#*# Jiya Dhadak (AD FF) - Full Story - Pg 5 #*# - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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coool!!!
we're waitin!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I'll be posting all the three parts now and the story will end. Pls give ur comments guys. Friday school will re-open so I might not login. So pls give ur comments b4 Friday. heres the next part.

She says hi to Aryan and then sits down to talk to him. Before Aryan could tell anything she tells him everything about Raj, their relationship, his mom and their marriage. Aryan is stunned and doesn't know what to say. Finally he asks her, " to tumhara kya iraada hai?"
Deepika- I really don't know. I love u par main Raj aur aunty ko na nahin keh sakti
Aryan- so what now?
Deepika- please abhi mujhse kuch bhi mat puchchho. U think about it. To main chalti hoon.
Aryan- par…ruk…
rukoo Deepika
Deepika and Aryan both turn to see Raj there
Deepika- Raj tum yahan?
Raj- haan. Main tumhaare ghar gaya tha. Wahan mujhe tumhari diary mili. Sorry but I read it. And then I followed u and came here. Maine tum dono ki saari baatein sun li. If u both love each other then I think u both should get married. Is mein sochne waali kya baat hai?
Deepika- par aunty…
Raj- tum unki chinta mat karo. Main maa se baat karunga.theek hai. She luvs u a lot aur woh zaroor maan jayengi. So tum log shaadi ki tayaari shooru karo.
Aryan- Raj u r really too good. Thnx a lot
Raj- thnx kis baat ki? She was always urs.
He takes Aryan's hands and places Deepika's hands on his and says "isko khush rakhna."
Aryan- koi shak?
Raj smiles and replies- bilkul bhi nahin
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Posted: 19 years ago
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the next part-

And then finally the D-day comes. I mean the wedding day. Finally all the rituals are over. After the "saat phere" they touch the feet of Raj's mother and of Deepika's mausi.
After all that is over Deepika and Aryan reach their house. Whole of the SS team is there. Ajay starts spraying snow on them and zubin starts dropping flower petals.
Ajay- so here come the newly wed. Aryan mujhse suhaag raat ke liye kuch tips chahte ho?
Ajay and Neha are already married.
Aryan replies- nahin Sir. Thank u very much but I don't need them.
Neha- achchha ab hum sab ko chalna chahiye. Aryan, Deepika enjoy urselves.
Aryan- we will agar tum log jao to.
Boxer- chalo chalte hai. Lagat hai Aryan se ab raha nahin jayega.
Deepika blushes and tells- Achchha theek hai ab bas karo. Par kal subha all of u should come on tim to office.
Ajay- madam to abhi bhi rules ko stick karti hai.
Aryan- c'mn Deepika. Aaj to inhe chod do.
Neha- bye guys!
All of them tell bye and go off. Deepika closes the door. Aryan slips his hands around her waist and tells, "thank God wo log gaye" And he carries Deepika to their bedroom. Its decorated with flowers and all.
Deepika- wow! So beautiful. Neha aur Ajay bhi na!
Aryan places her gently on the bed and starts taking off her jewelry. He then switches off the light…….
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Posted: 19 years ago
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And finally the last part. My story ends here guys.

The Last Part


Deepika is sitting in the balcony of the first-floor and looking down at the garden. There she can see the three of them engaged in a game of football. Adi had always been better than his dad in this game. They followed no rules while playing the game; something Deepika did not like. Anisha was just like Aryan. Although Anisha was only 16yrs old, she was more intelligent and smart than most of her batchmates. She had Aryan's nature and characteristics. She was just ideal and perfect like him. But she had her mother's beauty. Deepika had always thought that one day Anisha will surely get to the top. And Aditya was a very cool and care-free 18yr old guy. There he was kicking the ball. His eyes, his lips, his smile, his hair, his body was just like Aryan's. But Deepika had to admit that he was more handsome than Aryan.
Deepika thought- I am sure hazaaron ladkiyaan Adi par marti hongi. After all he is just like Aryan. The way I went crazy about Aryan, I am sure that most girls will go crazy after Adi. Thoda shararti hai but dil ka bahut saaf hai.
Kya soch rahi ho?
Deepika turned to be face to face with Aryan.
Deepika- kuch nahin. Bas Aditya aur Anisha ko dekh rahi thi. Time has passed so soon na. Kabhi kabhi aise lagta hai ke jaise kal hi main Special Squad mein pehli baar aayi thi aur….
Aryan- aur hume paper-work karne par majboor kar rahi thi. Isn't it?
Both of them laughed. Just then Adi and Anisha entered.
Adi- Mom, Dad kya baatein chal rahi hai?
Aryan- kuch nahin.
Anisha - Papa kya hum sab kal picnic par chale?
Adi- yes Mom?
Anisha was always the Papa's princess and Adi was his Mamma's favourite.
Aryan looks at Deepika.
Deepika theek hai.
Ajay, Neha and their twins, Abhimanyu (17yrs) and Natasha (17yrs) also accompany them.
The next day they reach their planned picnic spot. Aditya, Anisha, Abhimanyu and Natasha are playing along with Ajay. Neha is unpacking their food. Aryan is watching the kids play when Deepika comes to him.
Deepika- kya dekh rahe ho?
Aryan puts his hand over Deepika's shoulder and brings her closer and tells
Aryan- main apne family ko dekh raha hoon.

he turns towards Deepika and tells, "thnx a lot Deepika"

Deepika- "kis liye?"

Aryan- "for coming into my life and making it worthliving once again. And also for such wonderful kids"

He takes her hands and kisses them and tells "Thank You"

The end.

Sequel- Aditya grows up to be a businessman. He gets married to Natasha. And Anisha is a senior investigator at Special Squad working under her Dad and Mom. She is still looking for her 'prince charming'. Hope she finds him just as her Mom found her Dad, Aryan, the heartthrob of millions!!!

Edited by Shadow Cat - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hope it was satisfactory guys. Please give ur last comments on it. I am feeling sad that I wont be able to write more about them. 😭
I hope that as much I have written u all liked it. Pls guys tell me how was it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
yeah it was just amazing i luved ur story 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
gr8 story.so sad dat u r endin it. 😭
and hey adi must b really handsum.coz agar woh aryan se zyada gud-lookin hai to! and if anisha looks like deepika,even she must b good lookin.so sweet of u 2 get adi married 2 natasha.aryan and ajay samdhi's.vell dat s sumthin.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
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i have no further words....never has a story touched me so much.....and i adore happy endings!!!!!!
only why did ur story have to end!!!???i kno ur busy....its ok......but it was a relly touchin story! 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I am happy u guys liked it. but as it has been said all good thing come to an end.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
wow what a nice story i like it

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