A Night of Mistakes..Ary-ShyFF-update/p43 - Page 3

hey sorry thodi late ho gayi here is my comment
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really yaar AWSOME update loved it
and who is this rocky if i am not wrong thats his name rite 😕
well tell him to saty away other wise woh kahin ka nahin rahega aisa haal karungi uska 😡 😡
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nice dhamki naa 😉
well loved the way they ragged karan not that bad how people really do 😛
and who the hell is this who dared to slap aryan uski toh khair nahin 😡
well i think ek din ke liye itni dhamki kafi hain kyun 😉
well i loved it their new avtar AMAZING yaar
waiting for next update do post soon ok 😊
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imaginations running wild ana 😆 my sis narrates me how they use to rag ppl......maza aaye ga
ss day to college😆
ok jis ne bhi aryan ko mara na us ke piti honi chahe hai

Aryan look up and found a girl..................he was shocked & confused..................why the girl slap her.

All the group members were looking at the girl with hatred in there eyes...............Aryan was trying to read the girls expressions..................she was looking ashamed and scary................Shaina can't hold this longer and move forward to give a slap to the girl but aryan hold her hand and said

"No Shaina" He look at her with determination and then back the girl while leaving her hand

All were equally shocked as was shaina

"Aryan likin issne" Neha tried to defend Shaina

"i know Neha..............or yehi mujhe iss se poochna hai" Aryan keep looking at the girl while answering Neha..............He was noticing her hand moments and the swet she was getting on her forehead

"Why did you do this? maine tau tumhain kuch nahin kaha" Aryan ask the girl

She wasn't able to answer....................Aryan got a feeling and ask her

"New badge"

This time the girl nodd in yes

Aryan got it..................someone ragged her and ask her to do that

"Who asked u?"

The girl pointed back at a group.................all look there and found Rocky laughing along with his friends

"I am sorry............i was just asked to do that" Girl had tears in her eyes............all look at her with concern

"Koi baat nahin........."aryan hold her from her shoulders and wipe her tears............"You can go..........first class is about to start.............and remember in future.........if u have any problem" look at the rocky's gang............"then come straight to ay of us...............we are the Rockerz" He look back at her and make her calm down

"Thank you" Girl just said that and left passing a weak smile to all while others too passed her equal smile

"They are so rude.................unh ki himmat kaise howi aisa karne kii" Dipika said being furious

"Who are they?" Karan who was standing confused ask slowly to Neha

"Our Rivals...............The Brokerz" Neha said it in whisper

"oh" karan turned his face looking at others

"Every time, they did something to make us look down" Shaina's tone was angry

"Calm down Shy............they had to learn a lesson" Ajay said holding shaina back from her shoulders

"and this time..............i m not gonna leave them" Aryan was confident that what he had to doo

Rockerz Vs Brokerz...............was a common issue in University................Students used to dicuss this matter often.............they both were very famous gangs among some others............There Dean and Professors know Rockerz.............and they luv them...............they always remain helpful for the students while brokerz the failures always used to cheat in exams and spend most of the time in teasing others

A hour later................The Dean called The Brokerz and restigate them for full 1 month at the beginning of classes.................hey were not allowed to come into the University.............Most of the students got relievef hearing this news.

Brokerz come out from the dean office and bang on the wall....................the whole Rockerz gang was standing along with opposite wall and Aryan called out

"hey rocky" rocky who was about to turn to the stairs look back.............he didn't notice the gang after comming out.............he turned and look at aryan with hatred

"so maza aaya.............tumne humain kiye baar humilate kia...............likin humne kabhi tumhari complain nahin kii because you never harmed us before likin this time............you have to pay" Aryan said with strog voice

Rocky and gang look with a "whatever"look

Aryan laugh a bit and hold him from his collar

"abhi tau sirf us awaz ka badla tha yeh...............us thapar ka dard tau tumhain abhi mehsoos karwana baaqi hai..............." He leave his collar and set it

"enjoy your vocations................baad main shayad enjoyment ko kuch na rahay" All smiled at this while Shaina make a bubble of her gum with a smile

Rocky and gang left in anger

Originally posted by: amail1601

Great flashback Ana 👏 👏
Aryan ko kisne maara? 😡

thanku ammu
just see who did that😳

lolz
ana😃

Originally posted by: rockswizard

hey hi! got to read ur ff only 2day! waise nic to c u wid a new ff so soon n a gr8 one too! waise amazin idea smthn diffrnt! neways do continue! aryan ko kisne mara?

hey shruti
thanku dear........😳
i just thought of this😃

lolz
ana😳

Originally posted by: emrald

hey sorry thodi late ho gayi here is my comment
👏
really yaar AWSOME update loved it
and who is this rocky if i am not wrong thats his name rite 😕
well tell him to saty away other wise woh kahin ka nahin rahega aisa haal karungi uska 😡 😡
😆
nice dhamki naa 😉
well loved the way they ragged karan not that bad how people really do 😛
and who the hell is this who dared to slap aryan uski toh khair nahin 😡
well i think ek din ke liye itni dhamki kafi hain kyun 😉
well i loved it their new avtar AMAZING yaar
waiting for next update do post soon ok 😊
👏

hey riya
late howi tau kia howa...................app k late comments bare rapchick hain😳
yaar read who slap him😳

lolz
ana😃
i will tell him...........dekho appki baat maan lii..........next part parho zara😃
great dhamki😆😆😆

Originally posted by: maisoon

imaginations running wild ana 😆 my sis narrates me how they use to rag ppl......maza aaye ga
ss day to college😆
ok jis ne bhi aryan ko mara na us ke piti honi chahe hai

hey amna
yaar zyada wild na karna run😆😆😆..........well humne kabhi nahin kii isliye zyada patah nahin hai😉
yaar pitai nahin.............abhi dekhoo na app😳

lolz
ana😃

UR FIC IS GOING GR8 YAAR
TOO GOOD
FANTASTIC YAAR
WELL MY COMMENT
i was very angry ke who dared to slap arayn but after knowing ke is main us ladhki ki koi galti nayi hai i calmed but i was aure that rocky would b behind this that ......... woh kya hai naa main gaali dena pasand nahin karti toh which words want u can put there 😉

well i was so happy when those idiots were punished which he deserved aur aryan use aage maza chakaega hi cant wait to see that😉😛😆
well about karan he was damn sweet and adorable he is totally fallen for dipika 😳
well i would like to put a point i would like to see romantic scenes of aryan and shai soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee

HEY DO THINK ABOUT MAKING A POSTER FOR THIS FIC OK I THINK IT WILL B GR8😛
well waiting for the next update do post soon this update was reallllllllyyyyyyyyyy good
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😡 Ye Brockerz... Go to hell!!!!!!!!! Well I liked Aru's attitude..... And when he mentioned that there was more.... That was lovely.... 😃

Hey aur Dips is really funny 😆 😆 Such me ana tumne kaise aise examples soche..... Too good yaar 👏

Are wah... Ye kya?? Karna ki to aankein kholke hi sapna dekh raha hai.... Hoi fida hai vo to 😳

Hmm.... Ana meri ek aur baat clear karo naa.... Have Neha, Ajay and Aryan, Shai proposed their love to each oher or was it only on that re-union night.... I mean I understand the pairing.... But is it involuntary or voluntary 😊