SS - Dost dost na raha - Part 5 pg 4 updated 31.10.14

Hi All

I'm not really a writer, but I really love reading FF/SS/OS that many of the talented writers write. I thought I would give it a go. I'm writing this story for what I imagine the outcome and the characters should/could be.

Really happy to hear feedback and whether or not I can should continue. So please like and or comment. 😃

Basically I'm starting this story from when Suhani learns the truth about Yuvraj's feelings for Soumya. Krishna is fed up with the amount of time Soumya is spending at the Birla house and the story goes from there.

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PART 1

Yeh Soumya be kamal hai, kitne baar mana kiya phir be us admi ke ghar pe jaati rahti hai or uparse gift per gift lati hai' Krishna rants as he paces back and forth in his room. Soumya just walks in and with a smile and another gift that Dadi so kindly gifted her. Another beautiful saree that she could never afford to wear or atleast her husband could buy her.

Aagaye? Krishna questioned. Aur yeh kya? Doosra gift apne premi ne diya?

Soumya was stunned and irritated. Nahin, yeh dadi ne diya'

Dadi ne diya? Tumarhi konsi dadi lagti hai? Soumya tum ko sharam nahi aati asay kiski paas haat phelana? Oh ho ab mughe sumaj aaya. Yeh wo sub uski ghar ki hone wali bahu ke liye deh rahe hai.

Krishna yeh tum kya bol rahe ho? Tum pagal toh nahi ho gaye?

Chup kar besharam, tum ne to mujhe kya apni best friend ko nahi choda. Bechaari Suhani par bohat taras ah raha hai. Usko to pata nahi ke unke peet peeche kya gool kila rehai ho tum aur us Birlal kandan ka waris.

SLAP! Soumya slaps Krishna on the face. Krishna is in shock and starts to fume, he grabs hold of Soumya's hand and drags her out of their house.

He gets in a taxi and they drive to the Birla house. He doesn't say a word. Krishna, kya kar rahe ho tum. Kya leh ga rahe ho hume? Soumya questioned in desperation, but deep down she knew where they were going and this was going to end really badly.

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Part 1 pg 1

Part 2 pg 2

Part 3 pg 2

Part 4 pg 3

Part 5 pg 4

I loved it please continue soon. Only 1 request my hindi is abit bad so less hindi please. My hindi is 65% bt I actually understood most of what u wrote there. And I really loved hw u got souyma to slap krishna hopefully some1 from the show reads this and includes it in the show as well. He deserves a really tight 1.

Very nice.. I think,you should have this show's script writer... Eagerly waiting for Yuvani's part...

I think this is first ss on Yuvani. Do continue and pm me... Please use less hindi bcoz my hindi is worst...

Good start. Please cont soon.

Very nice yar. Hopefully you will continue .and i guess now krishna will misbehave with suhani and yuvraj will beat the shit out of him and than soumya in angerblurt out the sach

Due to request by readers I will keep the hindi to a minimum. Hope that people like the next installment, please comment and like.

PART 2

There they were, infront of the Birla house. Krishna drags Soumya into the house. Suhani sees this and questions. Krishna, how is this any way to behave with your wife?' She quickly goes to Soumya sind and queries Somu are you ok?

Listening to the racket, Yuvraj and the whole family come downstairs to see what is going on. Krishna glares at Yuvraj and venomously spits out at Suhani I'm here to tell the truth. My dear wife and your darling husband are having an affair' Everyone is stunned and shocked with the revelation. Everyone knew in the family that Yuvraj had had previously had feelings for Soumya, but had figured that was all history since he married Suhani.

Suhani was fuming, by now and in a stern voice responds Krishna you are absolutely out of your mind. My Somu would never hide anything like this from me and Yuvraj is my husband and he loves me so much. How can you even say such a thing?' Even if god himself came to me and told me this I would never believe it. I know for a fact that neither Yuvraj or Somu would ever betray me. Krishna sniggers at her innocence. Both Yuvraj and Soumya share an awkward glance as each other. Yuvraj was very concerned with this whole situation, in one way he thought this would be the opportunity to tell Suhani the truth, but at the same time he knew how much the truth would hurt her and he really didn't want that.

Suhani is irked by Krishna's behaviour and wants to finish this argument right here and now. Suhani asks Soumya to take her kasam and prove Krishna wrong. She takes Soumia hand and puts it on her head. Somu, on our friendship swear that there is nothing going on in the past, now or in the future. Neither you or Yuvraj have ever shared and feelings of love and if you had you would have told me' Soumya looks over worriedly as Yuvraj. She removes her hand from Suhani's head and looks down for a moment. Her reaction suprises Suhani and Suhani once again takes her hand on puts it on her head. Somu kasam khoa' Soumya snatches her hand away yelling NO'

Krishna taunts Suhani by stating that Yuvraj never loved you and was always interested in Soumya and Soumya tricked him into marrying you as she felt sorry for you. Othewise why would someone like Yuvraj go anywhere near you. I was privy to Yuvraj's feelings for Soumya and now Soumya wants to have the luxuries and is not satified being a middle class man's wife and how both Soumya and Yuvraj are playing me and you for their own sick pleasure. Rich people are all the same they play with the hearts and feelings of middle class for their on enjoyment.

Suhani turns to Yuvraj with eyes asking a million and one questions. Yuvraj who has a million things running through his mind doesn't know what to say and stares a Suhani dejectedly. As what Krishna is saying slowly sinks in, tears start to form in Suhani's eyes. She didn't want to believe Krishna but they why would Somu refuse to take kasam and why would Yuvraj who always stands up for her not speak out against this rubbish if it was infact not true. Suhani rushes into her room crying.

Krishna was just about to start this next rant when Yuvraj yelled out ENOUGH! This is my home not some random street, get out of my house and take your wife with you. There is no place for either of you here!'

Yuvraj then went and grabbed Krishna's collar and in a deathly whisper stated that he will never forgive him for hurting Suhani like this.

Yuvraj then went into his room. He needed to speak to Suhani and he needed to tell her the whole truth...

Loved the update
Could you please make it slightly longer
Can't wait to read the nxt part

Wowww awesome yar. I wish yuvraj will say that he loves suhani now . Waiting for next do update

Aww that was such a beautiful chapter long love and update soon I love your writing.