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Posted: 16 years ago

Vishal turned towards Dipika's lane…. He drove to her house and slowed his car even before he reached her house, because his car's head lights had picked out something…. Even Dipika looked surprised at it…. Vishal immediately looked at her suspiciously as she said… 😈

Dipika: I really don't know…. Maa ne to kuch nahi kaha….

Vishal: Yeah… Yeah… Maine maan liya! 😳

He parked the car and both of them got down….

Dipika: (Running up to him who had walked fast to the gate) Vishal! Main such keh rahi hoon…. Maa na nahi kaha tha….

Vishal opened the gate and stopped short hearing voices from the garden… Dipika came behind him and looked towards their left….

In the garden….

Everyone was seated there…. Dipika's mom, Sri, Vishal's mom and… Aryan! 😉

They looked at each other and walked over to them…. They were even more surprised when they saw that all the three adults were playing carom! 😛

Seeing them Sri leaped up from Aryan's lap and ran to Dipika….

Sri: (As Dipika bent down to kiss her) Mamma! Hum sab moony dinner karenge!

Dipika smiled at her and up at the full moon… Oh! So they had planned to have a moon light dinner… She knew her mom loved eating out in the full moon…. She darted a glance at Aryan who was looking at the carom… Something said he had looked up at her! 😳

Vishal: (Walking up to them) Wow! That's a nice surprise…. (Going over to Dipika's mom) Hi aunty! Kaise hain aap? (Hugging her down from behind)

Mrs.Gosh: Bahut achchi…. Tum kaise ho? Kaam kaisa hai?

Vishal: Sab badiya…. Me and my work…. (To his mother) Maa! Aapne bataya nahi ki aap yahan aa rahe ho?

Mrs. Malhotra: Kyun? Mujhe tumse kehke hi sab kuch karna hai? Main kya… 😡

Vishal: (Sitting down beside her removing his coat) Nai maa… Aap jab chaho, jahan chaho jao… Main aapse kuch nahi poochne waala! Aap bas shuru mat ho jayiye!

Mrs. Malhotra: (Ruffling his hair) Pata hai ki mujhse seedhe jawaab nahi aayenge to pooch kyun raha hai? (Hitting his hand) Kya kar rahe ho?

Vishal: (Retreating his hand which had gone to pick an apple) Ouch! Maa…. Bahut bhook lag rahi hai!

Mrs.Gosh: To pehle soup piyo… Dinner ke liye abhi waqt hai… Tab tak, ek aur khel ho jaye? (To Aryan) Kyun Aryan? Pata hai Dipika, jab se khel shuru hua hai…. Aryan aur Sri hi jeete hain!

Dipika looked a little surprise because Sri couldn't place a coin properly on the board… And of course she couldn't place her fingers in a striking position to strike…. She knew that Sri was just Aryan's partner for sake… She must have missed strikes but Aryan must have compensated for it and of course if she had striked Aryan would have helped her… And she knew both the mothers didn't mind it! 😳

Vishal: (With a evil smile sipping his soup) Achcha… Lo… Ab main aa gaya hoon naa… Let's have a game… Is baar main dekhta hoon ki Aryan kaise jeetata hai… Kyun Aru? College ke sports din yaad aa gaye naa?

Aryan: (Smiling and applying carom powder on the board😊) Hmm…. Jab main hamesha jeetata tha!

Vishal: (Shocked) What?! Tu nahi main jeetata tha! Yaad dash kab se tumhari itni buri ho gayi hai!?

Aryan: (Arranging the coins) In your dreams must be…. Senior junior match me sab ko pata hai junior jeeta… Aur vo main tha!

Vishal: Phir to theek hai… (Wiping his hands) Ab ek game ho jaye… Dekhenge koun jeetata hai! 👏

Aryan: (Passing him the striker) No problem…. Shuru karo! At least ek chance to khelne milega tumhe….

Vishal: (Pushing back the striker) No modesty…. Tumhi shuru karo… Dekhte hain ki kise chance nahi milta!

