YuvAni ff - Laagi tumse mann ki lagan (Part-11 updated on 21/03/2017) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_u_yuvani


Pls unite yuvani fast. They have already suffered a lot. Their pain is making me cry. Pls. 😭😭


Ya sure dear.. They will unite soon..
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Part-7:

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I took a sigh of relief as she rejected his proposal.. But she was angry with me.. Her anger was justified.. I had to talk to her..

SUHANI'S PoV:

Before the muzic began, we had to pick up a mask from the box..
Sam came with a mask and said- take this one suhani.. I hope u won't mind dancing with me..
I nodded and took it.. He smiled and left..
My phone rang.. I kept the mask on the table and went to a corner to attend it.. When I came back, it wasn't there.. I took up another one..

Muzic began.. 'Manchala teri ore' played.. We started dancing.. I recognized his eyes; yuvraj was my partner.. I walked out of the dance floor.. He held my hand.. And pulled me closer to him.. We had a painful eyelock.. The lights were turned very dim..

I had no option; I had to dance with him unwillingly.. Due to dim light, I saw glimpses of the previous night again.. We had hardly danced for a minute when I recalled him calling it 'a mistake'.. I couldn't stand it anymore and left from there..

I stood at a corner covering my mouth with my hand..
Rohan sir called me from behind.. I turned towards him.. He asked me if I could leave for the farmhouse in sometime as he had to leave for Delhi in 3 hours.. I nodded..
Sir had hidden 2 highly confidential files there as he had doubt that someone from office has joined hands with the rivals..

Sir saw yuvraj leaving and asked him if he could go with me..
I said I would manage alone..
He insisted to go with yuvraj.. I had to agree unwillingly..
He asked me to have dinner first, as I didn't have anything after breakfast, except juice.. I said we will have something on the way..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

She left from there saying she would be waiting outside.. Rohan gave me the keys of his car as it was a 2 hours journey.. He also got some food packed for both of us.. I left from there.. Suhani was waiting outside.. I kept the food in the back seat of the car..

It was 9.30 p.m.. We left for the farmhouse.. I was driving and she was admiring the environment outside the window, or shall I say, avoiding me!!
I knew she was totally unaware of the truth, but we had a son.. At least for him...
An hour had already passed in silence.. I needed to talk to her, but didn't know from where to start..

I started coughing intentionally to see her response..
She immediately said- yuvr...
I looked at her.. She asked me if I was fine.. I nodded.. She gave me water to drink.. I understood she still cared for me..

After half an hour, I stopped the car when I saw a tree fallen on the way.. We got out.. Suhani told that we could go by walking, it would take half an hour approx.. I took the foods packet along..

We started to walk..
I said with hesitation- suhani.. U always said that if misunderstandings should be cleared asap.. So I...
She interrupted- yuvraj plz.. Right now, I'm not in a mood to discuss personal matters..
I felt she was badly affected by my words regarding the previous night..

Just then, we saw some goons at a distance, staring at us.. I held her hand.. We looked at each other.. I asked her not to look at them.. She slightly nodded.. We walked normally and left those goons behind.. She left my hand.. We continued to walk.. Suddenly it started raining.. The weather was cold too..

I recalled the day when we went out for a dinner with soumya and Ankit, and...

*****FLASHBACK*****

while returning, they go by walking and it begins to rain on the way.. Suhani feels cold, so she wraps her arms around herself.. Yuv sees and wraps his jacket around her.. They have a sweet eyelock.. She takes it and blushes.. Yuv too smiles.. Soumya feels jealous and cleverly kicks on the pencil heel of suhani's slipper.. She screams and holds yuv to prevent falling..
Yuv asks worriedly- are u ok?
Su nods and tells him that her slipper broke..
Yuv holds her and makes her sit on a nearby bench..
Su- yuv I'm fine..
Yuv- no.. U sit here.. Let me see if u have got hurt anywhere..
Su smiles seeing his concern for her.. Yuv doesn't find any wound.. As she gets up, she feels the pain on her toe and tells him that she won't be able to walk..
Soumya smirks..
Yuv asks her- why did u wear it when u can't handle it?
She tells- actually soumya gifted it to me and insisted me to try, so I couldn't deny..
Yuv stares at soumya angrily.. She winks at him shamelessly.. He looks at suhani and lifts her in his arms.. Soumya fumes and says they should go by car.. Yuv gives five hundred rupees to soumya and asks her to go by taxi with Ankit..
Soumya taps her feet angrily and leaves.. Ankit follows her..

Yuv walks with suhani in his arms..
Su- yuv, let's go by car.. If someone sees, what will...
Yuv interrupts- they will think u'r so lucky to have such a caring husband..
Su blushes and looks down..
Yuv continues to walk smiling with suhani in his arms...

