SS2 (IV) (Updated Pg 148 - Dec 12) - Page 4

I read your fanfiction in a few days and it was really very interesting looking forward to new updates

Smiling he turned back to watch the performance considering that men had hundred reasons to go anywhere, anytime! 😆 😆 😆where do you caome up with stuff like this

Hey i am eagerly waiting for the next part please update soon

Originally posted by: aashmi

mujhe pata tha aaj update aayegi.........mujhe pata tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

meri gut feeling i suppose 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: aashmi

Ajay apne marne ke plans kyun bana raha hai.......
chup chuo kar sangeet dekh liya,w oh kaafi nahi kya ....

Ab ladko ko ANDAR bhi jaana hai....

Inki toh samjho waaaaaaaaaaaaat lag gayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

do these guys have no sense?😆 they actually got away with the window idea, now they want to go inside! pagal people...

great job di!

love,

anju

Originally posted by: ruha

Ajay mamu dhol bajane ke jarie andar jana cahate ho,ladkiyon ko pata chala to aap sabki dhol baja dengi.😆
dekte hai sab mante hai kya aapka plan.😆
the performance was great di.⭐️great one yet again.👏
👏👏waiting for more ,more dhamaal.😃
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Originally posted by: sam78

it was awesome.

they will go inside i know for sure, but how that will tbe he suprise part i want to see. krithika i know you find some good idea to do that.

the song is one of my favorite. so i loved loved it.

thanks for the update.

👏

Originally posted by: aashmi

Lagta hai Krithika madam aajkal bahut busy hain...............

Originally posted by: nirmola

Its really really nice. i like this song very much. and the way it was portrayed 😊

Then Ajay, Boxer and Zubin, Shotgun each took each other's hands and started to dance outside! In a slow duet motion!

Oh my God??? did they gone mad.??? Sab to pagal hai. i know.. but Shotgun also??

And ajay ko shadi se pehle marne ka irada hai kya? when girls will come to know , band baj jayegi.then they dont need any other dhol.😆😆

Wonderful, mindblowimg.

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Originally posted by: Pooj@

I read your fanfiction in a few days and it was really very interesting looking forward to new updates

Originally posted by: maisoon

Smiling he turned back to watch the performance considering that men had hundred reasons to go anywhere, anytime! 😆 😆 😆where do you caome up with stuff like this

and these shana men........pitaan gay,sab pitaan gay......sandhya se😉.............zabardast depiction and special the choice of songs krithka!!!!!!!t👏👏👏

his sangeet thing is getting better and better........hehehe

plzzz a udate soon😃

Originally posted by: Pooj@

Hey i am eagerly waiting for the next part please update soon

No probs Yaar! Keep up the good work!

As the refreshments were served Dipika came to the front…..

"Pyaar! Ek ehsaas hai! Jo hume sab kuch deta hai…. Hume humse milata hai…. Hume bahut kuch sikhata hai… Khaaskar give and take…. Kyunki pyaar ke saath aati hai ek possessiveness!"

Dipika looked at Neha meaningfully who smiled in response… They may be depicting Neha's life story here…. But there certainly were few sensitive issues which was best left not known to everyone and also not worth thinking of again…… Hence they weren't going to depict the fights in detail… But still a little teeny weeny bit of tiff must do…. And well if it was okay with Neha, Dipika could definitely go on… And she did! 😊

"Thodi bahut possessiveness honi chahiye…. Isme to koi galti nahi hai… Lekin iski wajah se door se jo bhi hum dekhte hain use such manane me dimaag par dil haavi ho jaata hai… Isi wajah se to pyaar karne waalon ke beech nok jhok hoti hai… Aur humare dulhe raja to hain hi Casanova…. Lekin ab sawaal ye hai ki koun kisko manayega? (Smiling) Aakhir dono pyaar to karte hain hi…. Isliye kitni der khafa reh sakte hain? Yahan bhi koi khafa hua… Dekhna ye hai ki koun khafaa hua aur kyun khafa hua? Ye dekhte hain…. Ye dekhenge……. Lekin ek chooooote se break ke baad!" ⭐️

Everyone chuckled at the comment and understood that they required time to do some preparations behind screen… Until then they were chatting and the dhol ladies singing songs, few of them dancing to the tunes!

Meanwhile outside…..

Vishal straightened from the window to release the cramp from his legs when he saw four disappointed faces standing a little away…..

Shaking his head he went over to them and said….

Vishal: Ye tum log bhi naa? Dekho yaheen se dekhne ke liye hume kya kya nahi karna pada…. Ye baat agar un ladkiyon ko pata chal gayi to humari to khair nahi…..

Boxer: Vishal! Unhe kaise kuch pata chalega? Yahan hum hain, unhe abhi tak pata nahi chala…. Aage bhi nahi pata chalega…. Isliye agar hum andar gaye bhi to unhe khabar nahi hogi!

