
of glass...
he locked the door n annie,naro all shouted..."yuvraj please aisa kuch mat karo"
He went again to suvreen bed n knelt there..."I am cuming wid u topper"
with that he placed the glass on his left wrist near the wrist vien(sorry usse kya kehte hain I dont know...main
science main itna mahil nahi hun)n was ready to cut...he closed his eyes n...
...

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a soft little hand touched him n screamed aloud-"YUVRAJ"
yuvraj suddenly opened his eyes n the peice of glass fell from his hand...n he saw his topper was alive.
the crying faces outside were surprised n too happy...the doctors n nurses only said-"Its a miracle"
yuvraj hugged her immediatey n said-"I knew topper...I knew it...tum waapas aaogi n u came...mere liye
tum waapas aayi...main jaanta tha" n saying this he kissed her again...
suvi gave a little smile-"tum kya karne jaa rahe the...hame koi alag nahi kar sakta...we'll be together till death"


YUVREEN FOREVER!!!!!

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Monika_S thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank God to the end that you wrote...warna mujhe isko padhke neend na aati raat ko...
God...!!!!


Really hatke socha tumne Baby...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monika_S

Thank God to the end that you wrote...warna mujhe isko padhke neend na aati raat ko...

God...!!!!


Really hatke socha tumne Baby...


I am sorry di...its a sad one...I am not gud at writing dese types...its just a 1st attempt...I am really sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No no baby, don't be sorry...
the style of writing was great...

But it was just that Suvi's accident and death...🤢
heartbreakening it is...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monika_S

No no baby, don't be sorry...

the style of writing was great...

But it was just that Suvi's accident and death...🤢
heartbreakening it is...

I first thot 2 make her go to heaven but I cudn't...its really heartbreaking so gave a happy ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it,little different from other ff,and very emotional one,but very good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...Awesome...Awesome..!!! This is the only word that comes to my mind after reading this dark..sad yet romantic love story...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u scared me to death😔..pehle suvreen ko mara😡 phir yuvi ko bhi marne wali😡 thi irada kya hai boss😭...but glad u gave it a happy ending...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar awsum ...one of the best of...great work...mein yeh padhte padthe ro rahe the...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujairohit

Loved it,little different from other ff,and very emotional one,but very good.


thanks dear...glad dat u lyked it...main toh darr gayi thi

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