#*# Jiya Dhadak (AD FF) - Full Story - Pg 5 #*# - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
hey shefali
that was a really sweet FF dear
but i have a complain................its really small yaar...........dil nahin bhara 😛

but end well all well

Aryan and Dipika made a sweet pair..........a hot one 😉

luv it

lolz
ana 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Hey Shefali
im not a big fan of Aryan and Dipika but this FF is great I liked it so much
it is just too good 👏
hope to see you soon with another FF 😊

Edited by brid - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
its sort of filmy but on the whole you done a great job 👏 👏 👏......really enjoyed reading your fanfic 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Dear Swati.......

Dont know whether you are reading this post or not... But appreciations are appresiations.... Lovely sweet fanfic it was.... Yes I was sad it was short, but sweet... Aryan and Dipika do make a good couple.... Both are matured yes.... But still are like kids... Fighter cocks... 😆 But seeing them as a pair was really a gift.... First FF on that couple.... Lovely one written by a real lovely writer 😛

Finally all well and they got together.... Wonderful 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
i liked dis fanfic a lot ..................
coz i like areyan deepika pair.!!!

grt work!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Jiya dhadak dhadak. Aryan Dipika FF by Shadow cat. (Full story updateon last pages)



……..and finally he confessed his crime. Boxer took him away. Aryan turned towards Dipika.

Aryan thinking- ab Dipika ko kaise manaaunga. Who to mujh par bahut gussa hai. Par use bhi rules ko itna seriously nahin lena chahiye. Par uska gussa bhi jayas hai.

Dipika turns to go away but Aryan holds her hand. Dipika cant help blushing so she doesn't look at Aryan's face. Aryan realizes and leaves her hand muttering a sorry.

Dipika- kya hua?

Aryan- well……I am sorry. Mujhe rules ko follow karna chahiye tha.

Dipika- tumne apni galti maani wohi badi baat hai. I hope yeh tum dobara repeat nahin karoge. Bahut raat ho chuki hai; ab tum ghar jao.

Aryan(wearily)- common Dipika. Mujhe ghar nahin jaana hai.

Dipika is about to say something but Aryan cuts cross

Aryan- Dipika kya tum mere saath dinner par chalogi?

Dipika- what??? I mean kyun?

Aryan- just aise hi. Mujhe bahut bhuk lagi hai.

Dipika- but……….

Aryan kneels on one knee and shows his hand to Dipika and tells

Aryan- so do I have the pleasure to take the lady out?

Dipika (blushingly replies)- achha theek hai par ab to khade ho jao.

Aryan stands up and smiles at Dipika.

Dipika- mujhe fresh hona hai aur change bhi karna hai. To kya tum mujhe aadhe ghante ke baad mere ghar se pick kar sakte ho?

Aryan- Achha theek hai.

Dipika picks up her laptop and goes towards the door.

Aryan- par typical ladies ki tarha 2 ghante mat lagana.

Dipika smiles and opens the door and walks out.


Aryan is at his house thinking about his coming date. After about 20 min,he goes to change. He is wearing a black suit and a red shirt inside.( if u guys can imagine then he is looking damn hot…………)

He gets his car keys and drives to Dipika' house. On the wat he gets a bouquet of roses for her.

On the other hand Dipika is all confused as what to wear. She decides to give Aryan a surprise. So she thinks of wearing a saree. She wears a beautiful midnight blue saree with silver designs on the borders (she is looking beautiful as well as sexy.)

While she is putting on some perfume, she hears the doorbell ring.

She puts down the perfume bottle and goes to open the door. She smiles to herself knowing that it must be Aryan at the door. She opens the door. It is Aryan. On seeing Dipika he stops dead in his tracks. He scans her from top to bottom once and then lets out a low whistle. Dipika blushes and asks him to come in. and she goes to her bedroom.

Aryan think to himself- Dipika kitni khoobsurat hai!!! Maine kabhie notice nahin kiya tha. Kaun soch sakta hai ki jo office main humesha suit pehen kar aati hai who saree mein itni khoobsurat dikhegi.

