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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update👍🏼 and Thanx a lot for giving an opportunity to write the next scene according to own wish,,, sorry frnz gonna add sum twist😆,, witty mind has got activated😈

While kissing Suvi hears the voices of Naro and Annie

Suvreen,, Suvreen...

Suvi to yuvi- mujhe Naro or Annie bula rahe hain
Yuvi- Mujhe nhi sun raha
Suvi- per mujhe sun raha hai...

Naro - Suvreen uth ja... hum dance ke liye cd lene gye or tum so gyi????

Annie- Suvreen,,, not fair,,, tum aaj raat so nhi sakti,, we have to enjoy

Suvi shockingly wakes up from the dream and surprisingly says... Naro,,, Annie,,, tum log???
Oh no, ye sapna tha???? Kya Gannu Ji??? (i'm sure all the readers must be saying the same🤣)

Naro- kya dekha sapne main??

Annie- let me guess,,, yuvraj ke bare main tha na???? hmmm...

Suvi (with mixed expression of embarrassment, shyness and confusion)- n..nhi..nhi toh,, Yuvraj??? Yuvraj mere sapne main??? bilkul nhi...

Annie- Jhooth mat bol.. we know tu shaam se Yuvi ko miss kr rahi thi and abhi jo tum fumble kr rhi ho, pakka yuvi tha sapne main,,, hai na???

Suvi blushes😳

Annie- hmmm... bolo kya dekha... yuvraj ne sapne main kya kiya???

And the cheetah gang enters Annie's room(Suvi's dream started when boys were planning to enter Naro's room😆)

Yuvi- Kisi ne mera naam liya? dekha ye log humain miss kr rahe the...

Suvi- tum log??? (in thoughts- lagta hai sapna sach hone wala hai,, oh no ya oh yes,,, oh Gannu Ji😕)

Annie- wow tum log yahan kaise???

Rathi- Hum tum logo ko miss kr rahe the (Yuvi taps on Rathi's head) Mera matlab humne socha tum log humain miss kr rahe hoge,,, toh a gya...

Mannu- vese aap log bhai ke bare main kuch keh rahe the???

Suvi--k.. kuch nhi,, college ki baat kr rahe the toh yuvi ki baat toh honi hi thi

Rathi- bhai toh CHEETAH hai,, saare unki baatein toh krte hi hain😆

Naro- chalo kuch enjoy krte hain,, join us guys...

Yuvi- mujhe toh bhukh lagi hai,, kuch khane ko hai???

Suvi in thoughts again(Bhukhad,, sapne main hi accha tha,,, abi toh dekh bhi bhi raha😒)
and suddenly Yuvi looks at Suvi's- a short eye lock, and he softly asks- Topper tune kuch kaha???
Suvi- Confused but caought in yuvi's eyes nhi kuch nhi😳

Naho- Ahem ahem... pizza hai chalega...

Eya-lock breaks...

Rathi attacks pizza and everyone follows rathi,,, everyone is enjoying pizza,,, Suvi thinking abt the dream and Yuvreen chori chori finding chances to look at each other(Bg music can be Aankhon ki gustakhiyan😉)

they all enjoy till dawn and boys say good bye, yuvreen still lost in each other...

Yuvi looking at Suvi- chalo kal college main milte hain...

Suvi in thoughts while annie and naro sleeping- Sapna sach nhi hua Gannu ji,, per ye accha hua ya bura???

Yuvreen thinking abt each other whole night...

