Jyeshta Bhrata : An Arjun-Karna TS (Thank you Note pg6)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part Ramya😃
You described Arjun's thoughts very perfectly⭐️
Continue this work😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully penned down the inner conflict of Arjun..

Each word is so apt to describe an Arjun strong on the face but hurting inside..Pretending to be fine and encouraging his elder brother Yudhishthir to rule hastinapur... Once alone he let go of the hidden emotions remembering his Jyeshta Bhrata Karn...

liked the ending Arjun respect for Karn and his Jyestha Bhrata the Hero who will always be remembered...

Great job and keep it up..👍🏼

Definitely will love to read the next part..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice piece of work.. 👏 keep continue it... 👍🏼 after so long time I hv find out a very nice kaju write up in this forum... 😳 love this very much... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a write up!!!!
Amazing. The way you described Arjun's thoughts is just perfect👏

Fantastic. Waiting to read the next part. Great job👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome part Ramya😃

You described Arjun's thoughts very perfectly⭐️
Continue this work😊


Thank you nonie! 😳 Will continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: saveeta24

Beautifully penned down the inner conflict of Arjun..


Each word is so apt to describe an Arjun strong on the face but hurting inside..Pretending to be fine and encouraging his elder brother Yudhishthir to rule hastinapur... Once alone he let go of the hidden emotions remembering his Jyeshta Bhrata Karn...

liked the ending Arjun respect for Karn and his Jyestha Bhrata the Hero who will always be remembered...

Great job and keep it up..👍🏼

Definitely will love to read the next part..




Thank you so much! 😳 😳 I didn't expect that you all will like it so much. 😃 Will continue as soon as possible. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandita_Siddian

Very nice piece of work.. 👏 keep continue it... 👍🏼 after so long time I hv find out a very nice kaju write up in this forum... 😳 love this very much... 😊


Thanks friend! 😊 Wil continue.
Kaju?? 😕 You mean karn-arjun? 😲 😆
Thanks again for liking this piece. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NEIRAlover

What a write up!!!!

Amazing. The way you described Arjun's thoughts is just perfect👏

Fantastic. Waiting to read the next part. Great job👍🏼


Thanks a lot!! Will update next part as soon as possible. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya06


Thanks friend! 😊 Wil continue.
Kaju?? 😕 You mean karn-arjun? 😲 😆
Thanks again for liking this piece. 😳



Haila do not know kaju... 😲 in kaliyug its a criminal offence 😉 😆

I think in kaliyug after krishna-Arjun , kaju is the most fascinated relation of the epic... 😛
Edited by Nandita_Siddian - 10 years ago

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