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Posted: 12 years ago
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so here is the next part...yaar no body is riting so ill rite...!!
here inside the room...!!
annie-suvi kya karen...naro kuch idea de na...!!
naro-mein kya doon idead mujhe toh khud kuch samjh nahi ah raha hai...!!!
suvi-kyun na humlog dance karen...!!
annie-great idea suvi...par kaun se gaane pe...!!
naro-par ek shart par sab log pehl individual dance karenge the sab log saath ayenge...!!
annie- pehle gaana toh decide karo...!!
naro-mein karoongi dance on mein heroine hunn
annie -mein karoongi dance halkat jawani pe...!!
suvi -aur mein ...!!!...??
here out side...!!
mannu-ab upar kese jayenge...!!
yuvi the sees the ladder ...!! and point outs...!!
yuvi-isse jayenge...!!
rathi and mannu brings...the ladder...!!
then as they hide near the pardah in annies room...!!
they saw three prity girla as they were beautifully dressed before dancing...!!
mannu-bhaiye...yeh log itni saji dhaji kyun hai
yuvi -mujhe kya patah...!!...? mein kya yahan se pehle se aya hun jo mujhe ptah hoga...??
then annie started the music and naro started dancing...mannu luking at her with a smile on his face. ...!!
then comes annie...!!..on halkat jawani nd rathi closes mannu and yuvi's eyes...!!
and the both remove hands of mannu from their eyes...!!...!!!
and the comes finally...!!...suvi on tumhi ho bandhu...!!
nd rathi and mannu at yuvi when he had a million dollar smile on his face...!!
and then all threen come...on the song kafirana which made all three boys to come with them and dance...!!...bit they come at last...!!
next scene-all three shocked seeing boys...!!in their pajama party...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
looking at the trio, the girls are shocked and even the boys get shocked and embarressed when they realise that they came in front of girls while dancing unintensionally. they look at each other with confused looks...

All girls scream in chorus- TUM!!!!!
The boys putting hands on mouths of their respective ladies,,, and saying- Shhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The moments stops for a while, a breeze blowing and everybody busy in eye locks😳

And a voice breaks the silence...
Annie's mom- Annie kya hua beta????

Annie in confusion- nhi mumma kuch nhi,,, hum baatein kr rahe hain..

Annie's mom- ok beta,, enjoy

And Suvi to all boys- tum sab kya kr rahe ho??

Yuvi- humain laga tum log humain miss kr rahi hogi toh hum a gye,,, vese bhi ladkiyon ko enjoy krna thode hi ata hai..

Annie- tumse kisne kaha hum tum logo ko miss kr rahe the???
Suvi- aur we girls enjoy better than you boys...

And boys and girls arguement starts and this is next scene😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
yuvi-arre tum sab hamesha hamare sath hote ho...isliye hame laga...
suvi-yuvi iska matlab ye thodi na hai ki hum tum sab ko miss kar rahe hain...
rathi-dekho hum sab isliye aaye the...
annie-kisliye batao...
naro n mannu who were silent replied-arre bass karo na
den everyone became silent...
naro-agar galti se aagaye toh theek hai...kya harzz hai
mannu-bilkul sahi naroji...bhai ab challo chalte hain...
naro-nahi ruko...tum log bhi hamare sath reh sakte ho...
suvi-haan we r sorry...
yuvi-hum bhi sorry
annie-challo ab hum sab sath hain toh lets enjoy
boys-hmmm
annie-ab kya karen???
suvi-antakshari...
naro-nyc idea
annie n boys-ok
den dey play antakshari...


next scene-rathi sings ishq wala love n yuvreen dance😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
awesome update kim and sahas...!!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
thnxxx...!!😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86


u r welcome...do read my ff...i updated it..and ya plz feel free to comment on it...😉

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3248395&TPN=5
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
now i begin.!!
yuvi-start kaun karega.!!!
naro-mannu...!!
all agreed...!!
mannu then started...!!...he sung the song...!!!
now chance came to annie...!!
then naro then suvi then yuvi and then rathi...!!
kaun se letter se...!!
annie-i se...!!
rathi sings...!!! and yuvreen dance all were shocked to see yuvreen dancing like an orignal couple and cannot live without each other...!!
sry a short one...!!next time ill rite a big one...!!
next scene yuvi kissed suvi...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty

awesome update kim and sahas...!!! 👏

hey thnxxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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iv read this os for the first time and i have to say that evry is seriously BRILLIANT!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_rox14

iv read this os for the first time and i have to say that evry is seriously BRILLIANT!!

thnxxx😃

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