YuvAni FF- After Realization: Part 7, P. 15 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: simpleton

Oh emm gee..

I like suhanis pov.. (cx yuvis pov is v short :p)

Suhanis thoughts are put in aptly.. the carrying to bed bit the kisses she supressed since a yr..

Will yuvraj confess? Suhani said i love you.. per yuvi kahay ga nahiii dikhaye ga ahahahaha loved it mehwu... u have gift for writing... reading thia made me feel better after yuvi hospitalization ... thanksss hope u update soon.. whenever but soon...



thanks Famu & all shall be revealed in the next part i think at this point he has made her feel he loves her so more isnt needed just yet 😉



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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 7:

Yuvraj's POV:

A feeling of finally being free, which I hadn't felt in months, finally released me from what felt like a mental and emotional prison. She wasn't planning on leaving me. I could be with her without fear. I could be myself and like always, she would accept me the way I was. Best part was that, I had finally managed to express myself and let her know where my heart was, and I knew that was long overdue.

I dedicated this kiss to the one year plus we spent together but apart in so many ways. If I was trying to make her feel my love, she was doing the same. She locked her arms around my neck and pulled me closer and I didn't mind getting closer. I looked into her eyes after the kiss. She looked like she loved and adored me more than anyone else in the world. Suhani's love had a depth which I couldn't possibly understand because it's a love which managed to survive the most shocking of revelations. For so long, her love was one sided but yet I could say for sure that she loved me right now as much as she always had.

She touched my face and I enjoyed every touch. The top most button on the shirt was unbuttoned. She was distracted and busy running her fingers through my hair. I felt that desire in the pit of my stomach to make love to her. I touched her neck and my fingers reached the buttons. I opened another one and she held my hand and stopped me, but she didn't look nervous. She took my hand and kissed it. My mouth watered with desire. I gave her a soft, wet kiss. She touched my shoulders and then my arms, and finally I felt her fingers beneath my shirt. She moved her hands upwards, against my chest. It was a signal. She wanted me as well. Her expression reflected so much love and trust that I felt like the luckiest guy alive.

I wanted her so much that at this point I couldn't hide it even if I tried. She was trying to undress me. I smiled when I realized that she was attempting to pull my shirt over my head.

"Here, I'll help..." I said. I grinned at her impatience and she giggled. I took off my shirt.

"Would you like to wear it?" I asked. She blushed. I kissed her cheek. She closed her eyes. I lowered the shirt from her shoulder and kissed her. She held me tight. Then I kissed her neck. I felt her leg against mine. I caressed her bare skin there. Everything slowed down. I wanted to make every moment memorable for her. If this was it, I didn't want to leave any stone unturned. I thought about undressing completely. That would probably lead to a point of no return. She didn't speak a word but her eyes said it all. She couldn't wait anymore. We kissed. She unbuttoned her shirt. I planted kisses down her shoulder and neck and lower, but then she stopped me.

"Yuvraj..." I heard it once but it didn't stop me. Then she held my face.

"Yuvraj...listen...both our phones are ringing..."

"Huh?" I couldn't hear a thing. Had my ears just become completely immune to any sound except the sound of Suhani's voice?

I reluctantly moved away from her and sat up. I grabbed my phone and she grabbed hers.

"Sharad called me..." I said.

"Maa called me." She said.

"Maybe they're worried." I said. I called Sharad back. "Guru, are you both ok? Mausi has been worried sick. She kept calling the farmhouse and when I told her what happened, she got more concerned. I hope I didn't disturb you..." He said. "Bhabhi wasn't answering her phone either so Mausi got really worried..."

"Oh, Sharad...let me speak to her." I said.

"Yuvraj?" Maa spoke.

"Are you both ok? Why haven't you been answering the phone? It's been ringing for ages. I can expect this from you but never from Suhani!"

I looked at Suhani who had covered herself with a sheet. She blushed. "Maa, um...we...got wet, on the way here...so Suhani went for a bath and I fell asleep." What a big liar I was. I eyed Suhani. I gave her that threatening "just wait what I do to you after this" kind of look.

"Ok, well, thank God you're both alright. I want you to bring her back home tomorrow. Don't let me down."

