YuvAni FF- Mixed POVs- Home Sweet Home- Part 3, P.6 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
WAAH!!! What a YuvAni slumber you have left me in
"Careful there..." He said. He pulled me closer and I was stunned. With one finger under my chin, he lifted my face and met my gaze. "What happened? Are you worried someone may challenge your position in the kitchen?"

This makes me feel like i am in suhani's position and this happening to me😳

I have goosebumps all over, This is my halat once i read your FF☺️(even a tiny paragraph of it)
If Yuvraj was like this in the show then by God i would go crazy🤪


"Um, kids are great...I don't know how many I'd like to have...but I wouldn't mind having a girl, since I grew up with brothers. Boys, there were a lot of boys around..." I said. I finished speaking and looked down at my plate again and prayed they'd spare probing me any further.


Haiyee, our Yuvraj wants a mini suhani The thought of their baby girl just puts a smile on my face that i cannot control. And that smile is making my family think i am a complete weirdo as they think i am just smiling randomly😉

I think you should be a writer Mehwish, you have a great imagination and expertise... your books would be sold out within a week, especially if you write as amazingly as this!!👏👏

Yuvraj was so caring in this FF that it me feel all warm inside😳
With the dumb/jerkRaj that is wondering about in SSEL right now, i just dont know how you do it??

Great FF Mehwish and as Elita said, I am gonna finish this FF in my dreams😉

(first time i have written a review😕, hope you like it😃)



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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Yanks, you are soo--ooo good. I wish the serial would just adopt your FFs. Here we are starving for something that you serve up while the cvs are still doing the old dragaroo.
Thank you. Helps to have this to go on with while the situation in the serial is not so great.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
I am falling for this yuvraj😉😉 n yuvani all over again.. Sweet and very positive FF.. Please keep it that way till end..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Wow amazing I cannot wait to read the next part please post it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
RESSS will probably edit in two days. The story is defo sweet <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
whats your problem u cnt end there hw mean lol what an awesome chapter i loved it i cnt wait for the next chapter this chapter should not have ended
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Its lovely once again..
Yuvi wanting baby girl gave me goosebumps...the thought itself is awesome...and omg !!!! he is staying over in her place
loved the update very much and please don't stop here...we want more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Wow simply awesome I am in luv with your FF .pls continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Again, STELLAR, STELLAR and STELLAR! 👏👏⭐️⭐️

I actually felt like I was on a walk through that busy bazaar with YuvAni. The mood of the chapter was so idyllic and leisurely. 😳 Perfect Sunday reading.

I noticed his discomfort at being introduced to so many people he had never met before. One of Mummy's friends kept me occupied for an especially long time, discussing all matters from her health, to her children, to her grandchildren. Yuvraj waited patiently but appeared fidgety. He switched his weight from one leg to another. I smiled internally. I excused myself and we left for the market. I was used to bargaining with the street vendors. They knew me well. Yuvraj carried the bags and didn't complain.

A descriptive walk. I could imagine Suhani walking ahead purposefully and Yuvraj tagging along. It was lovely to see him out of his element, but still making an effort to fit into and understand her world. 😳 Finally, he sees how Suhani lived before she got married to him and gets a glimpse into her life. I liked how he was intent on helping wifey out.

"Let me try to help you, please..." He said in a soft voice. I nodded. He sounded sincere and whenever I turned him down, he looked so dejected.
Seeing this helpful side of him was surprisingly sweet and very irresistible.

"Tada!" He said He smiled triumphantly. I clapped. "Wow, Yuvraj Birla, Masterchef India..."

So, he wants to help her out, huh? 😉😉 Looks like he just wanted to be around her and needed an excuse. I loved that he wanted to help her out. Such a heart-warming idea. The visual of hubby and wife working together in the kitchen sends tingles up my arms. Suhani appreciated him despite his slow speed. I appreciate that because I can't say that I'm much better than him, lol. 😆

That little moment they had after that made my heart pitter-patter. ☺️ Every time he is tender with her and initiates contact on his own, I swoon. Wish we saw this Yuvraj on SSEL. 😭

"Careful there..." He said. He pulled me closer and I was stunned. With one finger under my chin, he lifted my face and met my gaze. "What happened? Are you worried someone may challenge your position in the kitchen?"

I tried suppressing a smile. He was still holding my arm tightly. Something about the way he held me was so different. Our faces were just a few inches apart. I attempted to hide my desperate desire to express my love for him. I wanted nothing more than to hug him right now. I wanted to kiss him, just once, and I wouldn't ask for anything else ever again. My heart ached and my fingers twitched. Months of love and yearning surfaced. I felt my eyes moistening. My throat tightened. His eyes seemed to mirror a similar desperation, but I couldn't be sure.