Vishal: Theek hai… Maan bhi lete hain ki andar jaana hai…. Lekin jayenge kaise? Vo ladkiyaan jitni bewakoof dikhti hain utni to hain nahi… Kabhi kabhi unka dimaag chal bhi jaata hai.…. Refreshments se leke, video, photographs sab Sandhya ne uske friends ki madad le li hai! Ab ye darwaaza khule tab hi andar jaa sakte hain…. (Seeing the strange expression on the four faces) No! No! No! Ye upar pipe se chadne ka idea mat dena please…. Upar ka darwaaza bhi locked hai! Us aadmi ne kaha naa, ki unhone sabka khayal rakha hai!

Ajay: (Smiling) Tch Vishal…. Itna asaan hota to hum khud hi nahi chale jaate…. Doosra ek raasta hai!

Vishal: (Confused) Hai!??!?!

Boxer: Haan… (Pointing towards the entrance gate) Vo dekho!

Vishal looked in the direction Boxer was pointing, towards the main gate…. The manager was talking to someone there… In fact seemed like some argument was going on likely….

Vishal: (Questioningly❓) Koi problem hai? Kuch help chahiye kya?

Shotgun: (Grinning) Nai… Problem humare liye nahi… Vo aadmi jo manager se baat kar raha hai naa vo us dhol bajane waale group ka ek member hai… Actually vo ek drama artist bhi hai!

Zubin: Aur aaj raat vo group kaheen drama karne waali hai…. Socha tha ki yahan sangeet ke khatam hote hi dhol waalon ko le jayega… Lekin ab keh raha hai ki vo drama ek ghante pehle prepond kar diya hai, isliye vo un dhol waalon ko le jaane aaya hai… Lekin humare manager nahi maan rahe!

Vishal: Haan sahi hai naa….Sangeet abhi tak khatam nahi hui to dhol waalon ko kaise jaane de sakte hain?

Boxer: Lekin Vishal…. Andar vo dhol waale kuch nahi kar rahe.... In fact unka kaam kal mehndi aur aaj subah ki haldi ceremony se khatam ho ho gaya.... Sandhya ne apni kuch arrangements ki hai…. Damn sure ki poore sangeet ke liye usne kuch intezaam kiya hoga..... Ab agar vo dhol waale jaate bhi hain to kya farak padega!

Vishal: (Thinking🤔) Ye bhi sahi hai…. To kya problem hai, manager se kehke unko bhej do naa!

Saying he was about to go back to his peeping process when Shotgun pulled him back….

Shotgun: Vishal! Yahi baat kar rahe the hum… (As Vishal looked on puzzled) Are yaar…. Ye dhol waale chale jayenge…. Lekin us manager ka kya? Poor guy… Agar Ajay ke maa ko pata chala ki vo time se pehle nikal gaye to khamakhaan un par gussa hongi….

Vishal: (Frustrated😔) To ab kya karna hai? Jaana bhi hai, nahi jaana bhi hai.... Ye kaise ho sakta hai?

Boxer: (Grinning😃) Wahi to… Us manager ki bhi madad ho jayegi aur humari bhi..... Kyun naa hum is mouke ka faida uthaye!?

Inside…. At the couch….

Neha: (Sipping a drink looked at Sandhya) Tumne kuch zyada hi exaggerate nahi kiya Sandhya? (Laughing) Not even in my dreams did I forget to work! Ab (Pausing a little) pyaar me padne par kaise bholoongi!

Sandhya: (With mock surprise) Nahi bhooli??! Aww…. Bechara Ajay… Socha tha ki pyaar me itne kho gayi hogi ki thode dinon ke liye hi sahi, usko yaad karte… Uske meethi meethi baaton me khokhe…. Kuch to pyaar ka meethapan chaka hoga! (Laughing)

Cynthia: (Grinning😃) Kuch zyada hi meethapan nahi ho jaata? Bechari Neha ko abhi se Diabetic complaint ho jaati!

As others also laughed…. 😆

Neha: (Mildly surprised) Cynthia! Agar Ajay itnnnnnnaaaaa hi meetha hota to mujhe diabetic hone me koi problem nahi hai….

Purvi: (Winking) Matlab ki vo meetha nahi hai?

Neha: (Stunned a little) Maine aisa kab kaha? Bas ki itnaaaaaa bhi meetha nahi hai!

Sandhya: (Hitting her shoulder with hers) Maane…. Zyada theekha hai ya kadva?

Neha: (Thoughtfully) Pata nahi…. Meetha bhi nahi, theekha bhi nahi, kadva bhi nai… Bas….

Others chorused "BAS???" 😉

Neha: (Dreamy😍) Bas thoda pagla hai… Hmmm….. Thoda sayana bhi! Par pagla zaroor!

