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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: emrald

UR FIC IS GOING GR8 YAAR
TOO GOOD
FANTASTIC YAAR
WELL MY COMMENT
i was very angry ke who dared to slap arayn but after knowing ke is main us ladhki ki koi galti nayi hai i calmed but i was aure that rocky would b behind this that ......... woh kya hai naa main gaali dena pasand nahin karti toh which words want u can put there 😉

well i was so happy when those idiots were punished which he deserved aur aryan use aage maza chakaega hi cant wait to see that😉😛😆
well about karan he was damn sweet and adorable he is totally fallen for dipika 😳
well i would like to put a point i would like to see romantic scenes of aryan and shai soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee

HEY DO THINK ABOUT MAKING A POSTER FOR THIS FIC OK I THINK IT WILL B GR8😛
well waiting for the next update do post soon this update was reallllllllyyyyyyyyyy good
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thanx riya
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well tum ne zyada nahin bola................being a true jodi luver u were angry😃

karan ka kissa abhi agay dekho kaisa chalta hai😛😛😛

Aryan-Shy scenes..................well i m thinking of that................let me make some situation.............u will get them soon😉

i m thinking but i need one good pic of ajay neha together yaar
difficult to get that

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32


thanku ammu dear😳
will lil words u make it special😃

luv ya

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

😡 Ye Brockerz... Go to hell!!!!!!!!! Well I liked Aru's attitude..... And when he mentioned that there was more.... That was lovely.... 😃

Hey aur Dips is really funny 😆 😆 Such me ana tumne kaise aise examples soche..... Too good yaar 👏

Are wah... Ye kya?? Karna ki to aankein kholke hi sapna dekh raha hai.... Hoi fida hai vo to 😳

Hmm.... Ana meri ek aur baat clear karo naa.... Have Neha, Ajay and Aryan, Shai proposed their love to each oher or was it only on that re-union night.... I mean I understand the pairing.... But is it involuntary or voluntary 😊



krithika
yaar itna gussa na karoo😳😳😳.................there is more yaara😉
yaar...........its just come to mind and i wrote that😆😆😆
karan is a pure lover boy😛
no yaar...............they are only best friends................they have hidden feelings some that they don't know till now..........u will gotta see them soon😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
nice,great & fantastic & more 😊 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ha thanks for clearing ana.... So ab aayega mazaa jab unhe ek doosre ke baare me pata chalega 😉 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zeshan798

nice,great & fantastic & more 😊 😛



thank u Zeshan😊😊😊
keep reading
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Ha thanks for clearing ana.... So ab aayega mazaa jab unhe ek doosre ke baare me pata chalega 😉 😃



no need to say thanx dear😳😳
ji jii zaroor................i will let u enjoy the fun completely😳😳😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
a week pass with such a peace

Gang was really liking Karan's presence..............they came to know that he was a very kind and joyful....

"Karan, tum hamara gang join karna chahoo gay" Aryan asked as hey all were walking towards there class.........Shaina, Neha n dipika who were buzy talking about some sketches they made, look forward at the guys with open eyes

Karan look back at Neha thn give a peek to dips and turn back to aryan with an astonishing face....."Sure, why not?"

"Welcome to the Rockerz" Ajay put forward his hand and karan shake it with great spirit

"Welcome bro" Neha said and give a side hug

"Welcome" Shaina and dipika to wish him with a smile and then the started again moving towards there classes

"Shy, Hunny, Dips................tum log class attend kar ke pantry main aa jana..............karan will give us a treat" Aryan said it sweetly and winked at them

"Oh hello.............kiss baat ki treat" Karan asked as he didn't said anything

"tum ne hamara group join kia na.......................tauuuuuuu treat tau tumhain deni hogi" Aryan explained him and give him a mocking expression

"huh.........." his mouth remain open at first but later getting control he said....."chalo theek hai.................tum bhi kia yaad rakho gay kiss se pala para hai" Karan said it making a proud expresion

