YuvAni FF: Separated (both POVs) part 7. p17 End+note - Page 6

This Vikram is boiling my blood too. Gosh seriously Suhani hugged him back. This is just not done. My heart was crying thinking of Yuvraj. Poor, jealous Yuvraj is just too HOT. I just loved loved loved his POV and jealousy though I was feeling sad for him. Oh wow you made him shower 😳 I'm visualizing...

OMG he is ordering Suhani that Vikram should take care of his hands 😆 total husbandish hon. Good that Bhavna was there to take her home coz that over friendly Vikram is so annoying creature. I think I'm also jealous of him touching my cup cake's princess.

@Suhani's annoying coworker 🤣 Tusssiii great ho Appi for making Yuvraj burn like this. This Anjali and Vikram are just hankering after these two hoties 😆

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Just Awesome as usual 😃 I'm waiting for the next part. Really can't believe you are behaving like rajabeta's sister 😡 Just total wrong timing to stop the chapter...Please please please update soon 😔

Originally posted by: anita_m

Beautifully written, and very, very satisfying. I got to read 2 parts together, too. My Like buttons not working again, so I'll have to Like later, but I really love it and can barely wait for more.
So much better than watching SSEL right now.

thanks Anita 😊

Originally posted by: yusramazhar1

i never thought keh yeh din kabhi aye ga...

because i am going to vent my appalled emotions behna..

you have betrayed me..

i am hurt !

WHAT IN THE WORLD MADE YOU STOP ???????

what exactly you want me to do?

you want me dead??

seriously behna if i would die..

its a big loss you will face in your life...

aisay point pay ku roka where my dude was about to blast suhani..

you made her hug him back...

ughhh i wanna shout ... eee

mar gai

mit gai

lutt gai

barbaad hogai

i am frustrated on that vikram i hate him to the core ...

all the points where he was mentioned was like a sword you were passing through me...

"our room"

whenever yuvraj mentioned their room ... was like the sweetest thing to read in this separation titled... huh...

One of my coworkers really wants to see you again dude, I mean...you know what I mean?" He laughed.

Now which coworker was this? "Who?"

"The one with the short hair...Anjali..."

Well that wasn't the answer I was hoping to hear.

this part though...

he is so hopeful..

and you crumbled his and my hopes...

Vikram was sitting next to Suhani and I wasn't. Nothing felt right. I felt my temperature rising. I was sweating even with the air-conditioning on. The movie started. I couldn't even text Suhani. I was completely uncomfortable. These were the kinds of situations when I needed Sharad the most. He was the only one who could keep me calm under such circumstances. I couldn't pinpoint the exact emotion I was feeling. It was something like what I felt whenever someone touched my things without my permission, but a whole lot worse. It was more consuming. I don't know which movie I watched and when it ended. I kept trying to look over Vikram's shoulder and in fact his entire presence just to see Suhani.

the H.A.W.T.N.E.S.S begins...

the description over here was totally out class...

i could very well picture that scene where he slaps the chair and turned the AC temperature up and than went under the shower...

i felt his face was letting out the heat and he wanted to just blow away that idiotic vikrams skull...

very well done 👏

"Are you ok? Hope you didn't trip again." He smiled while looking into her eyes.

"I was here, watching her...trust me, she didn't trip." I answered him. Vikram smiled again. He sure did smile a lot, but something about him just rubbed me the wrong way tonight.

pun not intended at all.. just highlighting it... 😉

the sarcasm in him speaks highly when the matters concerns to suhani..

i love you for making suhani as yuvraj's existence whole and sole issue...

the way you write is like gravity pulling things towards it..

one line i am like quit it yush and other line i am like go ahead read it.. it seems like something big big big

trust me there were points i wanted to just shut my laptop off and go back to fb.. but than immediately there was stuff about yuvraj i felt pulled to..

the best yuvraj descriptions of what he feels , how he thinks, what he does are by you.. literally its so real that you highlight his face expressions ...

big claps for it ... ( you are just a yuvraj person baby... *my second yuvraj )

I eyed Suhani. She looked away. I smirked. She was jealous. I smiled at Anjali and gave her my number. She missed called me and told me to save hers. I saved it as "Suhani's annoying coworker", but Suhani looked hurt. I had the right to do at least this much if she wasn't going to wear her mangal sutra or sindhoor, and if this guy who was my friend was going to put his arm around her at every chance he got.

it made me laugh.. good one my dude ! she deserves that for not wearing mangalsutra and sindoor.. i mean usnay yuvraj ki nishaniyo ko ni pehna... how can she... so i am with you yuvi ... just grab her and put sindoor in her mang.. and tell her yeh mazak nahi hai... handle your corporate stuff as you like but donot ever think to remove them... huh

"You can leave now..." She said, as if it had been a burden on me to stand there with her for a few minutes. I was hurt by her tone.

