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Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

This was dhamakedaar OS indeed, Bhanu ws portrayed beautifully, her anger ws very well positioned and shooted! I dnt know why I ws trying to find similarities between this catfight nd the one I ocassionally witness near Borivilli's chawl bet 2 women over a tap water!😆 nyways coming to the OS I wont blabber discussing it contents😛
instead I point out the things I like!
1. No mention of Dury!
2. Keeping both women headstrong till end
3. Questioning Drau the things ny self-respecting women would have!
4. The end... BRAVOoo that ws so perfect both smiling😆

nd ha u understand women psycology really well!😛

On a Side note: Yeah Bhanu dissappeared in the epic, we should really thank god that there ws no Homosexual marraige law then nd child bearing ability exists only with women, shouldn't we?😛

Thanks a lot Sanzi.😊 If this OS reminded you of real catfights and if you feel I understand women, that is the biggest aporeciation for my efforts. And avoiding Dury was deliberate. I have been bored with my usual writing style. I am glad you liked it all. And I am really glad that you noted the fact that I kept both women headstrong till end. That really needs great maturity and deeply reading nature at such a young age. Most people overlooked that.😊 And yeah we should be thanksful. Aur pata nahin kya kya ho sakta tha.😉 There are already enough things to doubt many people.😆

Why did you remove this?...
Mujhe PM kardo plz, its such a Glucon-D read it fills me with energy...esp the fight betn them😆
I swear I wont plaigarize!😛

Jamy...if u have removed this OS bcoz of copyright issues then it's fine.

@ amrita- its copyright issue only..

Thankfully I read the work before u removed it out...

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

Why did you remove this?...
Mujhe PM kardo plz, its such a Glucon-D read it fills me with energy...esp the fight betn them😆
I swear I wont plaigarize!😛

Haan, meri maa. I removed it coz of copyright issues. Jis jis ko padna tha woh toh kab ka padh chuka hoga!!!😆 I will send you Glucon-D tomorrow.⭐️ I trust you re.

Originally posted by: amritat

Jamy...if u have removed this OS bcoz of copyright issues then it's fine.

But if you have done so bcoz of our disagreements...or for any other controversial reason...then you may put it back...😊

I know such things dont affect you...but then I thought of saying...As a writer you should not be affected by wat a certain section of people think...Just saying...Just in case.😊

Copyright issues Amrita. Nothing else. I cannot trust bhatakti huyi aatmas of IF's kumbh mela.😆

Originally posted by: ---Anu---

Thankfully I read the work before u removed it out...

Only that I kept the commenting part for laters...😆

Now, the story... Jamy, through this OS, u have raised some poignant questions for everyone to ponder on. And that too, of all the people, u made Bhanumathi your advocate..an apt choice!👏

Though, I highly adore Draupadi... her not blaming or raising voice against Yudhishtir and her other husbands is something which has bothered me always. I have some guesses on the reason, but I would keep it to myself. Coz, it may again be some interpolation only.😆

Karna is also a favorite of mine, BUT, I despise the K-D angle too much. And u even had Bhanumathi question that as well..😲Any specific reason or is it just for a spicy climax?😆

Sigh! And here I thought u were a female. My bad!🤔I loved the cat fight...very aptly done with perfect jethani - devrani vibes!😈

Overall, I loved the strong portrayal of Bhanumathi here...with Draupadi, u have taken some liberties, so no issues.😉