Aryan shook his head passing back the striker and Vishal passed back… Both their fingers on the striker pushing towards each other…. After the passing of the strikers was still not over…

Mrs.Malhotra: Oh ho… Ab bas bhi karo… (Hitting on both their fingers 😉) Toss karke dekhenge… Head aaya to Aru shuru karega…. Tail aaya to Vishal! (Taking out a coin from Vishal's pocket) Chalo!

Saying she tossed the coin and Aru won…. Vishal passed the striker to him and the game began!

Vishal: (Watching Aryan study the direction) Hey Dipika! Chalo… Tum meri team…. Aao!

Aryan just then glanced up at her and he missed the striker… Vishal smiled at this and took the striker and kept it in position…. Aryan looked back down at the board not looking at Vishal's strike!

Dipika: 😕 Main… I'll get fresh and come…. Dinner bhi to laana hai!

Saying she hurried of from there and looked back to see Aryan watching her… Smiling she turned back to the house and looked down at the jamuns in the sweet bag! ☺️

Dipika had just deposited the bag on the table when Mrs.Gosh came in…

Mrs.Gosh: Ye kya hai?! (Indicating the sweets) ❓

Dipika: (Turning around) Sweets…. Waise maa aapne kyun nahi kaha ki Aryan bhi aaya hai?

Mrs.Gosh: Bhool gayi Dipi…. Kuch baatein kar rahe the to dimaag se nikal gaya!

Dipika: Kab aaya? ❓

Mrs.Gosh: Shaam ko hi…. Kaha ki Sri ko dekhne aaya tha… Sri bhi use dekhke khush hui…. Phir hum paas ke garden me walking gaye the…. Aaye to Vishal ki maa bhi aa gayein thi…. Phir humne socha ki aaj kyun naa bahar dinner karein…. Sab ke pasand ke items bane hain…. (Going into the kitchen) Lekin kuch meetha banana ke liye kuch nahi tha ghar me!

Dipika: (Smiling hugging her mom from behind) Aapne socha… Aur maine kar diya…. Meetha bhi sabke pasand ka hai!

Mrs.Gosh: (Casually yet) Aryan ka bhi?

Dipika: Haan….

Dipika paused moving away from her mother as she turned around to watch her daughter's face turn a slight pink….

Mrs.Gosh: Lekin maine tumse nahi kaha tha ki Aryan aaya hai!

Dipika: (Thinking of some excuse) Vo… Bas… Jaise aapne nahi kaha tha ki main meetha laaoon…. Waise hi! Mom! Don't look like that! Ab sab kuch ready kijiye… Main change karke aati hoon… I'll help you take the dishes out!

Saying Dipika hurried out from the kitchen to change…. Mrs.Gosh saw her daughter go and thought of all that Mrs.Malhotra had said about Aryan when they were making dinner…. In the less time Aryan was here… She had liked him very much… He was really good from heart and liked Sri very much… That was more important in the present circumstances… She sighed thanking God for Dipika! 😛

Wishing she could hear the good news soon enough she turned back to arrange the food items in the dishes! 😳

Dipika came back soon and helped her mother with taking the dishes out…

They had a wonderful time below the open sky and twinkling stars with the moon shining full silver!

They played two rounds of matches…. Aryan won in the first and Vishal in the second…. Mrs.Malhotra banned a third match blackmailing them that they would not get any dessert if they insisted on playing and both the cousins had dropped the idea…. Secretly vowing to get back soon! 😈

Dinner was delicious… Both the mothers had wonders in their hands….. As said the dinner found one favorite of everyone there…. And Aryan finally realized how Dipika was a good cook! 😳

After dinner, it was dessert time…

Everyone talked, laughed, joked…. No one remembered any sorrows or problems they might have had…

It was late eleven o'clock by the time everyone finished their dinner, helped in the cleaning process and left home! Everyone's stomach and heart was full! ⭐️

When Aryan had opened his mouth to thank Mrs.Gosh had shook her head and said he was ever welcome to the home! Aryan felt a little emotional inward because it was ages after which he was hearing such caring words…. After his Maasi Maa! 😭 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Putting Sri to sleep, Mrs.Gosh retired to the guest room….