"Yeah, I'll leave...I guess you would have preferred Vikram's company." I said. She looked stunned.

"Whatever it is, just try to make sure he keeps his hands off you. It's not professional." I said.

laugh my ass off

and did that little oppa gungum dance yo ... op op op

bola humara bossy husband...

i truly love this in the show too where he quite suhani because sometime nahhh not sometime but everytime she never listens to him... so he sometimes asks her to STOP ...

i love you babie for this particular portion...

somtimes i feel you are meant to be loved..

waise i won't be a bitch just because you wrote a separation ff i am saying so..

but you are just meant to be loved..

long live behna

i believe in you..

hyper talented rockstar ff writer.. ⭐️ 😎

super star behna...

i can sing now.. meri behna superstar meri behna superstar mai fan hui inki la la la la

I went back home and felt like breaking everything in sight. For the first time in my life, I felt like going to a bar and getting drunk. I needed a release. I needed an escape from the fire burning within me.

freaking hot behna. these line can explain so much..

i got somewhere else...

not the somewhere you will think

its something else...

My blood boiled thinking of all this. The next day was uneventful. It was an off day. I called Suhani and she told me she was still staying with Bhavna. A few days later, I told her to meet me after work. I waited outside her office building. She came out and Vikram was by her side. MY eyes widened at the sight. He touched her arm every now and then and was animatedly telling her something. She nodded. He side hugged her and she hugged him back lightly, and then he left. I waited for him to disappear before I drove closer to the building. Suhani saw the car and came forward. I opened the door and she got in.

disheartened

in dismay..

you killed me

and i HATE YOU..

for two reasons..

the hug suhani returned to that son of a b****

and for stopping...

please update

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YOU SLAYED IT

YOU ARE GIFTED

I AM FEELING CONSUMED NOW..

I MAY VENT IT OUT ON ANOTHER VM ...

BUT

YOU WERE

STUPENDO FANTABULOUSLY FANTASTIC ...

ITS CLASSIC..

BUT THAT DOESN'T ME MEAN THAT URGE TO KILL YOU HAS DIED...

INBOX MAI MILOOO 😡

hayeee mardala..

can't wait for further now

but please meray emotions kay sath khelo mat.. don't make suhani hug him back again please .. i am feeling low now

Thanks for the love mixed in the the emotional pain u feel bec I separated YuvAni but still u read it even though its not easy for u to read such thinks so love u for that. Lol u can kill me in my mail box any time. 😳😃

Originally posted by: divyareddy123

mehwu darling super super super ff 👏👏👏..you did it again

so many favourites are there in this ff,seperation ,suhani removed her mangalsutra,she z working outside,jealous track for both of them oh my god its awesome..i just loved the jealous one

yuvi jealous about vikram its really super "Whatever it is, just try to make sure he keeps his hands off you. It's not professional .wow yuvi burning in jealous😆😆

mehwu a big yuvi walla hug for u🤗

my phone got some problem dat mobile data connection was not working and gave laptop for some repair so i didnt read ff..today when i firast came here i opened ur ff its lovely how i missed it yaar

waiting for the romance to begin😉😉

Thanks Divya glad u got to read it and commented and u read multiple parts at one so more fun for u , thanks for the lovely comment 😳⭐️

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

samn u updated 2 parts already!!!!


part 2

everytime suhani tells him he doesnt love her i expect that cartoon to say sumthing rather than keeping quiet,atleast say give me sometime n wait for me.ill be there just like u are suhani


kuch toh bolo yuvi bhaiyya :(


movie date sounds so much fun ;)

thanks babe for commenting on both parts. i miss u so much dont worry Yuvi will open his mouth eventually 😉

Originally posted by: Zainy21

This part was so funny though 😆

Please post the next part quickly !!😳

It was a nice distraction to just sit with her and forget everything I was feeling.

Awww, perfect example of Mother - Son bonding 😳

I went to our room

#feels ☺️ I swear this gave me feels ☺️ I wish he just says in the show... Our room ❤️

One of my coworkers really wants to see you again dude, I mean...you know what I mean

🤣 And there is Yuvraj thinking he means Suhani. When will he learn

I'd only end up thinking of and missing Suhani desperately,

Yuvraj Bhaiyaa, Tum show mein aise kyun nahi soch sakte ??!! When I thought of this actually happening in the show I was like 😎

she met my eyes with an unreadable expression.