Next scene- Yuvi asked Suvi in college that he overheard Annie that you saw him in her dreams,,, Wat was the dream??? Suvi confused abt wat to say

Sorry frnz for breaking the castle,,, I made the romantic moments into dreamy one,,,,, but today i enjoyed writing it the most😆 thnx luvushivin1for giving such situation😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
no problem kimi di...waise mazaa aa gaya..aise romantic weather mein thoda romance sunne/padhne ya dekhne ko mile..toh gudd hain..program toh is nowhere near romance..atleast apna dose yahi se le lete hain!! 😆 by the way..the songs u chose..was nice..plus the line where suvi thinks yuvi as bhukhad..actually made me laugh out 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akshayR

no problem kimi di...waise mazaa aa gaya..aise romantic weather mein thoda romance sunne/padhne ya dekhne ko mile..toh gudd hain..program toh is nowhere near romance..atleast apna dose yahi se le lete hain!! 😆 by the way..the songs u chose..was nice..plus the line where suvi thinks yuvi as bhukhad..actually made me laugh out 😆😆


Thnx Akshay😊 the thought of this scenerio was very sudden and impulsive that couldn't stop myself from writing😆
Actually i'm not that much romantic, though i like soft, lovable moments, i'm more of dreamy nature
I was laughing like hell while thinking the reaction of u all during writing the scenerio, but then thought sumbody may find it offensive,, i hope nobody would mind
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kim.rayat


Thnx Akshay😊 the thought of this scenerio was very sudden and impulsive that couldn't stop myself from writing😆
Actually i'm not that much romantic, though i like soft, lovable moments, i'm more of dreamy nature
I was laughing like hell while thinking the reaction of u all during writing the scenerio, but then thought sumbody may find it offensive,, i hope nobody would mind


Areyy nahi..apna SG forum bade polite and lovable logon se bhara hua hain..just like our Yuvreen...ladte hain..but still care and love for each other...apna bhi yahi hain!!!...Infact frankly speaking i don't find this environment in any other forum...after reading some posts...like the one to decide RC-suvi pair name...kahin aur ye post hota..toh people must have killed that person!! 😆 So i just the people here in the SG forum 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kim.rayat

Nice update👍🏼 and Thanx a lot for giving an opportunity to write the next scene according to own wish,,, sorry frnz gonna add sum twist😆,, witty mind has got activated😈

While kissing Suvi hears the voices of Naro and Annie

Suvreen,, Suvreen...

Suvi to yuvi- mujhe Naro or Annie bula rahe hain
Yuvi- Mujhe nhi sun raha
Suvi- per mujhe sun raha hai...

Naro - Suvreen uth ja... hum dance ke liye cd lene gye or tum so gyi????

Annie- Suvreen,,, not fair,,, tum aaj raat so nhi sakti,, we have to enjoy

Suvi shockingly wakes up from the dream and surprisingly says... Naro,,, Annie,,, tum log???
Oh no, ye sapna tha???? Kya Gannu Ji??? (i'm sure all the readers must be saying the same🤣)

Naro- kya dekha sapne main??

Annie- let me guess,,, yuvraj ke bare main tha na???? hmmm...

Suvi (with mixed expression of embarrassment, shyness and confusion)- n..nhi..nhi toh,, Yuvraj??? Yuvraj mere sapne main??? bilkul nhi...

Annie- Jhooth mat bol.. we know tu shaam se Yuvi ko miss kr rahi thi and abhi jo tum fumble kr rhi ho, pakka yuvi tha sapne main,,, hai na???

Suvi blushes😳

Annie- hmmm... bolo kya dekha... yuvraj ne sapne main kya kiya???

And the cheetah gang enters Annie's room(Suvi's dream started when boys were planning to enter Naro's room😆)

Yuvi- Kisi ne mera naam liya? dekha ye log humain miss kr rahe the...

Suvi- tum log??? (in thoughts- lagta hai sapna sach hone wala hai,, oh no ya oh yes,,, oh Gannu Ji😕)

Annie- wow tum log yahan kaise???

Rathi- Hum tum logo ko miss kr rahe the (Yuvi taps on Rathi's head) Mera matlab humne socha tum log humain miss kr rahe hoge,,, toh a gya...

Mannu- vese aap log bhai ke bare main kuch keh rahe the???