*****FB ENDS*****

I smiled recalling that wonderful moment and wished if I could re-live it!!

We reached the farmhouse..
I said- I think we should stay here for the night.. Or at least till it stops raining..
She agreed.. We stepped inside.. She turned on the lights.. We were completely drenched to the skin.. We were shivering..
I said- I think we should have dinner..
Just then, the lights went off..
She said- not dinner, but torch light dinner..
We laughed and turned the torches of our phones on..
I started to unpack the food.. She went to the kitchen to get the plates.. Ten minutes passed.. She didn't come back.. I called out her name twice, but she didn't respond.. I went to see.. I was shocked to see her lying on the floor.. She fainted!!

I screamed - Suhaniii...
I sat beside her and lifted her face.. I kept calling her name again and again, asking her to open her eyes.. I rubbed her hands.. But she didn't respond.. I got worried for her..
I recalled rohan saying "suhani didn't have anything after breakfast".. She had bp problem.. I sprinkled few drops of water over her face..

SUHANI'S PoV:

I tried to open my eyes.. My vision was blurred, but I could see him.. He called out my name again and again.. He took a sigh of relief and lifted me in his arms.. I could feel his concern for me was genuine.. But... Was it just coz I was just his friend??

He laid me on the sofa.. I thanked him.. He brought a plate for me.. He sat down on the floor..
I said- yuvraj.. Why are u sitting on the floor?
He said- coz u'r not well..
I was surprised when he feeded me with his hand instead of using a spoon..
I asked him too to have it.. He refused saying ladies first and smiled..
I too smiled and thought of something.. When he feeded me, I bit his finger.. He screamed "aauch..."
I laughed..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

She was back in her old form; the chirpy suhani birla.. I gained a lil confidence regarding convincing her..
I asked- why did u bit my finger?
She replied cheerfully- coz I thought its lady's finger..
I grinned and said- haha.. Very funny.. U and ur jokes..
Su- u'r such a Sadu Kumar..
I said with attitude- oh really?? I'm feeding u with so much love and...
I stopped as I realised what I just said.. She looked here and there as she too felt ackward..
I continued to feed her.. There was absolute silence between us.. I had so much to tell her, but...

She asked me to have something and got up.. I just had some salad.. She walked towards the window.. I followed her.. She was smiling seeing the rain drops.. She extended her hand outside the window and took few drops.. I stood beside her.. We looked at each other.. Her smile vanished.. She let the rain drops fall from her hand.. I wanted to cheer her up..

I asked her- don't u wana dance in the rain like before?
She asked back- do u want to?
I thought for a few secs and said- I won't mind if somebody accompanies me..
She looked at me.. I knelt down and forwarded my hand, asking for hers..
She uttered my name..
I started singing 'zoobi doobi'.. She smiled broadly like my old, chirpy suhani and gave her hand in mine.. I kissed her hand and took her out of the farmhouse.. We danced crazily in the rains, forgetting whatever we were going through.. We continued to dance till the song was over..

At the end of the song, we were too close to each other.. I held her by her waist and was locked in her arms.. We had an intense eyelock.. I slowly moved her hair which fell over her eyes behind her ear.. She looked down and closed her eyes.. I lifted her face and made her meet my gaze..
I caressed her hair and hugged her tight!!
I felt the world was in my arms, but I knew it was temporary..

SUHANI'S PoV:

I didn't know what to do.. Why did he complicate things for me always? I was about to hug him back when I got glimpses of the previous night and then recalled yuvraj calling it a mistake.. My heart was heavy with emotions.. I pushed him away.. He looked at me with shocking expressions.. I shook my head walking backwards..
He said- suhani.. Listen to me.. I wana talk to u..
I shot back- but I don't want to..
He walked towards me, grabbed my arms and said- what do u think of urself suhani? I'm talking to u with so much love and u'r behaving so rude..
I said- that's the problem yuvraj.. U talk to me with love, u feed me with love, u behave with love.. But u don't love me!!
He looked on.. And slowly left my arms..
I sobbed and ran inside..
I held my head tight and recalled the time when...

*****FLASHBACK*****

New year party night...
After soumya says "I love u" to yuv and suhani questions him about it..
He takes soumya to her room and leaves.. Hez tensed.. She opens her eyes and goes out of the room..
A waiter comes to yuv and serves him cold drink.. He takes it.. After sometime, his headache begins.. He goes to his room..
Soumya waits for yuv in her room..
As he enters the room, he finds suhani looking for something.. He sits on the bed and asks her what's she looking for..
Su- medicines.. Ankit asked for it.. Hez having headache..
Yuv feels frustrated hearing ankit's name and asks- and what about my headache?
Su- what happened to u?
Yuv (touching his head)- don't know suhani.. I'm feeling weird..
Su gives him medicine and says- u take it, I'll just give the meds to Ankit and come..
She turns to leave.. Yuv gets up and holds her hand.. Su turns to look at him.. He pulls her closer..