Late aa sonnalum latestaa solluven, right?😉
Thanks a lot for the encouraging comments, Anu.😊 And you can tell me any of your thoughts regarding Bhaanu's questions. Interpolations or not, the book is silent about Draupadi here. It is impossible to think that she never reacted. Once she reacted, I was told, but that reaction was too late.
Spicy climax? 😆 Here is the reason. Many people don't like K-D, they condemn KD. And they are right. Karna never loved Draupadi and vice versa also. BUT the same people believe Karna called her Bandhaki, ordered to disrobe her etc etc whereas in reality poor guy spoke no single word of insult in DS. Anyone who closely reads the book will understand this. Because Draupadi herself never mentions it anywhere though she repeatedly mentions DS events. Hence it can doubtlessly said that Karna was silent there. So if Karna was silent in DS, then that says why Draupadi never spoke about the so called insults he did to her. If Karna was violent in DS, then there is nothing else but Draupadi's secret love for him is the reason for her never accusing him of all the insults he did. Hence those who accept KD must also accept that Karna insulted Draupadi. And those who don't accept KD must also accept that Karna was silent in DS. These pairs are like light and shadow. You can't pick any of your choice. If one is there, the other is bound to be there. That is why it was chosen as the climax.
Regarding Bhaanumathi, I have researched a little before coming up with her portrayal. Imagine about a woman who used to do wrestling with Dury!!! How can she be defeated in other areas??? Moreover there are a few more things that say she was the Miss. The most excellent. That is the reason for Bhaanu looking like this. I am glad you liked it. And I took a little freedom in portraying Draupadi. Because my Draupadi is certainly stronger than the original.⭐️ My Draupadi never hesitates to give an equal pay-back unlike the original one. People simply exaggerate that she in reality was some short-tempered woman. I sat and read all parvas from Sabha to Udyoga. In 25 years, she is seen angry not more than 10 times!!! How is that outspoken and short-tempered???😆 Even I feel anger at least once every day. Draupadi is an ocean of patience compared to that.👏 Pata nahin kaise manage karti thi apna gussa...!!! And even in DS, she was not shocked of what was happening, her shoulders did not fall, her head stood straight and she did not bother to speak beyond a limit because she herself was considering that it would be disgraceful for her to behave like that in public. Even in DS she did it. I also portrayed the same here. But I made her speak stronger words. In getting even, original Draupadi never used to give as good as she got, or at least I did not see any in her major speeches.
And yeah. I don't feel surprised now if someone thinks that I am a girl. I got accustomed to that.😆

jamy you think that VH is an interpolation
how many incidents you think are interpolated
i have a serious headache regarding this
i have read somewhere that karna insult was a way to provoke pandavas to save their wife
a ridiculous theory given by some karna sympthizer as i think
one theory is that karna is not kunti son she only uses his unknown parentage as per her benefit , again a crazy theory
it is truly remarkable how many contra
dcting
conclusions can be drawn whether right or
wrong in mahabharat

sutaputra conment, virat war ,swargarohan parva are considered as
interpolation by different set of people
what your opinions regarding this

since you have closely read MB you may have
answer for my questions

@ amankoushal - if you ask me, I will say whole Mahabharat has been interpolated.😆 But you see, my knowledge is very poor in parts excluding Karna. I know only what everyone knows about MB, except in Karna's case. Here is the list what I call interpolations.
1. Krishna being called as Vishnu's avatar and god.
2. Karna's birth along with armour and earrings.
3. Karna learning under Drona
4. Karna's role in poisoning Bheema
5. Karna's hatred to Arjuna in childhood.
6. Karna's failure during the war to capture Panchaala, right after Rangabhoomi.
7. Karna's involvement in Laksha Griha
8. Karna's participation in Draupadi Svayamvara. He did not participate at all. Then how Draupadi called him Sutaputra? Big interpolation.
9. Whole VH episode and Karna's behaviour during it.
10. Duryodhana showing thighs to Draupadi.
11. Draupadi in periods during Dyuta sabha.
12. Draupadi's abduction by Jayadratha (still reading, so doubtful though almost 80% confirmed)
13. Parts of Virata war. It is unbelievable that all great warriors went to catch cows. Ridiculous.
14. Karna's both curses.
15. Draupadi's previous birth story.
16. All unnecessary stories of Vana Parva and useless narrations of Adi Parva.
17. Bhagavat geeta
18. Karna-Shalya bitter speech.
19. 95% of Shanti Parva, may be full Anushasana Parva.
20. Karna's nine sons who all died in war. 3-4 are acceptable.
21. Finally whole Svargarohana stupidity. If Draupadi had really fallen, then all others had fallen before her. No Pandava was as righteous as Draupadi. Yudhi was the most despicable of all.
And do you know any specific article that says Virata War could be an interpolation??? I have never read any specific ones on this.