Dipika comes out of the bedroom with a blue colour handbag.

Aryan- mujhe nahin pataa tha ke tum itni style conscious ho.

Dipika smiles and replies- aise bahut cheeze hai jo tumhe ab tak pata nahin.

Aryan bewildered- jaise kya?

Dipika- jaise ki agar hum abhi ghar se nahin nikle to saare restaurants band ho jaenge aur tumhe mere haath ka sadaa hua khaana khana padega.

Aryan naughtily- tab to I prefer ki hum bahar na jaye. Tumhare haath ka khaana taste karne ko milega.

Dipika blushes and tells- tumhe shayad sadaa hua khana pasand ho par mujhe nahin hai. To kya hum chale?

Aryan- sure.

He remembers about the flowers and hand it to her.

Aryan- Yeh tumhaare liye.

Dipika smiles-Thank you.

Aryan opens the door and and tells- after the lady.

Dipika smiles and goes out and Aryan follows her. She locks her house. Aryan waits at the car. When she comes he opens the door 4 her.

Dipika- Mujhe nahin pata tha ke tum itne well-mannered ho. Special Squad office mein to nahin ho.

Aryan smile and tells- as u said aise bahut cheeze hai jo tumhe ab tak pata nahin.

Dipika just smiles. Aryan close the door and then enters the car from the other side and starts driving.



The next part

……after they order the food, they sit and discuss about the previous case. After some time the conversation turns towards their personal lives.

Dipika- so were u the only son of ur parents?

Aryan- haan. And u?

Dipika-I had an elder sister. Par mere parents aur meri didi ek accident mein guzar gaye.

Aryan- Oh…Sorry.

Then the food arrives. They start eating.

Dipika- is mein to namak nahin hai.

Aryan- Right.

Dipika grabs the salt container. Aryan was about to do the same. But since Dipika got it first, Aryan caught her hand instead.

Dipika- sorry. Tumhe namak chahiye ?

Aryan- well, I am sorry. (And he let goes of her hand)

Dipika- It's okay.

Aryan- I must admit. Tumhara haath kafi soft hai. Just like you.

Dipika blushes.

Dipika- thanx 4 the complimant but ab tum khaana khao.

Aryan- common Dipika. Tum itni sharmati kyun ho. Typical girl. Just like Niharika…

Aryan looks down and then after some time looks at Dipika and tells.

Aryan- sorry I shouldn't have mentioned her.

Dipika-It's okay. Aur please mujhe har do minute mein sorry kehna band karo.

Aryan- achha theek hai.

After they finish their food, Aryan pays the bill and they leave.

In the car,

Aryan- mujhe ghar nahin jaana hai

Dipika- don't tell me kea b tum office jaoge.

Aryan stops the car and leans towards Dipika.

Aryan(naughtily)- kyun ? do u want me to come to ur house?

Dipika- nahin.I want u 2 go 2 ur house.

Aryan- but I want 2 b with u.

Dipika- Aryan!!! U r a flirt.

Aryan comes back 2 his original position and smiles.

Aryan- and u r very pretty. If u don't mind kya hum beach ko chale?

Dipika- fine.

They reach . The beach is deserted. They sit on the sand and just watch the stars without speaking a single word. Dipika is looking 2wards the sky and Aryan 2wards her.

Aryan (thinking)- pata nahin kyun but I am just attracted 2wards her.

He continues looking 2wards her. After sometime Dipika turns 2wards him and asks

Dipika- kya hua? Kahan kho gaye?

Aryan- kuch nahin.just…

Dipika turns 2wards the sky. Aryan's hand find hers and he holds them gently.

Dipika looks 2wards him a bit shocked, happy and blushing. Aryan moves his face 2wards hers and …



…and gives her a gentle kiss on her forehead. Dipika is stunned and doesn't tell nething.

Then she turns away and tells him.