Suvi--k.. kuch nhi,, college ki baat kr rahe the toh yuvi ki baat toh honi hi thi

Rathi- bhai toh CHEETAH hai,, saare unki baatein toh krte hi hain😆

Naro- chalo kuch enjoy krte hain,, join us guys...

Yuvi- mujhe toh bhukh lagi hai,, kuch khane ko hai???

Suvi in thoughts again(Bhukhad,, sapne main hi accha tha,,, abi toh dekh bhi bhi raha😒)
and suddenly Yuvi looks at Suvi's- a short eye lock, and he softly asks- Topper tune kuch kaha???
Suvi- Confused but caought in yuvi's eyes nhi kuch nhi😳

Naho- Ahem ahem... pizza hai chalega...

Eya-lock breaks...

Rathi attacks pizza and everyone follows rathi,,, everyone is enjoying pizza,,, Suvi thinking abt the dream and Yuvreen chori chori finding chances to look at each other(Bg music can be Aankhon ki gustakhiyan😉)

they all enjoy till dawn and boys say good bye, yuvreen still lost in each other...

Yuvi looking at Suvi- chalo kal college main milte hain...

Suvi in thoughts while annie and naro sleeping- Sapna sach nhi hua Gannu ji,, per ye accha hua ya bura???

Yuvreen thinking abt each other whole night...

Next scene- Yuvi asked Suvi in college that he overheard Annie that you saw him in her dreams,,, Wat was the dream??? Suvi confused abt wat to say

Sorry frnz for breaking the castle,,, I made the romantic moments into dreamy one,,,,, but today i enjoyed writing it the most😆 thnx luvushivin1for giving such situation😆

its ok nice update but tumne yeh dream likh mere toh full on chopsey kar de..!!!but i luv jab tune likha ki it was a dream mein toh bilkul hass padi..!!1 and pecap toh bahut accha hai..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kim.rayat

Nice update👍🏼 and Thanx a lot for giving an opportunity to write the next scene according to own wish,,, sorry frnz gonna add sum twist😆,, witty mind has got activated😈

While kissing Suvi hears the voices of Naro and Annie

Suvreen,, Suvreen...

Suvi to yuvi- mujhe Naro or Annie bula rahe hain
Yuvi- Mujhe nhi sun raha
Suvi- per mujhe sun raha hai...

Naro - Suvreen uth ja... hum dance ke liye cd lene gye or tum so gyi????

Annie- Suvreen,,, not fair,,, tum aaj raat so nhi sakti,, we have to enjoy

Suvi shockingly wakes up from the dream and surprisingly says... Naro,,, Annie,,, tum log???
Oh no, ye sapna tha???? Kya Gannu Ji??? (i'm sure all the readers must be saying the same🤣)

Naro- kya dekha sapne main??

Annie- let me guess,,, yuvraj ke bare main tha na???? hmmm...

Suvi (with mixed expression of embarrassment, shyness and confusion)- n..nhi..nhi toh,, Yuvraj??? Yuvraj mere sapne main??? bilkul nhi...

Annie- Jhooth mat bol.. we know tu shaam se Yuvi ko miss kr rahi thi and abhi jo tum fumble kr rhi ho, pakka yuvi tha sapne main,,, hai na???

Suvi blushes😳

Annie- hmmm... bolo kya dekha... yuvraj ne sapne main kya kiya???

And the cheetah gang enters Annie's room(Suvi's dream started when boys were planning to enter Naro's room😆)

Yuvi- Kisi ne mera naam liya? dekha ye log humain miss kr rahe the...

Suvi- tum log??? (in thoughts- lagta hai sapna sach hone wala hai,, oh no ya oh yes,,, oh Gannu Ji😕)

Annie- wow tum log yahan kaise???

Rathi- Hum tum logo ko miss kr rahe the (Yuvi taps on Rathi's head) Mera matlab humne socha tum log humain miss kr rahe hoge,,, toh a gya...

