YuvAni ff - Laagi tumse mann ki lagan (Part-11 updated on 21/03/2017)

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amaya15june

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

superb epi.yuvaani scn was nice.naughty yuvaani .

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Napsha J

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: amaya15june
superb epi.yuvaani scn was nice.naughty yuvaani .

Thanks amaya.. 😊 😊

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amaya15june

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

hi napsha if u have time then u write os on yuvAni bcs i like ur writing skill.yuvAni moment chahe wo emotional ho ya romantic ya nok jhok ho saare moment ko bhut acche se likhati ho.bhut acche word use karti ho.its my request pz write os ss ya ts pz pz .

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Napsha J

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: amaya15june
hi napsha if u have time then u write os on yuvAni bcs i like ur writing skill.yuvAni moment chahe wo emotional ho ya romantic ya nok jhok ho saare moment ko bhut acche se likhati ho.bhut acche word use karti ho.its my request pz write os ss ya ts pz pz .

Thank u sooo much amaya dear.. I've got exams so I can't write new ffs now..

The following ffs on YuvAni were written by me long back.. Hope u will like them:

Tera hone laga hoon
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/suhani-si-ek-ladki/4650576/tera-hone-laga-hoon-yuvani-ss-part-8-on-pg-7

The jealousy track - Yuvraj Vs. Sambhav
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/suhani-si-ek-ladki/4650736/ssel-ff-after-30-05-2016-part-13-on-pg-6

YuvAni OS - The Date
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/suhani-si-ek-ladki/4671873/yuvani-os-the-date

YuvAni TS - Reunion
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/suhani-si-ek-ladki/4703003/yuvani-two-shot-reunion-part-2-on-pg-1-updated-on-31-08-2016

Happy reading!! 😊

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amaya15june

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

thanks napshaj maine aapki ts os sambhav jeleous track or ltml sari ff read ki h but tera hone laga hoon is the best specially last part.i m crying n crying when i read that ff.maine jab last part read kiya to bs ek hi baat man m aayi aisa kisi ke saath na ho ki kisi ke jeene ki wajah hi usse door ho jaye .

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swetha10

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Awesome update.. Loved all the other ff's..

All the best for your exams...

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Napsha J

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

PART-10:

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

We entered the mall.. It was too crowdy..
I thought to myself- thank God, bargaining isn't allowed in malls..
I smiled..
Suhani noticed this and asked- why are u smiling?
I replied- coz I'm lucky that we are here..

As we moved ahead, I saw a 16 years old guy selecting a watch for his dad with his mom.. Seeing that, I smiled..
Suhani said- one day yuvaan will also be buying a nice gift for u.. For now, we can do something.. Whatever will be the first thing that yuvaan gets hold of, it will be his first gift to u..

I nodded, but then I said- but if its a girly stuff, I won't accept it..
We laughed..
Yuvaan got hold of girly stuffs like gown, lipstick, bangles, etc.. Suhani teased me everytime saying I could try it if I wanted..
I wondered if its Fathers' Day or Mothers' Day..

After sometime, suhani laughed and I got nervous seeing yuvaan holding a lungi..
We looked at each other.. She continued to laugh..
I said- laugh.. Since morning u'r getting entertained at my cost..
She tried to stop laughing and said- sorry but this lungi is ur gift..
I looked at yuvaan.. He was smiling at me..
I frowned and said in mind- u too laugh at me son..
I imagined myself driving my vintage in that lungi.. As I got out, it got stuck in the door.. I pulled it and it tore..
I screamed- no...

Suhani asked me- what happened yuvraj?
I replied- nothing..
She handed over the lungi to me and said- therez the trial room.. Try it..
I said- no need.. Its nice..
She laughed again..
She knew what was I going through.. Yuvraj Birla and Lungi?? Arghhh...

SUHANI'S PoV:

It had been three hours.. Yuvraj didn't come back home..
I thought- why did he tell me to leave with yuvaan? Where did he go? Hez not even taking my calls..

The door bell rang.. He was home.. He said that he went to receive rohan sir at the airport..
I asked him to change and freshen up..
He asked- why should I change now? What's so special?
I replied- its fathers' day yuvraj.. U should put on that lungi.. If u can't do this for ur son, u'r a horrible father..
He looked worried hearing that!!
I laughed silently..

He took the lungi and went to his room..
I stood outside the room to hear his frustrations..
He stood in front of the mirror and tried to wear it..
He said- I'm looking so funny that I can't even step out of the room.. God knows who created this lungi.. Its the male version of saree..
I laughed like hell covering my mouth.. Suddenly I felt his hand on my shoulder from behind..
He said- so someone is having fun out here..
I turned around and said- no.. Who can dare to laugh at Lungi Birla?
I laughed again..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I was completely taken by her.. It hadn't been even a day when I had confessed my love for her, and she was so happy since then.. I realised we were made for each other!!

