SSEL FF (After 30.05.2016) - Part 13 on pg 6

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This ff will continue after epi on 30.05.2016...

Chapter-1:

YUVRAJ'S PoV:
Maa was right.. I should talk to suhani.. I proceeded towards the outhouse but saw her in the lawn.. Uncontrollable tears were flowing from her eyes.. My eyes too got teary..
Me- suhani..
Su turned and looked at me with HATRED!! And then she again turned back.. I knew I have hurt her a lot..
Me- suha...
She walked away..
I followed her and held her arms and turned her towards me..
Su- what the hell do u want from me YB? Just say it.. I will give u.. But dont dare to snatch yuvaan from me.. And yes, tomorrow I will leave not only BH, but also Allahabad, forever and that too before sunrise..

I felt my world rotate a 360 degree angle.. If she leaves again, I will lose her forever!!
Me- suhani, I have come to say that nobody will snatch yuvaan from u, and I assure u that..
She looked at me with hope, like she still trusts me..
I continued- but plz, stay here till the vacations so that I can spend some more time with yuvaan..
She nodded.. I gave a sigh of relief.. She left..

SUHANI'S PoV:
Next morning, as I opened my eyes, Yuvaan wasn't there!!
So it was all yb's plan to snatch him from me..
I proceeded towards BH in anger, and met Bhawana di on my way.. She said that yuvaan was having breakfast.. I gave a sigh of relief.. She asked me also to join them..
Me- I will have shower and then have it in the outhouse only..
Suddenly somebody put his hands on my eyes from behind and said, then cook for me too..
Me- Sambhav!! U here??
Di- yes.. Actually he came with us only but due to some work he couldn't meet u yesterday..
Me- but where are u staying?
Sam- yesterday I stayed in a hotel..
Di- but now he will stay in BH.. Did u bring ur stuff?
Sam- yes..
Me- di...
I took her to a side and said- di I don't want him to know anything.. So let him stay in the hotel only..
Di- he will not know anything coz i have told him that its my in-laws place..
I couldn't understand what to do.. So I let it be..

YUVRAJ'S PoV:
Yuvaan is enjoying breakfast.. He is really very well grown up.. And credit goes to his mumma.. I smiled on thinking about her..
Yuvaan- maasi when will mumma join us for breakfast?
Bh- she is having breakfast in the outhouse with Sambhav..
I looked on..
Dadi- whoz sambhav..?
Yuvaan- hez my mumma's friend.. And mine too.. Hez very cute.. And he always makes her smile whenever shez sad..

Hearing all these, I left from there..
I went to the outhouse, but didn't enter.. I just peeped in..
Hez the same guy I had met in Lucknow..

They were almost done with the breakfast..
Sam- suhani u'r really an awesome cook..
She smiled..
Sam- thanks for the wonderful breakfast..
Su- ur welcome..
He then went inside and brought a bouquet for her..
Sam- its my way of thanking a beautiful lady for the wonderful breakfast..
She accepted it and said smiling- thanks a lot sambhav.. For cheering me up.. U'r a great friend..
Sam took her hands and said- I'm always with u..
She smiled.. He took out his camera and clicked her pic..
Su- sambhav again u started..

I was feeling suffocated..
I turned to leave when sam called me "hey chocolaty face".. I fumed and turned to see.. Suhani looked at me and then at sam..
Su- what did u say? Chocolaty face?
She was laughing like anything.. She was happy.. I too smiled seeing her happy..
Sam came to me- yuvraj birla, right?
Me- yup..
Su- come, I will introduce u to everyone..
They left..

They are just friends.. Then y m I feeling so uncomfortable.. I recalled blaming suhani and breaking all ties with her.. I was feeling insecure.. I had the fear of losing something, oops... Someone.. I felt sambhav will snatch away my suhani from me.. I mean, suhani from...

Suhani introduced sam to everyone..
Sam- u didn't introduce me to yuvraj..
Me and suhani looked on..
Su- u have already met him..
Sam- still.. Ok tell me the relation between both of u..
We looked at each other..
Me- sambhav wo...
Su interrupted and said- hez soumya's hubby..
I was hurt..
Sam- so u r jija-saali.. Right?
Hearing this, suhani left from there..
I felt like punching him hard..
I said- we are friends..


Guys did u all enjoy it?? Plz comment and let me know..