"OIE HOIE!" 😳

Dipika: (Grinning) Kya baat hai Neha? Ajay ke is andaaz ke baare me to pata nahi tha hume! Ab pata chala ki us par tum itni fida ho kyun!

As Neha blushed there was another chorus of "OIE HOIE"

Same time….

As Vishal looked on puzzled Ajay said.....

Ajay: Dhol waale bahar aayenge…. Chale bhi jayenge…. Lekin wapas sangeet me bhi jayenge… Lekin….

As Ajay dragged Vishal understood the meaning and grinned himself….

Vishal: (Slapping him hard on his back) Ajay! That's a splendid idea! Are wah… Special Squad waalon ka dimaag itna tez toudega, ye maine socha nahi tha! Dulhe Raja!

Ajay: (Grinning😃) Ab yahan itne saalon se kaam karne ka kuch to faida hona chahiye naa?

Vishal: (Nodding) Of course…. Of course….. To chalo… (He was about to go) Nai…. Sab chale jayenge to us Aru ko shak ho jayega….. Main aur Boxer jaake kuch arrangements karke aate hain…. Tum teenon jao…. Ajay Aru poocha to keh dena Boxer kaheen gaya hai!

As if in cue….

"Kya ho raha hai yahan?!?!" 🤔

All the five guys turned around to look at Aryan behind them, looking at them suspiciously….

Aryan: What are you guys scheming again?

Boxer: (Looking at the others and stuttering an excuse) Kuch bhi to nahi…. Kuch bhi nahi…. Aryan…. Hum kya karenge?

Ajay: Haan…. Bas kuch baatein kar rahe the….. Until the next performance starts!

Aryan: (Shaking his head) No… I don't believe you guys…. Shakal se to aisa nahi lag raha! You guys are definitely upto something!

Vishal: Aru… Shakal se agar pata chal jaata hai ki koun shareef hai aur koun beimaan to humara job khatare me pad jayega…. Isliye ab ye research chodo aur jaake Di…. (Pausing as Aryan glared at him😡) Mera matlab…. Sangeet dekho! Chalo Boxer!

Saying Vishal grinned at Aryan and left with a smiling Boxer… As everyone understood the reason, the name, behind Vishal's momentary pause!

Aryan: (Shrinking his eyes in suspicion😈) Ye dono kahan jaa raha hai?

Shotgun: Kuch nahi Aryan…. Bas gate me kuch problem hai usi ko dekhne jaa rahe hain!

Aryan: (Looking towards the gate) Haan…. Vo event manager Natwarlal hain naa? What problem?

Saying Aryan was about to go from there when Ajay held his hand and said…

Ajay: Aryan… Vishal aur Boxer gaye hain… Vo dekh lenge… Hume bhi nahi pata kya problem hai… Hum aapna kaam continue karte hain naa! Chalo!

Saying he indicated to Zubin who was on his other side…. Both of them dragged a rather puzzled Aryan back to his place in the window…. Sighing relieved that Aryan didn't find out about their plan before hand Shotgun followed them!

After a while….

Sandhya indicated to Dipika who looked towards the curtained area and saw few lights coming on… Nodding she went to the front and said….

"Welcome back… To Neha Ajay's sangeet musical drama…. Jahan se choda tha? Haaan…. Pyaar hua…. Iqraar hua…. Lekin kuch anban bhi hui? Hua naa! Kab? Kahan? Kaise? Aise!"

Saying Dipika spread her hands to the curtained area… The curtains slid apart…. The staircase was bright enough to see clearly the settings behind it…

The audience smiled as lots of props had been propped beneath the stairs, on the stairs….

The swing was still there… But the plants, water bowl were moved off…. And in the place lots of other props like in a fair was set up… Balloons, tables, chairs… Many more…

Outside….

Vishal: (Walking to the gate) Ek dukh hai ki agle performance miss kar denge…. Lekin ye aakhri to nahi hoga…. Aur zaroor kuch hoga…. Night has just started to settle in….. Andar se dekhne ke mazaa ke liye ek chota sa sacrifice manzoor hai!

Boxer looked at him grinning and nodded as Vishal tapped on the manager's shoulder who was talking to the dhol guy seriously….

Vishal: (To the dhol guy) Bhai sab…. Aap thodi der wait kar sakte hain…. Hum abhi aaye.... Aap hi ki help hogi!

Saying Vishal dragged the manager few feet away and said....

Manager: (Upset😕) Sir meri koi galti nahi hai… Vo bas…

Vishal: (Interrupting) Sss…. Mr.Natwarlal…. Aap kyun pareshaan hote hain? Koi problem nahi hai…. Humare paas iske liye ek solution hai….. Jinko phone karna hai unko karenge to koi problem nahi hogi! (As the manager looked on confused) Suniye… Aap Sandhya ko ya Ajay ki maa ko phone mat kijiye…. Aapko Dipika Gosh pata hai? (As the manager nodded) Use phone kijiye aur batayiye….