"Yes, Maa..."

"Goodnight."

"Goodnight, Maa."

I turned the phone off after that. I was pissed. Suhani giggled and rolled over on her side and watched me.

"Goodnight, Yuvraj..."

"Shut up." I said. I pulled the sheet off her and she refused to let it go, so we fought over that until I gave up and lay down next to her. I moved my pillow closer to hers.

"Come here, Mrs. Birla..." I said. She obeyed. "Your mother in law wants you home tomorrow...our home..." I said. "Are you ready?" I asked. She nodded. "I'll go, but only for my sweet mother in law..."

"What about your ultra-sweet, sexy, handsome and intelligent husband?"

"Not for him." She wrinkled her nose.

"In that case...I want my shirt back. If you don't give it, I'll remove it...forcibly..." I whispered the last word. She hugged me. I held her against me. We didn't continue where we left off. It could wait because for tonight I felt like the most contented main in the world, one that had the most precious possession of his lying in his arms.


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Posted: 10 years ago
The only reason I kept chking the forum was to see this... goodness me...
Loved it again...

Firstly cx it was Yuvrajs pov... whats going in his head reading that is bliss.

Loved the bit where you mentioned that even tho it wa a one sided love, suhanis love for him remained the same, dint decrease..


And i m glad sharad and maa called. Heheheh cx we wouldnt be able to read heheheh...

Thanks thanks thankss :)))

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Posted: 10 years ago
Totally amazing update! Loved it. Please update soon! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Yanks, I'm not good @ writing but still I'm doing this review cz I want you to WRITE WRITE & WRITE... yaar. Don't know whether you like it...Please pardon me if it's not good.

It's definite that you are exactly in to their character. Your every single word made me to visualize them in my mind.

She touched my face and I enjoyed every touch. The top most button on the shirt was unbuttoned.

oh just imagine Suhani in that state... ☺️ How on earth u got this ideas yanks? Superb...👏

Oh my my... Shirtless Yuvi in a naughty mood... & impatience Suhani... The way you described the situation is a real magic. 👍🏼

This serial vl never allow us to see a such drama in real , but you give what we want yaar... 🤗

Also you never forgot to add their usual fight scene in to this awesome chapter & must say you hit it on the right time & it made me laugh. 😃

Desperate, Impatiens, love, lust, desire.. etc etc.. every feeling you described perfectly & I felt it. It's rare to find such writers who hit the mind of the readers, but you did it. The most important thing is it's in Yuvi's POV. I'm quite comfortable reading it on Yuvi's POV than Suhani's.


Waiting for the next chapter.



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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it very hot please update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love love love love thisss!!! Omg this is sooo HAWTT!!! Mehwish!! WHAT.THE.HELL.WAS.THAT???
Amazing piece of writing!! Loved each n every word!!Thanks for updating dear!!
I love you!!
Update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago


Yuvraj's POV continued.

I let her go for a few seconds, just to see that she was ok. She was breathless and appeared nervous. She looked down shyly.

it says that he always wanted her to be okay...giving her some time to accept this...it is love

Suhani's POV:

"Not a smart move, Jhansi Ki Rani...there's really no place to run...we only have this room." He said. I looked into his eyes from across the room.

it shows how much yuvi is crazy about her

"I need my shirt. I'm cold, actually...you can just wear your wet saree or...not." He said. I was shocked by his tone.

hamara yuvi kitna cute hain...sadu with desire syndrome

"I love you..." I said. He beamed with happiness and kissed my forehead. "No divorce...?" He asked. "You're sure, right?"

it reflects how much yuvi is afraid about the divorce...the thought of divorce would have created a nightmare in yuvi's life, i think
mehwish...

altogether i can say it was a masterpiece crafted so well by a great artist







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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yanks28



Sreee thats sweet of u😳 but i would love to hear how u felt and all what parts u like etc thanks i hope im not asking for too much 😊


not at all dear...well i think now you'll be happy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg omg wow just wow 👏
This part was just perfect.. loved it totally..
No doubt it was very hott but it was deep as well 😳 loved everything even d distraction 😆 plz update soon coz this ff is ❤️ 👍🏼

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