Dipika sat on the rope swing which she had hung up in the wide space hall way upstairs…. It was her favorite place where she spent most of her free time reading books… She liked the swings…. The one down in the balcony was a smaller one in bamboo for Sri…. She too liked swings… Both shared this one liking in swings and it was their favorite place to laze around….. Dipika had taken a book to read but found it difficult to concentrate on it… ❤️

Life was heaven today…. Leaning back with the book on her chest, swinging lightly with her feet she thought about the last few days with Aryan in her life… Him coming home to take them both outside….. They returned home late during such outings and next day both Sri and Dipika felt tired getting up…. But she thought of Aryan who had to go to office next day for work and yet there was no indication of any tiredness when he came home again that evening….. ⭐️

With him coming home she had started to look for him to come home….. Choosing her best dresses for herself and Sri…. Sri would sit by looking at her mom selecting each and every dress and discarding them instantly…. She had literally gone to sleep the morning they had gone to the movie…. And Dipika had to wake her threatening to leave her… And Sri could never dream of it! 😛

Dipika smiled thinking how much she had expected such things to happen in her life and unexpectedly they had happened very fast…. Faster than she could contain all the memories in her mind! ☺️

Life did seem wonderful thinking about those moments… She wished it to remain to forever 😳

A small, sleepy voice called out…. 🥱

Sri: Mamma!

Surprised Dipika opened her eyes and turned around to look at Sri who was standing at her room door…

Dipika: Sri! Beta! Aap soye nahi?

Sri walked to her and Dipika picked her on to her lap, putting aside her book…

Sri: Sri ko Mamma se kuch poochna tha!

Dipika: (Smiling😊) Haan… To kal pooch lete…. Itni der ho gayi… Kal bahar jaana hai naa?

Sri: Nai! Pehle Sri ko Mamma se kuch poochna hai!

Dipika: (Moving behind her hair and smiling) Achcha…. Sri pooch sakti hain, jo kuch poochna hai!

Sri: (Tilting her head and said after a pause) Agar mere Pappa hote, kya vo Aryan uncle jaise hote?

Dipika felt her breath stop for a moment as she looked stunned at her…. She had never expected Sri to ask this?!?!

Sri had never asked about her father after Dipika had said her not to ask about him long back… And Sri had obliged… She had never allowed her to feel the absence of a fatherly figure in her life….. She had been so careful?!!?!

But today suddenly? 😔

Dipika: (Slowly) Sri! Tumhe achanak?!?

Sri: (Looking down) Sorry Mamma…. Aapne kaha nahi poochne ko… Lekin…. (Trying to slip off her lap) Sri sone jaa rahi hai!

Dipika pulled back Sri on her lap…. Lifting her face in her hands she smiled a little and said….

Dipika: Sri! Maine aapse kaha hai ki Mamma se aap kuch bhi pooch sakti hain? Mamma aapko jawaab degi! Hum friends hain naa? (Sri nodded lightly) Lekin baby suddenly aapne Pappa ke baare me kyun poocha?

Sri: (Not looking at Dipika) Nai Mamma…. School me mere friends sab kehete hain…. Ki unke Pappa unke saath khelte hain, khaana khaate hain, bahar le jaate hain…. Isliye Sri ne poocha ki kya is tarah hote hain Pappa… (Looking up at Dipika with tears in her eyes) Sri ki to koi Pappa nahi hai naa! 😭

Dipika: Oh baby! 😒

Dipika hugged her close to her chest….. Something hard had hit her tears formed in her eyes….. She tried her best controlling her tears…. But she couldn't and in months now she let them flow… She never knew that the recent events which had given her (Dipika) immense happiness and pleasure would impact Sri in this way, reminding about a fatherly figure in her life that too in the middle of her sleep…. Meaning Sri must have dreamt about him….