Manager: Vo gusaa nahi karengi?

Vishal: (With a strange smile) Jaisa main keheta hoon aap waisa boliye vo gussa nahi karengi…. Aap ye kahenge ki andar dhol bajane waalon se milne koi aaya hai…. Bas milne!

Manager: (Surprised😲) Ji?!?! Bas wahi? Lekin…

Boxer: Mr.Natwarlal… Aap bahut sawaal pochte hain…. Vishal jo keh raha hai vo kijiye naa!

Vishal: (Nodding) Aap Dipika ko sirf ye batayiye…. Aur un dhol bajane waalon ko bhejh dijiye! Aur raha sawaal andar unko dhoondhne kaa…. Vo hum dekh lenge….

Manager: (Still not understanding) Ji sir… Lekin agar unk….

Boxer: Oh ho Mr.Natwarlal…. Shaadi ka mahoul hai… Agar unhe pata chalta bhi hai, to kuch nahi karenge…. Aap bas jo kaha hai vo kijiye….

The manager started to protest again but shut his mouth seeing Vishal and Boxer glare at him….

Inside…….

On a table chair on the left side, beneath the stairs the girl dressed as Ajay was seated, dressed like before, with another girl, definitely not Neha….

They were just casually talking having a cup of coffee… Smiling Ajay gave the girl a flower and clasped her hands with reassurance!

From above the stairs Aadhya came down smiling clearly thinking something…. She came down the stairs and seeing Ajay and the girl her expression changed!

"Ajay!"

The guy looked up at Neha and smiling got up… He tried to hug her but Neha pushed him off angrily….

Ajay surprised…. "NEHA!"

"Tum kabhi nahi badloge Ajay! (Glaring at the now confused girl) Even now you cannot stop flirting…. Tumhe to sab kuch mazaak hai…. Love…. Relationships! I… I hate you!"

Saying Neha stomped off to the other side of the staircase and sat down heavily on the swing, mopping her eyes…

Little confused Ajay looked at the girl he was talking to and understood….

He hurried over to Neha and said…

"Neha! Vo bas meri achchi dost hai… You know her right?"

Neha glaring at him… "Yeah! I know everyone right… Except you… You will never change…. (Mocking) Casanova Ajay Desai! Just don't talk to me!"

Saying Neha went off from there and sat on the stairs fuming….😡

Just then from the near by room which was in reality the bride groom's, a girl dressed as Boxer came by carrying few packages… And one package name was clearly "Just Born!" Guess sir was shopping for his to be family members!

Seeing it Haseena smiled to herself as the ladies who had guessed it also looked at her smiling and teasing silently!

Seeing Ajay upset Boxer said….

"Hey Ajay! Yahan park me?!? Kuch theek nahi lag rahe ho?"

Saying Boxer sat down beside Ajay who in mute silence indicated Neha sitting on the stairs and explained to him the misunderstanding….

Boxer (Glancing at Neha) "Ajay…. Tumhe pata hai…. Neha loves you very much… Isliye tumhe kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakti… Aur tum bhi hamesha aise hi situation me phans jaate ho….. Neha ko bhi bulaya aur apne dost ko bhi?"

"Boxer…. Main Neha ka hi wait kar raha tha….. Bas mere dost se by chance mila.... Vo kuch problem me thi, to main use console kar raha tha….. She likes roses…. So I gave her one…. Thought she would like it and forget her problems for a while…. Lekin sab ulta ho gaya!"

"To manao naa Ajay…. Gussa hone ko poora haq use hai aur manana tera adhikar… Hota hai… Ladkiyaan thodi akadti hain…. Lekin unke bina humara jeena nahi chalta Maamu! Isliye jao use manao!"😊

Ajay looked at Boxer for a while who smiled encouragingly and pushed him off the swing… Smiling Ajay went to Neha…

The audience also noted that all the lights by the stairs had come on…. And on the stairs few girls had also come… Few selling products and few buying them….

Hands on ears Ajay did sit ups in front of Neha who glared at him for a while and turned her face away…. Boxer immediately came behind him and gave him few roses which Ajay accepted and gave one by one to Neha…

Taking each one Neha threw them in different directions and went off from there…

Ajay looked solemnly at Boxer who thinking went to the girls on the stairs, selling balloons and flowers and various teeny weeny things… He indicated towards Ajay and they all nodded enthusiastically…. Boxer gave thumbs up to Ajay who smiled!

Outside…

The manager nodded meekly and removed his cell phone from his pocket… Switching it on he dialed the number 9 and stopped….

Vishal: (Frustrated) Ab kya hua?