Yuv- whoz ankit?
Su- my friend..
Yuv puts his finger on her lips.. Su looks down..
Yuv- I told u that I don't wana see him around u.. And now u'r going to him..
Su- but he needs the meds..
Yuv leaves her, opens the door angrily and calls ramesh.. He gives him the meds and asks him to give them to Ankit.. Ramesh leaves..

Su- why are u getting hyper? What's wrong with u?
Yuv says cutely- its coz of u.. U care for this family, ur friends- soumya and that Ankit.. But u don't care for me.. U are so mean..
Su stands facing him and says- its not like that yuv.. U don't know what u'r to me..
Yuv's eyes get teary.. Su wipes them..
Su- tell me what do u want..
Yuv- U!!

Su gets emotional and cups his face smiling.. They have an eyelock.. Yuv suddenly sneezes..
Su- wait I'll get kadha for u..
As she opens the door, yuv pulls her and presses her against the wall behind the wardrobe near the door..
Yuv- I don't need kadha or medicine.. I need u suhani..
Su- I'm urs yuvraj.. And will always be..
They smile slightly.. Yuv plants a gentle kiss on her lips.. Su looks down shyly.. Yuv makes her face him and removes her jewellery.. He kisses her forehead.. Su opens her eyes.. They look at each other..
They hear ramesh calling out for pratima..
Ramesh opens the door of the room and finds nobody..
He says- why are the lights on when nobody is here..
Saying that, he turns off the light, leaves the room and locks it from outside..
YuvAni's shadows are shown having liplock behind the wardrobe..

Next morning, as yuv opens his eyes, he finds su getting ready near the dressing table.. He smiles seeing her.. Su sees this in the mirror and looks down shyly.. Yuv gets shocked when his eyes fall on his clothes lying on the floor.. He realizes the condition hez in..
He asks su nervously- suhani.. What happened yesterday?
Su feels hez teasing her.. She says "nothing" and leaves blushing.. Yuv is left tensed..

*****FB ENDS*****

I wiped my tears.. His "I love u too" echoed in my ears.. I cried hard and shut my ears..
Suddenly I felt a hand over my shoulder from behind.. I turned around and hugged him tight.. He caressed my hair.. Just then, the lights turned on.. I opened my eyes, and found yuvraj standing at a lil distance behind us.. I broke the hug and was stunned when I realized I hugged sambhav!!

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I was shattered seeing suhani in sambhav's arms.. She broke the hug seeing me..
I said- I think I entered untimely.. And sorry for turning the lights on.. Both of u can continue with ur romance; I'll leave..
Suhani called out my name angrily..
Sam interrupted- that's why I wanted u to give me a chance suhani..
I knew she would say him 'no'..
But she stared at me for a few secs and said- ok sambhav.. Give me time till morning to think..
I was taken aback.. So I left from there..

I went upstairs towards a room.. I slammed the door angrily.. I didn't know what to do.. Whom to share my pain with.. I called sharad, but he didn't pick up the call.. Probably he slept.. I threw my phone angrily and looked around.. My eyes fell on the beer bottles.. I picked up a bottle and opened it..
Just before I could have it, I heard a voice saying- have it.. As much as u can..
I turned to see.. I saw my reflection..
It continued- its all happening coz u were drunk yesterday.. This bottle is the root cause of all the mess.. Yuvraj Birla, u'r such a coward that u can't even confess ur love to her, inspite of knowing that she loves u unconditionally..
I threw some beer on it and shouted- I'm not a coward.. If she wants to move on with sambhav, why should I stop her?
It replied- then why are u feeling disgusted after seeing her in his arms?? Instead of drinking, tell her about ur feelings, tell her that u love her.. Else tomorrow morning will bring the darkest hour of ur life.. U will lose her forever!!
I threw the bottle angrily towards it and it vanished..
I knelt down, cried hard and said to myself- why is this happening with me?
I covered my face with my hands.. Somebody came and sat beside me on the floor.. I moved my hands off my face and opened my eyes.. It was Suhani..
I said- suhani...
She wiped my tears and said- why yuvraj? Why are u hurting both of us? Don't u love me? Or do u doubt my love for u?
I shook my head and said- no suhani.. Its not like that.. Actually...
I stopped.. She was into tears..
She said- say it yuvraj.. Just say it before its too late..
I looked on.. She disappeared..
I wiped my tears and decided to talk to her!!