Mannu- vese aap log bhai ke bare main kuch keh rahe the???

Suvi--k.. kuch nhi,, college ki baat kr rahe the toh yuvi ki baat toh honi hi thi

Rathi- bhai toh CHEETAH hai,, saare unki baatein toh krte hi hain😆

Naro- chalo kuch enjoy krte hain,, join us guys...

Yuvi- mujhe toh bhukh lagi hai,, kuch khane ko hai???

Suvi in thoughts again(Bhukhad,, sapne main hi accha tha,,, abi toh dekh bhi bhi raha😒)
and suddenly Yuvi looks at Suvi's- a short eye lock, and he softly asks- Topper tune kuch kaha???
Suvi- Confused but caought in yuvi's eyes nhi kuch nhi😳

Naho- Ahem ahem... pizza hai chalega...

Eya-lock breaks...

Rathi attacks pizza and everyone follows rathi,,, everyone is enjoying pizza,,, Suvi thinking abt the dream and Yuvreen chori chori finding chances to look at each other(Bg music can be Aankhon ki gustakhiyan😉)

they all enjoy till dawn and boys say good bye, yuvreen still lost in each other...

Yuvi looking at Suvi- chalo kal college main milte hain...

Suvi in thoughts while annie and naro sleeping- Sapna sach nhi hua Gannu ji,, per ye accha hua ya bura???

Yuvreen thinking abt each other whole night...

Next scene- Yuvi asked Suvi in college that he overheard Annie that you saw him in her dreams,,, Wat was the dream??? Suvi confused abt wat to say

Sorry frnz for breaking the castle,,, I made the romantic moments into dreamy one,,,,, but today i enjoyed writing it the most😆 thnx luvushivin1for giving such situation😆



awesome update kim di...it was creative...!!!! 😃 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kim.rayat


Thnx Akshay😊 the thought of this scenerio was very sudden and impulsive that couldn't stop myself from writing😆
Actually i'm not that much romantic, though i like soft, lovable moments, i'm more of dreamy nature
I was laughing like hell while thinking the reaction of u all during writing the scenerio, but then thought sumbody may find it offensive,, i hope nobody would mind



arey kim di why will anyone feel offended of such an awesome update...we all lov eit...and ya sab ko apna apna POV bholne ka haq hein..and jab wo POV ithni achi ho to who will not lie it...we just love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akshayR


Areyy nahi..apna SG forum bade polite and lovable logon se bhara hua hain..just like our Yuvreen...ladte hain..but still care and love for each other...apna bhi yahi hain!!!...Infact frankly speaking i don't find this environment in any other forum...after reading some posts...like the one to decide RC-suvi pair name...kahin aur ye post hota..toh people must have killed that person!! 😆 So i just the people here in the SG forum 😊


haan bilkul sahi kaha bro...this forum rocks..we have full on masti with some awesome nok jhok...and infact we have created such awesome friends and relations over here...I mean that is just fab...without even seeing each other we share such good bond..this forum is just awesome..!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akshayR


Areyy nahi..apna SG forum bade polite and lovable logon se bhara hua hain..just like our Yuvreen...ladte hain..but still care and love for each other...apna bhi yahi hain!!!...Infact frankly speaking i don't find this environment in any other forum...after reading some posts...like the one to decide RC-suvi pair name...kahin aur ye post hota..toh people must have killed that person!! 😆 So i just the people here in the SG forum 😊


Ya u r right,,, I love this forum😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

its ok nice update but tumne yeh dream likh mere toh full on chopsey kar de..!!!but i luv jab tune likha ki it was a dream mein toh bilkul hass padi..!!1 and pecap toh bahut accha hai..!!

😛I'm so sorry,,, chopsy mat kaho yaar,, ur updates are really awesome😊 I was thinking of u jab main likh rahi thi,,, but yesterday i was in full on masti mood,,, couldn't stop myself😆

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