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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yuvi;-Are chalo bahot der ho gayi hai…………..

Yuvi calls the gang ……everyone is not ready go back to hotel………..

Dekho… chalo abhi nahi to bahot der ho jayegi

After long yes-no they are ready to go,

Yuvi ;- sambhalke who meri laila hai koi truck nahi hai …..

Annie ;- ha pata hai who tera pehla pyar hai….

Rathi;- laila to bhai ki jaan hai…………………

Yuvi;- ha hai wo meri jaan…samaj gaye tum log… ab chalo baitho…….

When suvi is going sit in on passengers seat………. yuvi offer his hand to her

And all gang looked at both of them and then to each other and start saying

Hmmm

Next scene;-suvi bring ladoo for yuvi but entire gang eat except yuvi

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Akshay

@akshayR

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Posted: 12 years ago

Suvi sees her friends talking and gossiping..so she herself goes and sits

Yuvi takes back his hand and drives through beautiful places...everyone enjoys including suvi

suvi at home decides to get laddoos for yuvi for such an awesome day

next day

suvi: ye dekho yuvi main tumhare liye ladoo lekar aayi hun

Mannu and rathi : LADDOO!!!..and they take the box away..with yuvi just standing there...😆

Yuvi gets sad as he didn't get any...and suvi winks at him...and tells him to come at "hamara corner"

Next scene: suvi and yuvi at their corner where suvi has a backup laddoo box for yuvi 😆

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

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Posted: 12 years ago

den yuvreen reach hamara corner

den suvi took out a full box of laddooos

yuvi-"topper..."

suvi-"aise kya dekh rahe ho...main laddoo k liye lddoo nahi bachati..."

yuvi-"thnx..."n he started eating...

den he also fed lil bits to suvi

dey were sharing n eating n laughing

next scene-anything of ur choice

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow sahashrabdiddash this is so beautiful

i'll write on the line given by akshayR

suvi and yuvi reach to hamara corner yuvi to muh phoolake khada tha and suvi feel to laugh so loudly after seeing this to tease him she ask yuvi in very much dramatic way😃

suvi;- kya hua yuvraj tumhara mood itna kharab kun hai???

yuvi;- tum aise pooch rahi ho ki tumhe kuch pata hi nahi😡

suvi ;- kya pata nahi😭

yuvi;- dekho topper mujhe gussa mat dilao...tumhe kya jaroorat thi itno jor se ladoo bolne ki aur sab ke samne ladoo rakhne ki...dekha sab ne ladoo khaye mujhe to thik se dekhane ko bhi nahi mile...jao mein tumse baat nahi karronga

suvi just can't stop her laugh...she go close to yuvi and handover him one full box of ladoo

yuvi;- are wa...tu mere liye alag se ladoo layi ho😲

suvi;- ha kunki mujhe pata tha ki tumhe ladoo bahot pasand hai

yuvi;- thanks topper👏

yuvi took the box from her hand and grab her hand and make her to sit with him

both of them started to eat ladoo with joy...😛

next scene;- yuvi,rathi and mannu selecting dresses for suvi, annie and naro

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suruchi rajpal

@luvushivin1

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow kaveriw awsum ...!!!
next scene
yuvi and suvi join the whole gang...!!!
rannie and manaro with one voice kahan theh tum logg...!!!!
all started laughing
suvi - areh mein toh bhuli gaye...!!!
yuvi- kya...???...??
suvi- mere behen baby ah rahe hai.??.?? actually woh kya hai ki mera kal birthday hai aur mere behen ko apne birthday se jyada mera bd pasand hai...!!!
aur kal woh ah rahe hai...!!
aur mene toh apne liye kuch khareda bhi nahi kal party mein kya pehno gi...!!!
yuvi-tuh chinta mat kar topper hum log shopping karne chalenge...!!
suvi- par ek probelem hai ki mein, annie aur naro nahi chal payenge kyunki papah ne party ki decortion mein humari help mange hai ...!!
annie- koi baat nahi suvi humlog kal khared legen abhi chalteh hai...!!!
suvi, annie and naro leaved
rathi- lagta hai ki suvi ko apne bday par udas hona padega kyunki kal toh india band rahe ga koi shop nahi khulage aur woh shopping nahi kar payegi...!!!!...!!!!!
yuvi- shayd tuh bhul raha ki bhai tumahra cheetah hai cheetah...!!!! chal
rathi and manu- kahan...????
yuvi- areh chalo
yuvi,rathiand mannu in city mall of delhi...!!!!
mann- bhai app humain yahan kyu le aye
yuvi-kahn tha na chup yahan humlog topper,annie aur naro ke liye shooping karne aye hai agar woh log nahi ahh sakte toh hulog toh jah sakteh hain umke liye shooping karne...!!!...!
rathi-wah bhaiye kya idea hai app toh cheetah ho cheetah
yuvi- ab chalo
then they select beatufull dresses for three of them..!!!
and the they go back to hostel😆😆😆😆...!!!!
yuvi- kal mein topper ko suprise doonga and mannu and rathi thinks the same for annie and naro...😳😳😳😳
next scene-yuvi giving the dress to suvi.rathi is giving to annie and mannu givin to naro
hope u like it...!!!!😃😃😃😃

Edited by suruchi.rajpal - 12 years ago

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kim.rayat

@kim.rayat

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow i'm very happy that u started it again, evven more happy that u started wid continuation. but I still can't understand y that post was locked???

