SS-Har uljan ko suljaye-part 14-page 16 - Page 7

Originally posted by: sumabkb

Awesome sri. You have made Yuvraj and Pratima so strong which we see them very rarely in the show. They only peeps up once in a while. Atlast we have started to see in yuvraj a bit more. I also loved finally suhani enjoyed her favorite game pittu. Please update soon.

Lol Sri now i understood why that pittu part u written with that much intensity...😆😆

*Res*..

It was around 8.00 when Suhani and others take their seats in the dining table..Lata serves the dinner when Suhani enquires of he dad who hadn't turned..Lata gave a perplexed expression and left quietly..Suhani understands her mothers state and follows her into y=the kitchen.She says I will convince him and make him to have food.He cant skip eating.His health will get spoilt.Lata whispers in her broken voice No dear.He wont have his dinner.I have tried to convince him n times but returned unsuccessfully..He dosent even reply last few times when I called him out.NO beta.Dont force him.Suhani says determinedly I will convince him .If he is adamant yet then I wont have food until he has.Lets see what he does.Suhani takes Bhavan along with her to convince her father.But Pankaj was in sound sleep after days.The girls screech at their top but all were in vain as Pankaj was sleeping..Suhani peeps through the window and watches him sleep.She thinks he is faking an act to avoid food.She takes a long stick and scratches his leg.Pankaj gets up shouting hamne kuch nahi kiya.Hum sirf so rahe the constable saab..He looks around wiping his sweat and finds himself in his room.He notices the stick and looks in that direction ..Finding Suhani holding the stick he gets irritated Suhani..Hume sone bhi nahi degi tum..Halla kyu mach rahe ho or ye sab kya hai.Dino bad aaj chain se so rahe the.Lekin raha nahi gaya tumse..Paksh do hame ap log..Suhani was shaken up by his intensity.She hasn't experienced her fathers anger since her birth..She replies Nahi papa.Apko sirf khan eke liye bulane thi..Isliye..Pankaj shouts Hame khana wana kuch nahi chiye.Hame meharban karke sone do..Lekin papa..He goes on Suhani..Ek bar batayein toh smj nahi aati tumhe..Hame sone dogi tum..Suhani replies Aap ko soni hai..Teek hai smj gyi.Lekin kana kyu chod rhe ho..Aise karke apki tabyart karab hogi..Pankaj replies reluctantly Suhani hume bata diya apki ma ko hame bhuk nahi hai or muje pareshan mat karo.Ap log sunti kyu nahi..Jao yahan se or hame akele chod do.Suhani replies Teek hai papa.Agar apko yahi zid hai buke rehne ka ham bhi nahi khayenge.Dekte hai kab tak ap ye natak karte hain..Humi tabi khayenge jab ap hame khilayenge.And walks off to her room..Bhavna pleads her father to have dinner.Pankaj was in no mood to listen and he shuts the window on Bhavnas face.Lata looks worried and says bhagwan jane ye sab kahan ki pahunchne wale hain..She stops Bhavna saying ab ap log bhi bhuke rehne wale ho..Hame itna sab kiske kiye bana hai..Tum log khaogi..Samji..Somya Bhavna n Lata have food n descend to their room..

