SSEL FF (After 30.05.2016) - Part 13 on pg 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lotsoflove

awesome update please do continue and update soon


@lotsoflove: thanks a lot dear.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its really good. really liking this version of them. I hope here he could confess how he feels about Suhani. Do continue, your writing is really good.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sashnihaa

its really good. really liking this version of them. I hope here he could confess how he feels about Suhani. Do continue, your writing is really good.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)



Thanx a lot dear.. 😊😊
Dear hez married to soumya (even though hez just pretending).. So how could he tell his ex-wife in front of everyone that he still loves her.. 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue dear..Bring more of SazishRaj😆😆
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Continue dear..Bring more of SazishRaj😆😆


Ya sure dear.. 😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-3:

Yuvaan is sleeping and suhani is thinking about all that happened..

Suddenly there's a knock on the door.. She opens..
Its yuv..
He says- I wana tell u something..
She- tell fast..
He- let's forget everything and start afresh with our kids..
She looked stunned and asked- what r u saying?
He held her hand and said- I want to spend the rest of my life with my family- with u, yuvaan and yuvani..
She gets rid of his hold and says- r u out of ur mind? Don't forget that u r somebody's husband now..
He burst out- shez not my wife.. We never married..

Suhani is shocked.. Tears start rolling down her eyes..
Yuv cups her face and says- now don't cry.. Our good days will come..
She removes his hand and says- wah.. U know what, today is a worse day than the one when I got to know that u have married soumya..
Yuv looks on..
She continues- u fetched my best friend into our bedroom without marrying her.. And since 6 yrs, u have cheated all.. And now u'r expecting me to come back to u..
Yuv- suhani I didn't marry her coz I still love u..
Su- just keep shut.. If ur love was true, u would have waited for me..
Yuv- y don't u understand? I stayed with her for yuvani.. She needed a mother..
Su- even yuvaan needed a father.. If I had stayed with sambhav like that and today I tell u to accept me, would u?
Yuv looks stunned..
She asks him to leave from there..
He leaves and she cries..

Yuv comes back to his room and tells soumya that he has told the truth to suhani.. Soumya is shocked..
Yuv- but shez very hurt.. We need to convince her before she leaves from here..
Soumya nods and thinks she has to do something soon..

Next morning
Sambhav comes and sees suhani upset..
Sam- what happened?
Su- nothing..
She walks and he holds her hand..
Sam- plz suhani.. I wana know what's wrong..
She recalls yuvi's words and gets teary eyed..
Sam- suhani...
She places her head on his chest and cries.. He pacifies her..
Yuvi and soumya see the scene.. Soumya smiles seeing yuvi fuming.. Yuvi leaves from there..

Sam- ok I won't ask u anything.. Prat aunty called for breakfast..
Yuvaan comes and says- mumma let's go na.. M hungry..
Sam picks him up in his arms and they leave..

The trio enter BH.. Su walks forward and sam follows with yuvaan..
SuBhav sit beside each other..
Yuv looks at su and says- I'm done..
He gets up but she doesn't look at him..

After breakfast, sam goes to shawana's room..
Sam- plz tell me what's bothering suhani.. I know u know it all.. Plz.. Tum dono ko golu ki kasam..
They tell him everything.. Hez stunned..

Suhani is sitting on a bench in the lawn..
Sam comes there..
Sam- what r u thinking?
Su- I wana go back to Lucknow.. Today itself..
Sam- ok.. I will try to book the tickets..
She nods..
Dadi hears and smiles..

Su- before leaving, I would like to meet my parents once..
Sam- come I will take u..
Su- I will go with yuvaan in taxi..
Sam- r u sure?
Su- yup..

Suhani goes to meet pankaj and lata with shawana, golu, sambhav and yuvaan in the morning..

Suhani and all enter the house.. Pankaj and lata are shocked.. Pankaj hugs shawana but is angry with suhani.. Lata hugs suhani.. They introduce yuvaan and sambhav..

Yuvraj looks for suhani.. And then notices yuvaan and sambhav are also not there..