Huh? What? System overload! 🐷 Why do you do this to us? 😆😆 Mehwish, you will give us all a heart attack some day, lol. Such a tender moment. I have tingles, all because of YOU! I think I more desperate than her, lol. My heart ached along with hers. 😳😳 She has such deep emotions.

"Um, kids are great...I don't know how many I'd like to have...but I wouldn't mind having a girl, since I grew up with brothers. Boys, there were a lot of boys around..." I said. I finished speaking and looked down at my plate again and prayed they'd spare probing me any further.

Suhani was asked the same question.

"I want a boy and a girl..." She said. I never knew what she wanted because we'd never discussed it. I looked at her and she met my gaze. I smiled. She smiled back.
OKAY! Dinner! Can I just say it was a scrumptious one? 😉 That uncle brought up kids, lol. 😉😉 What an uncle. Poor young married couples, no respite for them. 😆 All the teasing brought out their real wishes and I liked how Yuvi said he wanted a girl! YES YES YES! AHHH! You killed me with that. ⭐️⭐️ Suhani's wish- I approve. I adored how he realised he never knew what she wanted and his small smile of satisfaction.

"Yuvraj, the power goes out at night. It's hot...we don't have an air conditioner. There will be mosquitos too...if we open the windows. Where will you sleep? My room is small, my bed is small, and my bathroom is small."

She doubted me. She had very low expectations of me. To her, I was this rich guy who lacked any patience or ability to adapt to my surroundings, or to accept a different lifestyle. I couldn't blame her. This surely wasn't an environment I was used to living in, but I could change. I could try, I could adapt, I could do it all for her, just to be with her.

Such a sweet scene.😳 Her concern for him was laced with some dismissive attitude too. She didn't think he had it in him and he wanted to prove her wrong. I like that Yuvi is trying to change some of her notions about him. If that's not love, I don't know what is. ❤️ SSEL writers, just copy Mehwu, if nothing else. 😆

Suhani came out of the bathroom and dried her hair with a towel. She was wearing a thin cotton saree, in light blue. She had never worn a saree to bed before.

"Will you be comfortable in that?" I asked. She nodded. Well, it's not like I'd mind her wearing a saree to bed. She came to bed and that's when I realized how much smaller this bed was compared to our bed back home. When we both lay down, our shoulders touched. We both turned and faced one another.

*AHEM* Can we have some romantic music? 😳😳😳 I think we have some romance coming up, what say? I am waiting for the bonanza that is gonna follow this cliffhanger! BADUMBADUM!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3:

"Are you going to be able to sleep through the night with just a fan on?" Suhani asked.

"You don't expect me to and therefore I most certainly will." I said.

"Just to prove me wrong?" She asked.

"Of course, my only pleasure in life is proving you wrong." I smirked. She rolled her eyes.

"That's been obvious from the start." She said.

"You're ready to bite me, aren't you?" I said. It pissed her off even more and she shifted in the opposite direction.

"Is this how you're going to treat me after I helped you cut all those vegetables perfectly, making sure they're all the right size and all their skin has been removed? I even got a cut." I said. She turned and faced me.

"Show me the cut..." She said. I extended my hand and she looked for the cut.

"There's no cut, you liar..." She said. I laughed. She smiled.

Suhani's POV-

He was being a big baby. He wanted my attention. It pleased me to no end, but it also baffled me. What brought him here? Why couldn't he return home? I knew that he was aware that I didn't need his help. A part of me felt like he couldn't stay without me, but it was hard to be sure. He was such an enigma in so many ways. Sometimes I felt like I knew him perfectly well, and other times, it felt like I'd hardly scratched the surface of his personality. Nevertheless, lying next to him, so close that I could feel his breath land on my face when he exhaled, seeing him smiling this way, and knowing that he was willing to bear the conditions he wasn't used to, just to stay with me, was enough to make me love him twice as much as I already did.

Our eyes locked. I searched into the depths of his eyes, wishing to know the person he hid from me. I wanted to draw that Yuvraj out of him but I couldn't. He blinked and the trance was broken. The power went off then, like I had predicted. I sighed.

"Wow..." Yuvraj smiled. I got up and opened the windows. "Get ready for the mosquitos." I said. "Don't say I didn't warn you..."I cautioned him. He shrugged. "Bring on the buzzing creatures..." He grinned.

I went back to bed. Yuvraj threw aside the sheets. We wouldn't need any covers tonight. It was hot and getting hotter with the fan off. He slapped his elbow.

"Ouch! Damn it..." He muttered. I laughed. "Told you..." I said. He stared at me. He was focused on my right arm, and before I knew it, he slapped it.