Dipika- hume chalna chahiye. Bahut raat ho gayi hai.

Aryan sighs- theek hai.

And they walk 2wards the car. Aryan drives Dipika home. On reaching home.

Dipika- goodnight and bye.

Aryan- c u 2morrow.

Dipika-ofcourse. She turns 2 go but Aryan holds her hand and kisses it.

Aryan- u look too good in a saree.

Dipika blushes-thanx.

Aryan leaves her hand.

Aryan- I hope ke kal tumhe suit ke badle saree ya kuch aur mein dekhun. Bu tI don't think……

Dipika-U never know.

She peck him on the cheek and goes off.


And the days pass by. But there is a difference in the atmosphere of Special Squad office. Love is in the air. Ajay and Neha have decided to marry. Their engagement is within the next week. Deepika is nowadays wearing a bit casual clothes. Mostly short-salwars. Aryan is also in a good mood these days. Everything is going on well. Ajay and Neha are planning to have their engagement at an island resort.

Ajay- so guts u all have to come.

Neha- all means all. Sab ko aana hai.

Deepika- neha, mujhe lagta hai ke main kal nahin aa paungi kyonki ek meeting hai. But main shaam taka a jaongi. Waise bhi engagement to do din ke baad hai.

Aryan- theek hai to main bhi ruk jaonga to give u company.

Ajay- haan haan! Tum dono ek dusre ko company do. But do kal shaam tak aa jana.

Deepika- theek hai.

Neha-mujhe mera engagement dress pick up karma tha. So I should hurry up. Bye guys.

Ajay- I'll take u there. To chale.

Neha smiles- fine. Chalo.

In the evening all of them except Aryan and Deepika leave for the island resort. Aryan and Deepika go to their respective houses. Next day they attend the meeting. In the evening they leave for the resort. The weather seems pretty bad. It is raining heavily. Aryan drives the car. Deepika sits and looks out of the window. Suddenly Aryan stops the car.

Deepika- kya hua??


Aryan- well, mujhe neend aa rahi hai. To kya tum driving kar sakti ho?

Deepika- theek hai.

They exchange places and Deepika drives. On their way they spot a shopping plaza.

Aryan- chalo yahan se Ajay aur Neha ke liye kuch gift lete hai.

Deepika- maine gift kharid liya hai. But since u didn't buy, chalte hai.

And they stop the car and enter the plaza. Deepika goes to some boutique. And Aryan enters a jewelry shop. Aryan buys a bracelet 4 Neha.



Aryan think 2 himself

Aryan-let me surprise Deepika. To main uske liye ek ring karidunga and I'll propose her after the engagement party. I have realized that I want 2 spend the rest of my life with her. I hope who haan kar de. So he buys a beautiful ring 4 Deepika.



and he also buys some flowers 4 her.



Deepika on the other hand plans 2 buy him a watch.


Aryan reaches the car first and hides his gifts. Deepika then reaches. This time Aryan drives. But b4 they reach the resort the car breaks down. They go 2 a nearby hotel and check in. They give the car in the garage. They share a single room 'coz they had to stay just 4 some time. Deepika sits down on the bed. Then suddenly the lights go off. And…


Dipika goes 2 get a candle and Aryan tries 2 call Ajay from his cell but due 2 signal problem he cannot. Then the power comes back and he switches on the television. There is a newsflash that there might be a cyclone in that area. So people r advised 2 stay in their houses.

Deepika- oh no! hum kab pahunchenge.

Aryan- don't worry. Kal shaam tak zaroor pahunchjayenge. Chalo dinner order karte hai.

Deepika- theek hai.

After their dinner,

Deepika- mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai

Aryan- to sone chalte hai. I mean…

Deepika- tum kahan soge?

Aryan- tumhe yeh bed dikhayi nahin deta. I don't mind sharing the bed with u.

Deepika- but Aryan…

Aryan- kyaa???

He comes closer to her and brushes her hair off her face and holds it in his hands.