Lata asks pankaj to forgive suhani.. After hours, he hugs suhani.. All are happy..
In the evening, shawana leave but suhani refuses..
Su- I will leave Allahabad tomorrow morning so I wana spend some time here.. We will come later..
Sam also stays..

Shawana reach BH.. All were in the hall..
Dadi- where did u all go? And wherez yuvaan?
Sh tells everything..
Yuvi, prat are shocked..
Dadi and gang smile..
Yuv angrily goes to his room and says- su I won't let u take yuvaan away from me..

At night,
Su reaches BH and goes directly to the outhouse..
Sam- su I have booked the tickets.. We have to leave around 10.30 am..
Su thanks him..
Yuvaan- mumma I m going to yuv uncle..
Su allows him..
Sam- won't u meet anybody?
Su thinks to meet prat and all..
They enter BH..

Yuvaan rushes to yuv's room..
SuBhav are in the hall..
She tells that they are leaving next morning..
Yuv comes and says- u can go wherever u wana go with ur sambhav, but yuvaan will stay here.. I have applied for his custody..
SuBhav are shocked..
Yuv gives them a copy of the papers..
Su cries seeing the papers..
Dadi, soumya, ragsmen smirk..
Prat- yuv what the hell is this? U said that u won't snatch yuvaan from her..
Su calls out yuvaan.. He comes to her and says- mumma yuv uncle gave me so many chocolates, see..
Su looks at yuvi with hatred and says- beta I told u na that we shouldn't accept gifts from strangers..
She takes the chocolates and throws them on yuvi's face..
Yuvi looks on angrily- m not a stranger to him..
Su- yuvaan u go to the outhouse..
Yuv- yes champ.. Spend a night more with ur mom..
Yuvaan leaves..
Sam- yuv u'r doing wrong.. How can u...
Yuv- u shut up.. Who are u to interfere?
Sh- guru u'r doing wrong..
Yuv- obv u will support su.. After all, u'r her puppet..
Bh- just keep quiet yuvi.. U have become so arrogant..
Su- di hez like this only.. For him, only hez right.. Always.. But I won't let him separate my son from me.. Yuv birla, I will answer u for these papers..
Tears are still flowing from her eyes..
Su turns to leave and faints..
Sam lifts her and takes her to the outhouse..

Prat slaps yuvi..
Dadi- prat how dare u..
P- I'm ashamed to call u my son.. It was my mistake that I got suhani married to u..
Dadi- thank god.. U realised that u ruined yuvi's life..
P- no dadi.. I have ruined suhani's life..
They look on..
She leaves with shawana..

Sam lays su on bed and sprinkles water.. She gets conscious an calls for yuvaan..
Sam- relax su, hez here.. Sleeping beside u..
She hugs yuvaan..
Sam gets teary-eyed seeing her condition..


Guyzz did u enjoy it? Do leave ur comment.. And any suggestions are also welcome..😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ola The custody😆Yuvraj bribes Yuvan with chocolates😆
Prats gets her most needed brains😆Else she is a selfish goose of all.
Sammy picks Suhani..This was highlight
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Ola The custody😆Yuvraj bribes Yuvan with chocolates😆

Prats gets her most needed brains😆Else she is a selfish goose of all.
Sammy picks Suhani..This was highlight



The points that u have highlighted are few of those that I wished to see but our CVs didn't show them.. So I have included them in my ff.. 😊 😊
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Chapter-4:


Suhani gets up late night due to a bad dream and hugs yuvaan.. Shez scared and teary-eyed.. She takes him and tries to run away.. She lays yuvaan in the back seat and is about to get into the car when somebody holds her hand..
Su- leave my hand.. This time u cant stop me yuvraj birla..
She sees its sambhav..
Sam- su where r u going at this time??
Su- i wl go far away with yuvaan.. Else yuvi will...
Sam- i'm with u suhani, and trust me, nobody can separate u from ur son.. A mother from her child.. We will answer the birlas in the court..
Su nods and says in mind- i hate u yuv..
Sam wipes her tears and she places her head on his chest.. Cold wind blows.. Sam feels something.. He hesitates and hugs her back and pacifies her..
He picks up yuvaan and goes into the outhouse.. He tells suhani to relax.. She finally sleeps.. As hez about to leave, she holds his hand.. He slowly removes her hand and walks out to the lawn..