I said- laugh.. One day I'll wrap u in this lungi and run away..
She asked raising her eyebrows- oh really? U can do that?
I pulled her closer and said- don't doubt my courage.. I can do anything..
I said- then wear a saree..
I grinned and said- I'm hungry.. Let's go out for lunch..
We laughed and left..

At night...
Suhani wanted to sleep as she was too tired.. She forgot it was her birthday next day, and I wanted to wish her at 12.. Just an hour to go.. I had to keep her awake somehow..
I said- suhani..
She said- let me sleep.. I'm tired..
I let her sleep thinking it would be more fun to wake her up at 12 by scaring her.. I smiled at the thought..

SUHANI'S PoV:

I got up hearing some noise..
It was completely dark.. Yuvraj was deep asleep, covered with the blanket.. So I didn't disturb him..
I got up to see.. Suddenly somebody threw that lungi on my face and grabbed me from behind..
I shouted for help, but yuvraj didn't budge.. I took off the blanket.. Pillows were there on yuvraj's side..
I understood everything and smiled..
I said- ok I'm coming with u Mr. Lungi Birla.. Leave my hand..
He asked changing his voice- I'm not Lungi Birla.. Come with me..
I followed him.. He took me to his room (the one in which he stayed as a guest)..
I removed his mask and asked- what's this yuvraj?
He replied- I told u I would wrap u in the lungi and run away..
I said- very funny..
And stood near the window..

Suddenly he came and hugged me from behind and whispered- happy birthday.. Mrs. Lungi Birla..
I laughed.. And then realized I had actually forgotten about it..
I thanked him..
He asked me- I thought of scaring u, but I didn't know u'r so scary..
I nodded smiling..
Just then, my phone rang.. It was rohan sir.. He wished me and said that he just arrived.. I recalled yuvraj saying he went to the airport to receive him.. He lied to me!!

I looked at him.. He smiled..
I asked him- where did u go after I came back with yuvaan?
He said- to receive rohan..
I said- rohan sir has just arrived..
He said- oh.. So u got to know.. Wait, I'll show u something..
He opened the top button of his shirt..
I turned around and said- no yuvraj.. I don't wana take our relation ahead this way.. U lied to me.. Tell me if something is there.. We will find...

I stopped as I turned around towards him and found my name tattooed on his chest!!
I looked at him.. He was smiling..
He said- suhani.. U speak sooo much.. And that's why I found this way to make u quiet..

I was on cloud nine!!
I never thought somebody would love me to the heights.. I walked closer to him and ran my fingers slowly over the tattoo.. My eyes filled with tears of joy, as I wasnt used to so much of happiness at a time!!

He wiped them and said- no tears today.. Only smile..
I softly gave a punch on his chest and asked- what was the need? It must have pained a lot na..
He nodded and said- yes.. But the happiness I got after getting it done, healed all..
I hugged him tight.. He too hugged me back..

Suddenly the door bell rang.. He frowned and looked at the door..
He said- I know its sambhav.. U wait..
I laughed and buttoned his shirt..
He shouted opening the door- why did u come now? Is this time to...
He stopped.. PA bhaiya and bhawana di entered.. We were surprised..

They hugged me and we had some emotional talks after a year.. Then they wished me.. I took them to yuvaan.. They were very happy..

There was another knock at the door.. It was gauri with aunty and sambhav..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

Was it my wife's birthday or wedding?? Family members, neighbours, all arrived..
Gauri hugged her and wished her.. She touched aunty's feet and took her blessings.. She too hugged her.. Next was sambhav.. He held her hands and wished her saying he had no right to hug her.. As if she would feel pity and hug him.. Lol..

Our dearest neighbours left.. We walked out.. I looked towards the staircase..
Suhani asked me- why are u looking there?
I replied grinning- I'm just checking if anyone is on the way to wish u.. I've to welcome the guests.. This is my job for the night..
Saying that, I looked away..
She said laughing- awww... So sweet of u..
I didnt look at her..

We got inside..
Bhawana said- suhani.. Tonight we will sleep together and recall our childhood..
I grinned hearing that.. Suhani looked at me..
I said- no Bhawana.. I mean, why should both of u sleep separately coz of us? We will adjust tonight.. Right suhani?
She nodded..

Sharad stood beside me and started asking softly- what's going on guru? Why is the room so shuffled?
I tried to suppress my smile and said- nothing.. We just had a fight..
Sharad said- it seems some 'tom and jerry fight' was going on..
He started hitting me with his elbow and said- say na guru.. Plz say na..
I took him to the room and told about my confession..
He hugged me happily and said- u wait here, I'll bring bhabhi..

He brought suhani.. Bhawana kept asking him the matter.. He said that he would explain her later.. Sharad winked at us.. They left closing the door..

Edited by NAPSHaJ - 8 years ago