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INDEX:

Chp-1 on pg-1
Chp-2 on pg-2
Chp-3 on pg-2
Chp-4 on pg-3
Chp-5 on pg-3
Chp-6 on pg-4
Chp-7 on pg-4
Chp-8 on pg-4
Chp-9 on pg-5
Chp-10 on pg-5
Chp-11 on pg-5
Chp-12 on pg-6
Chp-13 on pg-6
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start..i liked Sambhav being kept away from knowing truth..It will more interesting to see Sambhav pretending "I know suhani better than anyone" infront of yuvraj..😆 nd jija saali🤣 good go..!! waiting for the next part..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intresting story...best part jija-saali..kaash this happened fr real..bt still enjoyed reading...waiting fr next part
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Jija-saali😆..omg...loved it...waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jija-Sali wat a combo🤣🤣
Turn Sambhav even more shoeing rights on Suhani n Yuvan😆
Bring more of LosrRaj
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏👏👏 loved it Napshaj loved the entry of Sambhav and the way yuvraj went and peeped as soon as he heard about sambhav his insecurity everything u wrote is just amazing nicely done. Pls continue
"jija-saali" was so well thought
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Thanks a lot guys for ur comments.. Ur liking towards the ff motivates to continue.. Keep supporting..

Btw I didn't know that in every comment, 'jija-saali' part will be mentioned..
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Thanks a lot guys for ur comments.. Ur liking towards the ff motivates to continue.. Keep supporting..

Btw I didn't know that in every comment, 'jija-saali' part will be mentioned..
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Dear reader.. Plz do leave a comment after reading.. Ur suggestions are also welcome.. If I feel its not upto the mark, I won't continue it..

Chapter-2:


YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I felt like punching sambhav hard..
I said- we are friends.. We know each other long before I married soumya..
I went towards my room.. But didn't enter..
The kids were playing in the room with sambhav..
Sam- would u all like to go to amusement park in the evening?
Yuvaan became very happy and said- yes friend..
Yuvani and Krishna had to go to a friend's bday party, so they refused..
I thought to myself- if all of it hadn't happened, i would have had my own little and happy family.. With kids and...

I turned to leave and collided with suhani.. She was about to fall and I held her.. Eyelock.. I could see that pain in her eyes and I knew she could see the same in mine.. We got back to our senses when yuvaan came and said- mumma, can I go to amusement park with friend?
Su- y not my shehenshah..
They kissed each other..

It was a treat for me to watch my wife...oops..suhani and yuvaan like that.. So happy they were.. The only sad part was that I wasn't a part of it..

Later, dadi got to know about it and she came shouting and calling out suhani's name.. All gathered there, except sambhav..
D- r u mad suhani? Is this the way u will take care of yuvaan?
I interrupted- dadi what happened?
D- shez sending yuvaan with a stranger..
Su (angrily)- dadi hez my friend and we know each other since 4 years..
D- so what? He has come to Allahabad for the first time.. And probably he doesn't even know where the park is..
Maa- maaji, Sam is not a kid.. He will take care of yuvaan.. And they are too frank, so y to worry?
D- prat u don't take his side now..
Su- ok fine.. I will also go with them..
Dadi left.. Yuvaan was too happy.. And me... I looked at her.. She was looking at yuvaan..

In the evening:
I was sitting on the sofa, reading a magazine.. Not actually reading it.. Suhani and yuvaan got ready and came out.. She looked stunning as usual.. I couldn't get my eyes off her..

Sam also came..
Sam- suhani let's take a selfie..
Su- uff.. U always look for a chance to click pics..
Sam- that's y I'm a photographer..
They laughed and took selfie.. Yuvaan- wow mumma.. U look great with friend.. Let me also take ur pic together..
Sam- ya sure.. And I will make it my Fb dp..
I was burning in the fire of jealousy!!
Then suhani called yuvaan also and they took selfie..
They were about to leave.. Just then, sharad came and said- sam can u plz come with me? Some urgent work is there..
Sam- but we are...
Su- sam u go.. I will take him to the park..
I was kinda relieved.. I saw sharad turned back and winked at me.. I made an angry face but thanked him by heart..
After he left, I got up and said- suhani, can I also join u?
She looked on..
Me- I mean, I wana spend some time with yuvaan..
She nodded.. We left..

Before I could open the door of the front seat of my vintage car, she sat in the back seat with yuvaan..

In the park:
Yuvaan- mumma let's take that ride..
Su- no beta.. Not that one.. U get severe headache whenever u go for it..
I interrupted- suhani, u r a darpok.. Spare this lil kid at least..
I laughed..
Su- yuv its not a joke and I can't risk his life..
Yuvaan- mumma, yuv uncle will take care of me.. Plz plz plz mumma..
Like a loving mother she agreed..
Su- but I will also join the two yuvs..