He recalls everything that happened with her in BH..
He thinks- Shez treated so badly by the Birlas.. I can't even imagine what not they would have done with her 6 years ago.. And she has been living with so much pain in her heart.. I can't see her in this state.. I will help her..

Next morning, sam gives some papers to su and asks her to think over it.. She says- its right.. I don't need to think over it again..
Sam enters BH and calls for yuvi..
Yuv- how dare u come in front of me? Get out from here..
Sam- even I'm not interested in talking to ungrateful people like u..
Prat comes there- arey sam beta.. Howz su now?
Sam- shez fine aunty.. She has sent these papers.. Plz give it to ur son and tell him to sign it..
Yuv looks on..
P- what's this?
S (looking at yuv)- divorce papers..
Yuv and prat are stunned..
Sam leaves..

Yuv looks at the papers and then at her sign.. He recalls what Rohan did..
Yuv- its Sam's plan.. I won't leave him..
He goes out and sees suhani gossipping with yuvaan and looks very happy..
Yuv walks towards su but sam comes in his way..
Sam- what do u want now?
Yuv- I wana talk to su and u get out of my way..
They argue and shout..
Su comes there..
Su- I hope u have signed the papers..
Yuv gets upset and says- su how could u do that?? Do u want divorce??
Su- yes..
Yuv doesn't know what to say..
SuBhav leave from there..
Yuv sits down on his knees heartbroken and cries..

SuBhav try to get a lawyer but they are unsuccessful..
She finally get a lawyer.. She agrees..

When she comes back, she finds prat, shawana and sourav in the outhouse..
Yuvaan asks- mumma where did u go with sam uncle?
Su looks at sam..
Sam too looks at her and asks- do u love ur mumma?
Yuvaan- the most.. I can't live without her.. But uncle y r u asking this?
A teardrop falls from suhani's eye and she wipes it..
Sam- aise hi..
Yuvaan asks su- mumma, y r u crying?
She hugs him..
Sourav- yuvaan, ur mumma also loves u a lot..
Pr- And I will make sure that nobody separates u from her..
Su looks on..
Pr- now u go and play with yuvani and Krishna..
He leaves..

Su- I'm sorry maa.. Today u'r going against ur son for me..
Pr- no beta.. M sorry.. If I hadn't stopped u from leaving, this wouldn't have happened..
Yuv comes there and throws the signed papers on the table..
Yuv- now happy?
Su- that's none of ur business.. U can leave now..
Yuv- who r u to tell me that? This is my house..
Pr- shut up yuv.. U go from here..
Su- no maa.. Let him say.. Hez right.. Its his house.. Don't worry yuv, after winning this case I will leave not only this house, but Allahabad too..
Yuv grins and says- we will see who wins..
He leaves..

COURT SCENE:
(Only the required dialogues have been mentioned..
YL- Yuvi's lawyer; SL- Suhani's lawyer)

YL calls suhani..
YL- 6 yrs ago, y did u leave BH?
Su- y r u asking all these? It has...
YL- Suhani ji ans my question..
Su tells the reason..
YL- So, for ur mistake, u wanted to leave, ok fine I understand.. But who gave u the right to take away both the kids?
Su- I'm their mother.. And I took only yuvaan with me...
YL- But u would have taken away yuvani too if chandrakala ji hadn't lied to u.. Yuv birla is their dad and he has equal rights on his son..
Suhani tries to say something but YL doesn't let her speak and requests the judge to hand over yuvaan's custody to his dad..
Dadi and her gang smirk..
YuvAni look at each other..
Then suhani looks at sambhav.. He gives her an assuring look that she will win..
She nods with teary eyes..

Therez a break of 15 mins..

During the break:
Su comes out of the court room and stands upset in a corner..
Sam comes to her and assures her..
Yuv sees them together..
YuvAni have an eye-lock.. Su holds Sam's hand and leaves from there..
SL is missing.. SuBhav get worried.. Sam goes to the judge and says that he himself will fight for suhani.. And requests for an hour to prepare.. The judge agrees..

