YuvAni FF- After Realization: Part 7, P. 15 - Page 11

hey okay so i am writing this review on luck if it doesn't get posted ill give the review in inbox.

Really good update hot hot hot thank you

It's good how they are not uncomfortable with each other

Suhani is finally getting what she has been waiting for so long she should be really happy now

I hope we get to see them happy more

I like how Yuvraj was teasing Suhani

Suhani wearing Yuvraj's shirt hope we get to see this in the show as well

We need more scenes of yuvani happy alone etc

They need to spend more time alone

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see what happens next

Oh emm gee..

Originally posted by: yusu1993

hey okay so i am writing this review on luck if it doesn't get posted ill give the review in inbox.

I WOULD NOT BLAME IT TO PEOPLE WHO READ YOU WORK BECAUSE SUMMING UP YOUR FF'S INTO SOME KIND OF APPRECIATION IS NOT ENOUGH AND I MEAN IT!

just a word but STUNNING 👏

okay i dont know waisay bhi i am kind of banned but this is written sex.. you have seriously murdered us all with this sweet torture of love to read and feel it. you have written it with such dedication and such deep portrayal of something that yuvraj and suhani were holding up from so long and yet it came out beautifully . by reading it i want something any bit of your ff's to happen in the show.. BRILLIANCE 😳😳😳

I lifted her face slowly and kissed her forehead. I held her hand and kissed it. She smiled in the most heartwarming way. It's the smile I saw on her face so many times in the past year but I didn't value it half as much as I valued it now. I silently hoped that for the rest of our lives together, I'd never ever see her without it. I let her go for only a few seconds and she made a run for it.

every line was fantastic but the start itself took my heart away.. this is purity of his love make me fall for him again again and again... es i know your ff's are one of the main and biggest reason of loving them... you can make such sweet moments of the pleasure to read. the forhead kiss, her smile his wish to always see her that way .. i wish cvs learn something from you... yuvani are so real .. it feels so real reading it as if i feel i am watching an episode...

suhani's pov and her take on what yuvraj was doing to her and what you are doing to us innocent readers is like ELECTRIC SHOCKS OR TORTURING US WITH SOME KIND OF CHOCOLATES. tarpa tarpa tarpa kay dai rai ho humay yuvani ko.. eeeksss makes me blush hard... bechari suhani...

dark eyes *ingredients like this are tarka of your ff.. MIND BLOWING very realistic factor of making love 😛

"Well, I win...like I said, so...give me back my shirt."

"What?" I pushed him away but he didn't budge. He was so strong. I blushed. "Yuvraj, let me go..." I said.

"I need my shirt. I'm cold, actually...you can just wear your wet saree or...not." He said. I was shocked by his tone.

WHERE DO YOU COME UP WITH SUCH AWESOMENESS FROM????????????????????????

he seems madly wanting her..

this was too besharam of him.. i was like 😲😲😲 my smile was like plasted throught i read this part.. not even once it was gone... HATS OFF to you for pulling it amazingly..

"Well if you can't take it off, I could help you out..." He whispered.

Killed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

and yuvraj and you are back... he is such a gentlemen Superbly written ... the gist of this part is they want each other badly.. and for that you have assaulted us sexually.. i am big time feeling something just by reading it... such affects you have on me .. you are the whole and sole reason of everyone wanting this kind of yuvraj.. because he is an actual prince in your ff's .. LOVED IT

"Hope I didn't make you uncomfortable. I was just teasing you..." He said. He smiled. He was in a surprisingly confessional mood. I shook my head. "You never make me uncomfortable." I said.

awww he is love.. and she is love too.. this ff is love you are love and i am feeling loved right now...

behna you have tendency to lift up moods on a serious note.. awein mai apka kaam hazar baar ni parti... you are God gifted.. Mashallah keep torturing us with such write ups...

I moved closer to him rested my head against his chest. He held me. My heart continued to beat out of my chest. I felt a bit dizzy. I couldn't believe what was happening. I moved even closer to him until I was lying with my head completely on his chest. I could hear his heartbeat as well. Was there anything more perfect than listening to the heartbeat of the person you're head over heels in love with?

omg omg omg my dream... 😭 and fulfilled by you... you are the best... exceptionally explained feelings of suhani...

and then i won't repeat the next paragraph but i want to say that it was SEDUCTIVE, TEMPTING, ALLURING, APPEALING and MIND BOGGLING PART

Brilliantly written ... i love how you put up pov's . your work have no competition.. make me think agay kia howa hoga.. because this is like super killing curiosity for me...

it was pleasurelicious lol thats not even a word but jazbaat ko samjh wala part.. 👏

everytime you make me think aur kia bolo because jo bhi bolu wo kafi ni hai.. but you understand me na behna... love you for this .. you make his flirticious and horny... and gentlemen and everything... how can you handle writing him that way... well i want your tabsra on her back and his fascination about it... 😳

i am ASTOUNDED by the way you write..

MASHALLAH TO you.. and my nahhh our yuvani are choco lava cake in your ff ... eeksss

update soon...

Originally posted by: rerose

Wow ,I don't have any words to speak,I am speechless dr Mehwish ,pls update soon,waiting for it.

thanks but next time plz do tell me a sentence or two about what u liked or disliked. it would mean a lot to me. thanks

Originally posted by: whiteMagic

Wow.. ⭐️
Yuvraaj asking 4 his shirt was so 😉 😳 😳
Waiting eagerly 4 ur nxt update 😊

thanks

Originally posted by: sreelovesindia

mehwish...hold on

i am looking for my dictionary to describe it...

