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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Continue this as SS na.. I loved it but it has sad ending...😭😭😭

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

That was so touching. Just the way I would imagine Suhani to react. She is a selfless lover and not a selfish one.

👏👏

I think you captured both their feelings perfectly. Yuvraj getting angry at her is so typically him, and her reaction was also typically Suhani. Always looking to make the best of a situation.

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sandiab

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: naam-ada-likhna
OMG! Loved it, you really need to continue, please. Very beautiful writing.

. Thanks Ada

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sandiab

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: rbb1
I started watching the show recently it's nice I feel bad for Suhani she is such sweet and nice girl, I hope you continue this story can't wait to read what happens next

ya me to I feel very bad for her she truly doesn't deserve to be treated the way she has. And will try and update this weekend

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sandiab

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Poojaa_P
Ohmygosh..that was totally amazing. Please do continue. Really loved it. Glad you didn't stretch too much on her breakdown from finding out the truth..I could actually imagine real suhani the way you've described..Not knowing whether to cry or laugh..numb and cold. Pretending everything is ok..or a nightmare illusion.[/Greattt. Can't wait for next part

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786
Wow...this is amazing😊Loved it!! ]Hope there's a part 2

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sandiab

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
part 2 please please please please please.turn this into an FF this was sooo sooo sooo good!!!![ wish this happens in the show

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sandiab

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Parm.
Awesome story! Please do try and make it into a SS. I'd love to read more on how they both deal with their emotions and where life will take them next. Fantastic job!

thanks sweetie and ss it will

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sandiab

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: qwerty012
Continue this as SS na.. I loved it but it has sad ending...😭😭😭

ya me to I dnt like sad endings lol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Beautiful Sandia, really you are a talented girl... I am waiting for the day which Suhani finding out the truth... I am fed up with the dragging. May be Suhani will find out the truth only after Yuvraj falling for her.

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