Su- sam how will u do it??
Sam- suhani...just relax.. U go to yuvaan.. I will handle everything..

COURT SCENE:
Sam calls yuv..
Sam- Y did u marry soumya?
Yuv- coz su left us and yuvani needed a mother..
Sam- Y did she need a mother when u were there? Couldn't u be a dad as well as a mom to ur daughter?
Yuv- Yuvani was a new-born baby and she needed a mother..
Sam- It means u agree that yuvaan too needed his mother more than u.. Then his custody should be handed over to his mom..
Yuv- I married soumya for yuvani and Krishna as well.. I could...
Sam- Don't try to divert the topic.. U may leave now..
He goes back to his seat..
Sam calls pratima..
Sam- tell us something about suhani.. Or y did u choose her for ur son..
Prat tells everything..
Sam- Do u know that today shez the best FD in Lucknow and many people work in her fashion house?
All are shocked..
Menka says- suhani jiji and fashion designer??
And she faints..
Rags shakes her..
Prat- its good that shez doing well..
Sam- suhani isn't interested in luxury n all.. But still she changed herself and her attitude and did everything for her son.. To give him a lifestyle which he would have led in birla house.. If she wanted, she could have married a rich man for that.. But she didnt.. Shez a perfect example of a single mother..
Dadi and her gang look on..
Sam calls suhani..
Sam- even u could ask for yuvani's custody, then y didn't u do that?
Su- coz she considers yuv and soumya as her parents and is very happy with them in BH.. I don't want to snatch her happiness.. And she might start hating me if I take her away..
Sam continues- I request u to hand over yuvaan's custody to suhani.. Otherwise it will be an injustice with a mother..

Suhani wins the case.. Dadi and yuv fume.. Ragsmen and soumya smirk..
Prat, shawana and sourav are happy and teary- eyed..

Suhani smiles with teary- eyes and thanks sam..
Sam- I told u na.. Now plzz don't be kanjus.. I want a treat..
She nods and smiles..


Friends do comment how was the epi.. Ur support encourages a lot.. :)
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Chapter-5:

SuBhav reach the outhouse with pratima and shawana.. The kids were playing there.. Suhani asks yuvaan to get ready as they would be leaving soon.. Yuvani and Krishna get upset..

Pratima hugs yuvaan..
Sam gives them chocolates..
Yuvaan and golu take their share.. But before Y&K could take them, yuvraj comes and throws them away..
SuBhav and the kids look on stunned..
Sam- y r u misbehaving yuv?
Yuv to kids- suhani aunty says u shouldn't accept anything from strangers..
Su bursts out- yuv.. Sam isn't a stranger.. Hez my...
Yuv interrupts- ur what??
Su- it's useless to talk to u..
She picks up the chocs and says to Y&K- I'm ur mumma's best friend, so I'm like ur mausi.. Now u can take it na..
They smile, take the chocs kiss her and go out to play..
Yuvaan- mumma where are we going?
Su- back to Lucknow..
Yuv fumes..
Yuvaan and golu also go out..
Dadi comes with rags and soumya to call yuv..
Dadi- what happened yuv beta? Now what did this ladki do?
Sam- dadiji, can't u call her by name?
Dadi- no.. What will u do?
Sam fumes and says- suhani let's go..
Dadi- go wherever u want.. And don't come back again..

Sam's phone beeps..
Sam- su our flight has been cancelled.. And we will have to wait for 4 days more..
Su- what?? Plz find a way out.. I can't stay here even for a day more..
Yuv and prat look on..

Prat- su I know I can't stop u now, but if u want u can stay here..
Saying this, she leaves from there..
Sam- su now I won't let u stay here..
Su- we will stay in a hotel..
SuBhav leave with yuvaan..

SuBhav go to a hotel and book two rooms..They freshen up and go to a restaurant for the treat..

After that, suhani tells sam to go to the hotel with yuvaan..
Sam- where r u going?
Su- got some urgent work..
She leaves..