We got on.. It was thrill.. Su was even more scared than yuvaan..
After the ride, yuvaan said- mumma i will get kulfi..
Su- yuvaan, get 2..
Then she looked at me and taunted- ur yuv uncle doesn't like unhygienic stuff..
I raised my eyebrows and said- get 3..

He came back and said- we were late.. There were only 2..
I said- ur mumma was right.. I don't eat all these..
Su- u take it yuv.. I will have something else..
We were arguing when yuvaan interrupted- it's already melting.. Both of u share it..
I recalled old days.. A tear fell from her eye.. She wiped it..
I just took a bite and handed over the kulfi to her.. She had it unwillingly..
We had lots of fun in the park..
I wished if the time could stand still!!

We reached home.. The entire family was sitting in a circle.. They were playing some game I guessed!!
...

Menka: yuv bhaiya, we have decided to play truth or dare..
Yuv: i'm tired.. U all enjoy..
Soumya irked..
Dadi: soumya go and call yuv..
Soumya nodded..
Sam and sharad too came home and asked suhani and yuvaan also to join the game as they were about to leave..
Yuv too joined..
Menka- sambhav u know u'r very smart and handsome..
Sam- thanks menka ji.. But u don't look smart..
All laughed..
Menka- what do u mean?
Sam- u behave like a foolish..
Prat- beta for how many days are u here in Allahabad?
Sam- till suhani is here..
Yuv irked..

Sharad, suhani and yuvaan sat down.. Yuv was looking.. Sharad saw him and said- guru come na, the game is about to start..
Yuv walked on and sharad moved a lil so that yuvani could sit together..
They looked at each other and then looked straight..
And then came sam..
Yuvaan- friend, come na..
He came and sat between suhani and yuvaan..

Rags- we will spin the bottle twice.. The person at whom it will point after the first spin will ask anything to the person at whom it will point in the second spin..
All were happy..

First it came soumya to suhani..
So- ans honestly.. When are u planning to leave BH?
Su, yuv, prat, etc are stunned.. Dadi and gang laugh..
Su- what type of question is this?
So- no.. Don't take me wrong.. I thought that for yuvaan...
Su- I will leave once the vacations are over..

Next was menka to sambhav..
Menka- sam what type of a girl u would like to marry?
Sam- somebody like suhani..
Yuv looks on..
Rags (gritting her teeth)- suhani is a single piece.. Therez nobody like her..
Sam- then I'll marry suhani..
YuvAni look on.. Yuv frowns and sharad smiles seeing the jealousy on yuvi's face..
Menka- but how can...
Yuv interrupted- menka, stop it now..
All look at him..
Yuv- ask it in ur next chance..
He looks angrily at suhani..

Next comes yuvi to suhani..
They feel ackward..
Yuv- if u get a chance to wish something right now and it would be fulfilled, what would u ask for?
Su (looking at him): to go back to Lucknow with my kids..
Yuv, dadi, etc fume..
Sam- but u have only one kid, yuvaan..
Su- I mean that only..

Next came rags to sam..
Rags- y do u want a girl like suhani? I mean what do u like about her?
Su- what the hell is going on? Don't u have any other question?
Rags- I'm just helping him.. Don't overreact..
Sam- coz shez different.. Independent, friendly, loving, caring.. I like the way she has raised yuvaan all alone.. If it would have been her hubby or any other girl in her place, I bet he/she would have remarried..

Yuv grins and leaves from there..
Soumya- what happened yuv?
He doesn't ans and goes to the lawn and recalls whatever was said in the game..
After sometime, suhani walks towards the outhouse..
Yuv sees her and says- suhani.. I need to talk to u..
Su stops but doesn't look back..
Yuv- what the hell was that? Y didn't u say anything when sambhav told he will marry u?
Su turns and looks into his eyes and says- who r u to ask me that?
Yuv looks here and there.. Then he says- oh.. So u were enjoying it.. Good.. Go ahead with ur FRIEND..
Su shouts- Yuvraj... Mind ur language..
She turns to leave.. He holds her hand and pulls her closer.. They have an eye-lock..
Yuvaan comes and says- mumma I'm feeling sleepy..
Suhani leaves from there with yuvaan..

Yuv goes back.. He sees sambhav getting frank with everyone and grins.. He goes to his room..

Edited by NAPSHaJ - 9 years ago
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