Aryan- do u mind us sharing the same bed?

Deepika is quite shocked and doesn't answer. After few minutes she tells

Deepika- its okay. I have no problem. Waise bhi I am a 21st century lady.

Aryan- haan who to dikhta hai.

Deepika- main change karke aati hoon

She disappears into the changing room. Aryan takes off his coat and hangs it in the cupboard. Deepika appears. Aryan's mouth falls open

Deepika is wearing a wine red nightie and is looking absolutely stunning.

She looks at Aryan and blushes. Aryan closes his mouth and enters the blanket.

Deepika follows suit. She thinks,

Deepika thinking- after this night I hope I no longer remain a virgin. I wish yeh mere zindagi ka sabse khaas aur romantic raat ho. Par kya Aryna aisa kuch karega.

Aryan thinking- I wish ki jo Niharika ke saath saat saal pehle hua tha who aaj mere aur Deepika ke beech mein ho. But will Deepika approve? Does she love me?

They both lie down on the bed facing opposite directions. Aryan switches off the main lights. After a while Aryan switches on the bed light and turns towards Deepika. He makes her towards him and…



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Posted: 16 years ago
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the next part-
In the morning Deepika is the first to get up. She goes and gets dressed. When she returns Aryan isn't there. She goes out to the balcony to see. Then suddenly she feels someone slip hands around her waist. She smiles to himself thinking it to be Aryan. When she turns she gets a shock of her life.
Deepika- Raj tum???
Raj- Yes darling! Gave u a surprise, isn't it?
Deepika- ye.. yess ofcourse
Raj is her boyfriend. When they both were in college they had started dating. But after graduation Raj went off to Australia for studies. They were in touch for a few weeks. But after that no contact between the two. She had almost forgotten him.
Deepika thought- isse mere zindagi mein abhi aana that. Aur yeh Aryan kahan hai.
Raj interrupts her thoughts- chalo naashta kare. Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai. Phir main tumhe sab bataata hoon.
Deepika- just give me a minute. She msgs Aryan-" Aryan tum kahan ho? Room mein mera intezaar karma. Main ek ghante mein aati hoon"
Then she goes off with Raj.
Over breakfast Raj tells her that he had come to Mumbai since 4 days. He had checked in at this hotel. Today while signing the register he had seen her name and had come to meet her. Deepika didn't know what to do.
Aryan had gone to a florist that morning to buy some roses. He had planned to ask Deepika for marriage. He read her msg and was waiting in the room for her. After breakfast-
Deepika- Raj main zara room ko jaati hoon. Mujhe aaj hi check out karna hai. Mujhe mere ek colleague ke engagement ko chalna hai. Main tumhe ek hafte baad Mumbai mein milti hoon.
Saying this she rushes off. When she reaches their room she find Aryan waiting for her.
Aryan- kahaan thi tum. I was waiting for u.
Deepika- who main breakfast ke liye gayi thi.
Aryna- mere bagair? Anyways chodo use.
He kneels down on his knees and gives her a single red rose. Then he takes out a ring and asks her,
Deepika will u marry me?
Deepika doesn't know what to tell. Then suddenly Aryan's phone rings. He receives it. Its Neha
Neha- tum log kab aaoge?
Aryan- hum ok ghante mein check out karte hai. We'll reach by afternoon.
Then he disconnects and turns towards Deepika. He finds her near the wardrobe.
Deepika- lets go
Aryan- par mera jawaab mujhe….
Deepika cuts cross- we r getting late.
She leaves the room with her bag. Aryan is shocked. He packs his bag and leaves the room too. They check out. Aryan drives the car. Throughout the whole journey Deepika sits silently. They reach at the resort. There all are waiting for them. In the evening the engagement takes place. The stay there for a week. Deepika tries to avoid Aryan. Aryan is really surprised. On their return journey also she comes with Boxer in his car. After reaching Mumbai she goes to her house. She opens the door and finds something on the ground. She opens it and reads it. She is shocked. Just then the door-bell rings…

