OS-Karna's Thoughts (Arjun)-The Last Battle

riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sania_58
Another awesome OS.
These creative writings are the reason I am present in this Forums.

Extremely talented writers are here.

Great one.

Karna winced in pain, not from the arrow, but seeing the hatred in his brother's eyes.😭

& the last line, Loved the OS.

Thank U for this beautiful piece of writing.👏

Thanks dear 😊. It is really nice to see you appreciating this way .As Jamy said when we have readers for our work , we get motivation to write 😊

thanks again for such encouraging words😊

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riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ramya06
It is just excellent! You brought out every emotion so well! 👏 👏 😭

😊thank you dear for encouraging words

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riti4u

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Originally posted by: barbieindia
This Os is so beautiful and emotional😭
loved ur mention of sun feeling his son's pain in the last para

Great Work👏👏

thank you for liking it😊 and glad u liked that part, i have soft spot for his dad😳

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Nirmala

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wonderful, very very emotional. Your take on why he didn't spare Arjun was thought provoking and acceptable. The last few lines were just out of the world. The inner battle of Karn cannot be put in better words than those .

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Brahmaputra

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Beautiful and emotional narration of Karna's inner battle.😊

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likhaavatein

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I THINK I JUST DIED OF BRILLIANCE SHOCK, RITI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤️

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hello45

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Posted: 9 years ago

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wonderful os depicting karn's inner conflict

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riti4u

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Originally posted by: ..Dharam_dasi..
Pierced it indeed riti...
Superb portrayal of feelings!
Thanks fr pm.

Thank you dear glad you liked it😊

Originally posted by: MBcrazyfan
Thanks for pm riti..its a very emotional piece..nice work dear

Thank you dear for appreciation 😊

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Wonderful OS

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
Riti ma 😭 so emotional one! i am gonna cry this whole day..so nice riti darling

🤗thank you dhivi n sowwie to make u cry

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riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Vaikartana.
Ooh God it is so emotional You described Karna's inner battle so touchingly.My heart is heavy after reading this one And yeah you are the best in writing emotional stories and making the readers feel the pain of your characters

Thank you vani 😳, you are always so sweet😊

Originally posted by: nimmu96
Wonderful, very very emotional. Your take on why he didn't spare Arjun was thought provoking and acceptable. The last few lines were just out of the world. The inner battle of Karn cannot be put in better words than those .

Thank you dear😊. I am glad that my take seemed acceptable. Its just that i tried to reason out and could find only these reasons for his decision😊 and thanks a lot for your sweet comments, i am glad you liked it😃