Yuvraj was wandering about the garden when he thinks of calling Suhani.He dials her number quizzical whether she would attend his call..Suhani was lying in her bed immersed in deep thoughts...She dosent hear the ring..He calls three to four times but she never attends..So he drains his hopes n was off to sleep.Suhani takes her phone to set alarm for next morning when she notices his call.She looks at the clock and notices the time was 10.00 n was thoughtful of calling him back but her hands involuntarily dials his number..He was fighting with his bed as sleep barely came..He immediately attends the call seeing her name flash in his eyes..He wishes an excited hello..I thought u were reluctant to attend my calls.Its a surprise that u have called.And thank u..SUhani was smiling at his enthusiasm and images of him at present flashes before her eyes..He was sitting on his knees in his bed totally energetic and excited to talk with Suhani.She laughs Arre have breath..Why all at a time.He replies kidding Else u would disconnect as u have no interest in talking with me now-a-days..It was hard on her..She whispers in a distant voice nothing of sorts..I know u would call me then..Yuvraj was surprised O really then say me why have I called..Suhani says U have called to inform that Gauri is off to rehab and she is fine..Yuvraj smiles If u understand me much then u would obviously know that why I had reacted such on that day..I guess am right..Suhani replies dejectedly Yes..But please don't get into that topic..I am tired of all..Please spare me.Not for today.I am gonna sleep..Yuvraj was annoyed thinking( she would never speak on this topic.I wont leave her until she gives me proper explaination.) No Suhani ..No ways.I am not gonna easily leave u unless I get proper answer.Come on Suhani..Its not an easy deal..Suhani was perplexed how and what to answer him..She says Bye..I am not ready to discuss the thing right now..Good night..Yuvraj thinks (she wont bend easily until have to force)Teek hai Suhani..Tu manegi nahi na..Kitna bhagna hai bag..Ek din jawab dena padega tumhe..Mein bhi utna jaldi tumhe nahi chodungi.Suhani cries Yuvraj please don't make it harder for me...I cant bear any more .I am broken n weak.Yuvraj in a serious tone you cant run away from me easily ..I wont encourage any excuses..Is that only you who is been going through this and affected of this..Why you fail to think of me..It has been more harder for me than you..Could u imagine how would it feel to be torn between family and wife.I had been supporting you going against my family especially my sister even when she was a victim..And at the end my wife dosent care for me n she leaves me..You had turned selfish Suhani..Suhani broke down..Yuvraj thought she had disconnected the call as there was a long silence..He calls out Suhani..Suhani..The faint tone of her wail reaches his ears.He shouts why do u cry now..and rewinds his conversation seconds before.He realizes what he had mouthed n curses him..He again shouts Suhani..say something..I cant bear this silence..I know u are crying and I am the reason for it.U can slander me if needed but don't cry n be silent.It kills me..She replies in cracking voice its alright Yuvraj..Mistake was not wholly on your part..U were just victim of circumstances.And all your words were right.I am selfish.I am selfish for my father.I am selfish to gain respect.I am selfish for my family.(cries)..Yuvraj too cries hearing his love tearing into bits..Suhani ..I am sorry.I never meant it.It was just the frustration .It came unintentionally..I am sorry Don't mistake me..Dont cry..It hurts me..Its tearing me apart..Suhani dosent reply..he knows he had to meet her immediately..He shouts I will reach to dara ganj by 11.30 n be waiting in front of your house ..I hope you do turn..Dont put me down..Its had been hard for me too..Please Suhani..He disconnects and texts her the same with hope that she wont put him down..Suhani reads the message n turns off her phone ..She lies down on her bed with tears flowing lfrom her eyes unbiased

superb,👏

Nice update Sri...👏

Nicely written Sri. Loved the conversation btw pankaj and Suhani. Loved the way she woke him up by tickling him with the stick. Also loved the conversation btw Y-S too. Atleast Pankaj is more real in ur story even in the show he is but today i didn't expect that suhani will return. But it's ok may be something big is on the way(hopefully)

Originally posted by: Sunitha28

Nice update Sri...👏

Every convo is with full of emotions & pain...

And u shown Pankaj angry on Suhani in new way...😆

Originally posted by: sumabkb

Nicely written Sri. Loved the conversation btw pankaj and Suhani. Loved the way she woke him up by tickling him with the stick. Also loved the conversation btw Y-S too. Atleast Pankaj is more real in ur story even in the show he is but today i didn't expect that suhani will return. But it's ok may be something big is on the way(hopefully)

Originally posted by: shinseen

superb,👏

its really touchy

every word have voice.👍🏼