YUVREEN OS-The Grief Of Losing

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty
Awesome...Awesome...Awesome..!!! This is the only word that comes to my mind after reading this dark..sad yet romantic love story...!!!

thnks mani...very happy that u lyked it😃

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: tani18
u scared me to death😔..pehle suvreen ko mara😡 phir yuvi ko bhi marne wali😡 thi irada kya hai boss😭...but glad u gave it a happy ending...

sorry dear I am really sorry...yuvreen ko alag karne ke liye mera koi iraada nahi hai...dis was just to show that no matter wat yuvreen will always be together fighting wid death too...but ye kuch jyada dark ho gaya...sorry again

well thnks u cmmntd😃

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: luvushivin1
yaar awsum ...one of the best of...great work...mein yeh padhte padthe ro rahe the...😭

thnks dear...so happy u lyked it...I thot I'll be thrown andes n tomatoes from yuvreen fans...main khud ek yuvreen fan hoon...dis was to show dat yuvreen will always be together...

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maria_rox14

@maria_rox14

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Omg sahas
U seriously scared me
I thought that u were writing a tragic love story
Hey u kinda reenacted their Romeo Juliet wala play
Anyeays it was awesome!!!

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: maria_rox14
Omg sahas
U seriously scared me
I thought that u were writing a tragic love story
Hey u kinda reenacted their Romeo Juliet wala play
Anyeays it was awesome!!!

I am sorry for scaring u...n yes it was like romeo juliet...thnks for cmmntng...glad u lyked it

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bhavnah

@bhavnah

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

oh great os... at end though i was scared but u changed it... loved it

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Akshay

@akshayR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

i would say i recovered from a heart attack just now as suvi came alive...mujhe toh darr lag raha tha aage padhne mein when the doc said..sorry we could not save her but heyy..nice OS sahas..👍🏼

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parul agarwal

@cherry.parul0

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

i started shivrng reading this horrible chapter..

suvi is no more...reading this line [mere pair k neeche se zameen khisak gyi]..

god...aisa kabhi na ho i wish...cz i want 4evr yuvreen...

lvd it..as it had a happy ending..

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suruchi rajpal

@luvushivin1

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash

thnks dear...so happy u lyked it...I thot I'll be thrown andes n tomatoes from yuvreen fans...main khud ek yuvreen fan hoon...dis was to show dat yuvreen will always be together...

u r rite sahs yuvreen will be together always just luv them and u 2...!😆