Haiyee, this line is so expressive 👏

I needed Sharad the most.

I loved this line soo much. He was missing Sharad ❤️

I couldn't pinpoint the exact emotion

Arrey Vaaah ! Yuvi Bhaiyaa is feeling a new emotion, Vaah 👏😛

I don't know which movie I watched and when it ended.

I smiled like no other on this line, He doesnt even know what movie he came to see 😆

Suhani tripped on someone's foot and Vikram caught her hand and steadied her

LOL. I can imagine Yuvraj's face

Suhani looked at me as she steadied herself.

I can imagine Suhani expression here, all shyyy 😳😉

(I really hope you understand my banter cause if not then...😕😆)

"What is your problem?"

Darrrling thats what we are trying to figure out !!🤢

"Are you ok? Hope you didn't trip again." He smiled while looking into her eyes

Romance he romance chal raha hai yahan 😉😛

Was I jealous of him?

YESSS😡

I smirked. She was jealous.

YESSS She is also jealous☺️

Suhani's annoying coworker

🤣👏

Seeing her sad tore my insides up and I moved a few inches closer to her, protectively, to shield her from anything on the outside, even if I couldn't heal the wounds she had within.

OMGGG #Feelslikenoother ☺️

Her husband drove her there

Did you forget her husbands name ?

I needed an escape from the fire burning within me. I was furious. I was livid.

HAWWWTTT☺️

He side hugged her and she hugged him back lightly,

This was a masterpiece !! Post quickly !!⭐️

I also want him to call it our room on the show 😳 im glad u found it funny , im always adding subtle humor and sarcasm and Yuvraj is usually internally shitting on everyone 😆 ahha yeah i forgot Bhavna's husband's name anyway who ever remembers him anyway? 😆 Loved the parts that gave u feels thanks for pointing them out to me...and yes she hugged him back execute me now 😆😆 im sorry i made her do it but i did 😛 im a mean writer

Originally posted by: SM.Lopa

This Vikram is boiling my blood too. Gosh seriously Suhani hugged him back. This is just not done. My heart was crying thinking of Yuvraj. Poor, jealous Yuvraj is just too HOT. I just loved loved loved his POV and jealousy though I was feeling sad for him. Oh wow you made him shower 😳 I'm visualizing...

OMG he is ordering Suhani that Vikram should take care of his hands 😆 total husbandish hon. Good that Bhavna was there to take her home coz that over friendly Vikram is so annoying creature. I think I'm also jealous of him touching my cup cake's princess.

@Suhani's annoying coworker 🤣 Tusssiii great ho Appi for making Yuvraj burn like this. This Anjali and Vikram are just hankering after these two hoties 😆

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Just Awesome as usual 😃 I'm waiting for the next part. Really can't believe you are behaving like rajabeta's sister 😡 Just total wrong timing to stop the chapter...Please please please update soon 😔

lol ur visualizing him shower u naughty girl 😆😉 and rajabeta's sister how dare u?😡😆 basically both are burning now and im hurting u all in the process too muahahahha *evil laugh*

Part 4:

I was feeling that same searing sensation in the middle of my chest. I tried to control my anger. I didn't want to take it out on her, but I definitely felt like hurting someone. I kept a straight face but my eyes must have given away my digust.

"Is everything ok?" Suhani asked me, gently.

"Yeah." I replied.

"So why did you want to meet up today?" She asked. She was in a pleasant mood. That irked me. Why did she seem so relaxed and happy? Was it because of him? I nearly bit my tongue. She touched my arm and brought me back to reality.

"Oh, um...I just wanted to meet. Can't I meet you without having any particular reason?" I asked her. She didn't accept that answer.

"You seem upset. Is everything ok?" She wasn't going to give up.

"I'm fine. How are you? How's work? How are uncle and aunty?"

"Everything's fine." She said. Then she looked down. I noticed a change in her expression. "Work isn't exactly how I imagined it..." She said.

"What do you mean?"

"I don't know...I mean, I thought it would be harder. I anticipated more duties."

He answer seemed strange. "You don't have enough work?"

"Yeah, sometimes when I feel like I'm going to be given a specific task...it ends up going to Vikram." She said.

Just hearing that name made me feel like vomiting. I knew it; this Vikram guy was fishy as heck. "But he's in the marketing department, Suhani...and you're in the communications department."

"He says he has no fixed position yet. We're all on probation at the moment. None of us are permanent. He does a lot of tasks which would normally come my way.

"Did you talk to your boss?"

"He's never around." She said.

"Anyone below him?"

