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IlIlIl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Wow wqit you should be writing misery instead of m 😎🤣

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lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

@mahi dear...here is my reaction..taaza taaza😉

first part

-* IMAGINE a Shrill beep that resonates in your ear after a shock...and complete silence...mind numb ... mouth speechless...pulse racing*-

Second Part

BRAVO!!!!👏👏 nice take at emery's mind😊...i can imagine and very well identify Y emily thinks what she thinks in those last few lines😳...*gives a knowing look*

P.S...people are worried about emily leaving the boys...as she has mistaken that all is cos of her.,...and she thinking in that way is not wrong in her view either..if leaving is the choice she makes..she does so..cos she believes that's teh right thing to do...i mean we can never be in her shoes and feel what she is going through...life is tough...then again..walking out on the 2 people she can truly call a family...trust her life with...who trust their life with her...well will be a selfish move...

but still my heart says she will try to leave them but will not be successful😳

y to jump the guns Lakshmi😡

lets wait and watch!!!😆

P.P.S waise "ghazer" is a nice conword (constructed-word) dear ... nice work...so is the concept!! the old age long forgotten culture and their gods are always fascinating😃

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Mahi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

@Jyo - Thank you! I'm glad it had the intended effect.

@Ruchi - Thanks! It is perhaps the most intense chapter I've written.. Took me awhile to write it too, kept going back and editing. I'm glad you like it!

@Juliet - Aw.. I know what you mean but I can't promise anything right now. Emery's going through a lot. We're just gonna have to wait and see what she decides.

@Tanu - That's why I wrote M and not Mahi.. can go for Misery as well 😛

@L - Thanks a lot! I'm so happy this chapter had the effect I intended for it to have. It's sort of a high point and I'm glad it came across that way. Pretty cool interpretation of Emery's thoughts... let's wait and see what she decides 😉 And thank you for appreciating the name "Ghazer." I wanted to include a note but forgot that I have no idea if there's any lore on what I've written. I just pulled it out of my imagination and went with it. Now people will also realize what I meant by 'they stole my idea!' Killing the people a hunter has saved..

P.S. I think you got her name confused.. Emery, not Emily 😆

Edited by -Mystery- - 12 years ago

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lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: -Mystery-

@L - Thanks a lot! I'm so happy this chapter had the effect I intended for it to have. It's sort of a high point and I'm glad it came across that way. Pretty cool interpretation of Emery's thoughts... let's wait and see what she decides 😉 And thank you for appreciating the name "Ghazer." I wanted to include a note but forgot that I have no idea if there's any lore on what I've written. I just pulled it out of my imagination and went with it. Now people will also realize what I meant by 'they stole my idea!' Killing the people a hunter has saved..

P.S. I think you got her name confused.. Emery, not Emily 😆

it always does have the intended effect re..🤔 only that you underestimate yourself ... a lot 😡

thank you 😳 fingers crossed 😛

welcome...(am the only one i guess who posts thank you and welcome in single post almost every day in I-F 🤔 😆)

its ok..sometimes leaving things to imagination is the best way to add character or rather spice to the Story 😃

yeah i forgot to add that part lol

yeah..was involved in my own ff so wrote that lol 😆

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annihilation

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

You know you are brilliant. I'll come back in time to edit this. Hoping soon enough. :)

Edit : So I caught up with last three chapters and you will be delighted to know you are just getting better with each day. I won't go on specifically with each thing because that'd only mean repeating myself over and over gain, plus I am kinda short on time now, so yeah. I like how the story unfolds with each chapter, I like the names you give these chapters and would say its about time you name your FF. I would have suggested something but I am as blank as you are, I might if something clicks me.

Just the way you came up with 'Ghazer', I am sure it wouldn't be too hard for you to come up with something for the title as well. 'Ghazer', by the way sounds good and pretty much goes with the description of whatever kind of Supernatural being he is. Does it mean anything, the name or you just came up with it? Had Emery been a real character in Supernatural, I am I'd love her. That's how much you have made me like her with your writing. When I try to imagine how she'd look like, I see Jo. May because she's my perfect material for a female hunter and may be because I always saw her a good fit for Dean.

