Kriyam ff_Tere liye kuch bhi kar dein (chpt 9 updt in pg 8) - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loveed it...
Cant wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is an emotional part! I'm waiting for a happy ending
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was so emotional..If it wud hv been even a word more to read..I couldn't hv controlled my tears..N Saiyyam will gain conciousness yayyy!! But it will be d last episode..Oh no!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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so guys this is the last part...thnku 4 all the support u have given me...so enjoy the last part...
Chapter 9

Krishna goes to the icu...all gets scared...of how krishna will react...but she was calm...she went to the window...n saw saiyyam..was on vendilator...for her it felt like...a big stone was kept on heart.she cudnt c him in tht condition...tears were continuosly...flowing from her eyes...she recalls all their love moments...then she recalls his sacrifices...the way..she always hurt him...the way he always took care of her wen she was pregnant...suddenly doctor cums out...yuvraj n sharad also cums...

Doctor-im sorry...u can c him 4 the last time...v r gonna remove the vendilator...his pulse is getting weak...even heart beat rate is decreasing...(every1 gets shocked...suhani...slowly starts loosing her consciousness...bavna n pratima holds her...they all cry...)

Krishna-just shut up...ur a doctor how can u say like this...im sure nothing will happen to him...if u again say something more...no one will b worse than me...(yuvraj n sharad stops her...n controlls her...) (they all go inside...to c saiyyam..)

(suhani...was so weak...after crying a lot...n not eating anything since long...n also bcos of the shock...she almost lost her consciousness..)
(every1 lost hope...by doctors words..)

Yuvraj-suhani...pls...wake up...dont u want to c saiyyam...pls suhani...

Suhani-(in half conscious state...)...im a bad mother...my son is going away from me...
(yuvraj sprinkles water on her face n gives water...nn he takes her inside...)

inside...icu...there was full of silence...all were crying...seeing saiyyams condition...krishna goes towards saiyyam...n kneels down...

Krishna-so ur adamant wright?...u want to go away from all of us?...v know v hurt u a lot...but is this the punishment u will give us...?...u dont even want to hear r apologies...(.she starts crying holding saiyyams hand...)please saiyyam...dont go away...from me...u promised me wright tht u wont ever leave me alone...n...u dont even want to c the baby...?...pls saiyyam get up...get up...(she cries...resting her head on the bed...suddenly a drop of tear falls on krishnas hand...wen she luks at saiyyam...she sees tear flowing frm saiyyams closed eyes...)

Krishna-look...every1 luk...he is fyn...he can hear wat all im saying...

every1 gets a little hope...

Krishna-saiyyam...pls dont worry...c v all r with u...nothing will happen to u...i wont let anything happen to u...i wont let u go...if u r going...u will also have to take me along.i dont want to live when ur not there with me...(every1 gets shocked hearing this.,...)

(suddenly...saiyyam takes a deep breath...every1 gets panic...yuvraj calls doctor...doctors n nurses cums...)

Doctor-v have to take the ventilator off...theres no hope...its better 4 him...also...pls try 2 understand...(krishna is taken aback...she gets shocked...every1 gets shocked..)

Yuvraj n sharad...holds krishna...n takes her away from saiyyam...

Krishna-wat r u all doing...ur allowing to take vendilator ...y r u not stopping...dadu...pls asks them not 2 do...it...pls dadu...how can u allow...this...my saiyyam...

Yuvraj-krishna...pls even u heard wat doctor said...it will also b difficult 4 saiyyam...look how he was breathing...very hardly...pls krishna...

With teary eyes...yuvraj asks doctor to take off the vendilator...

Krishna-no...no...no plss...no doctor ...saiyyam...

(doctor goes to take it off...wen suhani stops him...)

Suhani-pls...no...dont do this...im sure...my heart is saying tht nothing will happen to him...(sharad takes suhani frm there...forcefully...)...(n sameway yuvraj takes krishna out...)

(doctor takes of the vendilator...suhani n krishna stands there shocked...the rest all cries...)

but 2 every1s surprise...saiyyam was still breathing...doctor also gets shocked...he asks every1 to go out...n starts treating saiyyam...

krishna n suhani...hugs each other...

Krishna-aunty i told na nothing wwill happen 2 saiyyam...luk now wat happened...

Suhani-yes krishna...till u r there with him.nothing will happen...even death cant seperate u both...

Bavna-sharad ji weel ...bring their baby here...wen saiyyam gets consciousness let him c his son first...he will b very happy...

Sharad-exactly...cum lets go...

Doctor-his condition is stable now...its a miracle...thnk god 4 this...but he is still unconscious...if he doesnt gain consciousness fast...then again he might go to coma...lets leave it all to god...

Krishna-doctor can v go inside...

Doctor- yes sure...

they all go inside...

sharad n bavna cum with the baby...krishna fastly goes to bavna n takes the baby...

she goes to saiyyam...

Krishna-saiyyam luk...u were waiting 4 this day wright...to see this baby...n wen its wright in front of...u...ur not able to...(she keeps the baby next to saiyyam...)

(tears were continuously flowing from krishna eyes...)