PRECAP: Yuvraj's confession and some YuvAni moments..

Guys.. Are you liking the story? Inspite of writing so much, I'm not receiving any response here.. Except from one or two.. Plz comment even if u'r not happy with it.. Else I won't update..
Ur reviews are awaited.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow fabulous update..
awww poor yuvraj is really hurt and suhani confused..
cant wait for the confession...
am totally in luv with the FF... thanx a lot for updating..
plzz continue soon..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Napsha its beautiful. I was into tears while reading it. Thankfully there will be confession in the next part. Hope all mu will be cleared. Pls update asap. I am just eager to read.
Edited by luv_u_yuvani - 8 years ago
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wonderful story... please continue ur updates... i wish you might be one of the cvs... then this story might have not gone stupid like this...
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Hello everyone.. Herez the most awaited episode- the love confession episode.. Guys it took me days of efforts to complete it, so I would be happy if u leave a lil descriptive comments on this epi.. Like u may share which part(s)/ scene(s)/ dialogue(s) u liked the most or something like an analysis of the epi.. Criticisms are also welcome..

Part-8 (Love Confession Special):

SUHANI'S PoV:

I asked sambhav- by the way, why did u come here?
He replied- rohan told me that u came here with yuvraj, so I thought I should check if u'r fine..
I said- I'm fine.. U can sleep in this room tonight.. Good night..
Saying that, I left from there..

I went to the lawn.. It had stopped raining..
I thought to myself- Yuvraj doesn't care at all.. When I told sambhav that I'll tell him about my decision in the morning, he stayed quiet..
I was into tears.. He appeared in front of my eyes.. I called out his name..
He said walking towards me- suhani.. Just give me a chance to speak.. Listen to me once before taking any major decision..
He wiped my tears..
I held his hands and said- say yuvraj..
He smiled slightly and disappeared.. I looked around but he couldn't be seen..
I decided to listen to him once..

I went inside, but stopped when I saw him coming downstairs.. We kept looking at each other.. My heart was filled with so many emotions, and so my eyes.. I didn't know if he really had something to say or it was just my misconception!!

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I slowly walked towards her.. She kept looking at me, as if she wanted to know if I had something to say..
I stood facing her.. There was absolute silence between us, except the sound of the winds that blew heavily.. After a few secs, we called out each others' name together..
I said- first u say..
She said- no yuvraj.. U wanted to say something.. Fine.. Speak up..

SUHANI'S PoV:

He said looking down- suhani.. I didn't wana hurt u.. Yesterday night.. Whatever happened.. I called it a mistake.. Coz.. I don't remember anything.. And I thought...
I waited for him to continue but he didn't..
So I said- coz it was me, not soumya, right?
He looked on, but didn't say anything..
I turned around and continued- I understand yuvraj.. For u, it was a mistake.. Our marriage was also a mistake.. In fact, I'm the greatest mistake of ur life.. But I hope u won't call ur son a mistake!!

He turned me around angrily and pulled me closer to him.. Our noses touched..
He said- how can u consider me to be so heartless? Don't u know me?
I replied looking into his eyes- no.. I really feel that I couldn't really know u Yuvraj Birla.. I have seen so many shades of ur nature that I can't understand who u are and what do u want..

He freed me from his hold and took out his wallet.. He took out a paper from there.. I couldn't understand what he was upto..
He handed over the paper to me..
I asked- what's this yuvraj?
He said- see it urself.
I opened it.. It was the same letter which I left for him a year ago..
My eyes got teary.. I looked at him..
He said- do u remember suhani? These were ur last words for me before u left.. But u didn't give me an opportunity of being heard..
I kept the letter on the table and asked- yuvraj.. U have kept this letter so carefully till now?
He replied- yes suhani.. Why did u leave me? Why did u take my son away from me? I couldn't even have his first look.. I couldn't even have the feeling of being a father for my first baby, the feeling that comes once in a lifetime..
I said- I did it for u yuvraj.. For ur happiness.. U loved soumya and u still do...
He interrupted- after our marriage, did I ever tell u that I love soumya? U say that u did it all for me, but did u ask me even once what I wanted? No.. U forced ur decision on me and left, and told me to move ahead in life.. With soumya..

We burst into tears..
I said- I didn't know soumya would leave u..
He interrupted- she didn't leave me.. I left her!!
I looked on.. I was shocked to hear that..
He continued- my paralysis was just an acting.. Dadi constantly forced me to marry her.. So I told her to insult me and reject me in front of all and leave, and paid her for that.. Only sharad and bhawana know about it.. Not even maa..

That was another shock for me!!
I asked him- what?? why did u do all that? Why yuvraj?