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Posted: 16 years ago
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She goes to open the door. There in front of her stood Raj and his mother. She had known his mother since college days. She was like a daughter to her. And now she stood in front of her. She was just the same as she had been 7yrs ago. Deepika hugged her. Tears started to drop from her eyes. She invites them in. His mom asks her- "tumhe mera letter to mila hoga na?"
the letter was from Raj's mom regarding their marriage.
Deepika remembering the letter- jee aunty.
His mom- To kya socha? Kab shaadi karne ka iraada hai tum dono ka?
Raj- Maa mera bas chale to abhi par Deepika ki kya raye hai?
Deepika- woh aunty…. Main…aunty….mujhe nahin pata
His mom- ab itna bhi kya sharmana
Deepika- actually
His mom- actually kya? Raj se shaadi karogi na?
Deepika remains silent. She knew that she couldn't tell no to his mom. But then Aryan
His mom- achchha theek hai. Main pandit ji se mil kar shaadi ki date fix karti hoon.
Raj- as u wish mom. Deepika ab um chalte hai. Main tum se kal milta hoon. Bye darling.
He pecks her on the cheek. Then they go away. Deepika returns to her bedroom. She is almost dissolved in tears. She thinks "ab main Aryan ko kya kahungi? Main Raj ko kya kahungi. Main aunty or Raj se kaise kahun ke main Aryan ke bina nahin jee sakti. I think I have to talk to Aryan."

Aryan in his house is sitting and thinking-
"Kya hua hai Deepika ko. Wo itna strangely kyun behave kar rahi hai. Kaya wo us raat ko lekar mujhse gussa hai. Pata nahin kya hua hai. Ye ladkiyaan bhi na kuch nahin bolti hai. I have to talk to her." Just then his cell rings. He smiles on seeing Deepika's number.
He receives the call.
Deepika- Aryan mujhe tumse baat karni hai
Aryan- mujhe bhi par…
Deepika- mujhe shaam ko paanch baje milna. Theek hai.
Before Aryan could say a thing she disconnects.
Aryan- hello Deepika…Deepi…kaat diya. Kay hogaya hai?
At 4.45 Deepika leaves her house. While locking the door her diary falls out off her purse. She does not notice it. She hurriedly locks the door and goes. She reaches and sees that Aryan is already there.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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She says hi to Aryan and then sits down to talk to him. Before Aryan could tell anything she tells him everything about Raj, their relationship, his mom and their marriage. Aryan is stunned and doesn't know what to say. Finally he asks her, " to tumhara kya iraada hai?"
Deepika- I really don't know. I love u par main Raj aur aunty ko na nahin keh sakti
Aryan- so what now?
Deepika- please abhi mujhse kuch bhi mat puchchho. U think about it. To main chalti hoon.
Aryan- par…ruk…
rukoo Deepika
Deepika and Aryan both turn to see Raj there
Deepika- Raj tum yahan?
Raj- haan. Main tumhaare ghar gaya tha. Wahan mujhe tumhari diary mili. Sorry but I read it. And then I followed u and came here. Maine tum dono ki saari baatein sun li. If u both love each other then I think u both should get married. Is mein sochne waali kya baat hai?
Deepika- par aunty…
Raj- tum unki chinta mat karo. Main maa se baat karunga.theek hai. She luvs u a lot aur woh zaroor maan jayengi. So tum log shaadi ki tayaari shooru karo.
Aryan- Raj u r really too good. Thnx a lot
Raj- thnx kis baat ki? She was always urs.
He takes Aryan's hands and places Deepika's hands on his and says "isko khush rakhna."
Aryan- koi shak?
Raj smiles and replies- bilkul bhi nahin