Manager: Ji sir… Mujhe to Dipika ji ka phone number nahi pata!

Vishal looked at a mildly surprised Boxer and both started laughing…. He then took the manager's cell phone and himself dialed the number….

Inside......

--MUSIC--

Ajay stood at the bottom of the stairs arms folded, a very determined expression on his face that he was going to get her agree with him and the ladies took positions behind him….

Neha looked back at him and walked forcefully in between the seated audience….

Ajay tapped danced beside as she walked in between in the rows of audience!

At the stairs the girls did their own step of beautiful belly dance in tune with the music! Wearing wonderful Arabian style costumes!

--MALE--

Humse Rahoge kya hamesha khafa

Maaf bhi kardo jaana

Ajay catching his ears looked at her pleading.….

--MALE--

Maan to li hai humne apni khata

Maaf bhi kardo jaana

Neha by passed him and tried moving away from there again….

--MALE--

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

But Ajay pulled her back and tried forcing her to smile!

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

Neha pushed off his hands and twisting her mouth, moved off from there….

--MALE--

Hum hain sharminda galti hogi na aindaa

Ajay went down on his knees and spread out his hands, heads bent down…. But Neha not turning back once by passed him to the wide space area, towards the main door!

Inside...

--MALE--

Humse Rahoge kya hamesha khafa

Maaf bhi kardo jaana

Ajay turned back on his knees and sat down hands on his cheeks, looking very very pitiful!

--MALE--

Maan to li hai humne apni khata

Maaf bhi kardo jaana

But he was also Ajay Desai, not to be easily agreed, he got back on his feet immediately and followed her! Pulling her towards him, turning her this way, that way!

--MALE--

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

He had his arms around her and pinched her cheeks! But Neha went to bite his hand and he had to leave her!

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

Running from there she reached the other end of the hall.... There she showed him thumbs down….

--MALE--

Hum hain sharminda galti hogi na aindaa

Neha tried to climb the stairs but the dancing girls blocked her way as she turned back angry looking at Ajay dancing back to her!

Humse Rahoge kya hamesha khafa

Maaf bhi kardo jaana

Dancing back Ajay pulled in few ladies from the audience to join in the dance! Needless to say Sandhya and the other ladies had their own dance session as the performance was going on!

Neha went to the swing and sitting down there got some book to read not at all noticing a very much trying Ajay!

Dipika passed the pleading Ajay and angry Neha to the dhol ladies besides the couch and informed them!

--MUSIC--

The girls came down to him and lifting him up gave him a gift indicating Neha!

Ajay nodded enthusiastically as he ran to gave Neha the gift! Smiling, surprised Neha looked up from her book and saw the gift…. She took the gift and looking at it, again glaring back up at him and put it down on his feet!

Outside….

The dhol playing ladies came out and started walking to the entrance, just when Vishal and Boxer intercepted them….

Lady 1: (Puzzled) Ji aap humse milna chahate the?

Vishal: Ji main nahi…. (Indicating towards the gate) Vo!

The ladies looked towards the gate and recognized the guy….

Lady 2: (Surprised) Sundar!!! Is waqt?

Boxer: Ji vo aapse kuch drame ke baare me baat karne aaye the!

Lady 1: (Remembering) Are hain…. Aaj ek jagah Matarani ka jagraata rakha hai, usi me hum log… Lekin usme to abhi waqt hai!

Saying the ladies started to walk towards the gate when Vishal and Boxer stopped them again….

--MALE--

Maan bhi jaao suno tumko kasam hai

Kaisi ye zidd hai kaisa sitamb hai

She looked up after a while to notice that all the people around were holding a newspaper which read 'SORRY' on it! She walked over to each of them pulling their hands down!

She looked towards the stairs and saw on the top Ajay and Boxer holding two 'SORRY' papers!

--MALE--

Milte ho jo kahin

Dekhte bhi nahin

Shaking her head she was about to go back when the dancing girls surrounded her and Ajay, Boxer ran down the stairs…. Ajay got in the circle and taking Neha's hands asked forgiveness!

--MALE--

Maan bhi jaao suno tumko kasam hai

Kaisi ye zidd hai kaisa sitamb hai

Still frustrated she put down his hands and escaping the circle went off to the couch where the real family was seated!

--MALE--

Milte ho jo kahin

Dekhte bhi nahin

Ajay too went over to her and sat beside her... She moved, he moved with her…. Twice doing so, she got up in anger and went off…. Looking at her the reel Ajay looked at real Neha pleading!

Smiling real Neha patted his back and pushed him off to go on consoling his love!

--MALE--

Aisa bhi roothna kya bhala

Dekho to ek nazar tum zara

Before Aadhya as Neha could go far Ajay caught up with her and pulled her back to him.... Catching her from behind tried to make her face him!

