YuvAni OS (Yuvi POV): Missing - Page 2

Originally posted by: maniac_

Thnq thnq thnq.. Today's a lucky day.. First anita's vm nd now this brilliant ff... Amazing scenario... Tensed yuvraj.. It was totally acc to our yuvani.. :

At one hand we hv Suhani, who doesn't realise the effect she has on yuvi's life...

Nd on other we hv yuvi who kept on saying abt lata nd her worries bt actually he himself was hurt nd worried as hell.. Their entire convo was perfect...Beautiful di... A big thnq for this...

Ssel cvs if u read the forum plz give us such a scenario.. U may continue ur gaadi love bt in between give us some yuvani moments... Plzz..

Once again well done di...

ur welcome Naina. thanks for reading it . one of my favorite things to do is writing their convos in these stories...their dialogues...wish they would interrupt the ongoing Gaadi shit to give us a big dose of Yuvani...

Originally posted by: yuvanissel

Wow. Dhi.. Each n evrythng is amazing..

Yuvi's anger

Su carelessness n hurt..

Dialogues

Yuvi including abt lata, his fear, etc...

Yuvani scene...

V. Nys dhi.. Thank u so so so much...

Cv's... Pls cvs... Pls.. Can v get yuvani scene in evry track??

not every track but every epi...a yuvani scene in every epi😉

Originally posted by: Sunitha28

Thank u Mehwish u made my day by this FF it was excellent each & every line heart touching...

when i'm reading each line i just feel that i'm watching that scenario ur writting skills is mind-blowing

I liked Yuvraj's first question to Suhani that did she appoliged to Lata for what she did...& how u showed the way How will a loving husband react when he finds that his wife missing...

Once again Thank u so much Mehwish...

Thanks Sunitha...glad u liked it so much...& ur welcome.😃

Originally posted by: shinseen

thank you sosososooomuch

very nice OS,

brilliantly handle every scene and dialogues plus scenario.

you are such a good writer👏

why are you not done frequently ?

keep writing😊

will try to write more frequently 😉 thanks for the wonderful words of encouragement

Originally posted by: sumabkb

Mehwish beautifully written but u said u will writing a FF but not fair u gave us only OS. Nobody know yuvraj better than u. I loved each and every part of it. At the end he also showed how much he want her back home. Mehwish i am not a very good writer but hope u liked my a bit of review.

thanks for the detailed review and for appreciating each section. means a lot to me...lovely review😳😃⭐️

Originally posted by: AfrigalYuvani

Loved it. They need to throw in some of this every now and then. That would make this other nonsense so much more bearable.

i wish they'd include such things too...we're starved right now.

Originally posted by: anita_m

I loved this one. It's topical, it's simple and sweet, and gives us pissed-off Yuvraj. Thank you.

Thank you Anita...means a lot to me since you write FFs yourself...if only the writers would copy those.

Vowww👏

Originally posted by: Lovestruck1996

Vowww👏

My frst ever ff reading n im gone😆

I loved whn u wrote grabbed in arms n not lettin u go until u r provin me how a good wif is😳

N how wonderfully u used her blckmail😆

Cvs😭

Pls v r so hungry for such scenes

Thts y i prevnt reading ffs

I feel so sad v cnt watch yuvaani scenes like these

😭

Mehwo im telling u pls direct ssel 👏

omg i cant believe you read it. im happy 😃 u liked the romantic part huh? 😉😆

cvs isme sse 50% bhi nahin dikhate 😭

Omg it was damn awesome..,Absolutely luvd it.. 👏 kya likhti ho aap..amazing ...beautiful start & end toh kamaal ...fear ...love wala gussa ...Suhani se door rehne ka dukh ...everything is just perfect ...App he apne words se aisa Magic kar sakti hai ..har scene ko hum imagine kar sakte hai ...thank u very much for this beautiful os ...hope karte hai serial me v aisa kuch aa jaye ...thanks ones again ... 🤗