I have found another non-canon paring to ship, Dean-Emery and that's saying something. 😳 Because its rare when you begin to like/ship characters who don't even exist in the original series. And by all that, I mean you are really a brilliant writer. This is one story I follow not because I am into FF's of Supernatural ( I am sure I must have told you this before) but because it has the essence of the show. You clearly have the knack and you handle every aspect of story-writing quite well. So far, so very good. Keep that up! 👍🏼

P. S : I was meaning to tell you this, I don't know why the whole set up of this FF gives me the season 1-4 feels even though its set up is post Purgatory period. That's not saying its not convincing, its just that the characters here give me old Supernatural, younger Sam and Dean feel. And that has to be a good thing, isn't it? 😳

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

this ff gets intense!!!! i read the last three parts together..amazing as always mahi👏 i so missed reading your ff when i was on hibernation😉 i love, love, simply love emery and dean's bonding and of course the relationship sam shares with her😊 a caring friend and brother lyk bonding exists between sam and emery😳 i so wish dean and emery confess everything to each other real soon😃 and i wish sam finds his real mate soon as well😳 and it is glad to know that your original purpose was to show despite this hectic and strange life the boys are leading, they are capable of being in a true relationship😊 yes, i have always contemplated over this issue, if they can care for a stranger lyk the way they do, they will be probably the best partner/mate😳 i dunno why situations never work in their favour😭 and i loved the concern of cass regarding the brothers😳 aww...team free will😳 please update soon..

ps poor sam is left alone😭 how about pairing him up with me?😳

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Mahi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

@L - Hahaha L, you're too cute! But you know I do the Thank you & Welcome thing too so you're not the only one 😉

@Husna - I think you'd be happy to know that I have finally found a title that I think is perfect for this FF. Will be posting it with my next update :)

I was thinking of a unique Supernatural kind of name and came up with Ghazer, as far as I know, it doesn't mean anything. Jo's one of my most favorite characters so it's an honor for me that you see her in Emery.

You should know that you totally made my day, actually my week, by saying that you ship Dean-Emery! I am a hardcore Dean-Emery shipper (if you haven't realized that yet 😆). Whenever I'm writing their scenes, I can actually see them playing out in my mind and I love that.

The season 1-4 feel wasn't intentional but I'm not surprised because those really are my favorite seasons. Thanks for reading and commenting, Husna! Always love your comments.

@Sayanti - Aw thanks, girl! I've missed reading your comments.🤗 You are one of my loyal readers and I always look forward to your reaction to every part. Glad you enjoyed catching up with the FF. Emery-Dean and Sam-Emery's bonds are two of my favorite things in the FF too. I've always thought that even with the family business, they can have a healthy relationship.. especially with another hunter who understands the life. So this was my small attempt to show that. As for Sam, I do have a story in mind for him too... not sure if I'll add it here or write another FF for him.. I guess time will tell.😉

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: -Mystery-
@Sayanti - Aw thanks, girl! I've missed reading your comments.🤗 You are one of my loyal readers and I always look forward to your reaction to every part. Glad you enjoyed catching up with the FF. Emery-Dean and Sam-Emery's bonds are two of my favorite things in the FF too. I've always thought that even with the family business, they can have a healthy relationship.. especially with another hunter who understands the life. So this was my small attempt to show that. As for Sam, I do have a story in mind for him too... not sure if I'll add it here or write another FF for him.. I guess time will tell.😉

😉😳 looking forward to it! and glad to know that you have found a title for your ff👏👏 update kar dena jaldi jaldi😳🤗

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annihilation

@annihilation

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Mahi, incorporate the Sam's track in here if you can please. 😳 It'd make the story complete. :) You found a name? Cool. Looking forward to read the next one, goodluck!

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lakshmi

@Ephemera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: -Mystery-
@L - Hahaha L, you're too cute! But you know I do the Thank you & Welcome thing too so you're not the only one 😉

lol😆 i am not ...😳
okay okay YOU do that ...
that's because you are awesome😆
and you got a title (the verb and not the noun..YKWIM??)...and i had no idea about that?? 😡🥺
and any which way you show sam's story..its fine by me..as i am concerned with Sam's life more and not the means😳

and hey me too Dean-Emery shipper😃 ...can i join in😉

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