He thought for a while and said- coz I couldn't give soumya ur place in my life!!
I looked on.. He was looking at me.. I could hear his silent sobs.. The pain in his eyes was clearly visible.. I caressed his face with my right hand and closed my eyes..
He said- won't u ask me why?
I opened my eyes and asked- kya tum... Humse...?
He nodded!!

Finally.. He said it without uttering a word.. He confessed his love.. He loved me..
I said- it means whatever u said yesterday, that u love me, was...
He interrupted- was for u suhani.. I called it a mistake coz the way things followed in the morning made me think it was gauri.. Yesterday I was drunk, a year ago I was drunk, but not today.. Whatever was the situation, only u were there- in my eyes, in my heart, in my life!!

I realised I had unknowingly kicked happiness out of my life, else our lives would have been much better.. Yuvaan would have been with his dad too..
I lifted my hands to hug him when he said- but u don't love me suhani..
I stopped.. My hands moved away..
He turned around and continued- u don't know suhani, how I have spent a year without u.. U taught me how to live life and then left me to die 1000s death every moment.. U didn't even bother to know if I were alive or dead!! U were living happily with yuvaan and ur neighbours..

I covered my mouth with my hands and knelt down.. I was feeling guilty.. I left him so that he could be happy, but I didn't know he would be suffering like me.. I had yuvaan with me, but yuvraj.. He left soumya for me.. I felt I had cheated him, betrayed him.. I separated him from his son..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I could hear her sobs.. I realised I said too much.. I calmed down and turned towards her.. She was sitting on her knees.. She looked up at me, and folded her hands.. I bit my teeth..
She said- I'm sorry yuvraj.. I'm extremely sorry.. Its all my fault.. I wanted ur happiness, but I left u with pain.. But trust me, it wasn't easy for me.. I was living seeing u in yuvaan..

She rested her face on her folded hands and cried.. I couldn't see her like that.. Tears continued to flow from her eyes, and mine too.. I was being selfish.. I failed to understand her pain inspite of knowing how much she loved me..
I sat beside her, lifted her face and wiped her tears.. She looked on.. I held her shoulders and we stood up facing each other..

I said- no more tears suhani.. I'm sorry.. I wana be the reason of ur smile, not ur tears..
She smiled slightly..
I held her hands and asked her to promise me that she would never leave me.. She nodded..
I continued- And don't u dare call urself a mistake again..
I cupped her face and continued with a slight smile- U'r the best thing that ever happened to me.. My life revolves around u.. I LOVE YOU SUHANI..
She replied- I LOVE YOU TOO YUVRAJ..

("Dil dhak dhak" plays in BG)
We hugged each other tightly and lost ourselves in each others' arms.. I felt like I was free from a burden that I have been carrying in my heart since a year!!

SUHANI'S PoV:

Love was in the air.. I felt so complete.. The world was in my arms.. What else did I need since long..
We remained in each others' arms for sometime.. He caressed my hair..

I broke the hug, turned around and said- u took too long yuvraj..
He replied hugging me from behind- what could I do.. I don't know how to express my love like u..
I said caressing his face and looking sideways- and I don't know how to love like u..
He coughed and said placing his chin over my shoulder- thank u my love guru.. Ur student surpassed u..
I smiled..

He said- come with me..
He held my hand and took me out of the farmhouse.. He plucked a red rose.. The thorn pinned into his finger and it started bleeding..
I called out his name and took held his finger.. I got worried..
I asked looking at the wound- is it paining?
He didn't reply..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

She looked at me.. I was busy admiring her..
She blushed seeing me like that.. Then she asked- isn't it paining?
I shook my head..
She scolded me- how can u say no? Its bleeding yuv...
I stopped her putting my finger on her lips..
I said- calm down suhani.. Its nothing..
She was about to suck my finger when I said- suhani plz.. U'r my princess.. Don't prove urself a vampire..
She frowned and asked- what did u call me?
I laughed.. She started beating me on my arms..
I apologized to her and said looking at the rose- all I can give u right now is this rose..
I fixed it on her hair.. She looked like an Angel.. My Angel..
We smiled..

She caressed it and said- its precious for me.. Coz u have given it to me.. By the way, one more thing is there that u can do for me..
I held her hands and asked- what's it? Tell me..

(Saawre plays in BG)
She filled the partition on her forehead with my bleeding finger..
I was surprised.. She made me feel like I was the Sun of her life.. She made me feel so special, so important..

I hugged her once again and wished if time could stand still!!

We broke the hug as we heard some footsteps.. It was sambhav.. We hid behind a tree..