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kim.rayat
wow i'm very happy that u started it again, evven more happy that u started wid continuation. but I still can't understand y that post was locked???

let it be ...

let's start with new

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow suruchi.rajpal this is so good i like it

ok next is

yuvi;-mein topper ko surprise dena chata hoon jab wo ye dress dekhegi to usaka chehra dekhane wala hoga...

rathi and mannu;-ha bhai hum bhi aisa hi kuch karenge

next day...

suvi;- kya aaj bharat band hai ...lekin hum ne apni dress tak nahi kharidi...

annie;- sarkar ko aaj hi bharat bandh rakhna tha...

naro;- ab kya kare

door bell rings...boys are standing out

yuvi;- kya hua girls tum logke chehre pe bara kun baje hai

annie;-aaj bharat bandh hai aur hamne aaj raat ke party ke liye dress hi nahi kharidi

suvi;-ab mein party mein kya pehnungi...

yuvi;- ye to bahot badi problem hai...lekin iska solution hai mere pass

girls;- kya...

yuvi ;-jadoo...

girls;-jadoo?...kaisa jadoo...

yuiv;- jadoo hai...tum sab pehle apni aankhe bandh karo aur apne haat aage karo

all girls looking at boys confusingly

rathi;- jo bola hai wo karo ...jadoo dekhna hai na...

girls do the same way boys told them...and boys put one packet on each girls hand ...girls open their eyes and found beautiful dresses on their hand

girls shout together so loudly and hug boys so tightly...result boys totally lost or u can say almost faint

next scene;- yuvreen close dance in rain...no one see's them...its private moment

Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

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Posted: 12 years ago

gud work kaveri...

I want to change da paapa n mamma character...dey were not strict n didnt blame suvi for hanging out wid frend...maybe its a boy or a girl...

den it became evening n annie,naro had come...n were waiting for suvi to cum up ready...n she came atlast...she was wearing a pink high neck dress n wid sparkling earings...her hair was open n was straight...

dis was how suvi's dress was...

annie- wow suvi...u look beautifulll...

naro-waise yuvraj ka choice bura nahin hai...

suvi-thanks...

now girls were waiting for da boys...

baby-"di...aap sab kiska intezaar kar rahe hain"

suvi-"woh mere sare dost aaye nahi ab tak..."

den rathi n mannu came n da girls hugged dem...dey wished happy birthday to suvi...she said thanks n asked where yuvi was...

den yuvraj enterd n a smile lighted up suvi's face...

yuvraj mouth opened by seeing her..."kitni sundar lag rahi hai...woooww"

den he slowly went up to her n handed her a boquet of flowers n said-"happy birthday topper...tu bahut accha lag rahi hai..."

suvi said shyly-"thnx"

den da party began wid mumma n puppa guggal enjoying also😆

baby-"puppa mujhe aaj hostel waapas jaana hai..."

puppa-"nahi beta...aj aise"

baby-"puppa...I have to go...mere kal college bhi hai..."

suvi-"koi baat nahi...main tumhe scooty main chod dungi..."

baby-"theek hai...n thnx di"

suvi-"aye...di ko thnx maat bol nahi toh teri chopsey karlungi"

den wen dey went outside yuvraj told suvi dat he'll drop her...

suvi agreed...da 2 other couples went back as dey were tired...

de dey reached baby's collge n left her...

baby-"bye di ...I love u...bye yuvraaj bhaiya"

n wid dat she hugged suvi..

suvi-"byee...aur apna khyal rakhna..."

den dey were returning wen at halfway rain fell

suvi-"wow...thnx indraji...ye mere birthday ka sabse lovely gift hai"

n she jumped out from laila n started dancing in da rain...

yuvi- was just watching her wen suvi went n pulled him out of da jeep...dere she lost her balance n was about to fall wen yuvraj caught her by one hand...den he pulled her towards him...n she came closer...

dey were standing in da pose lyk da fresher's ni8 wen yuvraj caught her...

den dey stated dancing in da rain n everytym becoming closer...but suvi wud not stop him to make her closer to him...

dey were dancing n dancing...till da rain stopped...

hey sorry for such a long one...once I start writing I write so much...sorry yaar...ohh dis cud be an OS😆I wrote so much😲

next scene- any romantic scene in da canteen...

Edited by sahashrabdidash - 12 years ago