At BH:
Pr- maaji its sharad's b'day tomorrow..
Dadi- so??
Pr- I was thinking we should celebrate..
Dadi- hez a guest.. And I know u'r saying this to call suhani here.. And I won't let that happen..
Pr- sharad is like yuvi for me.. And suhani will come with yuvaan..
Dadi agrees..

Yuv is driving and stops the car near a showroom of fasttrack..
As he enters, we are shown that suhani is also there.. But they don't see each other.. Su buys two watches and yuvi one.. When they come to the counter for payment they see each other.. But don't say anything..
As she gives the two watches to the counter boy for billing, yuvi stares at the watches and thinks- one may be for sharad, and the other one? Sambhav? But y? Let it be.. I don't care..
She pays and leaves.. He looks at her..

Suhani reaches the hotel.. She goes to her room and packs both the watches.. She takes one and goes to Sam's room where hez playing guitar and singing, and yuvaan is listening to him..
Su- shehenshah, I have bought a new jacket for u.. Just try it..
Yuv- wow mumma.. Wherez it?
Su- in our room..
He leaves..
Su gifts the watch to sam..
Sam- for what?
Su- for whatever u have done for me today.. U don't know what yuvaan means to me..
Sam- ok ok.. Now don't get senti.. And thanks.. I think my good days are on the way..
They smile..
He wears the watch..
Yuvaan comes and says- how m I looking?
Sam- like a hero..
Su kisses on his forehead and hugs him..
Sam looks on and thinks- I wish I could make ur life better suhani..

Next morning:
Su and yuv wish sharad over the phone..
Prat calls them and says- we have planned a surprise party for sharad.. We would be happy if u all come, especially shawana.. And we will get some time to spend with u and yuvaan.. But I won't force u..
Su thinks what to do..

Sam comes and says gm to both..
Sam- what r u thinking?
Su tells everything..
Sam- do u wana go there?
Su- no.. But sharad bhaiya...
Sam- so u wana go? I won't let u go alone.. And hez my friend too..
Su agrees..

At BH:
Party begins.. The guests have started to come.. SuBhav enter with yuvaan..
Menka sees and says- look, happy family is coming..
All turn to see.. Yuv fumes and menka observes him.. Dadi smirks..
They come to sharad and wish him.. First su gives the gift on behalf of yuvaan and herself..
Then sam gives a bouquet.. That time, yuvi sees the watch in his hand that suhani had purchased..
Sh- wow sam.. Its my bday and u'r wearing a new watch..
Sam smiles and says- suhani gave..
Yuv (like an angry man)- y? Today its neither ur bday nor friendship day.. Then y did she gift it to u?
Sam (with attitude and smile)- coz she loves me..
Yuv and others looks on..
Su- sambhav...
Sam- ok ok chill.. Don't u loveme as a friend?
Su looks away..
Sam (looking at yuv)- I gave her that happiness permanently which somebody tried to snatch from her..
Yuv fumes and leaves from there..

Sharad cuts the cake..
Then all the couples dance.. Yuvaan was with yuvi that time.. He sees su talking to pratima and tells him to dance with su.. He feels ackward.. Yuvaan drags him and takes him to su.. He tells them to dance.. And goes away..
Yuv forwards his hand to su but she forwards her hand to sam who just came to her that time..
Sam gives his hand and they move to the dance floor..
Laal ishq plays..
Sam looks at su..
Su looks at yuvi, and then ignores him..
Yuvi starts drinking..

After the dance, su tells yuvaan that they have to leave now..
Yuvaan- mumma plzz.. Some more time plzz..
Dadi sees..
Dadi- ladki.. If yuvaan wants to spend some time here then let him stay na.. U go if u want..
Su- if i'll tell u to send yuvani with me for an hour, will u?
Dadi- yuvani won't agree to go with u.. And yuvani has her mother.. But yuvaan doesn't have his father..
Su- if yuvani can get a mother, yuvaan can also get a father..
Dadi- oh really? Who will marry u?
Sam comes and says- I'll marry her..
Everybody look on..

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