YuvAni FF- Mixed POVs- Home Sweet Home- Part 3, P.6 - Page 2

Originally posted by: yanks28

Tum isse lambe reviews likh do, main part 2 likh dungi 😃😉

i want them to have sex in part 2 bas😆

Wow, ab Karishma, isse se achcha review kya ho sakta hai? 😆😆

Mehwish, you can't even quote my review, lol. 😉😉

Originally posted by: clarity

Wow, ab Karishma, isse se achcha review kya ho sakta hai? 😆😆

Mehwish, you can't even quote my review, lol. 😉😉

my feelings n yuvani's action mode😉😆

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

i want them to have sex in part 2 bas😆

i like how ur straight and to the point...no ambiguity...sex in part 2 toh nahin milega 😛 sex ke liye tumhe bohot wait karna hoga same way Yuvraj Suhani ko wait karva raha hai 😆 i dont think u guys are ready for love making in my FFs. i dont think you'll survive it.

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

my feelings n yuvani's action mode😉😆

However, tumne hum sab ke dil ki kaamna bata di, so 👏👏.

Like I said, Yuvi and Suhani were both active without any action. Perhaps it's time to correct that. 😉

Originally posted by: clarity

Okay, first sign of excellent writing- Reader has a big, goofy smile on her face all the time while reading your FF. Similar to 😃. Conversely, reader getting arrested for grinning like a serial killer while reading said FF is also good evidence. 😆

I think this FF was just what all of us needed! So, take a bow for that! 👏👏
Another 5 ⭐️ effort from you.

If your other FFs till now were a roller coaster of sexual tension, passion and romance, this one was like a carousel ride- sweet, satisfying, comforting and like floating on a fluffy, soft cloud.
If I were to use some food imagery to describe this story (Suhani style 😉), I would say it was like cotton candy.❤️

Starting off with Suhani's POV, I think you captured her routine very well and I was transported to the BH kitchen and could see Suhani working her arms out. Well, this isn't too difficult, considering she's always there, hehe. 😆😆 I can't believe you broke poor Lata's arm for this scenario. Naughty girl. 😉

I liked Suhani's homecoming. 😊

I kept busy and didn't have time to reflect on anything. It took me a while to absorb my surroundings. I was home again and being alone with Mummy brought back scores of memories. The amount of things I missed couldn't be counted. In fact, I don't think I even realized how much I missed till I came back here. I missed the way it felt, looked, smelled, and sounded. I missed the warmth of it. Mummy asked me about every single person back at my sasural, starting and ending with Yuvraj, of course. I told her he was out on his morning jog and hadn't called yet.

I think you captured her nostalgia perfectly and I felt an emotion that I haven't felt yet. I liked that she missed the smells, the touch and the sounds of her house. 😃 Emotional moment for Suhani and I liked that she thought about how she already has a home to turn to, in case of crisis. It's important for her to know that the Birlas are not the only world she has.

Again, Suhani's old habit of getting immersed in doing something or the other for her loved ones. I felt like you were taking us on a nice walk on a Sunday afternoon and we were going at a pleasant amble. So, Suhani is distracted and so is her phone. Let's see how our Sadu is doing, amidst all this..

I called her for the fifteenth time and of course, her phone was still switched off. I threw my phone on the bed and sighed. "First she leaves without informing me, and now she isn't answering her phone." I said. I paced back and forth in our room for a few minutes. Maa brought me my breakfast and smiled.

Hehe, loved how you depicted his restlessness right from the start. He was acting like he was missing a body part and it was so apt. 👍🏼 The jittery feeling that something is missing, the shock at just 4 days 😆, everything showed how Suhani has become a part of..him. 😳 Again, his first response is anger. You know him well. Pratima calms him down and he finally calls her again, because sweet 16, right?

I loved their short convo. It was very domestic. 😆 A caring husband talking to his missing wife. The teasing, the ribbing everything put a big smile on my face. After that, I especially adored how you describes his routine. He had an empty day without her. 😲😲 Aimless, active without any action. 😉 He felt like a ship without its anchor- alone at sea. 👏👏 Kudos to you!

I played on my PSP, cleaned the room, sorted my cupboard, went for a walk with Sharad, had lunch, and read a book. At last, it was dinner time, I ate in an unusual hurry and everyone watched me with a curious expression.
Again, how he ate his dinner like the Chennai Express was cute. 😛 He was just SO WAITING for her call. Desperate, I tell you. 😉 Like a little kid. Of course, he calls and Suhani can just tell how he's spread out on their bed. 😳

"I think you're stretched out over that big bed and are thrilled to have it for yourself, just like you said." She said, curtly.

"Suhani...this room is now yours just as much as it's mine...this bed is ours. Everything that's mine, you have a right on it now...and forever. Everything..." I said.

Oh, a changed Suhani, huh? 😲 Liked her spirit. Liked his reply too. Telling her he's all hers. Fantasies, fantasies. I think he just about did a jig at her invitation to lunch at the Srivastavas. 😆 He was delirious with joy.

When I returned, she still wasn't there, of course. She wasn't making breakfast or sitting in our room. She wasn't chatting with Maa, or Sharad, or playing with Snoopy. I was struck by all the places that looked totally empty without her. Nothing had its usual sheen. Everything appeared dull and lifeless. I tried to get rid of the eerie feeling which enveloped me.

Favourite part! 😃⭐️⭐️ This description was so haunting because I could feel Yuvraj's emptiness. He felt so empty without her that he couldn't even sleep. 😲 He has become so used to her presence and this is what happens when a person like her seeps into your bone marrow. It was important because as they say, 'Absence makes the heart grow fonder'.

His eagerness to just get to Suhani's house was hilarious. 😆😆 I could imagine him, just absent-minded with a single focus. Once he got there, he played the part of the Best Son-in-law to perfection. How considerate. 😛😉 However, Guru just wanted to meet his wife.

"What happened?"

"Uh, nothing...um, you look...different..." I said.

"Oh, really?" She asked. She glanced over herself and adjusted her pallu.

"Yeah, but it's a good kind of different...you look so at ease. You look comfortable."

Being away for just a day made him view her in new light, huh? ☺️ Hehe, well, why don't you just tell her you missed her, Mr. Birla?

So, Pankaj and Lata leave them together and this guy wants to go grocery shopping? 😉 The things he does to be around her. Wish SSEL Yuvraj did the same. 😛

Another favourite-

"Why are you helping me?"

"Because I want to..." I said.

❤️

Eagerly waiting for how hubby survives in unfamiliar terrain and helps his wifey out.

Chennai Express 😆😆 True and he did feel like he was missing a limb...yeah someone had to be victimized for this scenario...so I chose poor, sweet Lata...😆 He tried to keep as active as he could without her but it didn't work out...and he did fall asleep immediately probably from being so busy all day but he woke up in the middle of the night, because subconsciously, he felt alone.

Absence most certainly works wonders 😳 @fantasies- you know how eager I am for the day they both give themselves to each other, submit fully to each other.😉

thanks for the beautiful review, Apu. As always..you're very generous with your compliments...glad I can please you all.

I am generous with compliments because they pour out of me. I think all of us needed this YuvAni shot to combat this flu spread around by the CVs. 😃

BTW, can't believe you quoted that long ass review. Someone, somewhere must be cursing me because they can't scroll down easier. 😛

Your long ass reviews are very inspiring, hun. Let them scroll to death haha.

Wow superb FF continue soon can't wait for next part

Awesome chapter I cnt wait for the next part