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Brahmaputra

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Posted: 9 years ago

Removing this OS as I have mentioned in PM.

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

RESwaa New year is gonna be great😃🥳🤗
I seriously cannot stop reading on your warnings and that words used again and again ...I miss that chetavanis so badly😭
PS: It shud be colored red na😈

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JAMY YOU ARE SUCH A BIG LIAR😡 A DOCTOR SHOULDN'T LIE😡 WHAT EFFECT WOULD IT HAVE ON A JUNIOR POPULATION OF THE NATION😡 Though I dnt think nyone needs inspiration for lying though!🤔... chalo back to the point>>> You said this is an OS WTH man how dare you lie? it's a poem I had made up my mind ki abhi I will read half and half later but nothing as such happened the moment I stopped reading it was... mountains slowly merges into the starry dark sky, far behind her.😳 It's so so so so beautifully written It leaves you in trance, make you smitten by it's rhythm... its beautiful👏 Your version of Karna's wife, she is captivating and a strong woman just like her hubby! Just like you lazy to write so I stop here😛... Thanks for writing it🤗

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow!!! I read the first draft and now this and your language seems more beautiful than ever! It was so captivating. She who was ignored by all and left nameless, has been given a voice and a presence, and her anonymity is more eloquent and heart wrenching than the tears of all others. Your language is so poetic and flows like a stream. Simply superb OS. 👏 👏

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Brahmaputra

@Brahmaputra

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-
RESwaa New year is gonna be great😃🥳🤗
I seriously cannot stop reading on your warnings and that words used again and again ...I miss that chetavanis so badly😭
PS: It shud be colored red na😈

Sanziii...🤗
Which words you read again? Emulator ? Copycat? Parrot?😆 Beautiful creatures are they. And chrtavanis are supposed to be in red but I forgot to colour them. Ageing problems.😆

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Brahmaputra

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KURT15
Wow!!! I read the first draft and now this and your language seems more beautiful than ever! It was so captivating. She who was ignored by all and left nameless, has been given a voice and a presence, and her anonymity is more eloquent and heart wrenching than the tears of all others. Your language is so poetic and flows like a stream. Simply superb OS. 👏 👏

Thanks a lot for the encouraging and beautiful reply GC.😊 Your words mean a lot as they mirror your experiences in reading and writing as an author. The last sentence is no less than an award for me.😃

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Proud Jerry my not so dear Sauce👏10(lazy me too)Yours is a poem not an OS It flows like a river so divine serene and gentle It touches the hearts of the readers and fills them with an emotion so heavy and yet so endearing I literally cried reading this os and still I cant stop reading this again and again.You are blessed with the art of words.And your take on Karna's wife is my personal favourite.Your words made me fall in love with her Earlier too I loved her but it was because of her being Karna's wife.And your words made me love her for the person she was.She is as captivating and ambiguos as her man is.And I have a feel that this is how she was in reality.I want to thank you for writing on her.And yeah I sooo unwillingly promoted you as my favourite writer after reading this os.

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amritat

@amritat

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow Jamy...that was one long OS...

However beautiful nonetheless...

Your words are very poetic n flow is extremely lyrical...

I actually wanted to ask y u think Karna's wife was a strong woman wen there is no mention of her...but I am glad that u explained it...Though the points mentioned are too little to judge her...I would really like to believe that Karna's wife was a great woman...Firm...delicate...dignified...

Somewhere I am inclined to like her a lot...

Beautiful read...absolutely lyrical. You are blessed with amazing flow of words...

Keep up the great work...😊 👏

I am glad that I read it before you took it off...And I am even happier that you provided explanations with proper citations on y you think of her in a certain way...That shows a lot of integrity on the part of the author...something which I have been pining to find in Mahabharat scholars...

I hope the 'scholars' take some lesson...

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ---Anu---
Res for now... -;)

Read it just now. This is really an amazing poem cum piece Jamy! 👏 Very much enthralling, mesmerizing. I had read your previous OS as well long back and that was just as beautiful! ❤️

Karna's wife (no, not the book 😆 I dare not read that book.😆), IMO can rightly be called as an Unsung Heroine of the epic. While stalking MB forum, I had come across many discussions, citations, a section of MJ which describes Karna's love for Vrushali (Its predominantly a Maharashtrian name), etc.

Definitely, reading them in bits and pieces, (which I unfortunately tend to do now-a-days.😭), I couldn't really decide how many wives he had (but I think no one could), so I always assumed he had one wife only. And thankfully, I m not the only one who assume it that way. But still, even if he had more than one, well, we can't really accuse him or anything.😆

Anyway, I for one, always believed that and I still do, he had the most peaceful and blissful marital and familial life out of all the characters of MB. He was blessed in that case and rightly so. That woman, whoever she was, had to be among the best of those times. May be not in the looks, but she definitely was a lovely, calm and wise woman who had the ability to handle this man! 😳

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.Ami.

@.Ami.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Whoa! OS is lengthier than UPSC exam syllabus.😲.

But, it is dazzling.⭐️. I mean I am still in haze at some another place..

May your poetic mind continue to be blessed with words of divine verses and rhythmic text till eternity.

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Brahmaputra

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Ami.
Whoa! OS is lengthier than UPSC exam syllabus.😲.
But, it is dazzling.⭐️. Imean I am still in haze at some another place..

May your poetic mind continue to be blessed withwords of divine verses and rhythmic text till eternity.

aa gayi lazy tsunAMI.😃
Two words of the one minute poet is more than sufficient for a beginner. Thanks a lot Amlu, the nightingale of DABHily.😃 I know how precisely pick you your words.
And you were still in haze coz you were about to sleep, I guess.😉
Aur yeh UPSC ka kya chakkar hai??? Sandy baby se bahar aa jaao...😆 Woh toh sau saal pehle IPS ban gayi... Lengthier than twirls of my chchora's jalebi bolo, chalega...🤣
I don't need these poetry till eternity. 20-30 years will do.😆
My sincere gratitude for your sweet encouraging words.🤗 I wish you be a world-famous poet one day.😃

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