His Scar || #KriYam

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@sammy17 Sayyams scar is a birth mark.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shiney19
Wow this is brilliant!! Let's hope the cvs see this. I would love this to happen!! Well done, please keep writing.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: arshi_luver
Keep writing!! This was beautiful!! We need more OS writers!! Please write an OS

thank you so much!! haha im not really much of a writer... ive never written an actual OS or anything. but, if ever i feel the need to write something that's touching my heart (like i did here) i will definitely write again!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Faeeqa
Really beautifully written, I hope you write some more in the future 😊 and I hope the CVs see this and get some ideas 😆

thank you so much !! xx

and yes, i really hope CVs think of this. idk if they'd ever see this... i doubt it. but its my hope that they somehow get this idea themselves haha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anjali33
I was sooo engrossed in reading!! I nvr wanted it to end.. Seriously😛😛
U shud write more OSs like dis..

awww !! so sweet yaa, thank you for the love xx

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Originally posted by: Anjali33
I nvr thought anyone cud get such an idea from his scar!!

i love his scar. theres something about it that is so symbolic. it adds so much to his character. it tells you so much about him. it just... has such a huge significance, i feel like.

its a part of him though he doesnt want it to be. its symbolic of the mark etched on his soul, on his existence. remembrance of the fact that he wasnt really meant to be.

and Krishna will change that. he will make him believe and know... that his scar is a lot more than that.

and that... is conceptually brilliant. i love it. i love them.

idk sometimes i feel weirdly connected. i get invested in things i love. even if its fictional characters. KriYam are love.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Poojaa_P
Wow! Awesome.
Thank you so much for this scene! I was almost crying and then realized I'm in the library..everyone can see my expressions LOL so i had to control.
I'm sure if I read this again,I would cry again haha! This is so beautifully written.

wow thats so sweet ❤️ thank you so much for appreciating!! Im so glad you could feel and connect to the emotions!! makes me feel like i actually didnt do to bad at writing it haha

thank you thank you love

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: mariya.kamran
That was brilliant! 👏
Keep the good work up and please do write more... just want more and more and more of KriYam

haha i think we alll just want more of them :)

thank you so much for the love

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Posted: 8 years ago

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