--MALE--

Aisa bhi roothna kya bhala

Dekho to ek nazar tum zara

Each time he turned her face she snapped his hand and then finally seeing that he was not leaving her, stomped his foot and moved off!

--MALE--

Jo tum pe marta hai uska hai ab haal kya

Hopping on one feet Ajay danced with a real sorrowful face!

Outside….

Vishal: Ek minute…. Wahi... Usi jagraate function ka time unhone change kar diya hai! Isliye aapko lene aaye hain vo aadmi!

Lady 2: Achcha…. To phir hume chalna chahiye…. Waise bhi humara kaam yahan khatam ho gaya hai!

Lady 1: Theek kaha…. Humara saamaan to andar reh gaya hai... Chalo use leke hi chalte hain!

Saying the ladies started to turn back to the house when Vishal and Boxer stopped them again……

--MALE--

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

Neha standing a few feet away... Ajay danced with the girls clapping his hands to the music….. Catching his ears, doing all he could to convince her!

--MALE--

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

Boxer came to him with a big bunch of balloons and gave it to Neha!

--MALE--

Hum hain sharminda galti hogi na aindaa

Smiling seeing his chance Ajay too got one and gave it to Neha…. But glaring at him she took Boxer with her!

--MALE--

Humse Rahoge kya hamesha khafa

Maaf bhi kardo jaana

He made him catch the balloons while she distributed them in the audience everyone dancing and tapping their feet to the music!

Ajay looked at her go dejected…. One of the dancing girls came and took the balloons….

Outside......

Vishal: Phir se ek minute!

The ladies stopped surprised as to why he was stopping them again...

Vishal: (Glancing at Boxer) Jaane se pehle hume aapke madad ki zaroorat hai!

Lady 3: Ji! Humari madad?!?!

Boxer: Haan… Vo kya hai…. Hum ladke andar sangeet me jaana chahate hain…

All Ladies: (Surprised) KYA!?!?!?

Vishal: Haan… Lekin aapko pata hai ki andar ladkiyaan kitni shaatir hain…. Sab darwaaze khidkiyaan band kar di! Isliye hume aapke kuch kapde chahiye!

Lady 1: (Puzzled) Humare kapde?!?!

Vishal: Ji… Bas skirt aur duppataa chalega.... Vo kya hai…. Aapke jaane ke baad hum aapke bhesh me andar jayenge naa, to kisi ko shak nahi hoga….

Boxer: Waise bhi sab us dance drame ko dekhne me busy hain!

All the ladies looked at each other and giggled….

Lady 3: Ye lo… Andar ladkiyon ka sangeet chal raha hai, aapko kya lagta hai ki hum aapki madad karenge!? Hum bhi ladkiyaan hain, bhool gaye kya? (Giggling)

Vishal: (Surprised) Ji?!?? Nai karenge? Tch… Humne socha ki aapko to thoda taras hoga hum ladkon par…. Hamesha hume bahar khada kar diya jaata hai…. (Making a pitiful puppy face)

Boxer: (Pleading) Hmm… Hume bhi sangeet dekhni hai…. Andar se dekhenge to aur bhi mazaa aayega!

Lady 4: (Coming to the front) Andar se matlab? Bahar se dekha hai aapne pehle?

Vishal: (Hitting Boxer sideways) Nai…. Iska matlab tha ki humne gaane sune hain…. Gaane hi itne achche hain to naach aur bhi achcha hoga naa, isliye!! Please!

Saying Vishal folded his hands and punched Boxer also to do the same…. Both having a cutie, puppy face, folding their hands looked at the smiling ladies!

--MUSIC--

After distributing the balloons Neha looked towards the stairs and saw two clowns came down from up… Seeing then Neha smiled surprised as they showed funny actions…. She ran over to them and danced few steps with them….

All around he then paced the floor with the girls around acting as if thinking how to convince her…. It was a funny scene as they walked around in a funny way, hands on their chins dashing against each other!

Suddenly Ajay snapped his finger getting an idea and called the girls to him…. The girls surrounded him and when they moved off he was wearing a funny disguise of a big red nose ball and a colored wig!

--MALE--

Aise nikalo nahin tum humein dil se

Chaahne waale milte hain mushkil se

He then walked confidently to the stair where Neha was dancing with the clowns!

One of the clowns seeing the chance rotated Neha round towards Ajay as he took hold of her for a dance!

--MALE--

Socho zara meherbaan

Paaoge humsa kahan

Seeing him so Neha became surprised as Ajay led her around in a dance!

She danced with him for sake and was about to turn away when she stopped seeing a heart in front of her!