I asked her- does ur friend go for a walk every night like this?
She laughed silently..
I asked her- what will u tell sambhav tomorrow morning?
She said widening her eyes- that's a big question.. I'll lose such a charming guy for a sadu..
I said- oh really?
She nodded..
I locked her in my arms and said- I'm ur prince charming.. Not sambhav.. So tell me, what will u say?
She looked sideways and tried to suppress her smile..

After a few secs, she placed her finger on my forehead, slowly moved it downwards and said- I'll tell him that the great Yuvraj Birla blackmailed me emotionally, and so I can't marry him..
I said pouting- oh.. As far as I know, every blackmailer demands ramson.. What can u give me?
She replied- what do u want, Mr. Blackmailer?
I placed my finger on my cheek..
She said- that's too much..
I smirked and said looking away- I knew u would make some excuse..
She said- ok fine.. U will get...
I looked at her.. She was going to kiss me but suddenly she pushed me and said- babaji ka thullu..
I looked at her.. She ran and I chased her.. She ran looking back at me and collided with sambhav!!

Edited by NAPSHaJ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow beautiful confession...
awww luved it..
hmm wonder how sambhav would react..
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry napsha... I can't give detailed review because I will have to quote the entire part-8 for that... Such a beautiful confession... I loved it when suhani asked do u..., and he nodded... It was a pleasure to read... Please update asap... Your fans are waiting for YuvAni moments... 😊 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb love confession loved yuvi dialouge m tumhari jagah somya ko nhi de paya.pz continue
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PART-9:

SUHANI'S PoV:

I collided with sambhav.. I looked back, but yuvraj wasn't there.. Probably he hid behind the tree again.. I gave a sigh a relief..
Sam asked me- suhi.. What are u doing here at this time?
I replied stammering- actually.. I was...
He interrupted- and this rose.. In ur hair..?
I said- leave it.. Actually I wasn't feeling sleepy.. So.. But what are u doing here?
He held my hands and said- even I couldn't sleep coz tomorrow morning would decide what would my life be.. What have u thought till now?

I couldn't understand what to say.. He was a very good friend of mine.. And I didn't wana hurt him..
I told sambhav- I'll let u know by morning..
He nodded.. I left towards the room..

I went towards the window and placed my hands on the railings.. I recalled yuvraj's confessing his love for me, and our hug.. There was a bright smile on my face that I was unaware of.. I also felt bad for sambhav but I couldn't help it..
Suddenly I felt his hand holding mine on the railing.. I looked at him..
He asked- aren't u sleepy..
I replied- nope..
I asked him the same question.. He too replied a "no"..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

She again looked outside the window..
I said- u know suhani.. Right now, I'm feeling so light.. I really wish if I had realised about my feelings long back..
She said looking at me- just remember the wonderful moments that we had spent together and forget all pains..
I replied- I was living with those memories when u were not there for me!!

SUHANI'S PoV:

I felt more guilty when I looked into his eyes.. I knew he didn't say that to make me feel that way, but just to share his pain..
I said holding his hands- now we will create more memories.. Only u, me and yuvaan..
He smiled and said- and yuvani too..
I asked- whoz yuvani?
He replied- yuvaan's sis.. He must be waiting for her.. We must help him.. right?
We had a sweet eyelock.. I couldn't control my smile/ blush anymore so I turned around..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I too smiled silently.. I never knew my life would ever be so beautiful that I would keep smiling for no reason..
I placed my hand on her shoulder from behind.. She looked sideways and walked.. She sat on the edge of the bed and looked a lil thoughtful..
I sat beside her, folded my hands and asked- what are u thinking?
She replied- yuvraj.. We are planning to stay together, but... Will dadi accept our relation?

SUHANI'S PoV:

He smiled hearing that..
I asked him- why are u smiling?
He replied- coz I don't care what dadi wants..
He stood up, walked towards the window and continued- if she doesn't accept u, I don't care.. And if she has objection regarding ur staying at BH, then we will stay somewhere else..

I was blank.. With every passing moment, he made me realize how much he loved me, what I was for him..
I got up and said- no yuvraj.. That's ur home.. U have spent 25 years there and...
He interrupted- and I wana spend the rest of my life with u and yuvaan.. I have been longing for my family life, and now that I've got it, I won't let it go..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I wiped my tears and turned around!!
She was standing infront of my eyes..
I cupped her face and said- now I want to live like yuvraj, a common man, who has a wife and a son.. Now I won't mind doing without my surname, AC, vintage.. But I can't live without u..
She too was into tears..

