Jyeshta Bhrata : An Arjun-Karna TS (Thank you Note pg6) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Ramya!!
it is very well written! keep up the good work! you can imagine Arjun writing this!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya06


Its ok dear,please don't say sorry.😳 Thank you so much!!!😳😳
I don't have anything on my mind yet but will try writing more. 😊You can find my other works on pratap-ajabde here: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bharat-ka-veer-putra-maharana-pratap/4452159/deleted


Will surely go through it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Intrepida

Awesome Ramya!!

it is very well written! keep up the good work! you can imagine Arjun writing this!


Thank you so much rati! 😳 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Ramya 👏 👏 It was simply brilliant. 😳

One of the best piece written on Karna-Arjun's inner turmoils. It touched my heart reading many lines in both Arjun's diary entry & Karna's letter to his dear brother. Every emotions of the brothers for each other were poured in so brilliantly which touched a reader's heart.
Words failed me to express how much I was moved by reading ur TS. I read the 2nd part twice esp the ending of Karna's letter & Arjun's thoughts 😊

Very very well written Ramya👏 ⭐️
Infact I would like to read more on MB in your words 😛

I have added ur TS to the Karna FF compilation thread under Karna-Arjuna category 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

<font color="#009999" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Amazing Ramya👏👏 It was simply brilliant.😳

One of the best piece written on Karna-Arjun's inner turmoils. It touched my heart reading many lines in both Arjun's diary entry & Karna's letter to his dear brother. Every emotions of the brothers for each other were poured in so brilliantly which touched a reader's heart.
Words failed me to express how much I was moved by reading ur TS. I read the 2nd part twice esp the ending of Karna's letter & Arjun's thoughts😊

Very very well written Ramya👏⭐️
Infact I would like to read more on MB in your words 😛

I have added ur TS to the Karna FF compilation thread under Karna-Arjuna category 😊
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Thank you so much hemangi! 😳 OMG! Really you think it is one of the best? 😲 😳 😳 I am so overwhelmed!
Will try to write more on MB.
Yup, i saw that, thanks for adding it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii Ramya

First time, I am reading your work.
& I want to say, you are an awesome writer.
You beautifully portray Arjun's conflict.Arjun each & every emotion regarding his Elder Brother.
One of the beautiful Karna-Arjun write up.
Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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For second part,
A big wow.
U beautifully penned down Karna's feeling also.
Its excellent.
afterall, its not easy to portray Karna & Arjun both their feelings, inner thoughts brillaintly.
I just Love your writing.
You read my thought on Karna.Just like Karna, I also know that he was wrong in many times.
But I can never dislike him even for a second.
Last lines nicely written.
superb piece of writing.
Keep up the good work.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sania_58

Hii Ramya

First time, I am reading your work.
& I want to say, you are an awesome writer.
You beautifully portray Arjun's conflict.Arjun each & every emotion regarding his Elder Brother.
One of the beautiful Karna-Arjun write up.
Keep up the good work.


Hi madhu! Thank you so much!! 😳 Do you really think it is one of the best? 😲 😳 😳 Thanks!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sania_58

For second part,
A big wow.
U beautifully penned down Karna's feeling also.
Its excellent.
afterall, its not easy to portray Karna & Arjun both their feelings, inner thoughts brillaintly.
I just Love your writing.
You read my thought on Karna.Just like Karna, I also know that he was wrong in many times.
But I can never dislike him even for a second.
Last lines nicely written.
superb piece of writing.
Keep up the good work.




Thanks a lot!! 😳 For me the character of karn has many shades and neither do i like him too much nor do i dislike him.
Thanks again!

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