the next part-

And then finally the D-day comes. I mean the wedding day. Finally all the rituals are over. After the "saat phere" they touch the feet of Raj's mother and of Deepika's mausi.
After all that is over Deepika and Aryan reach their house. Whole of the SS team is there. Ajay starts spraying snow on them and zubin starts dropping flower petals.
Ajay- so here come the newly wed. Aryan mujhse suhaag raat ke liye kuch tips chahte ho?
Ajay and Neha are already married.
Aryan replies- nahin Sir. Thank u very much but I don't need them.
Neha- achchha ab hum sab ko chalna chahiye. Aryan, Deepika enjoy urselves.
Aryan- we will agar tum log jao to.
Boxer- chalo chalte hai. Lagat hai Aryan se ab raha nahin jayega.
Deepika blushes and tells- Achchha theek hai ab bas karo. Par kal subha all of u should come on tim to office.
Ajay- madam to abhi bhi rules ko stick karti hai.
Aryan- c'mn Deepika. Aaj to inhe chod do.
Neha- bye guys!
All of them tell bye and go off. Deepika closes the door. Aryan slips his hands around her waist and tells, "thank God wo log gaye" And he carries Deepika to their bedroom. Its decorated with flowers and all.
Deepika- wow! So beautiful. Neha aur Ajay bhi na!
Aryan places her gently on the bed and starts taking off her jewelry. He then switches off the light…….


The Last Part


Deepika is sitting in the balcony of the first-floor and looking down at the garden. There she can see the three of them engaged in a game of football. Adi had always been better than his dad in this game. They followed no rules while playing the game; something Deepika did not like. Anisha was just like Aryan. Although Anisha was only 16yrs old, she was more intelligent and smart than most of her batchmates. She had Aryan's nature and characteristics. She was just ideal and perfect like him. But she had her mother's beauty. Deepika had always thought that one day Anisha will surely get to the top. And Aditya was a very cool and care-free 18yr old guy. There he was kicking the ball. His eyes, his lips, his smile, his hair, his body was just like Aryan's. But Deepika had to admit that he was more handsome than Aryan.
Deepika thought- I am sure hazaaron ladkiyaan Adi par marti hongi. After all he is just like Aryan. The way I went crazy about Aryan, I am sure that most girls will go crazy after Adi. Thoda shararti hai but dil ka bahut saaf hai.
Kya soch rahi ho?
Deepika turned to be face to face with Aryan.
Deepika- kuch nahin. Bas Aditya aur Anisha ko dekh rahi thi. Time has passed so soon na. Kabhi kabhi aise lagta hai ke jaise kal hi main Special Squad mein pehli baar aayi thi aur….
Aryan- aur hume paper-work karne par majboor kar rahi thi. Isn't it?
Both of them laughed. Just then Adi and Anisha entered.
Adi- Mom, Dad kya baatein chal rahi hai?
Aryan- kuch nahin.
Anisha - Papa kya hum sab kal picnic par chale?
Adi- yes Mom?
Anisha was always the Papa's princess and Adi was his Mamma's favourite.
Aryan looks at Deepika.
Deepika theek hai.
Ajay, Neha and their twins, Abhimanyu (17yrs) and Natasha (17yrs) also accompany them.
The next day they reach their planned picnic spot. Aditya, Anisha, Abhimanyu and Natasha are playing along with Ajay. Neha is unpacking their food. Aryan is watching the kids play when Deepika comes to him.
Deepika- kya dekh rahe ho?
Aryan puts his hand over Deepika's shoulder and brings her closer and tells
Aryan- main apne family ko dekh raha hoon.

he turns towards Deepika and tells, "thnx a lot Deepika"

Deepika- "kis liye?"

Aryan- "for coming into my life and making it worthliving once again. And also for such wonderful kids"

He takes her hands and kisses them and tells "Thank You"

The end.

Sequel- Aditya grows up to be a businessman. He gets married to Natasha. And Anisha is a senior investigator at Special Squad working under her Dad and Mom. She is still looking for her 'prince charming'. Hope she finds him just as her Mom found her Dad, Aryan, the heartthrob of millions!!!

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wow ramya gr8 work yar 👏

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