We wiped each others' tears and I said- I wana see u happy but I make u cry na?
She held my hand and said- these are tears of joy yuvraj.. I'm happy.. U won..
I asked smiling- wherez my prize? Every winner gets one..
She locked her arms around my neck and said- close ur eyes..
I did it..
She gently planted a soft kiss on my cheek.. That feeling was too good..
I opened my eyes.. We smiled and looked into each others' eyes..
I said- who will kiss on the other cheek?
She looked down with shy.. She was about to turn around when I tied her hands behind her back and said- u can't escape this time..
She said nervously- yuvraj leave.. Someone will see..
I replied naughtily- I want ur friend to see us like this.. Shall I call him?
I looked towards the window and called out sambhav's name loudly..
She freed herself from my hold and asked- what are u doing?
I replied- I just called ur friend to see our romance.. Wait I'll go and see where he is..
I turned around.. She held my hand.. I turned towards her..
She walked a step closer to me and left my hand..

I was 'happily shocked' when she grabbed my collar and pulled me closer.. I widened my eyes and looked at her hold..
She asked in a very romantic tone- how did Sadu Kumar become so romantic overnight?
I replied- do u want me to complete the procedures and formalities first?
We looked down smiling.. Our foreheads touched..

Next morning...
As I opened my eyes, I found her admiring me.. She was laying in sitting posture..
She said- good morning Mr. Birla..
I replied- good morning Mrs. Yuvraj Birla.. The sun looks too bright today.. See..
She kept looking at me..
I said- look at the sun suhani..
She replied smiling- u look at ur sun.. I'm looking at my sun.. Its u who made me and my life shine brighter..
I too smiled..
She said- let's get ready now.. We need to leave..

As she got up, she stumbled, lost her balance and screamed.. She fell over me.. Our noses touched.. Her hair fell over my face.. I tucked them behind her ear..
We had a cute eyelock..
I said breaking the trance- if u will not give me morning kiss, u won't be able to leave..
She said- oh really? Where do u want it?
She put her finger on my forehead, cheek, neck one after the other asking- here, here, here, or...?

I asked- or...? Tell me the entire menu first..
She smiled naughtily and slowly opened the top button of my shirt..
I blushed!!
She continued with that naughty smile..
I said- plz let me go.. Otherwise I won't be worthy of showing my face to anyone..
She opened the next button and said- don't worry.. I'll be there to see ur face.. Always..
I said- then carry on...
We smiled..
Suddenly there was a knock on the door..
It was sambhav..
He asked- suhi.. suhi..
I looked at the door frowning..
She got up and said- yes.. I'm coming..

She opened the door.. Sam saw me too..
He asked- yuvraj.. What are u doing here?
Suhani explained him that they were not meant to be together..
He smiled sarcastically and said- congratz yuvraj.. U stole her from me in the mean time..
I felt he was taunting me..
I replied- I don't need to steal that which was always mine!!

We were on the way to home in rohan's car.. Thankfully, suhani's neighbour-cum-friend left on his bike.. The weather was cold, and she was admiring the beauty of the nature outside the window.. I was watching her from the corner of my eye.. Probably she knew it, and that would have been the reason behind the smile that she tried hard to suppress..
I held her hand without looking at her..
She said- concentrate on driving..
I replied- u'r not letting me do that..
She asked- what did I do?
I replied smiling- how can I concentrate on anything when u'r with me?
She smiled..
My phone rang.. It was sharad's call..

I said- yes sharad..
He said worried- I saw ur missed call.. Why did u call so late? Is everything fine?
I kissed suhani's hand and said- yes.. Everything is fine..
We looked at each other..
I continued- I called u coz I wasn't feeling sleepy..

Then I put my phone on loudspeaker mode and said- sharad.. Early morning I had a heavy loss.. A party interrupted and I had to suffer.. What should I do?
Suhani slapped cutely on my hand by which I held hers..
Sharad replied- that party will never get what he wants.. Go and beat him.. And try to make up for the losses, and make profits too if u can..
I asked suhani- what do u think? Is sharad right?
Suhani took the phone and talked to sharad and Bhawana normally.. She told them not to say anything to maa, as she wanted to give her surprise..

It was 9 am.. We reached home.. Our home..
Suhani brought yuvaan from sambhav's home..
She said- yuvaan.. U know, hez ur father.. Say papa..
He didn't, as he was just 6 months old..
I said- don't worry suhani, one day he will say..
He started crying.. Suhani went to feed him..

