#*# Jiya Dhadak (AD FF) - Full Story - Pg 5 #*# - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
hey........i love the angle tht u hav given to the story.....about raj....... 👏
but the suspense is killin me......! 😡 what did deepika see on the floor? what did she read....? plz continue! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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okay fine Reshma I know it is difficult to handle suspense. Heres the next part-

She goes to open the door. There in front of her stood Raj and his mother. She had known his mother since college days. She was like a daughter to her. And now she stood in front of her. She was just the same as she had been 7yrs ago. Deepika hugged her. Tears started to drop from her eyes. She invites them in. His mom asks her- "tumhe mera letter to mila hoga na?"
the letter was from Raj's mom regarding their marriage.
Deepika remembering the letter- jee aunty.
His mom- To kya socha? Kab shaadi karne ka iraada hai tum dono ka?
Raj- Maa mera bas chale to abhi par Deepika ki kya raye hai?
Deepika- woh aunty…. Main…aunty….mujhe nahin pata
His mom- ab itna bhi kya sharmana
Deepika- actually
His mom- actually kya? Raj se shaadi karogi na?
Deepika remains silent. She knew that she couldn't tell no to his mom. But then Aryan
His mom- achchha theek hai. Main pandit ji se mil kar shaadi ki date fix karti hoon.
Raj- as u wish mom. Deepika ab um chalte hai. Main tum se kal milta hoon. Bye darling.
He pecks her on the cheek. Then they go away. Deepika returns to her bedroom. She is almost dissolved in tears. She thinks "ab main Aryan ko kya kahungi? Main Raj ko kya kahungi. Main aunty or Raj se kaise kahun ke main Aryan ke bina nahin jee sakti. I think I have to talk to Aryan."

Aryan in his house is sitting and thinking-
"Kya hua hai Deepika ko. Wo itna strangely kyun behave kar rahi hai. Kaya wo us raat ko lekar mujhse gussa hai. Pata nahin kya hua hai. Ye ladkiyaan bhi na kuch nahin bolti hai. I have to talk to her." Just then his cell rings. He smiles on seeing Deepika's number.
He receives the call.
Deepika- Aryan mujhe tumse baat karni hai
Aryan- mujhe bhi par…
Deepika- mujhe shaam ko paanch baje milna. Theek hai.
Before Aryan could say a thing she disconnects.
Aryan- hello Deepika…Deepi…kaat diya. Kay hogaya hai?
At 4.45 Deepika leaves her house. While locking the door her diary falls out off her purse. She does not notice it. She hurriedly locks the door and goes. She reaches and sees that Aryan is already there.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hope it was good. not much is left so I hope to complete it soon. pls comment guys
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
very interesting n well thought ...

yeh raj ka bachha 😡 kahan se agaya kabab mein haddi..
err hadaa 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg its awsome!!!!!!!! shadowcat i love the aryan dipika pair!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
u hv made a really interestin turn by inventin raj.
gr8 story.continue soon.who finds her diary?
raj or Aryan?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
i agree with praveena's question!!!
and also with sofia's anger.....
but i kno bwin an aryan deepika fan......u will make sure that aryn only gets her! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
Thanx for restarting the story babes.U r a sweetheart.As 4 ur new twist in d tale,quite intresting.All I wish is ki Aryan ki life thodi less twisted hoti.Just Kidddng .I m lovin it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yeah both reshma and swati are nice nice writers. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx a lot ppl. Acually net wasn't being connected since a day so I couldn't login. So i thought of sitting down and finishing my story. once school reopens I wont be able to so I decided to finish it. And I'll post the remaining parts by tonite.

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