--MALE--

Aise nikalo nahin tum humein dil se

Chaahne waale milte hain mushkil se

Slowly she turned around and saw that Ajay was holding a heart shaped stuffed toy he had got from Boxer! On it was written 'I LUV U'

--MALE--

Socho zara meherbaan

Paaoge humsa kahan

Neha took it and looked at it for a while…. Then she aimed to throw it away but Ajay caught her hands and looked at her shaking his head slowly!

--MALE--

Chhodo bhi tum ye naaraazgi

Aao bhi karlein hum dosti

Taking her hands along with the heart he placed it on his chest and wrapped his other hand around hers!

--MALE--

Chhodo bhi tum ye naaraazgi

Aao bhi karlein hum dosti

Leaving her hands he again held his ears… Extending his hands for a hand shake he awaited her decision!

--MALE--

Ab jaane bhi do ki jo bhi hua so hua

Neha looked at him for a while as the girls danced around them!

Outside….

The ladies looked at each other grinning at their facial expression and giggled….

Lady 4: Theek hai… Theek hai…. Hum aapki madad karenge!

Vishal: (Smiling) Thank you!

Lady 3: (Pinching his cheeks) Aww…. Aap bachche jaise shakal banaoge to hume manana hi hai!

Vishal just shrugged off smiling sheepishly at a grinning Boxer…

Lady 1: (Thinking) Hmm…. Aapko kitne kapde chahiye?

Vishal: (Smiling) Ji… Ek, do… (Looking at Boxer)

Boxer: Cheh! Cheh duppatte aur skirts!

Lady 2: (Looking at Lady 1) Lekin Shamaaya…. Humare saamaan andar hain…. Ab agar use jaake leke aayenge to andar kisi ko shak nahi hoga?

Lady 4: (Before Lady 1 could answer) Are iski kyun fikar karte ho? Agar Sundar aaya hai to zaahir hai ki vo humara tempo leke aaya hoga…. Usme to humare saamaan hamesha pade rehete hain naa….

Boxer: Ji aapka dhol?

Lady 1: Uski fikar aap mat kijiye…. Humare paas doosre kayi dhol hain.... Hum kal aake humara sab samaan leke jayenge!

Lady 3: Haan ye bhi theek hai… (Grinning) Bechare ladke…. Aaj tak nahi lagta kisi sangeet me gaye hain.... Ab to thoda mazaa uthane do!

Lady 2: Chaliye phir…. Aapki is plan ki shuruaat karte hain!

Giggling the ladies went towards the gate…. Vishal and Boxer looked at each other smiling and gave a high five to each other!

Finally some planning was coming to effect!

--MALE--

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

Suddenly smiling he wrapped his hands around her waist and did a duet dance!

--MALE--

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

She again tried to get away from his grip and had to dance for say!

--MALE--

Hum hain sharminda galti hogi na aindaa

Saluting he did few sit ups again catching his ears and lied down in front of her looking up at her!

--MALE--

Humse Rahoge kya hamesha khafa

Maaf bhi kardo jaana

Rolling eyes heaven wards she stepped over him and went off towards the hall main door!

--MALE--

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

Only to stopped by someone! Neha looked at that person in surprise!

--MALE--

Dekho ye gussa chhodo

Ab tum ye kissa chhodo

The girl who was seated with Ajay smiled and gave her the rose which Ajay had given her and talked to her looking at Ajay still dancing in the clown attire!

--MALE--

Hum hain sharminda galti hogi na aindaa

Upset Ajay and the girls and clowns sat down on the stairs hands on their cheeks looking very sad!

--MALE--

Humse Rahoge kya hamesha khafa

Maaf bhi kardo jaana.

Neha listened to the girl and looked back at Ajay, sitting upset on the stairs with the other group girls also sitting sullenly….

She smiled and walked to him…. Kneeling down in front of him, she took of his wig and the big red ball from his nose….

"I am sorry Ajay! (Glancing back at the girl who nodded) I over reacted…. Mujhe samjhna tha ki you love only me…. (Taking his face in her hands) You are for me!" ❤️

Ajay smiled and taking both her hands said….

"It's okay Neha…. Just understand that I love you! Very much"

Neha nodded eyes brimming with tears and hugged him….

The clowns, Boxer and girls all jumped up happily and threw flowers on them clapping their hands!

There was a loud chorus of "Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!" as the curtain slid back shut! 😳

Outside….

Having watched the performance Ajay smiled to himself…. He knew what they had depicted was true…. He had not misunderstood anything!

He knew he was not the lover boy type of guy anymore… And even when he was before he had never hurt anyone…. Because he knew his limits… Even his umpteen girlfriends knew about him and never took him serious to expect a real lover kind of attraction from him….

Just that they couldn't bear been preferred over others and when he double crossed them on dates… Going out with two of them at the same time… He was always in trouble where he confused names and locations and timings… But that was… His past….