(suddenly the baby starts crying...by holding... krishnas mangal sutra..by one hand...n the other hand was placed on saiyyam face...)

saiyyam cud hear...babys crying...he cud feel his sons touch...

then suddenly yuvraj notices saiyyam moving his fingers...he tells tht 2 every1...they c saiyyam swallowing...n then he slowly...opens his eyes...)

all were so happy..krishna holds saiyyams hands with teary eyes...saiyyam looks at krishna n then he slightly moves his neck with great difficulty...to look at the baby..n krishna understands it...n takes the baby n show him...saiyyam was so happy seeing him...

Saiyyam-(in a very weak voice...) he is just like you...
krishna smiles...
Krishna-.but i want him 2 bcum like his father...

every1 smiles...

suhani carasses saiyyam face...

Saiyyam-maa...

Suhani-u wanted to bcum mahan..by doing all this na...u told lies to ur maa...u wait...im gonna give punishment 4 this...u wait...

Yuvraj-u cant put full blame on him...he has got this trait from his mother...

(every1 laughs...)

after sometime...doctor says tht...there will b problem 4 saiyyam in walking...so its better if he stays in hospital n attents the physiotherapy session...

(so months passed...n krishna n suhani were always with saiyyam...at hospital...pampering him...but saiyyam was busy with his son always...)

yuvraj n yuvani cums there..

Yuvani-luk papa...ur wife has bcum a grandmother...but she is busy pampering her son...she is least bothered about her grandchild...n luk at krishna...this is the case with her also...

yuvani goes to baby(ayaan n takes him..

Yuvani-its ok chotu...u have ur mami with u ...n thnk god atleast your papa...cares 4 u ...

every1 laughs...

Yuvraj-doctor said v can leave 2day...so...krishna yuvani...pack everything weel leave 2day...

Krishna n yuvani finish packing everything...yuvraj n saiyyam were playing with ayaan...ayan is most comfartable wen he is with saiyyam...

suhani cums with food...n starts feeding saiyyam...

Saiyyam-enough maa...my stomach is full...

Suhani-shut up...n eat...

Yuvraj-y r u forcing him...how much did u give..n ur expecting him 2 eat more...

Suhani-u also shut up yuvraj...(n then she makes him eat the whole thing...saiyyam holds his stomach...n makes faces..every laughs...)

Yuvraj-suhani..n yuvani...cum weel hhave something frm canteen...

Suhani-im not hungry...u both go...

(yuvraj takes her forcefully...frm there...)

Yuvraj-wat a mother r u...u never give them sometime alone...let them spent little time 2 gether...

Suhani-oh...yaaa...ok ok...

in their room...

saiyyam was playing with ayan...

Krishna-ayan...luk ur papa doesnt have time to even talk to your mother...

(saiyyam smiles n luks on..)

Saiyyam-ur maa...doesnt have time to spent with u...so u need ur papa wright...

Krishna-its bcos of ur papa...only...(n she gets up to go...wen saiyyam pulls her to him...they have an eyelock...)

Saiyyam-lets go home...n then weel spent alot of time 2gether...

(krishna hugs saiyyam...)

Krishna-then come fast weel go...(by then yuvani cums there...)

they go home...after somedays..it is is ayans first birthday...they all have a party...

in kriyams room...

krishna puts ayan to sleep...

Saiyyam-i was thinking...y not next bday v give ayan a good gift...

Krishna-ofcorse weel give him a gud gift...but tht next year y r u thinking of tht now...

saiyyam goes close to her...

Saiyam-wat about a baby brother or sister...

(krishna get shocked at 1st..n then she feels shy...)

Krishna-saiyyam...(by lowering her head...)

he pulls her...towards him...n then he offs the lights...they consummate...

Krishna-thnku saiyyam 4 loving me this much ...even after knowing everything about me...

Saiyyam-n thnku...also...4 giving me a second life...4 giving me ayan...n 4 going to give me...ayans sister or brother...(krishna punches his chest...)

the screen freeses on their happy faces...

END

again thnku guys...hope to cum with another ff soon...luv u all...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww I'm glad they got a happy ending! I can't wait for your next FF!
Edited by Shiney19 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Amazing...
I loveeeddd it..
I'm soo happy that they got there happy ending...
Finally Saiyyam got his family...
Aaawww Saiyyam romantic side was soo sweet...
Thank you for this amazing story...
Cant wait for your next ff...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Happy ending with d hope of next chotu ...Thanks for d last part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww..Such a cute n happy ending..I'm glad dat u posted it soon..But Yuvaani will be Ayan's bhua..Nevermind..I loved it..N I'm waiting for u to write another Kriyyam FF..U'll write na??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Awww..Such a cute n happy ending..I'm glad dat u posted it soon..But Yuvaani will be Ayan's bhua..Nevermind..I loved it..N I'm waiting for u to write another Kriyyam FF..U'll write na??

oh sorry 4 tht...im a south indian...so dont know..wat names u call 4 fathers sister...😛
n next im planning to write...an ff on saiyyam yuvraj bond...but still...im not so confident about..it...so i need some time...
Edited by divyaak123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved your story! and the ending was so happy and cute! Waiting for another ff from you 😊

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