"Yuvraj!"

"Got it. It's dead..." He said. He pointed to the dead mosquito on my arm. I flicked it away.

"Will you continue this all night?"

"Well, I'm your husband, so if any mosquitos try sucking your blood, I'll have to protect you from them." He joked.

"They're all hovering around you. I think you have sweet blood. Mummy says they're attracted to people whose blood smells sweet."

"I don't even eat sweets." He said. We continued bickering over nonsense, and the room became hotter. Sweat formulated on Yuvraj's forehead. I wiped it away. He got up and took his shirt off and threw it away angrily.

"Much better...He said. He was lying next to me shirtless. I found it impossible not to stare.

"How come you're not sweating?" He eyed me. He grabbed my hand. I pulled away. "I have tolerance for the heat, you don't..."

"I haven't complained, have I? If I had such low tolerance, I would be complaining." He said. He faced me and inched closer. Heat radiated off his skin. I reached for and touched his face. He grabbed my hand and held it. I squeezed it, he squeezed back. Both of us remained silent and I was sure his expressions of caution and anticipation mirrored my own. I moved closer to him and he lay on his back. I rested my head against his shoulder and placed my hand on his chest. I closed my eyes. This was enough for now.

He held me. He placed his hand over mine. He touched my hair. I kept my eyes closed because just feeling his skin against mines was too much for me to take. I didn't know how to respond. I was scared to respond because I didn't want to do anything which would lead to an end of my present state of bliss. I was stunned when he grazed my arm with the back of his hand. Was he checking to see if I was ready? Was he testing himself?

I felt his hand on my waist, which was bare since I was wearing a saree. I didn't move but I gasped. He caressed my skin with the tips of his fingers. His hand moved to my back. I opened my eyes. I moved closer to him and buried my face against his neck.

Yuvraj's POV-

What the hell was I doing? I had to stop. I held her and closed my eyes. I regained my senses. I rubbed her back. She slowly rose a few minutes later and I wondered if I had upset her, so I stopped her. She hovered over me and our noses touched. I cupped her cheek. I swallowed hard. Her hair fell over me and I moved it aside. She lowered herself and we kissed. She was in my arms immediately. Her hands were against my chest. I was out of my mind for taking my shirt off. We kissed and I just couldn't get enough of her soft, wet and warm kisses which didn't start or stop at my lips. She kissed my shoulders.

I didn't want to stop her because that would give her the impression that I didn't like it, and I did. I loved it. I took a hold of her and got up. I noticed how beautiful she looked. Her hair was still damp. Her pallu was on the edge of her shoulder, and an inch of movement would have pulled it down. I grabbed the corner of it tugged on it, and it dropped. She pulled back but I didn't let go. She smiled and lay down again. I propped myself up on my elbow and looked at her face. I still held the corner of her pallu in my hand. She kept trying to pull it away but failed. She smiled and I smiled back. I leaned in and kissed her cheek. We held hands and embraced. She fell asleep in my arms and that's how we remained for the rest of the night.

I woke up with my arms around her waist. Her back was pressed against me. We were totally sandwiched together. She was still sleeping. My arm was around her waist but she was holding my hand. Her grip was loose but if I tried to pull away, she would wake up. There was a clock on the table beside me. It was 9am. I was still contemplating getting out of bed when Suhani slowly got out of bed. I grabbed her by her elbow and pulled her back into my arms. She ended up in my lap.

Suhani's POV-

I was in his lap and his hands were around my waist. I tried breaking free of his hold but he was too strong.

"Yuvraj..." I said. My heart was beating out of my chest. I felt a surge of desire in the pit of my stomach. Why was he doing this to me? I looked into his eyes and he smiled. His eyes had a naughty glint, a slight twinkle which I'd never seen before. His hands were locked around my waist and I tried pushing them away.

"Oh, stop that...I'm not letting you go anywhere..." He said. He still sounded slightly sleepy. He rested his forehead against my shoulder. Every pore on my skin was aware of his presence and his touch. I felt his strong hands on my body, and I absorbed his masculine scent. He held my chin and I turned and looked at him.

"Good morning..." He said, groggily, his eyes barely open.

"You're still sleepy and your eyes are barely open..." I said. I wanted to kiss him. He closed his eyes and his grip loosened, and I used to opportunity to hug him completely. He hugged me back and fell backwards, and his head landed on the pillow. I was on top of him now, against his bare chest.

"If you're still tired, you may continue sleeping..." I said.

He shook his head. "No...I'm ok..."

"Ok, well...I'm going to freshen up and make breakfast for everyone...I'll see you in a few minutes." I said. I kissed his cheek and left.


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