His present and future was sitting before him blushing in between the ladies teasing her…

Before the marriage vow he had vowed never to upset her in anyway with his actions… Because he understood her position…. She was still vague about relationships… Feared she may suffocate in them…. Her mother's experience borne deep into her heart and mind… But he knew that since she had loved him she had come free of that bond and hatred, even though she might not be ready to accept her father…

So with Ajay she expected a lot…. To be with her… To be for her… And he very well understood her…. If he did not, with so many years of relationship between them, their love was false! And theirs was not!

Inside…..

Aadhya came out from the curtain going over to the couch as everyone congratulated her on the way….

Neha: (Hugging her) Bahut achche performances the Aadhya!

Aadhya: (Parting from her) Such me? Kuch exaggerate to nahi ki naa?

Neha: (Smiling) Nai… Jo such hai wahi kaha tha…. So no issues!

Dipika: Aadhya…. Really beautiful performances…. Especially Pehla Nasha waala….. Laga ki such me tum pyaar me ho! (Teasing) Kaheen ho to nahi naa?

Aadhya looked stunned at Dipika and then at her sister and mother who were looking at her accusing….

Aadhya: Dipika di! Aap bhi naa? Pehle se mere Di mujhse jealous hain… Kyunki college me ladke mujhpe fida hote hain…. (With a pride in her voice) Haan ye hai ki main kisi ko bhaav nahi deti… Lekin Di jealous hai ki unhe koi bhaav nahi deta…. Unke peeche koi nahi ghoomta… Ab agar ussse pehle mujhe pyaar ho gaya, to mera jeena haram nahi kar dengi!" 😉

From the couch Sandhya stood up hands on her hips and in mock anger asked…

Sandhya: Main jealous hoon?! Ooo… Ladki…. Tere peeche hazaaron ghoomenge… Lekin unme koi aisa nahi hoga jo is layak ho ki Sandhya uske peeche jaaye…. Pride wahan hai, ki ek ladke ko pato jo kisi se bhi nahi pattha… Not just anyone…. Someone special…. Very special!

Aadhya: (Grinning) Just some excuse…. Aapto kaaran hazaar banaogi…. You are jealous! That's the truth!

Sandhya: (Stunned) Me!?!? Ek minute… You just wait there! I'll show who is jealous!

Saying Sandhya started to chase Aadhya around the hall…. People in between tried helping Aadhya to evade her sister while some helped Sandhya to catch her… Finally after few round Aadhya she showed thumbs down to her sister and took refuge in her mom! But Sandhya caught her ears and twisted them…

Aadhya: DI!!!!!! OUCH!... Chodo naa! Please… Dard ho raha hai! 😵

Sandhya: Hone do… Bahut bak bak karne lagi hai tu! Say sorry!

Seeing this Mrs. Agarwal snatched Sandhya's hand from Aadhya's ears and hugging her younger daughter, looked at Sandhya, meaningfully and said… 🤗

Mrs.Agarwal: Use kyun kuch keh rahi hai? Such hi to keh rahi hai…. Agar jealous naa ho to shaadi ke liye haan kar do!

Sandhya shaking her head with utter disbelief said…

Sandhya: Mom! Aap phir se shuru mat ho jaana! Maine kaha naa… (Smiling) Sandhya ke liye koi aisa waisa nahi chalega…. Koi khaas hona chahiye… Jab vo milega…. Manega… Main khud aapko bataoongi! Agar aapko itni hi jaldi damaad chahiye to (Hitting playfully on Aadhya's head) iski shaadi karva dijiye… I don't mind! Yaheen koi achcha ladka mil jayega! (Winking at her sister) 😆

Aadhya: (Shocked😲) Oie maa! Hello… Hum yahan Neha didi ki shaadi ke liye aaye hain… Meri shaadi fix karne nahi!

Mrs.Malhotra: (Smiling) Aadhya… Tumne vo boli nahi suni hai… Ki ek shaadi me hamesha ek aur shaadi fix hone ke chances zyada hain!

Mrs.Desai: Haan… Kya pata…. Yahan kisi ladki ka number lag jaaye! 😉

Aadhya: Kisi ka bhi lage… Mera to bilkul nahi… Baba re baba…. Ab mujhe agla performance dekhna hai… Dekhein?

All ladies chuckled and smiling nodded…. Sandhya indicated towards Dipika who also nodded and looked at the curtained area… All was set for the next performance! 😛

it was awesome.

Hey! Gr8 part Thanks for the update.waiting 4 next update!!!!!

hey, nice job! waiting to see how the boys' plan works...😕😆

Yeh hui na baaat..........

Dil khush kar ditta tussi inni vaddi update dekar.....

Waise mai recently shaadi attend kar ke aayi thi.....and the way u presented this shaadi........woh shaadi feeki pad gayi thi!!!!!!!!


Waiting for ur next part.................even longer part!!!!!!!!!!!