Dipika didn't know how to answer Sri's question… She couldn't tell yes to make her yearn for a father figure in her life and she couldn't lie to her about it… Because she was much matured to sense it…..

Taking a deep breath she looked down at Sri and saw that tears streaming down her eyes she had dozed off… The warmth of motherhood had made her sleep…. Smiling faintly she wiped the tears and closed her grip around Sri more! 😳

She closed her own eyes and lightly swinging….

For the first time in her life, or atleast first time in these six years Dipika realized…. A mother is very important for a child… But a child needs a father too! 😕

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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwww it was soooooooooooooooooooo good i must say say hats off to you👍🏼
👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!
dil garden garden ho gayaaaa!!!!

waise itne jaldi jaldi updates??????bhagvan kare aise mauke baaaar baaaar aayein 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was awesome.
sandy and vishal going to dance in neha's wedding that is great.
sri missing her father, so do we see aryan and dipika getting married after neha and ajay.
dipika's mother is just great.
sri should dance in neha's wedding that would be nice.
thanks for the update.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mezbeen

awwwwwwwww it was soooooooooooooooooooo good i must say say hats off to you👍🏼

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Thank you dear! 😳

Originally posted by: aashmi

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!
dil garden garden ho gayaaaa!!!!

waise itne jaldi jaldi updates??????bhagvan kare aise mauke baaaar baaaar aayein 😉 😉 😉

Garden ke liye thanks... Kyun jaldi update achchi nahi lagi? 😉 Was free.... So thought ki thoda bahut dosage de hi doon mere fans ko! 😃

Originally posted by: sam78

it was awesome.

sandy and vishal going to dance in neha's wedding that is great.
sri missing her father, so do we see aryan and dipika getting married after neha and ajay.
dipika's mother is just great.
sri should dance in neha's wedding that would be nice.
thanks for the update.

Thank you so much Sam.... You do have a knackof unveiling my mystery plot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
my god diiiiiiiiiiii this update was so touchyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i m speechless,,,,,,,,,, seriously it was mind blowing..................
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: legends

my god diiiiiiiiiiii this update was so touchyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i m speechless,,,,,,,,,, seriously it was mind blowing..................

Thank you so much... Glad you really liked it and I didn't bring down your hopes! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
yaar that was touchy....ab pata nahi ke ye planned tha ya ye sri ki andar ki feeling thi but it was so true
a family unit is very very impt for a child!!thankgod we are borned in an asian society

waise i wonder ke aryan ko bulane wali dips ke dil ki awaz thi ay kisi aur ki😉

ye larkiyaan kitni buri hain mere vishal ko tang karti hain..........
planing to trap him..... aur aise lagta hai ke usko phasna pere ga!😉
chalo ye bhi us idiot ke ache ke liye he hai
plz jaldi update kerna

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Posted: 16 years ago
di aap soch rahe honge ki iss ladki ko kya ho gaya,itne similes ka use kyun?but di all the updates were great ones. actually i thought that they are basic pillars for the relationship between all our ss members.say Aru-Sri,Aru-Deeps,Aru-Masimaa,Aru-Deeps mom,Vishu-Sandhya,Vishu-Deeps,Ajay-Neha,Boxer-Haseena,almost for everyone.Bonding between Aru and Sri is just great ,don't have words to express . di please Don't send Sri to Pune again,both Aru and Deeps need her and she should also get the love of her parent,both Aru and Deeps.di please don't think that I am suggesting u because I know whatever u have written will contain something nice only.
Special dance for Neha's reception,great koi buri tarah se phasne wala hai or must say Vishal the great ko koi apne isharo par nachane wala hai.
Aru ki pasand ki sweetdish wah ji wah
khud unhe khod kar sab jaan kuche Aru-Deeps ke bare me
waiting for more and more

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