Sreee thats sweet of u😳 but i would love to hear how u felt and all what parts u like etc thanks i hope im not asking for too much 😊

Originally posted by: ssowmi

wowww 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

no words 😊

wonderful 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Hi & thanks 😊😊

Originally posted by: yusu1993

hey okay so i am writing this review on luck if it doesn't get posted ill give the review in inbox.

I WOULD NOT BLAME IT TO PEOPLE WHO READ YOU WORK BECAUSE SUMMING UP YOUR FF'S INTO SOME KIND OF APPRECIATION IS NOT ENOUGH AND I MEAN IT!

just a word but STUNNING 👏

okay i dont know waisay bhi i am kind of banned but this is written sex.. you have seriously murdered us all with this sweet torture of love to read and feel it. you have written it with such dedication and such deep portrayal of something that yuvraj and suhani were holding up from so long and yet it came out beautifully . by reading it i want something any bit of your ff's to happen in the show.. BRILLIANCE 😳😳😳

I lifted her face slowly and kissed her forehead. I held her hand and kissed it. She smiled in the most heartwarming way. It's the smile I saw on her face so many times in the past year but I didn't value it half as much as I valued it now. I silently hoped that for the rest of our lives together, I'd never ever see her without it. I let her go for only a few seconds and she made a run for it.

every line was fantastic but the start itself took my heart away.. this is purity of his love make me fall for him again again and again... es i know your ff's are one of the main and biggest reason of loving them... you can make such sweet moments of the pleasure to read. the forhead kiss, her smile his wish to always see her that way .. i wish cvs learn something from you... yuvani are so real .. it feels so real reading it as if i feel i am watching an episode...

suhani's pov and her take on what yuvraj was doing to her and what you are doing to us innocent readers is like ELECTRIC SHOCKS OR TORTURING US WITH SOME KIND OF CHOCOLATES. tarpa tarpa tarpa kay dai rai ho humay yuvani ko.. eeeksss makes me blush hard... bechari suhani...

dark eyes *ingredients like this are tarka of your ff.. MIND BLOWING very realistic factor of making love 😛

"Well, I win...like I said, so...give me back my shirt."

"What?" I pushed him away but he didn't budge. He was so strong. I blushed. "Yuvraj, let me go..." I said.

"I need my shirt. I'm cold, actually...you can just wear your wet saree or...not." He said. I was shocked by his tone.

WHERE DO YOU COME UP WITH SUCH AWESOMENESS FROM????????????????????????

he seems madly wanting her..

this was too besharam of him.. i was like 😲😲😲 my smile was like plasted throught i read this part.. not even once it was gone... HATS OFF to you for pulling it amazingly..

"Well if you can't take it off, I could help you out..." He whispered.

Killed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

and yuvraj and you are back... he is such a gentlemen Superbly written ... the gist of this part is they want each other badly.. and for that you have assaulted us sexually.. i am big time feeling something just by reading it... such affects you have on me .. you are the whole and sole reason of everyone wanting this kind of yuvraj.. because he is an actual prince in your ff's .. LOVED IT

"Hope I didn't make you uncomfortable. I was just teasing you..." He said. He smiled. He was in a surprisingly confessional mood. I shook my head. "You never make me uncomfortable." I said.

awww he is love.. and she is love too.. this ff is love you are love and i am feeling loved right now...

behna you have tendency to lift up moods on a serious note.. awein mai apka kaam hazar baar ni parti... you are God gifted.. Mashallah keep torturing us with such write ups...

I moved closer to him rested my head against his chest. He held me. My heart continued to beat out of my chest. I felt a bit dizzy. I couldn't believe what was happening. I moved even closer to him until I was lying with my head completely on his chest. I could hear his heartbeat as well. Was there anything more perfect than listening to the heartbeat of the person you're head over heels in love with?

omg omg omg my dream... 😭 and fulfilled by you... you are the best... exceptionally explained feelings of suhani...

and then i won't repeat the next paragraph but i want to say that it was SEDUCTIVE, TEMPTING, ALLURING, APPEALING and MIND BOGGLING PART

Brilliantly written ... i love how you put up pov's . your work have no competition.. make me think agay kia howa hoga.. because this is like super killing curiosity for me...

it was pleasurelicious lol thats not even a word but jazbaat ko samjh wala part.. 👏

everytime you make me think aur kia bolo because jo bhi bolu wo kafi ni hai.. but you understand me na behna... love you for this .. you make his flirticious and horny... and gentlemen and everything... how can you handle writing him that way... well i want your tabsra on her back and his fascination about it... 😳

i am ASTOUNDED by the way you write..

MASHALLAH TO you.. and my nahhh our yuvani are choco lava cake in your ff ... eeksss

update soon...

your review made me blush 😛 pleasure to read & thanks for expressing everything u felt so well and making me smile.😃

Originally posted by: rbb1

Really good update hot hot hot thank you

It's good how they are not uncomfortable with each other

Suhani is finally getting what she has been waiting for so long she should be really happy now

I hope we get to see them happy more

I like how Yuvraj was teasing Suhani

Suhani wearing Yuvraj's shirt hope we get to see this in the show as well

We need more scenes of yuvani happy alone etc

They need to spend more time alone

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see what happens next

u write short & cute posts but long reviews , love u for that. 😃