YuvAni FF- Mixed POVs- Home Sweet Home- Part 3, P.6 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woah.
Wow.
WTH!

I'm sorry, but I might just have to leave this review blank, 'cause you have me speechless. 😆😉

Another super se upar, SIXER effort from you! 👏👏⭐️⭐️

You just unleashed a volcano of passion and unrestrained desire. Again, if I were to compare it to food, I felt like I was eating a sinful Dairy Milk Silk. ☺️ I just came apart- like a ball of yarn. GENIUS!

"Are you going to be able to sleep through the night with just a fan on?" Suhani asked.

"You don't expect me to and therefore I most certainly will." I said.

"Just to prove me wrong?" She asked.

"Of course, my only pleasure in life is proving you wrong." I smirked. She rolled her eyes.

Wouldn't expect anything else from these two, hehe. I loved Suhani's feisty nature here. She was in no mood to deal with his ribbing. 😆 Also loved Yuvraj's verve to prove her wrong and show her that he can survive in any kind of an environment- for her. 😳

"Is this how you're going to treat me after I helped you cut all those vegetables perfectly, making sure they're all the right size and all their skin has been removed? I even got a cut." I said.
Hahah. Liar, Liar, pants on fire! 😆😆 What an attention-seeking brat.

He was being a big baby. He wanted my attention. It pleased me to no end, but it also baffled me. What brought him here? Why couldn't he return home? I knew that he was aware that I didn't need his help. A part of me felt like he couldn't stay without me, but it was hard to be sure. He was such an enigma in so many ways. Sometimes I felt like I knew him perfectly well, and other times, it felt like I'd hardly scratched the surface of his personality. Nevertheless, lying next to him, so close that I could feel his breath land on my face when he exhaled, seeing him smiling this way, and knowing that he was willing to bear the conditions he wasn't used to, just to stay with me, was enough to make me love him twice as much as I already did.

Maybe you'll think of me as strange, but this was one of my top 3 moments of the FF Mehwish! 😃 You know I'm a person who lives in my mind, and this inner monologue just did it for me. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ It got me- hook, line and sinker. I liked her analysis of Yuvraj, her dissection of his personality. She is right- he is an enigma to her and she likes unraveling who Yuvraj really is. I think the last line just defined who Suhani is. Doesn't take much to make her fall in love- just the right amount of concern and she is floored. Such a simple soul. I loved her confusion, how she thought about the dichotomy of his behaviour. ⭐️⭐️

"Well, I'm your husband, so if any mosquitos try sucking your blood, I'll have to protect you from them." He joked.

"They're all hovering around you. I think you have sweet blood. Mummy says they're attracted to people whose blood smells sweet."

AHAAN! The power goes out, the sheets come off, the mosquitoes are out baying for their blood and his shirt comes off. 😲😆 WOW! I think you weaved magic here because you managed to turn an everyday inconvenience into the perfect stage for romance. 😳

He got up and took his shirt off and threw it away angrily.

"Much better...He said. He was lying next to me shirtless. I found it impossible not to stare.

"How come you're not sweating?" He eyed me. He grabbed my hand. I pulled away. "I have tolerance for the heat, you don't...

Shirtless Yuvraj and a nervous Suhani. What a combo. You know what, I got so into the moment that when I started reading, 'How come..', I thought he was gonna say, "How come you're not taking it off?". 🤣🤣 I kid you not. 😆😆

"I haven't complained, have I? If I had such low tolerance, I would be complaining." He said. He faced me and inched closer. Heat radiated off his skin. I reached for and touched his face. He grabbed my hand and held it. I squeezed it, he squeezed back.
He held me.
I was stunned when he grazed my arm with the back of his hand. Was he checking to see if I was ready? Was he testing himself?
I felt his hand on my waist, which was bare since I was wearing a saree. I didn't move but I gasped. He caressed my skin with the tips of his fingers. His hand moved to my back. I opened my eyes. I moved closer to him and buried my face against his neck.


Mehwish, just what were you thinking when you wrote this? 😆😆 Oooh lalalalal. My heart was beating out of its chest. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME? ☺️ My mind is addled. 🤪 I feel like you've taken me apart like a science project. What is this sorcery, Mehwish? 😲Along with YuvAni, I was going crazy too.

What the hell was I doing? I had to stop. I held her and closed my eyes. I regained my senses. I rubbed her back. She slowly rose a few minutes later and I wondered if I had upset her, so I stopped her. She hovered over me and our noses touched. I cupped her cheek. I swallowed hard. Her hair fell over me and I moved it aside. She lowered herself and we kissed.
Her pallu was on the edge of her shoulder, and an inch of movement would have pulled it down. I grabbed the corner of it tugged on it, and it dropped. She pulled back but I didn't let go. She smiled and lay down again

Hubba Hubba! *WHEW* You are amazing with imagery and you take the reader into whatever setting you've created. The visuals were so strong in my mind. Yuvraj seemed to be in a naughty mood, because I love the way he tugged at her pallu. Mischief Managed. 😛 HUHUHUHUH. 😉

I woke up with my arms around her waist. Her back was pressed against me. We were totally sandwiched together.

What I would give to see this on SSEL. When will this day come? *SIGH* YuvAni waking up like a two soul mates- connected for janam janam.

"Yuvraj..." I said. My heart was beating out of my chest. I felt a surge of desire in the pit of my stomach.
"Oh, stop that...I'm not letting you go anywhere..." He said. He still sounded slightly sleepy. He rested his forehead against my shoulder.

I loved Yuvraj's possessive side. He's definitely not letting her go. ❤️ They are already in love here. I wish the YuvAni we're seeing on SSEL would be at such a stage. 😭 Mehwish, I'm just gonna pretend this is the real SSEL. 😆Their bond here is of two kindred souls. They are just one here- in spirit and in heart. Whattey finisher. Dil jeet liya! 😃

Edited by clarity - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
One more time u proved u r fantastic writer👏...
it was pure and sensual😊...loved every bit of it...
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome ❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
HE TOOK HIS SHIRT OFF🤪🥳


uske baad meri rail gaadi of romance shuru ho gayi☺️☺️☺️

it felt as if i was in the room wid them filming it😆


u r my goddess of romance BAS🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Oh wow what an awesome chapter it was so worth the wait I loved it. I cnt wait for the next chapter that was just hot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Wow wow wow...It was smoking hot and mesmerising 👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
A plea to CVs to borrow a leaf...This will get viewers hooked and a TRP shoot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Wow what can I say amazing beautifully written, cannot wait to read what happens next I wonder if he will go back or stay over again just to be close to her
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Mehwish😳😳😳 You killed me☺️ what a superb FF👏 the third part has left me bonkers and I need time to focus to comment more😆😳 it was brilliant and so hawt!!! LOVED it⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
OMG...Meshu am dead...what a chapter yaar. It was so Yuvani...with a pinch of naughtiness, fun, love, concern and hotness. My heart raced a mile when Yuvraj threw his shirt off...imagine Suhani's state...poor girl. But I loved the way she initiated the kiss and then how Yuvraj reciprocated so gently...these two make me go crazy.
Loved the way you built the scene and ending it Meshu...it's simply awesome awesome awesome...👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
part 4 dedo humein behna😳

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