"Yeah, he said that I was doing just fine."

"Oh, he's not friends with this Vikram guy, is he?"

"He is. Everyone's friends with him." She laughed. "Anyway, forget it...we have a meeting tomorrow and my boss will be there. I'll talk to him." She said.

"Make sure you do."

"I will." She promised.

"Suhani, can I ask you something?"

"Yes."

"If someone's really controlling, would you take it?"

"No, of course not, but who are you talking about?"

"I could be wrong, but there's something really amiss about this Vikram guy. I didn't notice it before but it's there...something about him is so off. I don't like it." I said.

"But he's your friend."

"Yes, but...he's not like my best friend. He's not like Sharad." I said. "Can you promise me something, Suhani?"

"Yes". She said.

"If there's anything wrong, if Vikram bothers you, you won't hide it from me." I said. "Promise me..."

She seemed confused. She slowly nodded her head and frowned. "I don't think he's a bad guy..."

"I'm not saying he is, but, as your..." I paused. "But as your husband, I have the right to ask you to at least keep tabs on him." I said.

She nodded. "So, where are we going?" She asked. She seemed hesitant somehow. She seemed cautious and worried. I wished I could read her mind.

"We're going for dinner..." I said. I smiled. She smiled back. I felt lighter for the moment. I took her to a restaurant and we had dinner together. I was lost in my thoughts throughout. Something about Vikram was beginning to alarm me. I didn't want Suhani to be left alone with him. Suhani didn't talk but I knew she was watching my grim expressions. Time passed by far too quickly. In the middle of dinner I got a call from our office that there was a problem with the shipment of one of our products. God only knew what had happened this time. I sighed in frustration because it meant I had to cut dinner short. Suhani looked concerned. She touched my hand.

"What happened?"

"There's some problem at the factory. I have to go, since Bhaiyya is out of town and Anuj just got home. I need to go. Come, I'll drop you home." I said. I took her hand and pulled her behind me as we walked out of the restaurant. I stopped when she stopped me.

"Yuvraj, I think you should go there now, I'll go home in a cab."

"No way, I'm taking you home." I said.

"But, you'll be late. This sounds like a serious issue..." She said. She had a point but I wasn't in the mood to listen.

"I'm driving you home and that's final."

"Yuvraj, my house and the factory are in two different directions. There's going to be traffic. You'll be late. It's dangerous..." She gave that worried expression.

"Then come with me. Let's go to the factory together." I said. She was surprised.

"C'mon Suhani, I'll drop you home on the way back." I said. She agreed. I was relieved. We drove there and I cleared up the mess which was due to some paperwork being missing, and then we headed back. We drove in silence. When I reached her house, I stopped the car. I couldn't stay quiet anymore.

"How much longer will this continue?" I asked.

"What will continue?"

"How much longer will you stay here?"

She didn't reply. Her eyes welled up with tears.

"Suhani, it's going to be a month tomorrow, enough. Come back home." I said.

"No..." She shook her head. She was crying now. I tried holding her hand and she pulled away and opened the door and left. I went behind her and stopped her. I held her arms and brought her closer.

"Calm down..." I said, gently. I held her face. She was crying. "Suhani, I'm sorry for everything. I'm sorry for all the pain I've caused you." I said. I meant it.

"No, don't apologize. Yuvraj..." She paused. She was crying so hard now that she couldn't speak. "There's no need to apologize for one sided love. My story is the story of unrequited love. This is how it's supposed to feel." She said. "It's supposed to hurt and I'm supposed to be crying. Nothing here is amiss." She said.

I hugged her tightly and she hugged me back. Suddenly having her in my arms triggered a storm of emotions. I recalled the way Vikram kept touching her, as if it was no big deal. How dare he touch her like that? Recalling every time I'd seen her with him frustrated me. I pressed myself against Suhani. I hugged her more tightly. I didn't want to let her go. She was mine. I felt this wild urge to take her somewhere far, far away from all our problems, somewhere I could be with her, alone. If I had every right to hold her, then how could any other man lay his fingers on her? She was mine, wholly mine. I rubbed her back and buried my face against her neck.

My breathing accelerated. She was holding on tightly to me as well. The wild urge to have her made it impossible even to stand. I wanted to take her away. For the first time ever, I couldn't imagine anything better than being with her and having her in my arms. All sorts of desires unveiled themselves in my mind. My hands dropped to her waist and her hips. For a second or two, I let myself imagine what it would be like if we could be one. Our noses touched. She stepped back and looked at me. She immediately lowered her gaze. "I love you." She whispered. Then she turned around and left. I heard her lock the door.