"Oh Hello................treat tau tumhain waise bhi deni parti...................hum choorne waloon main se nahin" Ajay said it patting him from behind and karan felt embarasses while other laugh

"Ok guys, i think humain chalana chahiye" Shaina said making an excause and take a step backward

"oh haan, hum late hoo rahay hain...................lets go dips" neha hold dipika's hand and they both turn and left with shaina too there class

"i think humain bhi chalna chahiyee................mere tau Prof. Harry Wait kar rahay hoonay hain...............don't know unhain mujh se dushmani kia hai..............mujhe aise treat karte hain jaise main 5 standard ka aik bigra howa bacha hoon...............Ajay sit on the front seat...............show me your notes?...........What yaar?" He make a not-so-good expression and aryan and karan smiled

"Ajay, u will get to know later k woh aisa kyoun karte hain" Aryan hold him from his shoulders

"now lets goo warna aj Prof.Catherine mera band baja dain gi" he said it and pish ajay to make him walk fast almost drag.

Aryan reached her class and found Prof.Catherine was already there......................She just put her books down and on feeling someone at the door............turned around and as usual found aryan there

"Aryan Khanna................Like always, you are late" She made a questioning face and her wrinkles seem more prominent around her face

"Sorry Professor" He made a sorry look............" actually......."She cut him between

"actually you were helping another student...................but child...............i know that Brokerz are not here so from whom you were saving them?" She had a triumph face............everytime he made this excause and she wasn't able to answer him but now, she got the chance to ask him

"Maam actually" He said as he moved into the room ……………..rubbing his brow he said "I was actually went to a round so might not that small gangs were teasing newcomers"

"That's it, I am fed up" She made an annoying but funny expression while the class and Aryan laughed

"Now take your seat"

Aryan went forward and sit with one of his class mates

On the other hand Shy, Neha and Dipika had to do still Painting today

They had already sketched the poster and now only have to give coloring touches……………they smiled at each other after seeing other faces having different colors…………..that was fun

As they finished, Neha came rubbing her hand to a napkin and look at Shaina's poster

"Shy, your one comes out too good…………..kia colouring hai" Neha got a huge smile seeing her work………..Shaina too got a huge smile………..Dipika heard that and tucking her hair behind her ear with hand she came……….her hand had colors in it

"Wow shy, that's really an amazing work" Dips too appreciate her

"thank you" She said and kissed them both

"Do you made it for someone special?" Dipika said winkng at Neha and neha smiled

"No one came so special till today in my life………….so abhi k liye tau yeh mere pass rahay gii……….baad main sochoon gii" She said it with a sweet smile and both Hunny n Dips grin

Shaina noticed this and was about to ask when Neha said

"OK guys, I think we should leave now" She turned to go back to her place…"waise bhi aj bro ne treat deni hai" said while collecting her stuff

"Haan, I m rreally feeling hungry" Shaina who just turned to ask dipika, dipika said it and take off her apron and start packing her stuff

Shaina at back being confused too take off her apron and start packing her stuff

"Inh donon ko kia ho gaya hai" She mumbled under her lips while dipika and Neha give each other a sigh of relief.

Edited by cool_SK - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: zeshan798

great too good 😛 😊



thank u Zeshan😃😃😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
HEY TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD
reallyyyy loved it well i am bit confused so just clear my confusion ke aryan and shai r not a couple?
well other then this it was full of life yaar they r tipikal coll students i always emagined them as samajhdar and u know how they r in ss but here we r ablse to see totally diff type of shai, aryan, dipika, neha well i will anot include ajay kyunki he was always like this and love him in this way 😳
well liked the way ajay forced karan to give them treat that was a real sweet scene and when aryan was late and was try to find an excuse that was damnnnnnnnnn sweet 🤗
well a FANTASTIC update cant wait for next one and do post it sooooooooonnnnnnnn as possible is baar ki tarha late nahin keep doing this gr8 work 😉
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