We got ready and had our breakfast..
She said- its Sunday.. I need to get the vegetables today..
I said- ok.. U go.. I'll take care of yuvaan..
She nodded and went to get her purse..
My phone rang.. It was maa..
She asked me about my daily schedule here, and then said- I know u must be feeling too bad as its fathers' day and ur son is not with u..
I said- I'm sure I'll meet him soon..
She hung up crying..
I could hear sobs.. I turned to see.. Suhani was there at the door..
I could make it out that she was missing her dad.. I hugged her and pacified her..
I called Pankaj uncle and wished him on loudspeaker mode..
He replied- u and Bhawana wished me, but suhani didn't..
She silently cried hearing that..
She took the phone and whispered- happy fathers' day.. Papa..
Uncle asked- who was it yuvraj?
I replied- don't know uncle.. A daughter wished her father..
He nodded.. I hung up..
I had to cheer her up..
I said- let's go..
She asked- where?
I replied- veg market.. Today i'll also go with u and show u who I'm..
Her eyes were left wide open..
She said- I've a condition.. U'll have to bargain too..

I frowned as I had never been to veg market before.. I thought to myself- yuvraj birla.. U'r gone now.. Get ready to argue for 4-5 rupees..
I asked- what will I get in return?
She asked back- what do u want in return?
I placed my finger on my cheek..

SUHANI'S PoV:

I knew it would be fun to watch Yuvraj Birla bargaining with the veg sellers.. I somehow managed to control my excitement..
I said- ok.. For every ten rupees u save, I'll give u one..
His smile vanished..
He asked to reduce it to two rupees, but I made it to five..

We reached the veg market.. I wished him 'all the best'..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I actually needed it.. God knew what would happen next..
I was worried..
She said- don't worry, I'll guide u..
I looked at her.. She smiled..

She held my hand and we walked.. She asked me to ask about cucumber..
I asked- uncle, cucumber ke rate kya hai?
The seller looked blank..
He asked- Kuku? Amber? Who are they?
I put my hand on my forehead and thought- it would have been better if I had come alone..
Suhani said- yuvraj.. If they knew English, they wouldn't have been selling vegetables here.. I will show u how to deal.. U just observe..
I nodded..

She said- bhaiya...
I interrupted- isn't ur bro too old and looks like an uncle?
She asked me to be quiet..
She continued- bhaiya, kheere kaise diye?
I said- haath se..
She stared at me.. I looked here and there to save myself..
The seller replied- Rs.40/kg
Suhani acted- what?? 2 days before, I took it for Rs.25..

They argued.. I couldn't imagine myself doing that.. She started to choose the fresh ones and said- I won't pay more than Rs.30.. U people only know how to loot ur customers..
I looked around.. The scene was the same with every seller..
I thought to myself- Here the rich ones come to loot the poor sellers.. They behave like dacoits; they take whatever they want and even pay according to their will.. Get ready Dacoit Birla..
I bit my teeth..

Suhani asked me- why are u sweating when the weather is cool?
I wiped them off with my handkerchief and said- nothing.. Let's go..
She took me to orange seller..
I asked- bhaiya.. Orange.. I mean, santre kaise diye?
He replied- Rs.55/dozen..
I said- what? 2 days before, I took it for Rs.45..
He replied- then take it from there only.. Why did u come here?
Suhani turned around and tried to suppress her smile..
I asked him to give and quietly paid Rs.55.. But I said- take 50..

Suhani said- wow Mr. Birla.. U learnt today itself..
I raised my brows and smiled..
She said- let's get tomatoes now..
I said- no.. First I want my prize for saving five rupees..
She looked around and said- yuvraj.. So many people are there..
I interrupted- and all are busy cooking up stories that they bought it 2-3 days before at a lower rate..
She laughed, and then kissed on my cheek..

We went towards the tomato seller.. Before I could say anything, the orange seller came and said- bhaiya, this five rupees note was torn and then joined by cellotape, so plz change it..

I looked at suhani from the corner of my eye.. She gave me an angry look..
I said- I didn't give u this note..
He said- u only gave me.. It was folded with 50 rupees note..
I said- may be I didn't see, but I won't pay more than 50..
We continued to argue..
Suhani gave him five rupees and he thanked her..

We continued to purchase.. I bargained as much as I could, and saved Rs.25 in an hour.. But she was angry.. I knew she wanted me to pamper her..
We reached home..
She was about to leave towards the kitchen..
I held her hand and said- suhani.. U'r forgetting something..
She replied- u won't get anything now.. U lied to me.. Ahaaan...
I said- u'r mistaken.. I'm talking about something else..
She asked- say fast..

SUHANI'S PoV:

He didn't try to convince me.. I expected him to pamper me.. But he didn't.. Sadu.. Huhh..
I was surprised when all of a sudden, he softly kissed my left cheek..
My anger vanished..
I said- yuvraj...
He covered my mouth with his hand and stood facing me..
I looked down in shy..
He said- I got a kiss by telling lie, so I returned it back..
Saying that, he went to his room..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I watched her silently.. She had turned pink.. She touched her cheek and smiled.. I too smiled..


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